高考英語 通用題型考前指導(dǎo)與仿真模擬系列 專題05 書面表達(dá)解仿真模擬（教師版）.doc

2013屆高考英語 通用題型考前指導(dǎo)與仿真模擬系列 專題05 書面表達(dá)解仿真模擬（教師版）2013年4月20日，四川省雅安市蘆山發(fā)生強(qiáng)烈地震，造成了很大損失。學(xué)校號召全體師生向?yàn)?zāi)區(qū)捐款。請你擬一個發(fā)言稿，在學(xué)校捐款動員大會上使用。發(fā)言稿主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括： 1.對災(zāi)區(qū)情況的簡單介紹：地震發(fā)生的時間、地點(diǎn)、造成的財產(chǎn)損失（許多建筑物被毀）以及人員損失（200多人死亡，成千上萬人受傷）等；2.捐款的意義：幫助災(zāi)區(qū)人民渡過難關(guān)、幫助災(zāi)區(qū)重建；3.如何捐款：自愿、多少不限、以班級為單位，收齊后交到學(xué)校紅十字會。注意：1.不要逐條翻譯； 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；以使文章連貫； 3.詞數(shù)120左右?！窘忸}指導(dǎo)】本篇作文是文字提綱式作文。體裁為應(yīng)用文的發(fā)言搞，所以在格式上要注意有稱呼和結(jié)尾處的客套話。1.提煉要點(diǎn)2013年4月20日，四川省雅安市蘆山發(fā)生強(qiáng)烈地震，造成了很大損失；學(xué)校號召全體師生向?yàn)?zāi)區(qū)捐款；財產(chǎn)損失（許多建筑物被毀）以及人員損失（200多人死亡，成千上萬人受傷）等；幫助災(zāi)區(qū)人民渡過難關(guān)、幫助災(zāi)區(qū)重建；捐款是自愿的、多少不限；將捐款以班級為單位收齊后，交到學(xué)校紅十字會；本篇因?yàn)槭蔷杩顒訂T大會，所以不要忘了對聽眾提出某些希望。因此，我們要增加要點(diǎn)（自擬要點(diǎn)）希望人人盡其所能幫助我們的同胞走出困境。2.預(yù)備詞匯a terrible earthquake happen/occurcause a great loss destroy/break downinjure, kill, lose ones life, claim ones lifego through hard times, overcome difficultiesrebuild ones hometowncall on sb. to do sth., appeal to sb. to do sth.donate money to, give away money to the earthquake-stricken areavoluntary, voluntary contributionslimit, restrictcollect, handhelp sb. out of the difficulty 3.突破難點(diǎn) 本篇作文有兩個表達(dá)方面的難點(diǎn)： 一是如何表達(dá)“捐款是自愿的”？ this donation is voluntary.it is voluntary for everyone to donate.everyone can donate voluntarily. 二是如何表達(dá)“多少不限”？you can give away however much you want to.the number of your donation is not restricted.there is no amount limitation, more or less.4.連貫成篇 將相關(guān)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行合并表達(dá)；加上恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和過渡句。dear teachers and students,as we all know, a terrible earthquake happened in lushan, sichuan province on april 20, causing a great loss. in the earthquake many buildings were destroyed and thousands of people were injured with more than 200 people killed. in order to help the earthquake victims to go through the hard times and rebuild their hometown, the school has called on everyone in our school, including both teachers and students, to donate money to the earthquake-stricken area.this donation is voluntary. you can give away however much you want to. the money will be collected by each class before it is handed to the red cross society of our school. we hope that everyone will be kind enough to do what you can to help our fellowmen out of the difficulty.thank you. （二）根據(jù)下列圖畫，用英語寫一篇150詞左右的短文，向某英語報社投稿。 要求：1.描述漫畫展現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象及其可能引起的后果。 2.分析出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因。(至少2點(diǎn)) 3.提出解決這種問題的方法。(至少2點(diǎn)) 4.結(jié)合自己實(shí)際，談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。(至少2點(diǎn))參考詞匯：offender冒犯者，當(dāng)事人；jaywalker不守通規(guī)則的人；fluky psychology僥幸心理【解題指導(dǎo)】 本篇雖然為看圖作文，但是重點(diǎn)卻不是在描述圖畫上的內(nèi)容，不需要我們作過多的闡述。描述圖畫內(nèi)容只是引出中心話題而已。重點(diǎn)要處理的是要求中其余三點(diǎn)。 1.提煉要點(diǎn) 一要轉(zhuǎn)換要點(diǎn)：將圖畫所反映的內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)換成文字要點(diǎn)。 中國式過馬路：人們成群結(jié)隊(duì)在斑馬線上闖紅燈過馬路；二要挖掘要點(diǎn)和自擬要點(diǎn)這種闖紅燈過馬路的行為可能引起的后果：非常危險會導(dǎo)致交通堵塞，引發(fā)交通事故；出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因：缺乏遵守交通規(guī)則的意識，懷有從眾心理和罪不加眾心理，；為了節(jié)約時間，急匆匆趕路，對紅燈視而不見；圍繞原因提出建議：加強(qiáng)對公眾的道路安全重要性的教育；解決過馬路難的問題；作為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該（從教育自己，奉勸他人兩方面考慮）。2.預(yù)備詞匯chinese style of crossing roads, on the zebra lines, cross the streets in groups , ignore/run the traffic lights, the behavior like., lead to more traffic jams and accidents lack, awareness, haveflukypsychology, save time, in a hurry ,turn a blind eye tothe importance of road safety 3.突破難點(diǎn) 本篇作文有兩個表達(dá)的難點(diǎn)：一是如何表達(dá)“罪不加眾”？they believe that numerous offenders will not be punished.they believe that the police will not fine them because so many people break the law.二是如何把“解決過馬路難的問題”具體化？i hope the government should make the crossroads more convenient and available for people to cross the road.4.連貫成篇將相關(guān)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行合并表達(dá)；加上恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和過渡句。the picture shows that on the zebra lines people cross the streets in groups, ignoring the traffic lights, which is so-called chinese style of crossing roads. the behavior like running the red light is very dangerous because it may lead to more traffic jams and accidents.why do people neglect the safety of their lives so much? firstly, it reflects that some chinese peoples lack rule-obeying awareness. they haveflukypsychology and believe that numerous offenders will not be punished. second, some people are so always in a hurry that they turn a blind eye to the traffic signal to save time. so i hope the government should make the crossroads more convenient and available for people to cross the road. the public should be convinced of the importance of road safety. as a student,i must spot the right light to cross the road and never follow those who lead themselves to danger. meanwhile ill try to advise people to obey traffic rules consciously. bear it in mind: life is precious and only once.附錄：就同一話題的書面表達(dá)最近，你將參加一個英語作文比賽。要求參賽者根據(jù)下面的這幅漫畫進(jìn)行寫作。請按照下面的提示，寫一篇120字左右的英語短文。1.這幅畫反映了當(dāng)前的一種什么現(xiàn)象？ 2.分析出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因； 3.針對這個現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法。（三）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，校報英語園地正在開展征稿活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你們班近期美化教室的活動記述下來，向校報投稿。詞數(shù)不少于60。 【解題指導(dǎo)】本篇是真正意義上的看圖作文。我們只要把四幅圖所反映的內(nèi)容描述到位，再加上自己的一點(diǎn)議論就可以了。根據(jù)“將近期美化教室的活動記述下來”我們可以知道，本文記敘的是過去的事情，所以本文的主體時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時。1.轉(zhuǎn)換要點(diǎn)第一幅圖要點(diǎn)：a class meeting, decorate our classroom第二幅圖要點(diǎn)：hang pictures on the wall, put some plants in the classroom第三幅圖要點(diǎn)：bring flowers, created a relaxing atmosphere第四幅圖要點(diǎn)：caring these plants, watering2.直接描述描述：our monitor suggested at a class meeting that we do something to decorate our classroom.描述：some classmates wanted to hang several pretty pictures on the wall.others thought it would be great to put some plants in the classroom. 描述：a variety of beautiful plants were brought to the school.描述：every day after class, we devoted our spare time into caring these plants, watering them regularly.3.連貫成文注意要加上適當(dāng)?shù)臅r間狀語、連接詞和恰當(dāng)?shù)淖h論。last month, our monitor suggested at a class meeting that we do something to decorate our classroom.some classmates wanted to hang several pretty pictures on wall, while others thought it would be great to put some plants in the classroom. however, most of us preferred the second idea. in the following week, a variety of beautiful plants were brought to the school, which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere. every day after class, we devoted our spare time into caring these plants, watering them regularly. with fragrant flowers around us, we felt at peace with ourselves and it surely helped us reduce some stress. （四）某互聯(lián)網(wǎng)消費(fèi)調(diào)研中心對網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下。請根據(jù)圖表1提供的信息描述人們選擇網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的不同原因，并針對圖表2中任意一個數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況談?wù)勀愕目捶?。詞數(shù)不少于60。注意：文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出。recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the internet. _【解題指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇圖表類書面表達(dá)。試題分別用柱狀圖和餅圖給出有關(guān)百分比的數(shù)據(jù)。1.轉(zhuǎn)換要點(diǎn)圖表1給出了人們選擇網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的不同原因；49%被接受調(diào)查的人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上商店商品豐富； 33%被接受調(diào)查的人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上商店商品價格實(shí)惠； 25%被接受調(diào)查的人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上購物不受時間、地域的限制； 5%被接受調(diào)查的人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上購物時還可以結(jié)交新朋友。圖表2給出了網(wǎng)購用戶最擔(dān)心的問題；55%被接受調(diào)查的人擔(dān)心網(wǎng)上商店商品的質(zhì)量；27%被接受調(diào)查的人擔(dān)心網(wǎng)上商店商品售出后的服務(wù)；18%被接受調(diào)查的人網(wǎng)上交易的安全問題。針對圖表2中任意一個數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況談看法2.預(yù)備詞匯chart, different reasons, choose to shop onlinevarieties of products in online shops reasonable priceonline shopping convenient, buy sth. anywhere and at any timemake new friends through online shoppingconcerns about online shoppingconcerns about the quality of the productsconcerns about the after-sales serviceconcerns about the transaction security on line3.突破難點(diǎn)本篇書面表達(dá)有兩個難點(diǎn)需要突破。一是如何用不同的表達(dá)方式把圖表1中的數(shù)據(jù)表達(dá)清楚？49% think that . about one third of them say .25% hold that . only 5% of the people even mention that. 這樣表達(dá)就顯得句式結(jié)構(gòu)豐富多彩，增強(qiáng)了可讀性。二是選擇圖表2中的哪一個數(shù)據(jù)反映的情況來談看法？among all the concerns in chart 2, the quality of the products, which accounts for as much as 55%, attracts my attention. personally, i agree that what consumers get from online shops sometimes differs from what can be seen in the pictures, which can be very disappointing. therefore, we should make sure the product is of good quality before making a purchase.among all the concerns in chart 2, the after-sales service, which accounts for as much as 27%, attracts my attention. personally, i agree the after-service is very important. therefore, we should figure out whether the after-service of the goods is guaranteed .among all the concerns in chart 2, the transaction security on line, which accounts for as much as 18%, attracts my attention. personally, i agree we must be careful while doing online shop