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雅思大作文 第三類 2020 3 28 1 第三類大作文 辯論一個有爭議的觀點或二個 截然 不同的觀點 并給出自己的意見 立場 或建議Somepeoplethinkschoolsshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicknowledge Othersthinktheyshouldalsoteachstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Somepeoplethinkspacetravelisimportant Othersthinkpeoplewillnotrememberthis Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Manyparentsthinkadvertisingonlytellsinformationaboutsnacksandtoystochildren Butcompaniesthinkadvertisingalsotellsusefulinformation Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Somepeoplebelievethatnationalsportsteamsshouldbefinanciallysupportedbythegovernment Someotherpeoplethinktheyshouldbefundedbyprivateresourcessuchascorporationsandindividuals Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinions 2020 3 28 2 第三類大作文推薦框架 題目特點 Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Doyouthinktheiradvantagesoutweightheirdisadvantages引言段 用自己的話轉(zhuǎn)述題目中有爭議的雙方 給出文章的目的 正方段 討論你傾向的觀點 陳述1 2個正方論點與論據(jù) 論點解釋例子逐步展開 反方段 陳述你反對的觀點 討論1 2個反方論點與論據(jù) 論點解釋例子逐步展開 與正方段比例為1 1or2 3結(jié)論段 明確給出自己的立場 陳述原因 與希望 2020 3 28 3 Somepeoplethinkspacetravelsuchaslandingonthemoonisimportantwhileothersargueitwillnotberememberedbypeople Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion 2020 3 28 4 1 開頭段 Introduction Spacetravelhasbeenatthecentreofglobaldebateformanyyears Somepeoplethinkthatspacetravelisworthwhile becauseitwillbenefithumanbeingsinthelongrun However othersregardmankind sexplorationintoandresearchonspaceasawasteoftime resourcesandmoney Beforeairingmyopinion Iwillanalyzethismajorissuefromdiverseperspectives 2020 3 28 5 2 正方段Advocatesofspacetravelhavestrongfeelingsaboutthistopic Tobeginwith itiswidelyacceptedthatspaceresearchwillresolvemanydifficultproblemsperplexingmankind Asevidenceofthis theyarguethatspaceexplorationwillenablehumanbeingstolearnmoreabouttheorigin developmentanddestinyoftheuniverseaswellasaboutearth Secondly throughspacetravel wemaydiscovernaturalresourcesonotherplanetsinordertomitigatetheenergycrisisonearth Lastbutnotleast spaceprovidesanidealenvironmentforscientiststocarryoutcertainsubtleexperimentswhichleadtotheadvancementofscienceandtechnology 2020 3 28 6 3 反方段Onthecontrary theothersideofthecoinhasvoicedstrongopposition sayingthatpeoplewillnotbeimpressedbyspaceexplorationbecauseitisoflittlevaluetohumanbeings Aboveeverythingelse aftersomanyyearsofarduousworkandeffortsandwithastronomicalinvestmentintospaceresearch wehavenotyetattaintedanadequateunderstandingofspace Besides uptillnow novisiblepracticalbenefitshavebeenachievedintheexplorationofspace Tomakethingsevenworse spacetravelhasproducedalargeamountofspacerubbishwhichcontaminatestheenvironmentinspace 2020 3 28 7 4 結(jié)論段 Conclusion Inshort althoughspaceprobeisaninvestmentinthefutureandproducesfar reachinginfluenceonoursociety Ipersonallybelievethatitdoesnotmakesenseforustospendanastronomicalsumofmoneyandahugeportionofhumanresourcesonspaceexplorationwhenhumanityhasmanyotherpressingissuestoaddress suchasenvironmentalprotection poverty diseasesandsoon 2020 3 28 8 Withtheincreasingglobalizationinbusinessandtrade airtransportisoftenusedtoexporttypesoffruitandvegetablestoothercountrieswherethoseplantscannotgroworareoutofseason Somepeoplethinkitisapositivedevelopmentwhileothersconsiderthisuseofairtransportunjustified Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion 2020 3 28 9 Carryingfreshfruitandvegetablesfromcountrytocountryviaairisbecomingmorecommonthesedays Somepeopleholdpositiveviewsaboutdoingthiswhileothersbelieveitshouldnotbedone Personally Ibelieveitsbenefitsaremorethanitsshortages 2020 3 28 10 Tostartwith airtransportationenablesfruitandvegetablestobeconsumedinavarietyofregions andthereforeprovidesconsumerswithawiderrangeofoptionsintheirdiet AnillustrationofthisisinnorthChina wheneatingvariousvegetablesinwinterwasaluxuryinthepast becauseoflackofsunlightandcoldweather Thissituationhasbeenchangedbyairtransport Asaresult bycarryinggoodsbyplanes citizenscanselectallkindsoffruitandvegetableswhichcomefromotherplacesorcountries Besides airtransportationhasincreasedpeople sincomeinsomeareas Forexample Hainan asouthernprovinceofChina exportsitstropicalfruittomanycountriesbyairandthathashelpedmanyfarmerstolessentheirimpoverishedcircumstances 2020 3 28 11 Admittedly purchasingproductswhichutilizesairtransportcancostconsumersmore Anexampleofthisisthatlastweek Iboughtsomeoranges thepriceofwhichwasdoubledbecausetheywerefromAmerica Althoughtheywerealittleexpensive Iwascontentabouttheirflavor Becauseofgoodquality thereby theirevaluatedpriceseemedacceptableandreasonable 2020 3 28 12 Ingeneral eventhoughthecostofproductsthathavebeencarriedbyaircanbehigher individualsstillprefertopurchasethembecausetheyarefreshandingoodquality Therefore Ibelieveairtransportwillremainorincreaseitspopularityinthefuture 2020 3 28 13 TaskResponse 4Youhaveonlyreallyansweredonehalfofthequestion Youaresupposedtodiscussbothsidesoftheargument butyouonlybrieflymentionedthatairtransportcanraisefoodcosts Also yourexamplesaretoospecific whereyoutalkaboutdifferentregionsofChina ortoopersonal aboutyourtriptothemarket InTask2 youaresupposedtodiscussthequestionfromanabstractpointofview whichmeansyouneedtohaveabroadperspective Cohesion Coherence 5LexicalResource 5GrammaticalRange Accuracy 6 2020 3 28 14 2020 3 28 15 2020 3 28 16 2020 3 28 17 Somepeoplethinkusingculturalheritagetoattracttouristisharmful Othersthinkthatistheonlywayforculturalheritagetoremain Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion 2020 3 28 18 Somepeoplearguethatutilizingculturalheritagetoattracttouristsisharmfulwhileothersbelievethatistheonlywayforculturalheritagetoremain Inmyopinion bothofthestatementsarereasonable 2020 3 28 19 Tourismaffordsindividualswithaccesstokeeptheminformedabouttheculturesofwheretheyarevisiting and atthemeanwhile itprovidesthelocalgovernmentwithasubstantialamountoffundsfromthetaxrevenue Thiscanbeinvestedinpreservingtangibleculturalheritagesuchashistoricalsites oldbuildingsandhistoricalrelicsfromtourism However Ibelievethereismorethanonewaytokeepculturalheritage forinstance someinternationalorganizationsareplayingakeyroleinprotectingit 2020 3 28 20 Additionally itisundeniablethatutilizingculturalheritagetoattracttouristshasitsdisadvantages oneofwhichisitmightharmculturalheritageafteralongduration Forexample buildingswithalonghistoryareoftendestroyedbyvisitors Barsinthatbuildingcannotsupportmanypeoplebecausetheyeasilybend Thesadfactisthattheywerebrokenintheendbecauseofthousandsofvisitors Besidesthat touristsmayhaveaneffectonlocalresidents cultures Nevertheless Iamoftheopinionthatitappearsaslightlypessimisticbecausetourismalsohasgoodeffectsonprotectingculturalheritage 2020 3 28 21 Ingeneral eachviewhasitsownideasbutisnotcompletelycorrect Itishardformetofollowoneofthem Ibelieve therefore thatauthoritiesshouldconsidermoreaboutdevelopingthestrongpointsandavoidtheweakpointsoftourism 2020 3 28 22 TaskResponse 4Youhavedonewelltoaddressissuesonbothsidesoftheargument butthequestionaskedyoutostateyourownviewaswell Inthistypeofquestion youmustchooseaside Cohesion Coherence 6LexicalResource 6GrammaticalRange Accuracy 6 2020 3 28 23 常見語法錯誤類型一 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)與冠詞的使用 2020 3 28 24 Fix1 Employeescanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthanemployers Fix2 Anemployeecanbenefitfromtelecommutingthanhisorheremployer Fix3 Employeescanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthantheiremployers Fix4 Theemployeecanbenefitmorefromtelecommutingthanhisorheremployer 2020 3 28 25 1 Conflictsmayarisebetweentouristandlocalresident 2 Somepeoplethinkifchilddonotacceptextraeducation itiswastetotheirvalubletimeandenergy 2020 3 28 26 常見語法錯誤類型二 動詞的使用 2020 3 28 27 1 Growupinapoorfamilymakessomechildrenfeeltheyarenotascapableasotherchildren 2 Someeventsarenotreportbythemediainadependableway 3 Thegovernmentsofallcountriesonthisplanetisbeginningtorealizetheseverityofwatershortage 2020 3 28 28 常見語法錯誤類型三 介詞的使用 Countriesshouldpayattentiononthedisadvantagesglobalizationmaycreate Oneofthesolutionsontheunemploymentproblemistoincreasetheenrollmenttograduateschools Theinternethasinsteadofteachersinmanyclassrooms ManystudentshangwithinlocalKTVbarsduringweekendsforsingingKaraoke 2020 3 28 29 常見語法錯誤類型四 形容詞和副詞的使用 1 Theworldisdevelopingrapidandprovidesmanywonderfullyopportunitiesforpeople 2 Admitted moderncommunicationmeanssuchasmobilephonesorcomputersareusedmoreandmorewidebecauseoftheirconvenienceandefficiency Deliveringelectroniclettersormessagestakesliteralnotimeandcostslittle Theywillbecomemainstreamsoftextcommunicationsinthefutureandplayanincreasingimportantroleinsociety 2020 3 28 30 Thesetypesofmobilityaretermedrespectablyspatial vertical andideationalmobility Thepresenceofwaterisaprerequisitefortheexistingoflife 常見語法錯誤類型五 詞義 詞性混淆 2020 3 28 31 常見語法錯誤類型六 關(guān)系詞 IshallneverforgetthoseyearswhichIlivedinthefarmwhichyouvisitedlastweek Heisamanofgreatexperience fromwhomuchcanbelearned Idon tlikethewaywhichyouspeaktoher Elevenyearsafterdismissalfromschool youngAlbertEinsteinpublishedthemostamazingtheoryofrelativitywhichchangedourunderstandingoftheuniverse 2020 3 28 32 Withtheworldisdeveloping thecomputer aswellsometheothertechnologies havegainpopular greatgivenmuchpeopleconvenienceandefficient 2020 3 28 33 人類的長壽有助于人類社會的進步 Humanlongevitycontributestotheprogressionofmankind 2020 3 28 34 最近幾年 人們已經(jīng)對不加控制的汽車尾氣排放所引起的嚴重后果表示了關(guān)注 Inrecentyears peoplehasshownconcernonthedireconsequencesoftheincreasedcaremissions 2020 3 28 35 我強烈反對減少學(xué)校中的音樂和體育課程 Iprofoundly stronglydisagreewithcurtailingthemusicalandP Ecoursesatschool 2020 3 28 36 在過去的二十年里 環(huán)境保護已經(jīng)上升成最熱門的話題之一 Inthepast20years environmentalprotectionhasarisenasoneofthehottesttopics 2020 3 28 37 動物保護是耗費時間的和徒勞無益的 Animalprotectionisbothtime consumingandunrewarding 2020 3 28 38 老師的使命之一是幫助學(xué)生開拓新的視角并努力實現(xiàn)社會和學(xué)術(shù)目標(biāo) onemissionofteachersistohelpstudentstodevelopnewperspectivesandtostriveforsocialandacademicgoals 2020 3 28 39 跳槽的一個原因是追尋更廣泛的工作經(jīng)驗和面對新挑戰(zhàn) Thereasonofjob hoppingisseekingawidervarietyofworkingexperienceandtakingupnewchallenges 2020 3 28 40 在全球范圍內(nèi) 全球化給每個行業(yè)既帶來了機會又造成了問題 Globalizationposesbothopportunitiesandpro