2015四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作及翻譯講義(1).pdf

鼎輝教育2015 四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作及翻譯 1 一 好作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)好作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 什么樣的文章才算是好 精彩 1 正確性正確性 語(yǔ)法 選詞 主題 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 2 檔次檔次 詞匯檔次 句式檔次 3 邏輯關(guān)系邏輯關(guān)系 句與句的關(guān)系 并列 對(duì)比 轉(zhuǎn)折 因果 讓步等等關(guān)系 二 舉例說(shuō)明二 舉例說(shuō)明 三 語(yǔ)言要求三 語(yǔ)言要求 3 major rules3 major rules 1 以正確為前提 2 邏輯思想表達(dá)清晰 3 選詞 句式結(jié)構(gòu)的變化 四 作文類(lèi)型四 作文類(lèi)型 提綱式提綱式議論文 圖畫(huà)類(lèi)圖畫(huà)類(lèi)論說(shuō)文 條件式條件式敘說(shuō)文 議論文 2014 年 6 月 五 速成五 速成 作文常用的替換詞匯 短語(yǔ) 阻礙寫(xiě)作高大上的低劣詞 too low 雷區(qū) 1 好 2 很 非常 3 多 許多 很多 4 重要的 必要的 5 沒(méi)能 不能 沒(méi)能做到 完成某個(gè)動(dòng)作 6 越來(lái)越 de n 鼎輝教育2015 四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作及翻譯 2 7 越來(lái)越 de adj 8 當(dāng)前 現(xiàn)在 目前 9 應(yīng)該 10 事情 東西 問(wèn)題 11 對(duì) 有好處 有助于 12 最 13 盡力做 14 重視 側(cè)重 強(qiáng)調(diào) 受到關(guān)注 重視 15 隨著 16 不一定 六 常用的句型和句式六 常用的句型和句式 句型 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)句型 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) 1 狀語(yǔ)從句 原因 條件 結(jié)果 目的 讓步 2 主語(yǔ)從句 3 定語(yǔ)從句 4 賓語(yǔ)從句 5 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 6 倒裝句 7 特殊的句子結(jié)構(gòu) 原因狀語(yǔ)從句原因狀語(yǔ)從句 主句 forfor 從句 主句 in thatin that 從句 條件狀語(yǔ)從句條件狀語(yǔ)從句 關(guān)聯(lián)詞的變化使用 結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句 主句 so that 從句 讓步狀語(yǔ)從句讓步狀語(yǔ)從句 關(guān)聯(lián)詞 no matter 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)結(jié)構(gòu) No matter how adj 主語(yǔ) be 鼎輝教育2015 四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作及翻譯 3 目的狀語(yǔ)從句目的狀語(yǔ)從句 In order that句子 定語(yǔ)從句 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)結(jié)構(gòu)模式 先行詞 關(guān)系詞 which 定從 定從的基本概念 定從的基本概念 San Antonio Spurs won the championship of NBA this year I like San Antonio Spurs very much 合并如下 I like San Antonio Spurs very much which won the championship of NBA this year 定語(yǔ)從句寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng) 主語(yǔ)從句 主語(yǔ)從句 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 倒裝句 真題作文講解評(píng)析 2013 年 6 2014 年 6 翻譯要點(diǎn) 翻譯要點(diǎn) 注意事項(xiàng) 1 關(guān)鍵詞的選定 詞 詞組 2 簡(jiǎn)化 拆分 組合 3 句與句的銜接 關(guān)聯(lián)詞 過(guò)渡詞 4 整段時(shí)態(tài) 語(yǔ)態(tài)保持一致 鼎輝教育2015 四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作及翻譯 4 2013 年年 6 月 范文 月 范文 As is vividly shown in the picture a boy is expressing his worries about disposing of nuclear waste while his father is trying to convince him that if he can empty the dustbin he can achieve anything Such talks occur frequently in our daily life From my perspective this picture highlights the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big It s true that everyone has a goal to fight for But sometimes we just focus on the final success and attach no importance to the detailed stuff which may lead to failure at the end On the other hand awareness of doing big things is one thing while working hard to achieve it steep by step is another Moreover it s doing small things that can cultivate our perseverance and patience Therefore I suggest from now on we place more weight on small things around us and cope with them devotedly Only by accomplishing small things one by one can we reach our goal easier 2014 年年 6 月月 Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown what is the most interesting place you would like to take him her to see and why 2014 年年 6 月 圖片 范文 月 圖片 范文 1 Zhongshan Tomb is absolutely the most interesting place to visit in Nanjing my hometown It s a symbol of the history of China as well as a beautiful nature park Zhongshan Tomb is where Sun Zhongshan the great instructor and leader fo revolution in the 20thcentury in China was buried In honor of his splendid contribution the KMT government built this grand tomb for him Today this tomb represents a period of Chinese history and peace In 2006 when KMT president Lian Zhan visited the mainland Zhongshan Tomb was his first destination Aside from its historical significance Zhongshan Tomb is also and outstanding place to enjoy the nature It is built on Mount Zijin the highest mountain is Nanjing It would be very enjoyable to climb to the top of it and have a overlook of the whole city Besides there is an endangered species of butterfly in Mount Zijin If we are lucky enough hopefully we could see some of them Zhongshan Tomb is a perfect combination of humanity and nature Nowhere is better at introducing China to foreign friends than it in Nanjing I m sure they will love it 范文范文 2 Suppose a foreign friend of mine is coming to visit my hometown I would show his around the whole city But the most interesting place for my part lies in Ciqikou an ancient cultural town representing Bayu s culture and enjoying a most attractive scenery Situated at the western part of Chongqing Ciqikou is a scenic spot scented with a cultural 鼎輝教育2015 四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作及翻譯 5 atmosphere which travelers take fancy to There you just walk on the old street and you can view the panorama of the culture customs passing down from generation to generation Performers playing the traditional instruments diverse shops with appetizing snacks flanking along the streets among others are all attractive to travelers Also you can ride a bicycle if weather permits to enjoy the beautiful scenery Trees aquiver with bright sunlight breeze you ll like them 范文范文 3 Known as the Oriental Pearl Shanghai has not only the prosperous economy but also the unique culture of its own If a foreign friend of mine would visit my hometown Shanghai I strongly recommend him to visit Yu Garden Yu Garden best exhibits the traditional culture of Shanghai Located I downtown and surrounded by skyscrapers Yu Garden consists of traditional architectures of Shanghai most of which are two floor houses I will take him around the market in Yu Garden to watch the amazing skills of traditional craftsmen and recommend him to buy some handcrafts with Chinese painting or calligraphy As for the meal he can try Steamed bun a specialty of Shanghai Undoubtedly he will be fascinated by the delicious taste As a Shanghainese I take pride in introducing the culture of my hometown to foreign friends I firmly believe that Shanghai will stand and shine when facing the challenges of western cultures I hope the visit to Yu Garden will give my friend some new insight into the culture of Shanghai 2014 年年 6 月翻譯月翻譯 中國(guó)進(jìn)一步發(fā)展核能 因?yàn)楹穗娔壳爸徽计淇偘l(fā)電量的 2 該比例在所有核國(guó)家中居第 30 位 幾乎是最低的 China should further develop nuclear power for it currently accounts for only 2 of the nation s total power generating capacity which ranks 30th almost the lowest among all nucle