雅思大作文四段式.ppt

Howtoachieveband7 IELTSWriting Leon 四段式概述 IntroductionBodyParagraph1 BP1 BodyParagraph2 BP2 Conclusion 四段式構(gòu)思Plan BrainStrom Organise Prons Cons 1 2 3 1 2 3 4 四段式構(gòu)思Plan BrainStrom Organise 根據(jù)之前優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的分析 哪種有思路寫(xiě)哪種 確定文章結(jié)構(gòu) 四段式如何寫(xiě)Introduction Introduction簡(jiǎn)單明了兩句話轉(zhuǎn)述題目句 中心思想句第一句簡(jiǎn)單的轉(zhuǎn)述題目第二句用although或者while句型來(lái)提出自己的觀點(diǎn) 四段式如何寫(xiě)Introduction 舉個(gè)例子Thesedays anincreasingnumberofyoungsterschoosetoworkorstudyoverseas Althoughthismightbefrowneduponbysomeforcertainreasons Itendtocontendthatyoungpeoplearelikelytobenefitfromoverseasexperience Technologicalprogresshastakenplacethroughoutthecourseofhumanhistory Whileearlytechnologiescertainlychangedthelivesofnormalpeople Ibelievethatrecentbreakthroughshavehadanevengreaterimpact 四段式如何寫(xiě)B(tài)P Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 中心句觀點(diǎn)一 論述一觀點(diǎn)二 論述二觀點(diǎn)三 論述三總結(jié)句 四段式如何寫(xiě)B(tài)P Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 舉個(gè)例子Topic Thedisadvantagesoflivinginacity 先想出幾個(gè)可寫(xiě)觀點(diǎn)盡量簡(jiǎn)單 具體會(huì)有助于寫(xiě)作用簡(jiǎn)單的思路去說(shuō)服自己 不要用中文的思維去反駁質(zhì)疑自己的觀點(diǎn)想不出多的就把大的細(xì)分 四段式如何寫(xiě)B(tài)P Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 生活成本高 社會(huì)問(wèn)題多 生活質(zhì)量差 四段式如何寫(xiě)B(tài)P Firstly SecondlyandFinallystructure FSF段式 Cityliveshaveseveraldrawbacks Firstly thecostoflivinginacityisusuallyhigherthaninasmalltownorvillage Forexample inhabitsofcitiesoftenhavetopayhigherpricesforhousing transport andevenfood Secondly urbanarestendtosufferfromsocialproblemssuchashighcrimeandpovertyratesincomparsionwithruralareas Finally theairqualityincitiesisoftenpoor duetopollutionfromtraffic andstreetsandpublictransportsystemareusuallyovercrowded Asaresult citylifecanbeunhealtyandstressful 93words Band9 中心句觀點(diǎn)一 論述一觀點(diǎn)二 論述二觀點(diǎn)三 論述三總結(jié)句 四段式如何寫(xiě)B(tài)P 反面論述段只論述只論述 不反駁 基本和正面的FSF結(jié)構(gòu)段寫(xiě)法差不多 四段式如何寫(xiě)B(tài)P 反駁段論述 反駁委婉語(yǔ)氣論述反面觀點(diǎn) 然后再反駁Thosepeoplewhothink mightarguewiththat Nevertheless asfarasIamconcerned Therefore 四段式如何寫(xiě)B(tài)P 反駁段舉個(gè)例子Somepeoplethinksportgamescanbringpeacetooursociety yetsomebelievethatitmaycausetensionbetweennations我的觀點(diǎn)是體育可以帶來(lái)和平 在第一段FSF論述后 第二段如下 進(jìn)行反面論述 Ontheotherhand therearemanyconflictsrelatedtosportgames andthismightbewhysomepeoplethinksportswouldcausetensionbetweennations Forexample somefansmighthavearrgessiveactionsaftertheteamthattheyfavourlost Nevertheless inmyopinion themajorreasonofwhycertainsportfanstendtohaveoffensiveactionsisthattheylackgoodmannersthemselves andthegamesarejustbeinganexcusefortheirbadbehaviours Therefore sportsarenottoblameforsuchconflicts anditwouldinfactimproverelationshipbetweennationsiftheplayersandfansofbothsidesrepecteachother 自己寫(xiě)的 語(yǔ)言不太地道 可能有語(yǔ)病 但是7分段沒(méi)問(wèn)題 四段式如何寫(xiě)B(tài)P Causesandsolutions段 遇見(jiàn)原因 方法的文 用類似于FSF段落的寫(xiě)法 只要ideas豐富 很容易組織起來(lái)的 四段式如何寫(xiě)Conclusion Conclusion短小精簡(jiǎn)重述觀點(diǎn)不引入新的東西只用Inconclusion 開(kāi)頭 不需要用別的 Tosumup等等 四段式如何寫(xiě)Conclusion 舉個(gè)例子Inconclusion Idonotbelievethatanyfinancialconcessionsshouldbemadeforpeoplewhochooseprivateeducation Inconclusion whilesalariescertainlyaffectpeople schoiceofprofession Idonotbelievethatmoneyoutweighsallothermotivators Inconclusion theissueofsmokingischallengingandcomplex butitisbynomeansinsurmountable ThemeasuresmentionedabovewouldbeeffectivetipreventmorepeoplefromsmokingInconclusion ibelievethatthegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestostrictlyregulatetheviolentcontentsinmovies 四段式如何整體布局 第一種 IntroductionBP1 FSF正面論述 BP2 反駁式反駁反面 Conclusion 四段式如何整體布局 第一種 舉個(gè)例子 Peoplehavedifferentattitudestowardschanges Althoughsomeindividualsprefertodoonejobintheirlives Itendtobelievethatitwouldbebetterifweareusedtochanges Tobeginwith changescaninfacthavebeneficialoutcomes Firstly theexperienceofengagingindifferentoccupationswouldbeanadvantageforcareers Thisisbecauseemployersusuallyvaluethosewithawiderangeofworkingskills Secondly adaptingtoanewworkingenvironmentalsomeansmeetingnewcolleaguesandfriends andthisislikelytoenlargeone ssocialcircle Therefore Ithinkpeople especiallyyoungsters canbenefitfromchangesbygainingvariouslivingandworkingexperience Ontheotherhand thosewhoavoidchangesintheirlivesalsohaveunderstandablereasons Oneconcernmightbethatpeoplewouldhavetolearnnewprofessionalskillstoadapttothenewposition whichseemstobecounterproductive Additionally someindividualsdonotwanttochangejobssimplybecausetheyaresatisfiedwiththecurrentones However asfarasIamconcerned weshouldlearnhowtoadapttochangesanywaybecausethewholeworldischangingrapidlyitself Asaresult lessandlessoccupationscanberegardedaslife longtoday Forexample manypostmenmightlosetheirjobs eveniftheyhavebeendoingitwell becauseoftheubiquityofEmails Inconclusion peopleshouldgetusedtochanges Thisisnotonlybecausechangescanoftenbepositive buttheyaresometimesinevitable 自己寫(xiě)的 估計(jì)7分 四段式如何整體布局 第二種 IntroductionBP1 FSF正面論述 BP2 FSF論述反方觀點(diǎn) Conclusion正論和反論的順序可變 四段式如何整體布局 第二種 舉個(gè)例子 Somepeoplethinkthatinthemodernworldwearemoredependentoneachother whileothersthinkthatpeoplehavebecomemoreindependent Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherwearemoreorlessdependentonothersnowadays Inmyview modernlifeforcesustobemoreindependentthanpeoplewereinthepast Therearetwomainreasonswhyitcouldbearguedthatwearemoredependentoneachothernow Firstly lifeismorecomplexanddifficult especiallybecausethecostoflivinghasincreasedsodramatically Forexample youngadultstendtorelyontheirparentsforhelpwhenbuyingahouse Propertypricesarehigherthanever andwithouthelpitwouldbeimpossibleformanypeopletopayadepositandamortgage Secondly peopleseemtobemoreambitiousnowadays andtheywantabetterqualityoflifefortheirfamilies Thismeansthatbothparentsusuallyneedtoworkfull time andtheydependonsupportfromgrandparentsandbabysittersforchildcare However Iwouldagreewiththosewhobelievethatpeoplearemoreindependentthesedays Inmostcountries familiesarebecomingsmallerandmoredispersed whichmeansthatpeoplecannotcountonrelativesasmuchastheyusedto Wealsohavemorefreedomtotravelandlivefarawayfromourhometowns Forexample manystudentschoosetostudyabroadinsteadofgoingtotheirlocaluniversity andthisexperiencemakesthemmoreindependentastheylearntolivealone Anotherfactorinthisgrowingindependenceistechnology whichallowsustoworkaloneandfromanypartoftheworld Inconclusion whiletherearesomereasonstobelievethatpeoplenowdependoneachothermore myownviewisthatwearemoreindependentthanever 四段式如何整體布局 第三種 IntroductionBP1 從一個(gè)角度用FSF正面論述 BP2 從另一個(gè)角度FSF正面論述 Conclusion 四段式如何整體布局 第三種 舉個(gè)例子 band9tourismItissometimesarguedthattouristsfromoverseasshouldbechargedmorethanlocalresidentstovisitimportantsitesandmonuments Icompletelydisagreewiththisidea Theargumentinfavourofhigherpricesforforeigntouristswouldbethatculturalandhistoricalattractionsoftendependonstatesubsidiestokeepthemgoing whichmeansthatresidentpopulationalreadypaysforthesesitesthroughthetaxsystem However Ibelievethistobeaveryshortsightedview Foreigntouristscontributetotheeconomyofthehostcountrywiththemoneytheyspendonawiderangeofgoodsandservices includingfood souvenirs accommodationandtravel Thegovernmentsandresidentsofeverycountryshouldbehappytosubsidiseimportanttouri