中考話題作文范文總結(jié).doc

中考作文出現(xiàn)的常規(guī)錯(cuò)誤:1、卷面出現(xiàn)涂改，字跡不工整。人是情感動(dòng)物，卷面整潔從某種意義上講甚至比內(nèi)容更重要。無(wú)耐心讀下去，勢(shì)必影響得分。不超過(guò)20秒，評(píng)分12以下。即使有再華麗的辭藻也是徒勞。2. 中考作文也不是你新句型的練兵場(chǎng)，是關(guān)乎你前途命運(yùn)的一次大考。所以務(wù)必確保自己寫上的每一句話都是正確的。不拿中考作生僻表達(dá)的試驗(yàn)田。3. 中考英語(yǔ)作文不是語(yǔ)文作文，更不是演講稿，不需要你自由發(fā)揮，感慨萬(wàn)千！4.細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題：1）三無(wú)：無(wú)段落、無(wú)結(jié)構(gòu)、無(wú)明顯主題2）語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤太多 大量明顯拼寫、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤是分?jǐn)?shù)“毒藥”最常出的錯(cuò)誤就是：名詞復(fù)數(shù)、介詞缺失、句子結(jié)構(gòu)混亂（單三/時(shí)態(tài)）。5. 細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題：提示詞不理解，沒(méi)有全部用到 2008年是有中考以來(lái)第一次出現(xiàn)夾敘夾議的文體，因此出題老師已經(jīng)盡力將所有能給之提示悉數(shù)奉上，只要按部就班按照中文句子和提示詞將句子翻譯出來(lái)即可?？上в械耐瑢W(xué)并不領(lǐng)情，依然故我，舍提示詞于不顧，非要嘗試長(zhǎng)難句。殊不知大智若愚，大巧若拙這個(gè)道理 最平凡并沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤的文章當(dāng)為中考優(yōu)秀英語(yǔ)作文。 作文提分我能做什么？明確作文新趨勢(shì)： 提示作文 提示作文也稱之為提供材料作文，它要求根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)意思和英語(yǔ)提示詞語(yǔ)，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英語(yǔ)文段。這種提示已將所要敘述的事情列出，并且有的提示給出了英語(yǔ)詞匯、句型，只是要求學(xué)生根據(jù)所給的提示，利用合理的想像，運(yùn)用一定的語(yǔ)言邏輯，使用正確的語(yǔ)法和句法，將整篇的文字用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。 切記要點(diǎn)不能漏掉！1.根據(jù)題目要求列出寫作提綱，打草稿。 切忌直接在卷面上寫作文，寫作前要先構(gòu)思文章的主旨，段落，時(shí)態(tài)。1）首先，應(yīng)認(rèn)真閱讀漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)提示，理解寫作要求；將相關(guān)信息組合起來(lái)。 2）明確時(shí)態(tài)，理順?biāo)悸罚鶕?jù)提示的內(nèi)容，確定時(shí)態(tài)、人稱，在此基礎(chǔ)上，確定適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、句型。 3）寫作內(nèi)容：寫人就要從外貌、性格、愛好、年齡、職業(yè)、心理活動(dòng)和人物相關(guān)的主要事件等角度考慮；寫事（經(jīng)歷）要交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事情發(fā)生的順序等，提建議用建議句型 另外，注意應(yīng)用文的格式，如信件E-mail等。4）寫完草稿后，要仔細(xì)閱讀全文，看文章是否扣題，是否涵蓋全部要點(diǎn)，單詞拼寫是否準(zhǔn)確，有無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，草稿修改好后，抄寫在試卷上，抄寫時(shí)字體要規(guī)范整潔。試卷上務(wù)必不要出現(xiàn)大段的涂抹、勾畫。2. 選用自己熟練掌握的句子組織語(yǔ)言。設(shè)計(jì)好文章的開頭和結(jié)尾，結(jié)構(gòu)層次要清晰，可按題目的要點(diǎn)分段，并有適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡。1) 句型為王 句子是表達(dá)完整含義的最小單位。 自造句+ 模板句 考試中盡量使用見過(guò)/背過(guò)的句式和短語(yǔ)，注意中英文表達(dá)的差異，避免使用中式英文。我們?cè)谡n本中學(xué)過(guò)的句式都可使用在作文中， 如：It is for sb to do sth. It is necessary for us to make a plan for our study. It is a good habit for us to exercise every day because it can help us keep in good health. 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：I hink；I believe;In my opinion，I prefer to do sth rather thando sth becauseI等，我們可在原句型的基礎(chǔ)上舉一反三利用所知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。2）另外在適宜的情況下也可使用一些平時(shí)積累的很經(jīng)典的句子，等起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。 Do well and have well Practice makes perfect 但求無(wú)過(guò)，用熟不用生3）巧潤(rùn)色，細(xì)檢查。學(xué)會(huì)使用過(guò)渡詞，避免重復(fù)使用同樣的短語(yǔ)和句型，在需要的地方加上表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較、時(shí)間順序的過(guò)渡詞或短語(yǔ)，使文章更加自然、流暢，也會(huì)使文章增色不少。 臨場(chǎng)檢查六注意 一篇優(yōu)秀的作文應(yīng)符合以下要求： 1.審題爭(zhēng)取，要素齊全（不全，降檔） 2.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)及句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤是否影響了內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性。 3.能否使用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或者復(fù)合句使文段內(nèi)容完整，層次清楚。 4.運(yùn)用豐富的詞語(yǔ)和句子，增加句子的多樣性 5.句子開頭大寫及句尾的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。 6.卷面是否整潔?？记翱偨Y(jié)常犯錯(cuò)誤 小提示： 1.不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來(lái)或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡(jiǎn)。 2.小詞大用。漢語(yǔ)中有些語(yǔ)意看來(lái)很復(fù)雜很文雅，但在英語(yǔ)中?？捎靡恍┏Ｓ迷~來(lái)表達(dá)。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達(dá)中有用：take，have，get，make，come，go，do，see，show，happy，nice，kind，help等。 3.注意使用復(fù)合句。中考作文歸類總結(jié)范文： 第一大類提建議：Beginnings: i. There are many things you can do to help you.ii. Im sorry to hear that. I would like to help you deal with your problem.iii. There is nothing serious. Id like to give you some advice.iv. I know it isnt easy to. But I have some ideas that may help.Engdings: 1. In a word, nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. 2. I hope to receive your good news. 3. I hope you can feel better soon. 4. Easier said than done. Lets start from now. 5. I am sure you willStructures: 1. You should/could + do-You shouldnt/couldnt +do2. Youd better do Youd better not do3. Why not do?Why dont you do?4. Why not consider doing ?5. You are supposed to do6. Dont do7. If I were you, I would do8. If possible, I would do（1）學(xué)習(xí) A. how to become a good learnerTo be a good leaner, we should have good habits and ways in learning. First, its important to get ready for our lessons before class and listen carefully in class. After class, wed better go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. Second, we need to help each other and study in groups. It can not only help us solve problems but also provide us the opportunities to learn to work with others. Above all, working hard is important, but dont forget to do sports and keep healthy. I hope all of us will become good learners.B. how to study English well English is so important that everyone wants to learn it well.I am glad to say something about how I study English. first of all, my listening is poor. I can hardly understand when people talk to me.I think that doing lots of listening practice is one of the secrets of becoming a good language learner.Watching Enlgish movies isnt a bad way because I can see the actors say the words Then I am afraid to speak in class. My English teacher gave me some advice that helped me a lot. She told me not to be afraid of making mistakes and encouraged me to speak a lot. There is an old saying, “Practice makes perfect.” now my speaking English has improved a lot. As for grammar, I sometimes make mistakes in grammar, the best way to study grammar is by taking notes carefully in class. in a word, as English is getting more and more important, I decide to learn it harder and better by reading English novels. Hope Ill do better in learning English. 具體問(wèn)題：I cant understand when people talk to meI cant spell some English words.I read very slowly.I make mistakes in grammar.I am afraid to speak in class, because I think my classmates might laugh at me. I could hardly understand the teacher when she talked in class.闡述困難的句型： first of all, My is poor. /I can hardly doLater on, Its difficult for me toAlso, I dont know how to Next, I make mistakes in doing/ I sometimes worry about making mistakes when I speak English out loud.And, I find doing is difficult for me.補(bǔ)充學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法：listen to tapes ,watch English movies,join an English club,speak to friends in Englishhave conversations with friends,read the textbook,read English newspapers/magazinesmake flashcards, memorize words of pop songs, find a pen pal, work with friendsask teacher for help, study with a group, study English by using it.學(xué)習(xí)諺語(yǔ)： Just as an old saying goes, . Nothing is impossible/difficult if you put your heart into it. Where there is a will, there is a way. Action speaks louder that words. Practice makes perfect. No pains, no gains. Little by little, one goes far The more you learn, the better you will be.(2) 健康 A. 睡眠方面的建議 Please dont worry. Im sorry to hear that you have many problems. I would like to provide you with some suggestions that may help you.First, if I were you , I would go to bed at the same time. Just as an old saying goes, “ Early to bed, early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”Then, If possible, youd better not read books that are interesting and exciting. So that youll not only have a good rest but also sleep with a good quality.Whats more (In addition), why not consider drinking a cup of milk before going to bed instead of drinking a cup of tea? In my opinion, its good for your health.In a word (all in all), I hope youll sleep as sweetly as a baby. And I am looking forward to your great changes.! B. 面對(duì)H1N1，我們可以做什么Please dont be afraid of H1N1. There are many things we can do to stay away from it. Here are a few.First, A healthy lifestyle can be very effective. Just as an old saying goes, “ Early to bed, early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” We should have enough sleep because it can give us more energy.Second, If possible, wed better take exercise regularly to make our body strong. The more exercise we do, the stronger we will be.Third, why not consider having a balanced/ healthy diet? I think we should eat more vegetables and fruits. Just as an old saying goes, An apple a day keeps a doctor away. Also, stay away from food with too much sugar or salt! It can not only help us lose weight but also help us keep fit. Whats more (In addition), we should wash our hands more often and we shouldnt touch our eyes and noses with our dirty hands. The last but the most important thing is to open the window as often as possible to let fresh air in. Finally, if we catch a cold or have a fever, go to see a doctor in time and ask him for some useful advice.In a word (all in all), There is nothing serious. Preventing H1N1 is possible if we put your heart into it.健康方面的諺語(yǔ)：Just as an old saying goes, .There is nothing more important than health.The first wealth is health.An apple a day keeps a doctor away.Early to bed, early to rise makes a man healthy wealthy and wise.” All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作, 不玩耍, 聰明小伙也變儍。 (3) 環(huán)保 A. save water節(jié)水The earth is so dry that not only the people but also the plants and animals are short of water. Its very difficult for people to make a living and so its dangerous for their lives. Water is important in our life and everyone has the duty to save every drop of water For example, First, We can take a shorter shower because it is not necessary for us to use so much water. Second,We can turn off the shower when we wash our hair.whats more, We can collect enough used waste water to sweep the floor or water the flowers. In a word, If we dont save water now, the last drop of water in the earth will be our tear!Ill keep doing them and try my best to save more water. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference. B. save energy節(jié)能、低碳 The earth is our home and its our duty to take care of it.I think protecing the environment is so important that everyone should give a hand. As for me/When it comes to me, I used to go to school by car, but now I go to school by bike and I will remember to turn off the lights before I leave the room. What is more, I collect waste things such as paper and bottles to recycle. By doing this, I can not only get some pocket money but also do something for the environment. As an old saying goes, less is more. In the future I will go on doing more useful and meaningful things for the environment. For example, When I go shopping I will use paper bags instead of plastic bags/I will use my own bags. Also/Besides, when I eat outside I will take my own chopsticks. If I have a chance, I think planting trees is another good choice because planting more trees can make the air cleanter. (the more trees we plant, the better our environment will be).In a word, the more things we do, the better environment will be! All in all, save the environment, save ourselves! (4) 抄作業(yè)應(yīng)該怎么辦I have received/got your e-mail recently. I can understand you. You should tell him its wrong to do that because its bad for him. If he copies others answers, he will not get good grades. Whats more, its not honest to do that. What should you do? Youd better help him to study English hard. For example, you can ask him to listen to the teacher carefully in class. After class, you can study with him or take him to an English club. As for his parents, If I were you, I would write a letter to tell them it is bad for them to punish his son. Instead they should encourage him not to give up and try to cheer him up. Im sure, with your help, he will get rid of his bad ohabit and make progress soon. I hope these will help you! (5) 課余時(shí)間的分配Dear friend, Im really unhappy now because my parents always make me stay at home and study every night during the week. They say that I must study hard for my exams. But in my opinion, I dont have to work so hard all the time. I have problems on weekends, too On weekends I can go out with my friends, but I have to be home before 20:00. Its crazy! They dont want me to go to parties, either. They say it wont do good for my studies. What should I do? Can you give me some suggestions? Elizabeth參考范文：Dear Elizabeth,Im sorry to hear that youre not happy now. Its very common for us to have such kind of problems. So dont worry. Here I have some suggestions for you.Firstly, youd better make a schedule, set up a goal for each day and show them to your parents. Secondly, you should talk with your parents, telling them all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Please dont be angry with them, which only makes things worse. The last thing is to do what you have promised. When they find you are strong-minded and act properly, they wont be worried about you. Then they wont set so many rules for you.Please have a try. Im looking forward to hearing good news from you. Yours, Li Lin第二大類課余生活： (1) 通過(guò)那些方式放松及理由中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)、壓力(pressure)大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约?。為此，不同的同學(xué)有不同的放松方式，有的看電視，有的聽音樂(lè)，有的做運(yùn)動(dòng),請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀阃ㄟ^(guò)哪些方式放松自己并說(shuō)說(shuō)原因，談?wù)勀愕母惺?。提示詞語(yǔ)：relax, TV, music, think參考范文：Students study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure. In order to relax themselves different students have different ways-Some watch TV, some listen to music But for me I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides I also play table tennis with my friends after class. In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies. I think its really helpful to both my health and my study. (83) (2) My TV-Turnoff WeekI like watching TV very much. My favorite TV program is sports show. I almost spend all my free time on it. I know its bad for my eyes. So during my TV-turnoff week, I will go outdoors to take some sports, such as swimming, playing football and so on. And I can also help my mum with her housework. In my opinion sports are not only very interesting but also can help me to keep healthy. And housework can help me grow up. Im sure mum will be glad to see that. (3) 體育活動(dòng)休閑As for me, I usually spend half an hour running. Sometimes I play basketball with my friends. I spend about two hours a week. I strongly believe that exercise can not only keep me fit but also help me relax after a tiring day. In a word, there is nothing more important than health. So everyone should spend at least half an hour taking exercise. Enough exercise may help us do better in study as well.As for me, I usually run. Sometimes I play basketball with my friends. I spend about two hours a week. I think that exercise is not only good for my health but also good for my study. In a word, just as an old saying goes, All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. exercise is so important that we should spend more time taking exercise. Enough exercise may help us do better in study as well. (4) 校內(nèi)課外活動(dòng) 中學(xué)生活是豐富多彩的,尤其是學(xué)校里的課外活動(dòng),如打籃球、集郵、參加書畫、電腦小組等。你最喜歡哪一項(xiàng)課外活動(dòng)？活動(dòng)中你都做什么？說(shuō)說(shuō)你的理由和想法.提示詞語(yǔ):take part in, after school,be interested in, think, important, grow up（字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60字）范文、Although we are busy getting ready for the exam, our school life is always colorful. We can take part in lots of activities after school. Such as doing sports, joining different clubs.I am happy to tell you about my wonderful school life.We are busy studying but we dont feel tired at all. Because we have a lot of interesting activities after school, such as reading books in the library and so on.Im especially interested in playing basketball. I think its one of the most popular sports in the world. I have been playing it for three years. I play it so well that Im on the school basketball team. We practice hard and won some prizes for the school. Playing basketball is not only good for my health, but also I can spend time doing what I love to do. I also learned to share happiness with others. I want to be a basketball player when I grow up. I love the game.第三大類校園生活： 暑假期間，一些外國(guó)朋友將到你校參觀訪問(wèn)，學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備進(jìn)行一次英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。征文內(nèi)容：向外國(guó)朋友簡(jiǎn)要介紹你的學(xué)校生活以及一個(gè)/一件你最難忘的人/事，并表達(dá)你對(duì)學(xué)校生活的感受。 開頭一 Welcome to China! I am glad to tell you about my wonderful school life. All of us are busy studying, but we dont feel tired at all. The teachers often help me work out the problems patiently when I ask them for help. After class, we have many activities. I would like to play with friends on the playground. Sometimes we do exercise and sometimes we play sports. Whatever we do, we feel happy and enjoyable. 開頭二 Welcome to China! I am happy to tell you about my wonderful school life. My school life is interesting and colorful. We have five classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. we are busy studying . we still have a lot of interesting activities after class, such as playing soccer or reading books in the library.(1) 校園旅行school tripThe most unforgettable thing happened last term. We had great fun going on a school trip.That morning, we climbed mountains. It took us two hours to get to the hilltop. We enjoyed the beautiful red leaves and fresh air. The scene was so beautiful that we couldnt help smiling.At noon, frustrated but happy, we had a picnic at the top. We were happy to share the delicious food with friends. Late in the afternoon，We spent time swimming in the river and flying kites happily. In the evening, we set up camps, made a fire and held a big party. We had a great time on the school trip. We went to Blue Water Aquarium. First, we visited the Visitors Center and watched a movie about sharks. Then, we watched a dolphin show. After lunch, we went to the Gift Shop to buy lots of gifts. Finally, tired but happy, we took the bus back to school. On the way to school, we spent time singing and talking together. Our school trip was great and left me deep impresstion, The beautiful memory will stay in my mind for many years to come,because we not only learnt some knowledge but also shared happiness. 北海旅行school tripI am busy with my school work every day, so Im a little tired of it. Last Sunday, my classmates and I decided to take a short trip. We went to Beihai Park happily. We set out early in the morning. It was a beautiful day. The sun was shining, and the birds were singing. When we got there, there were many people in the park already. We went boating on the lake. We felt relaxed with the wind blowing. Three hours passed quickly, and we had to leave.It was really a happy day. I didnt feel tired at all. I had a wonderful time with my classmates, and I refreshed myself. (2) 志愿者Everyone has his own unforgettable/wonderful school life, so do I. Memories in my mind are shinging all the time and I am glad to share with you. That most unforgettable thing