近四年六級(jí)作文試題匯總.ppt

Part Writing (30 minutes),注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.,What?,1.題型分類(lèi) 2.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),作文類(lèi)型(07-10),1.正反對(duì)比型 4 2.解釋說(shuō)明性 2 3.問(wèn)題解決型 2,1.正反對(duì)比型（真題匯總4）,2010.12 My view on University Ranking 1.目前學(xué)校排名非常盛行 2.對(duì)于這種做法人們看法不一 3.在我看來(lái)。,2009年12月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文真題 現(xiàn)在有不少家長(zhǎng)送孩子參加各種藝術(shù)班; 1、對(duì)這種做法有人表示支持， 2、有人并不贊成; 3、我認(rèn)為 Should parents send their kids to art classes?,2009年6月 On the Importance of a Name 有人說(shuō)名字（或名稱(chēng)）很重要 也有人覺(jué)得名字（或名稱(chēng)）無(wú)關(guān)緊要 我認(rèn)為。,2007年6月 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? 有人作了好事期望得到回報(bào) 有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該像雷鋒那樣做好事不圖回報(bào) 我的觀點(diǎn),2.解釋說(shuō)明性（真題匯總2）,2008年6月 Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展， 電子圖書(shū)越來(lái)越多 有人認(rèn)為電子圖書(shū)會(huì)取代傳統(tǒng)圖書(shū)，理由是。 我的看法,2007年12月 The Digital Age 如今數(shù)字化的產(chǎn)品得到越來(lái)越廣泛的使用，例如： 數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品的使用對(duì)人們工作，學(xué)習(xí)，生活產(chǎn)生的影響,3.問(wèn)題解決型（真題匯總2）,2010.6 Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese 1 近年來(lái)在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象; 2 出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因和后果; 3 針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象我認(rèn)為,2008年12月 How to improve Students Mental Health? 大學(xué)生的心理健康十分重要 為此，學(xué)校應(yīng)該 我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng),大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)測(cè)試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),2分：條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 5分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 8分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想比較清楚，文章尚連貫，但語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有少量的嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。,大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)測(cè)試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),11分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 14分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 字?jǐn)?shù)不夠扣分。（各段已給出的主題句均不得計(jì)入） 段落不夠扣分。,評(píng)分的四個(gè)觀測(cè)點(diǎn),1.切題 2.表達(dá)思想 3.連貫性 4.語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,1.等分四要素 2.時(shí)間分配 3.模板 4.模板句,How1: 得高分四要素,a) 書(shū)寫(xiě)卷面工整。（作文沒(méi)有草稿紙，也沒(méi)有打 草稿時(shí)間，要訓(xùn)練一次寫(xiě)成功。） b) 要用模板句，使全文有邏輯性 不要全部套范文 c) 單詞句子要有亮點(diǎn)，比如：I think可以寫(xiě)成：in my eyes; I firmly think; personally, I think. 多用副詞：dramatically, increasingly, d) 無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。如：Some people are begin; There are some people want ; Why happen these things? (Why+ 助動(dòng)詞+主語(yǔ))等，考試會(huì)得低分。,How 2:寫(xiě)作應(yīng)試技巧,5 minutes 一、審題 ，明確文體 二、主題句，放在文章開(kāi)頭，突出重點(diǎn)，也確保作文不偏題。把題目中的中文提綱譯成英語(yǔ)，再加以修飾拓展，即主題句。 三、outline，結(jié)構(gòu)、條理清晰,How 2:寫(xiě)作應(yīng)試技巧,合理安排時(shí)間 5 分鐘先審題，理清寫(xiě)作思路，寫(xiě)下重點(diǎn)句子，打好文章的大概框架。 20 分鐘左右寫(xiě)文章。 2-5分鐘檢查文章。（1）大小寫(xiě)及單詞的拼寫(xiě)；（2）搭配正確用詞貼切；（3）語(yǔ)法正確，特別是人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、和單復(fù)數(shù)的三“一致”；（4）段落間及句子間銜接自然流暢，邏輯性強(qiáng)。,3.應(yīng)用的模板： The Typical &Classical Western Essay Pattern I,1.an event + intermediate sentences+ topic 2. supporting point 1 supporting point 2 supporting point 1 3.Summary,Sample (PA of U1:Unsung Dad),Even more insulting is the recent media trend of regarding at-home wives as “status symbols” like an expensive car flaunted by the supposedly few men who can afford such a luxury. (An event) The implication is that men with at-home wives have it easier than those whose wives work outside the home because they have the “l(fā)uxury” of a full-time housekeeper. (intermediate sentences) In reality, however, the men who are the sole wage earners for their families suffer a lot of stresses.(topic) The loss of a job or even the threat of that happening is obviously much more difficult when that job is the sole source of income for a family. (SP1) By the same token, sole wage earners have less flexibility when it comes to leaving unsatisfying careers because of the loss of income such a job change entails.(SP2) In addition, many husbands work overtime or second jobs to make more needed money for their families.(SP3) For these men, it is the family that the job supports that makes it all worthwhile. It is the belief that having a mother at home is important to the children, which makes so many men gladly take on the burden of being a sole wage earner. (Summary),應(yīng)用的模板： The Typical &Classical Western Essay Pattern II,Part I. an event-intermediate sentences-topic (controversy, argument, flamewar, spat) Part II. Views from some people Views from other people Part III The authors opinion 在第四冊(cè)書(shū)中的應(yīng)用： P B of Unit 4: Japenglish; PA of Unit 5: Moral advantages,應(yīng)用的模板： The Typical &Classical Western Essay Pattern III,Part I. an event-intermediate sentences-topic (to Come up with the problems) Part II. To analyze the problems Part III To give possible solutions 在第四冊(cè)書(shū)中的應(yīng)用： PB of Unit 5: Volvos dealing,怎樣些首段?,描述event的句子,1.Many students have been faced with the psychological problem because of growth pain or severe social competition. 2.Recently, the issue of students mental health has aroused great concern among parents, teachers and experts. 3.Nowadays,there is a growing concern over 4. Never in history has the idea of ranking universities been so popular/the phenomena of sending kids to art classes been so popular. 5.According to a recent survey, 60% students are bothered by/ students Chinese literacy is getting worse and worse . 6.The English proverb says,.This is quite true because 7.A common way of thinking about usually goes something like that:,過(guò)渡的句子,分析現(xiàn)象：It means/indicates The implication is 解釋現(xiàn)象后的原因： The underlying reason behindare is preferable in many ways, and perhaps the most basic reason is that 遞進(jìn)The more I though about it, the more worried I felt/ the more serious the problem is 轉(zhuǎn)折： Despite the fact that majority hold the opinion thatI doubt that Some people argue as if it is a general true that;but to be frank, I cannot agree with them for following reasons. Although the people arrive at/reach/achieve the common understanding of, their views/idea/ about its influence/future/impact are at opposite poles.,轉(zhuǎn)折： Despite the fact that majority hold the opinion that e-books will replace traditional book but I doubt it. Some people argue as if it is a general truth that;but to be frank, I cannot agree with them for the following reasons. Although the people arrive at/reach/achieve the common understanding of, their views/idea/ about its influence/future/impact are at opposite poles.,提出topic,1.It leads to the controversy/spat/flamewar among 2. In fact, as a matter of fact 3. However,怎樣寫(xiě)body?,描述優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)或不同觀點(diǎn)的句子,Advantages or opinions from one group of people: 1) Since its appearance, people have benefited a lot from it. 2) is/are playing an increasingly significant role / part in our lives / society. 3)Some people are in favor of/claims that/put firm faith on /give credit to Disadvantages or opinions from other people It has brought much harm to humans. Like anthing else, it has its faults. 3) Compared to/with the above opinions, other people take opposing views of 4) Some people take the opposing view that 5) Yet, other people stand in opposition to the above people. 6)However, other people stand on a different ground.,分析原因的句子,The reasons/causes/factor for are complex/varied/ profound. mainly/largely stems/derives/ results form the factors as follows. 3.The underlying reason behindare 4. Too much stress placed onmay lead to 5. Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that 6. A number of factors are accountable for this situation. 7. The factors that contribute to this situation include 8.One of the basic/primary factor is that,句式聯(lián)系法,Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly, For one thing,For another,Finally, In the first place,In the second place,Finally, On one hand,On the other hand, First of all,In addition,Consequently, To begin with, whats more, last but not the least,怎樣寫(xiě)尾段?,說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn),批駁別人的觀點(diǎn),1.controvery to what is widely accepted, I maintain that 2. It is true that, but one vital points is being left out. 3. The main problems with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that 4.The above points is certainly true if considered. 5.there is a further more subtle point we must consider. 6.Another reason why I disagree the above statement is that I believe that ,解決問(wèn)題,1.It is necessary that steps should be taken to 2It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop 3.There is no easy method, but might be some help. 4.To solve the above mentioned problems, we must 5.Only in this way/only when/only through, can/will we 6.As long as ,we will be able to /the problem is bound to 7.With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly. 8.In summary，if we continue to ignore the abovementioned issue， more problems will crop up突然、意外地發(fā)生.,全文總結(jié),1.From what has been discussed above，we can draw the conclusion that 2. Therefore it is safely to draw the conclusion that 3. All reliable evidence point to one saying , that is 4.With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.,End!,九句話模板,1. 引導(dǎo)句（套入標(biāo)題）,2. 主題句,3. 展開(kāi)句（簡(jiǎn)單描述）,4. 主題句（提出論點(diǎn)）,5.6.7.,論據(jù)1論據(jù)2論據(jù)3,8. 總結(jié)句（概括全文）,9. 結(jié)束句（重復(fù)主題,第一段,第二段,第三段,Class work,套用九句話模板,Stop Smoking,（1）吸煙的問(wèn)題越來(lái)越受到人們的關(guān)注 （2）吸煙的害處 （3）你的想法,Model,(1) There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking. (2) Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question. (3) They have realized that smoking does great harm to health.,Model,(4) The harm of smoking can be seen from the following. (5) First, it can cause cancer. (6) Second, it pollutes the environment. (7) Third, it causes great waste of money.,Model,(8) In short, smoking does great harm to health. (9) Effective measures should be taken to stop smoking.,Model ( developed one ),(1) There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking. (2) Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question, and some even write to the government calling for policies to stop smoking. (3) They have realized that smoking does great harm to the health of smokers and non smokers as well.,Model ( developed one ),(4) The harm of smoking can be seen from the following. (5) First, it can cause cancer. A recent survey by the WHO shows, of the diseases which cause death every year, nearly one third has to do with smoking. (6) Second, it pollutes the environment. Cigarettes ends may dirty our air and water.(7) Third, it causes great waste of money. Is it wise to spend nearly thirty yuan each day for something which will kill you eventually?,Model ( developed one),(8) In short, smoking does great harm to health. (9) It is high time that effective measures be taken to stop smoking.,正反觀點(diǎn)型作文模板 1,1. It is true that. 2. However,. 3.I think. 4. can be listed as follow. 5. First of all, 6. Secondly 7.For example 8.Thirdly, 9. A case in point is . 10.It goes without saying that 11.There is no doubt that 12.In conclusion ,模板二,1. Some people believe that. 2. The truth is deep and profound. 3. As we know,. 4. In addition,. 5. There are numerous examples 6. A case in point is 7.There is close to suggest 8.For another example 9.Moreover,. 10.All mentioned above tell us 11.But one thing we have to notice is that 12.In a word, ,現(xiàn)象解釋型寫(xiě)作模板 1,1。has become a common part of peoples life. 2. Andhas always aroused the greatest concern. 3. what impresses us most is . 4. The reasonsare varied. 5. Among the various reasons,plays an important role. 6.That is to say, 7.What is more, 8.For example, 9When talking about， 10On the one hand 11On the other hand, 12In brief,解釋說(shuō)明型模板二,1.We have witnessed 2.According to ， 3.And 4.Many reasons contribute to 5. To begin with ,. 6.More over, 7.In addition , 8.As a result , 9.As to me,， 10.First of all, 11.Besides, 12.To conclude,現(xiàn)象解釋型模板三,1. has been brought into focus. 2.Nowdays,. 3.In addition, . 4.Many reasons contribute to 5. Generally speaking ,. 6.First of all, 7.More over, 8.Therefore , 9.As far as I am concerned,， 10.As we known , 11.Furthermore, 12.In a word,問(wèn)題解決型作文模板 1,1. With the development/improvement of ,. 2. It is necessary that. 3. On the one hand, . 4. On the other hand, 5. Therefore, how to is worth paying attention. 6.Firstly7.Secondly 8.For example,9. Thirdly, . 10.In other words, 11.In fact, ways to are countless. 12.Its time that ,模板二：,1. There has been a discussion recently abouot. 2. It is obvious that. 3. Additionally, . 4. So it is high time, 5. First of all, 6.The reason is7.Secondly 8.That is to say, 9. Thirdly, . 10.In fact, more than three ways can be adopted, 11.As for me, 12.All in all, ,模板三,1. It is certain that. 2. For one reason,. 3. For another, . 4. However, some still puzzle on how to . 5. Here come some suggesti