山西省霍州市高考英語書面表達訓練及參考范文（9）.doc

山西省霍州市2014高考英語書面表達訓練（9）及參考范文【四川省綿陽市2014高考英語一模試題】書面表達 (滿分25分)假設(shè)你是李華，今年夏天即將進入倫敦大學學習，但是不知怎樣適應(yīng)國外大學的生活。所以寫信給你的英國筆友john，結(jié)合下列其他大學新生經(jīng)常遇到的情況，尋求建議。1. 感到孤獨、經(jīng)常想家；2. 文化、食物、氣候不適應(yīng)；3. 在生活中不會照料自己；4. 難以找到滿意的房東；5. 教師全英授課難以理解。注意：1. 短信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 2.詞數(shù)100左右。dear john,this summer i will go to study at london university, but i dont know how to adapt myself to the new life._li hua【參考范文】書面表達：（25分）one possible version: dear john,this summer i will go to study at london university, but i dont know how to adapt myself to the new life.i hear that many freshmen are at a loss what to do when they are in a foreign country. feeling lonely and homesick, they find it much harder to get used to the new culture, diet and climate. most of them cant take good care of themselves in their everyday life. besides, it is difficult to find a satisfying host and fully understand what the teachers teach in class since they speak english all the time.could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that i will be able to suit the university life in the future?yours,li hua【四川省綿陽市2014高考英語一模試題】書面表達（滿分25分）假如你是一名高三學生，經(jīng)常為看電視的事跟媽媽鬧意見，今天你跟媽媽達成一致。請根據(jù)以下表格的內(nèi)容，以 an argument 為題為英語廣場寫一篇120字左右的英語短文。母親 高三學生學習任務(wù)重， 看電視浪費時間; 兒子自制力差，看電視會影響視力; 兒子學習一天很疲勞，看電視可以放松一下;看電視也可以增長知識，了解國際國內(nèi)大事，緊跟時代;星期中不準我看電視，但在周末允許我看新聞、文藝、體育或科普類節(jié)目注意： 1.短文的開頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù);2.參考表格中的內(nèi)容，但不要逐字翻譯;3.可以適當增添合乎情理的過渡性語言。i am a senior 3 student. i often quarrel with my mother over 【書面表達參考范文】i am a senior 3 student. i often quarrel with my mother over whether i can watch tv after school. my mother holds the view that students in senior 3, heavily burdened with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch tv. it seems to her that once i am allowed to do that i will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. she also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch tv too often. but i really cant accept her ideas. i think it is relaxing to watch tv after a days hard work. not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. now we have at last reached an agreement that i can only watch tv at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.【湖南省懷化市2014高考英語3月一模試題】section c (25 marks) directions: write an english composition according to the instructions given below in chinese. 假設(shè)你的筆友tony因上期高三期末數(shù)學考試未及格而倍受打擊，情緒低落。請你 (王華)寫一封信給他，鼓勵他重拾自信，實現(xiàn)夢想。注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于120個；2、不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱?！緟⒖挤段摹縟ear tom,im sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam, but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.as senior three students, we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced failure as well as success. there is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks. we should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes. only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study. as for your anxiety, i think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our learning energetically and efficiently.i hope all above can help you a lot. lets work hard together and turn our dream into reality. yours， wang hua【2014高考英語安徽省六校聯(lián)考】書面表達 (滿分25分)手機和我們的生活越來越密切，讓我們的聯(lián)系變得更加方便，可有人認為手機并不利于真正的交流。校報英文版正在開展征文活動，發(fā)起對這一話題的討論，你認為手機對人與人之間溝通的影響是利大于弊還是弊大于利？請你以“mobile phones, good or bad for communication?”為題寫篇短文向校報投稿，表達你的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右； 2. 短文題目已擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 2. 文中不可出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息?；春觾砂?mobile phones, good or bad for communication?_ _【參考范文】one possible version mobile phones, good or bad for communication?the technology of mobile phones has made many things easier for people. someone can reach us or we can call someone wherever we are. however, people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication.due to the convenience of mobile phones, many people have started to engage in social interaction in person less than before. in addition, mobile phone communication lacks facial expressions and body language, without which communication becomes less personal. consequently, some people get confused and nervous while talking to a person face to face because they mostly talk to people on mobile phones. they even do not know the manners of communication. as far as i am concerned, we should use mobile phones in a wise way and try to avoid depending too much on them.【2014四川省資陽市第一次診斷性考試】書面表達（滿分35分）假設(shè)你是李華，你的父母總是喜歡替你包辦一切，你覺得很苦惱。請你根據(jù)以下提示給某英語報社編輯寫一封信。1. 簡述現(xiàn)象（兩種）；2. 分析弊端（兩個方面）；3. 你的觀點或建議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：獨立性independencedear editor,id like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. my parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. _yours sincerely,li hua【評分原則】1. 本題總分為35分，按5個檔次給分。2. 評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3. 詞數(shù)少于100的，從總分中減去2分。4. 評分時，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。6. 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次?！菊Z言錯誤的界定】1. 考生必須以完整的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)表達出要點，如有嚴重錯誤視為半個要點。2. 考生如果以主從句表達要點，主句主謂結(jié)構(gòu)正確，從句主謂結(jié)構(gòu)有嚴重錯誤，視為全點。3. 大小寫和標點錯誤，酌情扣1-2分。4. 重復(fù)語言錯誤只扣1分。5. 書寫、卷面較差，影響判卷，扣1-2分。6. 詞數(shù)少于100詞扣2分；7. 下列情況不給分：所寫內(nèi)容與試題要點無關(guān)；錯誤已經(jīng)影響意義的表達；只寫出零星的相關(guān)詞匯而無主謂結(jié)構(gòu)?！緝?nèi)容要點】1. 兩種現(xiàn)象；2. 兩個弊端；3. 你的觀點或建議。【各檔次給分范圍和要求】第五檔（2935分）完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第四檔（2228分）完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準確，些許錯誤主要是因為嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。應(yīng)用簡單的語句間連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔（1521分）基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。應(yīng)用簡單的語句間連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。整體而言，基本達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第二檔（814分）未恰當完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容。語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限。有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。較少使用語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。第一檔（17分）未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限。較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。缺乏語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。信息未能傳達給讀者。0分未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無法評判；寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。五、說明1. 內(nèi)容要點可用不同方式表達。2. 對緊扣主題的適當發(fā)揮不予扣分?！緟⒖挤段摹縪ne possible version:dear editor,id like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. my parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. they choose the school and s