求職信的細(xì)節(jié)處怎樣寫.doc

求職信的細(xì)節(jié)處怎樣寫 寫求職信的目的在于獲得職位，一封求職信無論如何文辭并茂，令人心動(dòng)，公司HR主管不見到應(yīng)聘者本人是不會(huì)給予工作機(jī)會(huì)的。因此，求職信的實(shí)際目的在于獲得面談的機(jī)會(huì)。許多人都會(huì)copy網(wǎng)上的求職信范本，導(dǎo)致千篇一律，這是非常不可取的。我們來談?wù)勄舐毿艑懽髦腥菀妆缓雎缘募?xì)節(jié)問題。 一、求職信的第一段說明寫信的目的，有些專家認(rèn)為不宜用分詞句子，比如用下面的句子做開頭，因?yàn)檫@樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得陳腐，失去特點(diǎn)。更多信息請(qǐng)?jiān)L問：s:/.24en./ Replyingtoyouradvertisement. Answeringyouradvertisement. Believingthatthereisanopportunity. Thinkingthatthereisavacancyinyourpany. Havingreadyourad. 再比較下面三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差，經(jīng)過修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當(dāng)。 A: (1)ReplyingtoyourrecentadvertisementintheBostonEveningGlobe,Iwishtoapplyforthepositionofsalesmanager. (2)Iamapplyingforthepositionofsalesmanager.Ibelievemyqualificationswillmeetyourexactingrequirements. B: (1)IbelieveafterreadingyouradvertisementinthismorningsJournalthatyouareofferingjusttheopportunityIamlookingfor. (2)YouradvertisementinthismorningsJournalforanadjustmentmanagerpromptedmetoapplyforthisposition. C: (1)HavingreadyouradvertisementintheNewYorkTimesforanaccountant,Ithoughtyoumightbeinterestedinmyapplication. (2)Inyouradvertisementforanaccountant,youindicatedthatyourequiretheservicesofapetentperson,withthoroughtraininginthefieldofcostaccounting.Pleaseconsidermeanapplicantfortheposition.HerearemyreasonsforbelievingIamqualifiedforthiswork. 二、在提到希望得到的待遇時(shí)，可用類似的句子： Idprefernottosetasalary,butsinceyouask,Iconsider6,500amonthtobesatisfactory. Itshardformetosaywhatmysalaryshouldbesetat,butifpressedIwouldhavetoaskforamonthasaninitialsalary. IdontfeelthatIshouldsetmyownsalary,asIamhappyenoughtohavetheprivilegeofworkingforyou.However,Iwouldconsideramonthsatisfactorypensationformyapprenticeship. 三、提起或要求待遇時(shí)不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用： Asforsalary,Idonotknowwhattosay.Would$4,500amonthbetoomuch? DoyouthinkIwouldbeaskingtoomuchifIsaid5,000dollarsamonth? YouknowwhatmyservicesareworthbetterthanIdo.AllIwantisalivingwage. 四、關(guān)于求職信的結(jié)尾用語，下面也有三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差，經(jīng)過修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當(dāng)。 A: (1)軟弱、羞怯的：IfyouthinkIcanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,Ishallbegladtotalkwithyou. (2)改寫后(較佳)：Ifmyqualificationsmeetyourstandards,Iwouldbehappytospeakwithyouinperson. B: (1)懷疑，不妥、不安全的：Ifyouareinterested,pleaseletmeknowimmediately,asImsureaninterviewwillconvinceyouImthemanforthejob. (2)改寫后：Iwouldliketorequestaninterview.YoucanreachmebytelephoneatBeijing123456betweenthehoursof7-9a.m.and5:30-9:30p.m.anyevening. C: (1)哀求式的句子，不夠完整(漏掉面談時(shí)間)：Iwouldappreciatetheopportunityforaninterview.IcanbereachedbycallingBeijing12345678. (2)改寫后：MayIhavetheopportu