2007屆高三寫作專項訓練.doc

2007屆高三寫作專項訓練日記10月20 日, 你和同學們到紅星農(nóng)場生態(tài)旅游。請根據(jù)下面的表格用英語寫一篇日記。6：30起床、乘車出發(fā)去紅星農(nóng)場、一路欣賞風景、唱歌8：30到達農(nóng)場、受到歡迎，參觀、植樹、了解自然13：00野炊、乘車回家注意： 1. 日記必須包括所有表格的內(nèi)容和你的感想，可以適當增減細節(jié)。 2. 使用定語從句。 3. 要求用first, next, then和 finally 使日記連貫。 4. 詞數(shù)80100。October 20 Friday fine 思路分析：本篇習作雖然要求寫日記，但是日記的內(nèi)容屬于描寫文。學生需要把和同學們到紅星農(nóng)場生態(tài)旅游的經(jīng)過和感想描述出來。注意時態(tài)用一般過去時。2. 參考范文：October 20 Friday fine Today my classmates and I went to Hongxing Farm for a wonderful eco-travel. First, I got up at 6:30 and we set off by bus. On the bus, we had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window. Then two hours later, we arrived at the gate of the farm, where the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, we began to plant trees. It was really a good way to get close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat in the open air. Finally, we were on the way back. Although we were all very tired, our eco-travel was really unforgettable.根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容寫一篇日記，時間是12月27日(星期二), 天氣為晴天。昨天你在電視上看了冬季奧運會，寫下你的感想。1. 比賽很激動人心，所有的運動隊都很好。2. 我國的滑雪隊表現(xiàn)很出色?；每欤酶?，打敗了法國隊。奪得金牌。3. 你也喜歡滑冰比賽項目（event）:(1) 看到很多優(yōu)秀滑冰運動員；（2）美國和意大利隊都很優(yōu)秀；（3）德國隊的一名男青年摔斷了腿；（4）一個美國的女運動員滑得很精彩，動作很優(yōu)美。她最后出場，獲得了金牌。要求：字數(shù)100左右。1. 參考范文：Dec. 27th Tuesday Fine Last night I watched the Winter Olympics on television. All the teams were good, and it was very exciting. Our ski team was excellent. They skied very fast and jumped very well. Last light the French team beat us, but this time we beat them. We won a gold medal. I liked the skating events too. I saw a lot of skaters. The American and the Italian teams were both excellent. A boy on the German team had a bad fall and broke his leg. A young American girl was excellent. Her back was straight; her arms were beautiful. She was the skaters and she won a gold medal.2. 習作點評：本文以日記的形式說明了昨天晚上的冬季奧運會情況，作出了評價，表達了感受，語言簡練，內(nèi)容充實。活動安排你校新來的英語教師想了解你校課外活動的開展情況,請根據(jù)下面的文字提示,用英文寫一篇短文,介紹有關情況.注意:1.詞數(shù)100120個.活動時間活動地點活動內(nèi)容活動結(jié)果同學們的希望和建議星期二4:30p.m5:15p.m教室實驗室電腦美術豐富了學生的知識,激發(fā)了學生的興趣. 1.增加了課外活動時間.2.建立“英語角”3.盡量讓學生接觸社了解社會。 星期五4:30p.m5:15p.m學校操場校內(nèi)花園體育英語口語2.生詞提示:out-of-class activities課外活動step into society接觸社會1.思路分析: 此篇練習是根據(jù)已知圖表向人介紹學校課文活動的開展情況,活動的時間,地點,內(nèi)容,結(jié)果以及希望和建議都以圖表的形式給出,作文時注意不要漏掉任何內(nèi)容.2.參考范文:Students in our school have two periods for out-of-class activities every week. It starts at 4:30p.m. and ends at 5:15p.m.every Tuesday and Friday. The activities include computer, sports, fine arts (or art), and oral English. These activities are often held in our classrooms, labs, school gardens or on the play-ground. We have learned a lot more through these activities, which makes us more interested in studies. We hope such activities will be held more often. We suggest that an “English Corner” should be set up. It is our suggestion that we should be allowed to step into society and know more about it.觀點對比題目要求:最近,你的父母打算讓你出國留學,你與父母的意見相悖,感到煩惱.現(xiàn)在你準備在網(wǎng)上將你與父母的意見發(fā)表出來,尋求幫助.請你根據(jù)下面的提示,寫出100詞左右的短文.文章開頭已給出.父母的看法自己的看法1.擁有學習外語的好環(huán)境;2.可以盡早學會獨立生活;3.學習先進技術,有前途.自己現(xiàn)有的外語水平不高;擔心遇到無法處理的問題;對家庭來說留學費用太高.My parents have been wanting me to study abroad, 1.思路分析:拿到本題目之后,我們應該先分析此題的意圖.要求寫一篇短文尋求幫助,因此必須得把題目所囊括的內(nèi)容陳述清楚,這里需要注意的是要在結(jié)尾尋求幫助.然后再根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫出所需要的詞匯:limited, communicate, hard, deal with, cost, too much, independent, advanced knowledge, bright future然后再進行組織寫出提綱,可以第一段陳述自己的觀點,第二段陳述父母的觀點,最后提出尋求幫助.當然也可以先寫父母的觀點再陳述自己的觀點.2.參考范文: My parents have been wanting me to study abroad, but I dont agree with them.I think my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners. And Im not fully developed physically and mentally. So it would be hard for me to deal with the problems Ill face. Besides, the cost will be too much for my family. However, my parents think that its natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country. Worse still, studying abroad at an early age will enable me to be independent. Then it would be easier for me to lean advanced knowledge and technology, which would prepare me for a brighter future. I really dont know whether I should obey my parents or not. I need advice! 求職、應聘與推薦假如你是陳峰，24歲，正在丹佛大學(Denver University)讀書。你會彈吉它(guitar)，擅長美國流行歌曲，會打籃球，游泳很好。參加過幾所中學二日游活動，作輔導員(coach)。去年暑假在一所培訓班教孩子們游泳，培訓一個籃球隊。你想在暑假期間申請(apply for)一份工作，在報紙上讀到下面廣告：Wanted: 80 Holiday Camp Assistant for USA Summer CampsAge 1825 male and femaleMust be able to do at least some of the following:*play a musical instrument*sing*play baseball/ basketball/ volleyball*swimWork is offered during the following periodsJune 21July 20; July 20August 18; August 18September 16Experience preferred.Write, saying when you can work, and giving phone/ E-mail numbers to:Holiday Extra, PO BOX 2720, Denver, Colorado, USA你喜歡這種工作，覺得有意思。 寫信申請第二期工作。隨信附上你的電話：66776226及電子郵件地址：C.注意：信的開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)。詞數(shù)：100字左右。Dear Sir or Madam,I have read your advertisement for Holiday Camp Assistants and would like to 1. 思路分析：這是一封書信，所以要注意書信的格式；而且要寫清楚自己的況，尤其是對其要求比較符合的那幾項；文章要包括所要求的所有要點，并加以組織；最后別忘記附上自己的電話和郵件地址。2、參考范文： Dear Sir or Madam, I have read your advertisement for Holiday Camp Assistants and would like to apply for a job during the period of July 20 to August 18. Im 24 years old, and now Im studying at Denver University. Im good at playing guitar and singing American pop music. I can play basketball and swim well.I went on some two-day school trips as a coach. Last summer I worked in a summer training course, teaching the children swimming and training a basketball team.You can contact me on the following phone/ E-mail number.Phone: 66776226E-mail: CIm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Chen feng假設你是李華，申請到一家外資企業(yè)工作。你需要用英語寫一篇短文，介紹自己的基本情況。短文應包括下表所列的全部內(nèi)容。姓名李華出生年月1983年9月出生地上海學歷19891995 育英小學 19952001 上海第八中學所學主要課程語文、數(shù)學、英語、物理、化學、電腦特長英語、電腦（去年在全校電腦競賽中獲第一名）業(yè)余愛好游泳、滑冰、集郵、流行音樂注意：1、詞數(shù)在100字左右：2、開頭已為你寫好。My name is Li Hua_1、思路分析： 在讀完本題之后，我們很容易就能理解題目是讓我們寫一篇文章來介紹我們自己（盡管我們不會寫真實的自己）。在閱讀完表中的情況之后，我們應該先想出在寫文章時需要的詞匯，其中涉及到了科目，運動及一些業(yè)余愛好的詞匯，這些并不是很難，這里的難點是如何有序地但又不是流水賬似的把這些內(nèi)容清楚地表達出來。出生地與出生年月放在一起形成一句話。初中可以用了一個介詞after表達出來；科目結(jié)束后緊接著說自己最喜歡的并很自然地說出了自己取得的成績，然后是自己的愛好與興趣。1、 參考范文：My name is Li Hua. I was born in Shanghai in September 1987. I started school in 1989 when I was six. I studied in Yuying Primary School from 1993 to 1999. After that I went to No.8 Middle School of Shanghai and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year I won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.參考范文April 12 Saturday FineToday our class went to the Xishan Park to clean the place. Early in the morning we started out by bike. As soon as we got there, we began to work. First we collected the rubbish near the river bank and in the woods. Then we put up notices to tell people not to destroy the beauty of nature. At the same time, we kept on telling the visitors the importance of protecting the environment. Having cleaned the whole park, we said goodbye to the workers of the park and went home. Though we were very tired, we felt very happy.題目要求：用英語寫一個通知。假定通知對象是高一年級學生，內(nèi)容是5月25日，星期三下午三時，將舉行全年級英語考試。考試的內(nèi)容將包括寫各種短語和本學期學過的語法等內(nèi)容。在復習過程中，同學們?nèi)缬幸呻y問題應查閱詞典、語法書或向老師請教。這次考試是測試英語知識和能力的重要考試，希望同學們認真復習，取得優(yōu)良成績。要求：1、不要逐字翻譯。2、格式正確。3、字數(shù)在100個單詞左右。4、通知時間4月6日。參考范文： Notice April 6,The students of Senior Grade One,Your attention, please. We will hold an English Exam at 3:00 in the afternoon on Wednesday May 25th. The exam includes all kinds of phases and the grammar you learned this term and so on. Everyone should carefully go over your textbook, because the exam is very important and is a test of your knowledge of English and ability. If you have questions, you should go to a dictionary or a grammar book; you can also ask your teachers.Wish you all do well in the exam. Thats all. Thank you.習作點評：本文格式正確，按應用文的格式，標明了通知對象和通知時間。考試性質(zhì)、考試的范圍都交代得清楚，但有些語言有漢語的痕跡，比如“If you have questions, you should go to a dictionary or a grammar book; you can also ask your teachers.”應該說成“If you have any questions, you should turn to a dictionary or a grammar book; and , of course, you can also ask your teachers for advice”會更符合英語的表達習慣。 學?；瘜W實驗室需要在 4月15日發(fā)一個做化學實驗的通知，為了讓學校的外籍學生也知道，請你以教務處的名義寫一份書面通知，以便貼在學校的布告欄里。通知必須包括以下幾個要點：1、 時間：下周星期五（4月26日），下午3:302、 地點：實驗大樓二樓。3、 注意事項：帶好鋼筆和筆記本，準時到實驗室；實驗要小心，先仔細觀察，然后接老師的要求進行實驗；實驗結(jié)束后，整理好東西，晚上8:30交實驗報告。參考范文： Notice There will be an important chemical experiment on the second floor of the laboratory building next Friday, at 3:30p.m on 26th April. Please bring a pen and a notebook with you and get there on time. Youd be careful when you do the experiment first and then do it according to the requests of the teacher. Please put away all the things when you have finished the experiment. You must hand in your reports of the experiment at 8:30 in the evening. Teaching Affairs Office 15th AprilEnglish Composition題目要求： 10月18日，高三年級一班和二班之間將進行一次有關環(huán)保問題的演講比賽（a talk show on environmental protection）。此前，二班將邀請清華大學的Dr. Li做相關內(nèi)容的報告。假定你是二班班長，請你草擬一份有關報告會的口頭通知。具體內(nèi)容包括：報告內(nèi)容近年來北京環(huán)境問題所取得的進步地點教學樓三樓會議廳（auditorium）時間10月5日，星期三下午2：00目的幫助大家收集信息，為演講做好準備參加人員全班同學其他安排會后討論注意：1. 內(nèi)容應包括提示及表格內(nèi)的全部要點；2. 詞數(shù)100左右；3. 開頭已給出。 Dear classmates, May I have your attention, please?參考范文：Dear classmates, May I have your attention, please? As you know, our class will have a talk show on environmental protection with Class One on October 18. Before it takes place, we will invite Dr. Li from Tsinghua University to give us a talk. He will tell us about the improvement in environmental protection in recent years in Beijing. The report will begin at 2:00 p.m. on Wednesday, October 15 in the auditorium on the third floor in the teaching building. I am sure we can get enough information from his talk to make good preparations for the coming talk show. Everyone should be there on time please listen to the report carefully and make full notes at the same time. By the way, well have a discussion after the report. Thats all. Thank you!題目要求:你在你校學生會負責“英語角”的活動。請給你校英語廣播起草一份口頭通知。詞數(shù)”100”左右.內(nèi)容如下：1. “英語角”定于本周五下午4點在學?；▓@里舉行。2. 三位在北師大學習的美國學生,將應邀參加。3. Peter, 他們中的一位，要給我們介紹美國人的生活方式和美國的學校教育情況。4. 會后，大家可就中美兩國的生活、語言學習等話題自由交談。1. 參考范文：Ladies and gentlemen, The English Corner is to be held in the school garden at 4:00 this Friday afternoon. Three American students studying at Beijing Normal University will be invited to take part in. Peter, one of them, will give us a talk about the American way of life and the language study, the school life in both countries, and other things that may interest you. Everybody is welcome .And I hope you will find the English Corner fun. Thats all. Thank you.2. 習作點評: 全文內(nèi)容包括全面,語言開門見山，簡潔明了，把通知的目的、時間、地點、內(nèi)容敘述得請清楚楚，最后感謝大家，語言口語化，表達地道，無語法錯誤。 談 如 何 進 行 書 面 表 達 的 訓 練 近年來，高考英語重點考查學生運用英語的能力。書面表達一題則是測試學生用英語筆頭表達的能力。對于大部分學生來說，此題難度大，要求高，考生往往失分多。下面談談如何進行書面表達的訓練。一、細心研讀所給材料或圖表，用漢語列出要點，組織文章。英語書面表達雖難，但其要求與作文不同，它只要求考生用較規(guī)范的英語，簡單地陳述清所給材料。根據(jù)這一要求，若先用母語組織文章，學生就不感到難了。因此，在下筆之前，要認真研讀和理解所給材料或圖表，用漢語列出要點，例如94年高考題：提示：你校學生會將為來訪的美國朋友舉辦一個晚會，要在學校廣播此事，并歡迎大家參加。為使美國朋友聽懂，請你用英語寫一篇廣播通知。在要點如下：宗 旨：歡迎來訪的美國朋友時 間：8月15日（星期六）晚上7：30地 點：主樓屋頂花園活動內(nèi)容：音樂、跳舞、唱歌、游戲、交換禮品（包裝好，簽好名，并在包裝外面寫上幾個祝愿詞）注意：（1）廣播稿約100詞。 （2）應包括以上要點，但不要逐字翻譯，要組織成一篇通順、連貫的短文。在用英語表達前，可組織要點如下：1、學生會將在8月15日，星期六，舉行一個晚會歡迎來訪的美國朋友。2、晚會在主樓屋頂花園舉行。3、晚會于下午7：30舉行。4、晚會將有音樂、午蹈、唱歌、游戲、交換禮品等。5、要把禮品包裝好，簽好名，并寫上一些祝愿的話。有了這些要點，用英語組織文章時，就顯得有章可循了。二、找出相應的詞、詞組或句型，明確時態(tài)、語態(tài)，用英語表達出每一個要點用英語表達出每一個要點，通常是最困難的一步。首先要對要點進行分析、理解，從英語中找到相應的詞、詞組和句型。（找到的這些詞、詞組和句型必須是你熟悉的、能正確運用的，否則，往往出錯。）再根據(jù)內(nèi)容，確定好時態(tài)、語態(tài)。上面一題的五個要點依次可譯為：1. The student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening , Aug. 15th to welcome our friends from the U.S.2. The party will be held in the roof garden of the main building .3. It will begin at 7:30 p.m.4. There will be music, dancing , sing ing ,games,and exchanging gifts.5. Rember to wrap your gift up , sign your name and write a few words of wishes.在用英語表達要點時，常會遇到一些你無從著手的難句或繁句，這時要充分利用“解釋法”。所為謂“解釋法”可理解為“化難為易”“化繁為簡”。“化難為易”就是把不好用英語表達的漢語句子，在保持句子意思不變的情況下，解釋為你能用英語表達出來的形式，以達到用英語表達出這一要點的效果。如下面一個要點：“凡愿參加討論者，請到班主任處報名?！薄皥竺币辉~，在所學英語中找不到相應的詞或詞組，但根據(jù)這上意思可把“到班主任處報名”解釋為“告訴班主任把你的名字記下來。”那么，這一要點可表達為：If you want to join in our discussion, please tell your class teacher to take down your name.又如：“他在去年的高考中金榜題名”該句中的“金榜題名”一詞難以表達，我們可把這個詞組解釋為：“他在去年的高考中成功了”或“他通過了去年的高考”，這樣則可譯為：He succeeded in the college entrance examination last year.或：He passed the college entrance examination last year.所謂“化繁為簡”就是在保持句子不變的情況下，把結(jié)構(gòu)繁雜的句子化成幾個簡單的句子來表達。如：“他在我市去年舉行的英語演講比賽中獲得了一等獎?！鄙暇渲苯佑糜⒄Z來表達，結(jié)構(gòu)復雜，難度較大，可先化成兩個簡單句。即：“去年我市舉行了一次英語演講比賽，他獲得了一等獎?！眲t可表達為：There was an English speech contest in our city last year, and he got the first prize in it.又如：“南京大學吳教授將應邀到會做如何學好英語的報告”該句可解釋為：“南京大學吳教授將被邀請來參加會議，他將做如何學好英語的報告。這樣該句可譯為：Prof. Wu from Nanjing University will be invited to the meeting . He will give us a talk on How to Learn English Well.總之，在表達具體各個要點時，靈活地將句子作出解釋，把它轉(zhuǎn)變成你能用英語表達的形式，能幫你渡過難關，正確地用英語表達出要點。三、連句、整理成文在譯出各個要點之后，就可以連句成章了。此時，可根據(jù)文章的需要，可以在短文之前加上概括性的句子；為了銜接上下句，要在句與句之間加上必要的過渡句或連接詞，才能使句子顯得緊湊；為了避免重復，可把幾個簡單的句子合并成一個并列句或復合句，這樣就使整個短文即緊扣了要點，又連貫、通順。附：英語書面表達中常用的過渡性詞語：1、表示時間：then, now , afterwards, five minutes /. later, soon , before long , shortly after that , soon after supper/. to this day, just now , just then,.2、