湖南年度高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)材料(doc 13頁)

2011年湖南高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)材料武岡二中高三英語備課組 主備人 鐘芳源1.歷年話題:05年“去北京參加一次英語夏令營活動” ，選擇活動內(nèi)容，并說明理由（個人發(fā)展）06年“根據(jù)英文短詩寫：“My Teacher Mr. Moore”（友情） 07年“用英文給李華寫一篇畢業(yè)留言”（友情）08根據(jù)圖片寫一個名人， “我的偶像 ” （個人發(fā)展）09新老師的身份, “我的第一堂課” （生活感悟）10年英語俱樂部，“我的活動”（個人發(fā)展）2.命題的共性與原則：縱觀04-10湖南高考英語作文命題的目的與特點(diǎn)：A. 無城鄉(xiāng)差別，體現(xiàn)公平；B. 取材通俗貼近生活（總在和諧的社會生活大背景下選一個與學(xué)生生活相關(guān)的話題： “我”的活動，“我”的老師,“我”的同窗,我的偶像， 我的課堂, “我”的活動-演講）；C. 體裁趨向于敘事，夾敘夾議兼顧情感表達(dá)；D. 命題趨向加大開放度，讓考生自由發(fā)揮；E. 寫作上明確要求考生做到行文邏輯清晰、語言簡潔、情感真實。3.2011年方向預(yù)測：l 命題形式：給出圖片或簡單英/漢說明文字的開放式作文；l 話題內(nèi)容：取材側(cè)重于在和諧的社會中，貼近學(xué)生生活，能表現(xiàn)青年學(xué)生的親情、友情以及個人發(fā)展與環(huán)境的話題材料。 l 能力方向：簡潔準(zhǔn)確地用英語表達(dá)情感與邏輯是考查的重點(diǎn)；常用句式：高考英語寫作可以用到基本套句.1用于文章主題句（1） 不用說It goes without saying that（從句）=It is needless to say (that)（從句）=It is obvious that（從句）例如：不用說，早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.(2) 是不可能的，無法There is no V.-ing. =There is no way of V.-ing.=There is no possibility of V.-ing. without =It is impossible to V without .=It is out of the question to V. without =No one can V. without =We can not V. without例如：不可否認(rèn)，成功的關(guān)鍵在于健康的身心。There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.(3)我深信I am greatly convinced (that)（從句）=I am greatly assured (that) (從句)例如：我深信預(yù)防勝于治療。I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.(4) 在各種之中,Among various kinds =Of all the 例如：在各種運(yùn)動中，我尤其喜歡慢跑。Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.(5)是很容易證明的。It can be easily proved (that)（從句）例如：時間最寶貴是很容易證明的。It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time.(6) 無論怎樣強(qiáng)調(diào)都不為過。cannot be overemphasized/too adj.例如：交通安全的重要性無論怎樣強(qiáng)調(diào)都不為過。The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.(7) 就我的看法；我認(rèn)為In my opinion=As far as I am concerned, 例如：就我的看法，打電游既花費(fèi)也有害健康。In my opinion, playing video games not only takes up much time but also is harmful to our health.（8）（A）每個人都知道Everyone knows (that) （從句）(B) 就我所知，As far as my knowledge is concerned例如：就我所知，下列方法對我?guī)椭艽?。As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me.（9）根據(jù)我個人經(jīng)驗，According to my personal experience,= Based on my personal experience, 例如：根據(jù)我個人經(jīng)驗，According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good.(10) 在我認(rèn)識的人當(dāng)中，也許沒有一個人比更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, Perhaps none deserves my respect more than例如：在我認(rèn)識的人當(dāng)中，也許沒有一個人比我的英語張老師更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than Miss Zhang, my English teacher.(11) 在我的求學(xué)過程中，我忘不了In the course of my schooling, I will never forget 例如：在我求學(xué)的過程中，我忘不了學(xué)習(xí)英語的巨大困難。In the course of my schooling, I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English.(12) (A) 隨著人口的增加，With the increase / growth of the population,(B) 隨著科技的進(jìn)步，With the advance of science and technology,例如：隨著我國經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，許多社會問題產(chǎn)生了。With the rapid development of our economy, a lot of social problems have surfaced.(13) 在這信息的年代，扮演重要的角色。In the age of information and communication, plays an important role.例如：在這信息的年代，計算機(jī)扮演著非常重要的角色。In the age of information and communication, the computer plays an extremely important role.(14) 在討論時，一個人不得不承認(rèn)In dealing with , one can not but admit (that) (從句)例如：在討論未來職業(yè)的時候，一個人不得不承認(rèn)盡早決定未來的職業(yè)很重要。In dealing with ones future career, one can not but admit that it is very important to decide ones future career as early as possible.(15) 世界上沒有什么比更令我高興。Nothing in the world can delight me so much as 例如：世界上沒有什么比到快餐店吃漢堡包更令我高興。Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast food restaurants.(16) 是必要的。It is necessary that S. (should) V.是重要的。It is important / essential that S (should) V.是適當(dāng)?shù)?。It is proper that S. (should ) V.是緊急的。It is urgent that S. (should) V. 例如：我們保持公共場所的清潔是應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)?。It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.(17) 每當(dāng)我聽到,我就忍不住感到興奮。Whenever I hear , I can not but feel excited.每當(dāng)我做, 我就忍不住感到悲傷/高興/興奮。Whenever I do , I can not but feel sad/delighted/excited.每當(dāng)我想到,我就忍不住感到緊張。Whenever I think of , I can not but feel nervous.每當(dāng)我遭遇,我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with , I can not but feel frightened.每當(dāng)我看到,我就忍不住感到驚訝。Whenever I see,I can not but feel surprised.例如：每當(dāng)我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪，我就忍不住感到悲傷。Whenever I think of the clean brook near my house, I can not but feel sad.=Every time I think of the clean brook near my house, I can not help feeling sad.(18)據(jù)說It is said (that)(從句)一般認(rèn)為It is thought (that)(從句)大家都知道It is known to all (that)(從句)據(jù)報道It is reported (that)(從句)一般預(yù)料It is expected (that)(從句)一般相信It is believed (that)(從句)例如：一般相信閱讀增長我們的知識，拓寬我們的視野。It is believed (that) reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind.(19)的主要原因是The main reason why is (that)（從句）例如：青少年犯罪的主要原因是社會風(fēng)氣日益敗壞。The main reason why the juveniles commit crimes is that social environment is becoming worse.(20)俗話說得好：“”Well goes an old saying,“”=As an old saying goes,“”=An old saying goes,“”=Its an old saying(that)（從句）例如：俗話說得好：“誠實為上策”。As an old saying goes,” Honesty is the best policy.”(21)(A)用下列方法。 in the following ways.(B)有三個主要理由。for three major reasons.(C)要，我們至少要做三件事。To, there are at least three things we can do. 例如：(A)我用下列方法增強(qiáng)信心。I increase my confidence in following ways.(B)人們學(xué)習(xí)外語主要有三個理由。People learn a foreign for three major reasons.(C)要保持身體健康，我們每天至少可做三件事。To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day.2. 用于文章承轉(zhuǎn)句。（22）那就是說;亦即That is to say,=That is ,=Namely,例如：我們生活需要有規(guī)律。也就是說，早睡早起，戒除煙酒。We need to live a regular life. That is (to say), we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking in the daily activities.（23）我們有理由相信We have reasons to believe (that)例如：我們有理由相信體罰應(yīng)該嚴(yán)格禁止。We have reasons to believe (that) corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited.（24）事實上，As a matter of fact,=in fact/in reality/actually例如；事實上，健康才是最重要的。As a matter of fact，it is health that counts（25）（A）例如，F(xiàn)or example,=For instance(B) 以為例Takefor example例如：例如，我們盲目地提高生活水準(zhǔn)，卻降低生活質(zhì)量。For example, elevate the living standard blindly, but lower the quality of life.（26）此外，我們不應(yīng)忽視Besides(in addition), we should not neglect例如：此外，我們不應(yīng)忽視每個人都想要一個溫馨祥和的社會。In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.(27) 相反的，On the contrary, =By contrast, 例如：相反的，少數(shù)學(xué)生似乎還在虛度光陰。On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around.(28) 另一方面，On the other hand, 例如：政府應(yīng)嚴(yán)格執(zhí)法，另一方面，大眾也應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)減少污染的好習(xí)慣。The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public should also develop the good habit of reducing pollution.(29) 然而；很可惜的是However, it is a pity that 例如：然而，很可惜的是他總是臨時抱佛腳。However, it is a pity that he should always cram at the eleventh hour.(30) 換言之，In other words, = To put it differently例如：換言之，我會盡最大的努力達(dá)到我的目標(biāo)。In other words, I will try my best to attain (gain; live up to) my goal.(31) 別人可能認(rèn)為這是事實，但我不是。我認(rèn)為It will be true as assumed by others, but I dont believe it. I believe that (從句)例如：別人可能認(rèn)為這是事實，但我不是。我認(rèn)為如果你有很大的決心和毅力，成功最終是屬于你的。It will be true as assumed by others, but I dont believe it. I believe that if you have strong determination and perseverance, success will certainly come to you in the end.(32) 從此之后，我已發(fā)現(xiàn)Ever since then, I have found that (從句)例如：從此之后，我已發(fā)現(xiàn)微笑是避免我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪邪l(fā)生糾紛的最好辦法。Ever since then, I have found that smiling is the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily life(33)這樣說來，假如, 當(dāng)然毫無疑問地In the light, if , there can surely be no doubt (that) (從句)例如：假如我們能善于利用時間，當(dāng)然毫無疑問地我們會成功。In the light, if we can make good use of time, there can surely be no doubt that we will get somewhere.(34) 更嚴(yán)重的是，What is more serious is (that) (從句)例如：更嚴(yán)重的是，我們不珍惜野生動物。What is more serious is that we do not cherish wildlife.(35) 鑒于社會實際的需要，In view of the practical need of society,例如: 鑒于社會實踐的需要，愈來愈多的人對學(xué)英語有興趣。In view of practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English.3. 用于文章結(jié)論句（36）如果能實踐這三點(diǎn)，If one can really put the three points into action (practice), 例如：如果能實踐這三點(diǎn)，他肯定能過上幸福的生活。If one can really put the three points into action (practice), he will surely be able to live a happy life. (37) 如此，我相信In this way, I believe (that) (從句)例如：如此，我相信大家或許能夠像我一樣，享受乘坐公共汽車的樂趣。In this way, I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like me.(38) 實踐這些，By putting them （the above）into practice,例如：實踐這些，在智育方面我一直不斷進(jìn)步。By putting them （the above）into practice, I have been able to make constant progress in intellectual education.(39) 唯有通力合作，我們才能Only with combined efforts, can we 例如：唯有通力合作，我們才能期望我們的家鄉(xiāng)不久會有新的面貌。Only with combined efforts, can we expect our hometown take on a new look in due course.(40) 最后，但很重要，Last but not least, 例如: 最后，但很重要，教育上的失誤是助長青少年犯罪的原因。Last but not least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.(41) 基于這些理由，我For these reasons, I 例如：基于這些理由，我認(rèn)為在中國接受大學(xué)教育是明智的。For these reason, I think that receiving college education In China is wise.(42) 總而言之，In conclusion, =To sum up, 例如：總而言之，好公民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.(43) 因此，我們能下個結(jié)論，那就是We can, therefore, come to the conclusion (that)（從句）例如：因此，我們能下個結(jié)論，那就是世上和平最珍貴。We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world(44）如果我們能做到如上所述，毫無疑問地If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt (that) （從句）例如：如果我們能做到如上所述，毫無疑問地， 我們就能精通英語。If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master English.(45) 因此，這就是的原因。Thus, this is the reason why例如：因此，這就是我得重感冒的原因。Thus, this is the reason why I caught a bad cold.(46) 所以，我們應(yīng)該了解Therefore, we should realize (that)（從句）例如：所以，我們應(yīng)該了解學(xué)英文不能沒有詞典。Therefore, we should realize that in learning English we can not do without a dictionary.(47) 因此，由上面的討論我們可以明了We, therefore, can make it clear from the above discussion (that )（從句）例如：因此，由上面的討論我們可以明了，堅持不懈可以克服任何困難。We, therefore, can make it clear from the above discussion that perseverance can overcome any difficulty.(48) 從觀點(diǎn)來看, From the point of view, 例如：從政治的觀點(diǎn)來看，這是一個很復(fù)雜的問題。From the political point of view, it is very complicated problem.4. 書信寫作常用的慣用語(49) 在信的開頭常用以下客套話：How are you?/How are you getting on recently?/How are you getting on/ along with ?當(dāng)給別人復(fù)信時，可以用：Many thanks for your last kind letter. I must apologize for not replying to your last letter at once.(50) 在信的結(jié)尾時可以用以下語言。Best wishes /regards to you! Good luck to you書信類:I am looking forward to hearing from you !我很期盼你的回信.I am writing to tell you that.我寫信給你是為了.介紹類:Sending electronic card is faster and easier.送電子賀卡將更方便快捷.I want to introduce you that.我想給你介紹.約定見面的:I will be excepting you at 3oclock at the school gate.我會三點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)時在校門等你.其實這樣的句子很多的,平時可以多練多總結(jié),畢竟在完整的文章中看那些句子效果會更好范文選集：1.某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語夏令營，開設(shè)了如下課程：園藝（gardening），烹飪（cooking）,防身術(shù)（self-defence），護(hù)理（nursing）。假如你是王躍華（不可以用自己的真實姓名），寫一封申請信，報名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。信的內(nèi)容必須包括： A你感興趣的課程 B你期望從這門課程中學(xué)到什么 C為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容 寫作指導(dǎo)：本文是書信格式，報名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)，屬于半開放式作文。學(xué)生在寫作時應(yīng)注意：n 先從四科中選取自己感興趣、最有把握和有話可說的學(xué)科，這是關(guān)鍵，過渡要自然；n 再寫自己希望學(xué)到什么，要把握實用性。n 然后談出想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容的原因，結(jié)合現(xiàn)實，理由合情合理。n 在寫作過程中可以嘗試句型的復(fù)雜化，適度增加情節(jié)范文輻射(個人發(fā)展)：周末假日旅游等活動選擇、大學(xué)專業(yè)選擇、未來職業(yè)選擇2.假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生張華，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名同學(xué)李明，他一時無法融入新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫封信：幫他分析原因 給他提出建議 陳述你幫助他的具體打算注意：詞數(shù)120150Dear Li Ming, Best regards,寫作指導(dǎo)：原因分析簡單實際；建議簡單實用；幫主要切實可行；語言要有真情實感。范文輻射（親情友情）: 幫助遇到困難的同學(xué)或迷路陌生人、小孩解決問題，幫助家人朋友解決各種生活中的小麻煩。3.請根據(jù)下列四幅圖畫用英語寫篇故事，并簡要談?wù)勀愕目捶?。注意?故事須包括所有圖畫的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使故事連貫；2圖中學(xué)生為Tom；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3詞數(shù)，不少于120。參考詞匯：寫生draw from nature 畫板drawing board 斧 axeTom is a primary school student and he enjoys drawing every much. 范文輻射（環(huán)境與我們）4.寫作指導(dǎo)：1.描寫圖片；2.分析現(xiàn)象；3.啟示，范文輻射（生活感悟）: 某種社會現(xiàn)象引發(fā)的感想，更側(cè)重于積極的一面去感悟。5（1）（2）你的班長黎華是你們班全體同學(xué)最喜歡的人，學(xué)校王校長想了解你們?yōu)槭裁聪矚g他。請你用英語給王校長寫封信，說說你們?yōu)槭裁聪矚g你們班長黎華。注意：1.至少包括三個理由，2.詞數(shù)不少于120字，3.不能用真實的人名、校名.寫作指導(dǎo)：考察學(xué)生的審美能力和對美的表達(dá)能力。范文輻射：對生活中的明星人物、家庭的親人、朋友以及其他美好事物做出評價，判斷；表達(dá)喜惡情感。6.為了加強(qiáng)高中畢業(yè)生進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的適應(yīng)能力，北京大學(xué)學(xué)生管理處決定在光明中學(xué)全體高三年級學(xué)生中就“打算如何渡過大學(xué)時光”舉行一次英語征文比賽。先請你就自己的實際情況寫一片參賽作文。注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于120；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校、班級、姓名和地址。7.請根據(jù)所給材料以編輯的名義，給Lora寫封回信。注意：1詞數(shù)不少于120；2可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)使行文連貫：3開頭語已為你寫好。寫作指導(dǎo)：1Lora打算利用暑假打工； 2Lora父母不同意的理由；3你給Lora的具體建議。范文輻射：社會實踐活動；8.假如你是李華，你所在的學(xué)校將舉行英語作文比賽。請你從下面的兩個開頭語中劇中任選一個，續(xù)寫一篇不少于120詞的短文：1. I was unhappy with my mother/father the other day-2. I was grateful that my mother/father criticized me the other day-寫作指導(dǎo)：本題是故事型作文，注意：1. 過去時態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用；2. 故事編寫的合理切題；3.關(guān)鍵詞the other day的理解；4.注意命題要求寫“I was unhappy”，不應(yīng)該寫成“mother/father was unhappy”；命題二相對容易把握9.在青春年華里，每個人心中都懷揣美好的夢想。父母老師，他們手握手?jǐn)v扶著我們，告訴我們，未來不是夢。高三的孩子們。讓我們一起來暢想未來吧，從現(xiàn)在做起，為夢想努力。請以“An Outlook on My Future”為題寫一篇不少于120詞的文章，發(fā)表對自己未來的看法。寫作指導(dǎo)：未來是美好的，可寫的也很多。但要從細(xì)處著手，寫出感人的東西。范文輻射: 客觀的認(rèn)識自我。10.2011年高考即將落下帷幕，請你以此為主題寫一封郵件給你的筆友David，內(nèi)容如下：1.簡要描述等候考試或考試過程中的一個場面；2.談?wù)勀愕母惺?。注意?.詞數(shù)不少于12個；2.不能使用真是姓名和學(xué)校名。111、保持身體健康很重要。王紅的同學(xué)Tom很胖，經(jīng)常生病。他寫信詢問王紅是如何保持身體健康的。請你代王紅用英語寫一封回信,告訴Tom你是如何保持身體健康的。信的開頭已給出。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于12個；2.不能使用真是姓名和學(xué)校名。Dear Tom, Im happy to know you have decided to do something. Its important for us to keep healthy. _Yours sincerelyWanghong12今天下午高考結(jié)束后校學(xué)生會將舉行一個英語沙龍晚會，以釋放高考帶給大家的緊張情緒。你作為高三學(xué)生代表將在會上發(fā)言，講述高考前后的感受。要求能表達(dá)對父母老師的感謝，肯定全體高三同學(xué)用實際行動為低年級的同學(xué)做出了榜樣，相信大家在這次高考中能取得好成績；同時祝福學(xué)校和低年級的同學(xué)。字?jǐn)?shù)120字左右。命題思路：要求能合理擴(kuò)充要點(diǎn)，思維清晰，能恰當(dāng)表達(dá)情感?！緟⒖挤段摹?Dear leader,I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses ，such as gardening, cooking, self-defense, nursing and so on. I want to register to attend a course about gardening, because I like flowers, grasses, etc since I was a little child.I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature. For one thing ，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. Besides, I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university. Whats more, I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more.For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivating the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country.Yours,Wang Yuehua from J2.Dear Li Ming,Im very glad to become your classmate. I know you are worried about your study and dont know how to adapt yourself to the new environment. There are some suggestions about it and I hope they can help you.You know we always become puzzled when we go to a new environment because we dont know anything about the people around us and even dont know what to do. I think you should make friends with the students in our class. Then if you have any problem you can ask us or our teachers for help. Well try our best to help you.After class, Ill show you around our school and tell you something about it. If you have any problem, please tell me and I will give you my advice not only on study but also on your life here.All in all, I hope you can adapt yourself to the new environment and we can become good friends.Best regards,Zhang Hua3.Tom is a primary school student and he enjoys drawing very much.One day, he went to the small woods not far from town to draw from nature, taking along with a drawing board. When he got there, he found that only one tree remained. “Its better than nothing.” He comforted himself. So he began to put up his board in order to draw it quickly. At this time, a young man carrying an axe on his shoulder walked towards the tree and got down to cutting the tree. In no time he cut it down and pulled it away.When Tom got ready and turned back to draw, he found the only tree was missing. “Dear me! Where on earth is the tree?” Tom wondered, puzzled and disappointed.What Tom saw is a reminder to all of us that we human beings are destroying the Earth without taking our responsibilities into consideration. As far as Im concerned, measures should be taken to protect the environment, or nobody could survive in the near future.4.5.Dear headmaster Wang: I am very glad that you are interested in our star monitor. I am writing to tell you something about our monitor Lihua. As is popular with our classmates and teachers, Lihua regards the class as his own big family and even offers to sacrifice his personal interests whenever necessary. While taking an active part in all our class activities, he works responsibly, leading us to build up a good reputation as a team. As a student with high popularity, he shows respect, concern and sympathy for others and he never hesitates to lend a hand to those in need. Besides, he is strict with himself in everything he does at school and makes every effort to achieve all-round development, being good not only at his lessons but also at sports, music, painting, social services, and so on. In time of success or being praised, he remains modest, while in time of difficulty he keeps strong-minded. All in all, his popularity among classmates and teachers is not only accepted but also encourage all of us to keep improving their personal qualities.6.The day has at last come when I can go to university. I am only too glad and I know college life is a very important stage, where I should and can further develop myself all around. Entering university, I will stick to my good habits: early to bed and early to rise and taking exercise every day. Enough exercise and a healthy diet will build up a