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書面表達(dá),高考大綱中常用的連接詞 1. 表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 另外，還有（肯定）：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition （否定）Whats worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse 2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.,3. 表示因果關(guān)系 因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or else,5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 當(dāng) 的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recently 自從 :since 從那時(shí)起: from then on,6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end 7. 換一種方法表述 換句話說: in other words; that is to say;,8. 進(jìn)行舉例說明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as 9. 用于陳述事實(shí) 實(shí)際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實(shí)話 : to tell you the truth,10. 對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié) 總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word,假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter打算來中國(guó)深造，來信向你咨詢做好哪些準(zhǔn)備。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫封回信。 要點(diǎn)：1參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； 2看中文書刊、電視； 3了解中國(guó)的風(fēng)俗、飲食等習(xí)慣； 4.交中國(guó)朋友。 注意：1)詞數(shù)100左右； 2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3)開頭語已為你寫好。(08全國(guó)）,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to be well -prepared for further education in China Best wishes， LiHua,步驟1 列要點(diǎn)(全)。全是指全面，寫書面表達(dá)時(shí)不能丟要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)不全定失分。要點(diǎn)以詞組或短語的形式表達(dá)出來，它要成為句子的骨架、核心。這篇書面表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)列為： take a Chinese course watch TV and read magazines，books，newspapers in Chinese learn some customs and eating habits in China make Chinese friends,步驟2 擴(kuò)成句(精)。精即精確、精練。 現(xiàn)在人們有這樣一個(gè)共識(shí)：一篇100字左右的英語作文，如果每句10詞左右，10句即可滿足字?jǐn)?shù)上的要求，所以同學(xué)們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)請(qǐng)謹(jǐn)記：不要在你覺得有話可說的那個(gè)要點(diǎn)上洋洋灑灑寫個(gè)停，而忽略其他不易于表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。當(dāng)你把短語擴(kuò)成句子時(shí)，要精練。這一步也最能體現(xiàn)一個(gè)人的寫作水平，要注意一下幾點(diǎn)： 一是避免漢式英語， 二是要避免用詞、句式的重復(fù)， 三是要盡量使用高級(jí)詞和復(fù)雜句式來表達(dá)，如非謂語動(dòng)詞、定語從句、名詞性從句、狀語從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)、倒裝等。,It is important to take a Chinese course because you can learn Chinese from your teachers and classmates It is also helpful to watch TV and read magazines，books，newspapers in Chinese whenever you have time and wherever you may be Learning some customs and eating habits in China is useful as wellAs the saying goes，do in Rome as the Romans do Youd better make Chinese friends，which may improve your spoken Chinese,步驟3 連成文(順)。順顧名思義就是通順、順暢。這一步要注意以下三個(gè)方面： 首先，要條理清楚地把上面的句子串聯(lián)起來，可采用層次分明的firstly，secondly，lastly形式，也可以使用first，then，besides，last形式明確每個(gè)要點(diǎn)，這樣判卷老師看了會(huì)一目了然。,第二，這種提綱式作文多有一兩句英文 開頭語，同學(xué)們還需要把所給的文字和自己所寫的內(nèi)容有機(jī)的結(jié)合起來，其實(shí)這也是一個(gè)暗含的要點(diǎn)，許多同學(xué)在寫作文時(shí)卻忽略了這一點(diǎn)。根據(jù)上面的提示，你需要寫一封提建議的回信，這個(gè)承上啟下的過渡句可以； 這樣寫：Here are some suggestions；Next let me offer you some advice,第三，這是一封書信體作文，最后還有收尾的套話，你可以把它寫成緊扣主題的收尾； Im looking forward to receiving your letter in Chinese這一句實(shí)際上成了最后的一條建議，讓Peter在寫信的實(shí)踐中練習(xí)中文。,步驟4 檢查謄寫(整)。整這里指書寫 工整，卷面整潔。把擴(kuò)成句的要點(diǎn)連成文后， 還要認(rèn)真檢查是否有拼寫錯(cuò)誤、語法上的毛病等，然后工工整整的謄寫在試卷上，還要注意保持卷面的整潔。,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to be wellprepared for further education in ChinaHere are some suggestions Firstly，it is important to take a Chinese course because you can learn Chinese from Your teachers and classmatesSecondly，it is also helpful to watch TV and read magazines， books，newspapers in Chinese whenever you have time and wherever you may beThirdly，learning some customs and eating habits in China is useful as wellAs the saying goes，do in Rome as the Romans doLast but not least，youd better make Chinese friends， which may improve your spoken English by communicating with themin Chinese,Im looking forward tO receiving your letter in Chinese Best wishes， LiHua,范文點(diǎn)評(píng) 1第一、二點(diǎn)用了it做形式主語，不定 式做真正的主語結(jié)構(gòu)，同時(shí)還用了because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句和whenever wherever 引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句。 2第三點(diǎn)用了動(dòng)名詞做主語，同時(shí)還用 了as引導(dǎo)的定語從句和一個(gè)諺語。 3第四點(diǎn)last but not least用得很別致， 同時(shí)還用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。 4句子Here are some suggestions和 Im looking forward to receiving your letter in Chinese不但起到了承上啟下和收尾的結(jié) 構(gòu)作用，還可以作為建議的內(nèi)容，可謂一箭 雙雕，一舉兩得。,范文二,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. First ,it is important to take a Chinese course ,as you ll be able to learn from the teacher and practise with your fellow students .Then ,it also helps to watch TV and read books ,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.,Besides ,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, by doing so youll learn and rememb