2018高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題五短文改錯(cuò)第1講詞法錯(cuò)誤靶向訓(xùn)練.docx

專題五 短文改錯(cuò)第1講 詞法錯(cuò)誤真題演練Passage 1(2017全國(guó)卷)(導(dǎo)學(xué)號(hào) 58210041)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday，I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructors orders，so once I started the car，my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the word，“Speed up！”“Slow down！”“Turning left！”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late，the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案：In the summer holiday following my birthday，I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructors orders， once I started the car，my mind blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the ，“Speed up！”“Slow down！”“ left！”I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes ，the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文是一篇記敘文。文章講述了作者學(xué)車第一天的經(jīng)歷。71解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。表達(dá)多少歲生日用序數(shù)詞，因此eighteen應(yīng)該改為eighteenth。答案：eighteeneighteenth72解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。句意：我仍然記得第一天有多艱難。表示第幾天，序數(shù)詞前要加定冠詞the或者用限定詞進(jìn)行修飾。答案：first之前加the或my73解析：行文邏輯錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)前后句意思可知這里表示轉(zhuǎn)折概念，并非因果，所以把so改為but或yet。答案：sobut/yet74解析：句法錯(cuò)誤。文章描述過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷，上下文均使用了相應(yīng)的過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，這里應(yīng)保持一致，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以把goes改為went。答案：goeswent75解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)后面引號(hào)內(nèi)的內(nèi)容可知word應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式words。答案：wordwords76解析：句法錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)前面教練發(fā)出的兩個(gè)指令可知，這三個(gè)屬于并列結(jié)構(gòu)，都是祈使句，都以動(dòng)詞原形開頭。答案：TurningTurn77解析：句法錯(cuò)誤。這句話中含有so.that.(如此以至于)結(jié)構(gòu)，故much在此處是多余的。答案：去掉much78解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤?！耙欢螘r(shí)間later”表示多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間之后，是固定用法。答案：latelater79解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。此處stop是名詞，名詞前用形容詞修飾，所以把suddenly改為sudden。答案：suddenlysudden80解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。in the middle of.意為“在的中間”，是固定搭配。答案：onofPassage 2(2017全國(guó)卷)Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school，and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time，they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden，that is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside，they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came，they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案：Mr.and Mrs.Zhang work in our school.They live far from the school，and it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time，they are in planting vegetables in their garden， is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up and water the vegetables together.They have also bought some gardening tools.，they often get some useful from the Internet.When summer ，they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文是一篇記敘文。文章主要介紹了一對(duì)張氏夫婦的工作以及他們的業(yè)余愛好。71解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。Mr.and Mrs.Zhang是兩個(gè)人，故用both。因both在此作同位語(yǔ)，也可以去掉。all指的是三者或三者以上。答案：allboth或去掉all72解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。hour是以元音音素開頭的單詞，前面要用不定冠詞an。表示“一個(gè)小時(shí)”可以用an hour也可以用one hour。答案：aan/one73解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。interesting意為“有趣的”，多指事物；interested意為“感興趣的”，多指人。該句的主語(yǔ)是they，故用interested。be interested in意為“對(duì)感興趣”。答案：interestinginterested74解析：句法錯(cuò)誤。此處是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，應(yīng)用which而不能用that引導(dǎo)。答案：thatwhich75解析：行文邏輯錯(cuò)誤。此處敘述他們經(jīng)常早起這一事實(shí)，沒有比較的意思，故不用比較級(jí)。答案：earlierearly76解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。表示“買某物”直接用buy sth.。buy還可用于buy sb.sth.或buy sth.for sb.，表示“為某人買某物”。答案：去掉for77解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。此處表示“此外，而且”，應(yīng)用besides。beside“在旁邊”。答案：BesideBesides78解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。information是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。答案：informationsinformation79解析：句法錯(cuò)誤。when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句通常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表示將來(lái)。答案：camecomes80解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。invite sb.to do sth.“邀請(qǐng)某人做某事”。答案：pick前加toPassage 3(2016全國(guó)卷)The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot.答案：The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about to do during the holiday.We can between staying at home and a trip.If we stay at home，it is comfortable there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden view and gain we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we go to places of interest nearby.I that it is a good idea.It does not cost ，yet we can still learn a lot.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文主要討論了暑假我們應(yīng)該去做什么。1解析：句法錯(cuò)誤。do后缺賓語(yǔ)，應(yīng)將how改為what。答案：howwhat2解析：句法錯(cuò)誤。情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后接動(dòng)詞原形。chose的原形是choose。答案：chosechoose3解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。between.and.意為“在和之間”，是固定結(jié)構(gòu)。and前后連接的是并列成分。and前用了動(dòng)名詞(staying)，and后也應(yīng)用動(dòng)名詞(taking)。答案：taketaking4解析：行文邏輯錯(cuò)誤。comfortable與no need to spend money之間是并列關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。答案：butand5解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。world是獨(dú)一無(wú)二的事物，前面要加定冠詞the。答案：world前加the6解析：行文邏輯錯(cuò)誤。由前面的we go on a trip和we can broaden可知，應(yīng)把your改為our。答案：yourour7解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。knowledge意為“知識(shí)”，是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。答案：knowledgesknowledge8解析：句法錯(cuò)誤。suggest在此處表示“建議”，后接賓語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，從句要用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，即謂語(yǔ)用“should動(dòng)詞原形”，should可以省略。答案：去掉can或者canshould9解析：句法錯(cuò)誤。由前面的suggest和后面的does not cost可知，此處用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。I thought表示“原以為，本以為”。答案：thoughtthink10解析：詞法錯(cuò)誤。cost表示“花費(fèi)(時(shí)間、金錢等)”時(shí)，賓語(yǔ)是不可數(shù)名詞，故用much。答案：manymuch模擬演練Passage 1(2017廣州高三模擬)(導(dǎo)學(xué)號(hào) 58210042)Last night，I dreamt that I was digging a hole in my backyard.After which seemed like hours of digging，two objects come into view.One was mental box.In them was an old treasure map.The other object was an oil lamp covering in mud.This was my chance to get rich，I thought.I was still thinking about my new wealth while out of nowhere 20 sailor appeared.They wanted for me to lead them on the treasure hunt.I glad agreed.Suddenly，my alarm clock went off and I woke over.It was only a dream.答案：Last night，I dreamt that I was digging a hole in my backyard.After whichwhat seemed like hours of digging，two objects comecame into view.One was mental box.In themit was an old treasure map.The other object was an oil lamp coveringcovered in mud.This was my chance to get rich，I thought.I was still thinking about my new wealth whilewhen out of nowhere 20 sailorsailors appeared.They wanted me to lead them on the treasure hunt.I gladgladly agreed.Suddenly，my alarm clock went off and I woke overup.It was only a dream.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文主要講述了作者的一個(gè)荒誕離奇的夢(mèng)境。1解析：本句為名詞性從句，應(yīng)用引導(dǎo)詞what。答案：whichwhat2解析：講述的是過(guò)去的事情，所以用過(guò)去時(shí)。 答案：comecame3解析：其中一個(gè)物體是一個(gè)盒子，可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)缺冠詞。答案：mental前面加a4解析：指代box，用it。答案：themit5解析：oil lamp被覆蓋在泥土中，應(yīng)用被動(dòng)形式。答案：coveringcovered6解析：根據(jù)結(jié)構(gòu)was/were doing sth.when.“正在做某事，這時(shí)”，was/were about to do.when.“將要做某事，這時(shí)”可知將while改為when。答案：whilewhen7解析：根據(jù)20個(gè)水手可知，sailor應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。答案：sailorsailors8解析：want sb.to do為固定搭配，刪除for。答案：刪除for9解析：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，將glad改為gladly。答案：gladgladly10解析：wake up為固定搭配。答案：overupPassage 2(2017濟(jì)寧高三檢測(cè))One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love.I remember when my mom takes me to an English class in primary school，I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it.The voice at the bottom of my heart said，“Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.”It was not easy at first.For almost one and a half year，I didnt do very well in all my English exams.Disappointing and frustrated，I doubted that whether I could follow my dream.But I told me not to accept this reality.Gradual，my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.答案：One of the most important rulerules of finding happiness in life is to do what you love.I remember when my mom takestook me to an English class in primary school，I suddenly found that learnlearning English was fun and I really enjoyed it.The voice at the bottom of my heart said，“Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.”It was not easy at first.For almost one and a half yearyears，I didnt do very well in all my English exams. and frustrated，I doubted whether I could follow my dream.But I told not to accept this reality. ，my grades started to improve and I had confidence than before.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文主要討論怎樣才能生活的快樂。1解析：one of后面接名詞復(fù)數(shù)。故rule改成rules。答案：rulerules2解析：根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，這里應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故takes改成took。答案：takestook3解析：found后面是賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句用動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)。故learn改成learning。答案：learnlearning4解析：泛指“一位老師”用不定冠詞，English是元音音素開頭的單詞，用an，或者將become改成turn，因?yàn)閠urn后面接名詞不需要冠詞。故become后面加an或become改成turn。答案：become后加an或becometurn5解析：one and a half 后面接名詞復(fù)數(shù)。故year改成years。答案：yearyears6解析：這里作狀語(yǔ)說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)的狀態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是I，需用過(guò)去分詞形式。故Disappointing改成Disappointed。答案：DisappointingDisappointed7解析：doubted后面接whether引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，that是多余的。故去掉that。答案：that去掉8解析：根據(jù)句意“我告訴自己不要接受現(xiàn)實(shí)”可知將me改成myself。答案：memyself9解析：修飾整個(gè)句子用副詞。故Gradual改成Gradually。答案：GradualGradually10解析：confidence是不可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)后面的“than before”可知，這里應(yīng)用比較級(jí)，故much改成more。答案：muchmorePassage 3(2017合肥高三質(zhì)量檢測(cè))I still remember the first day when I come to this new school.Everything was new to me，what made me realize I was no longer a small child.I had to depend on me.Luckily，I made several good friend.Their interests were similar with mine.I had great English teacher，Maggie.She let me know the important of English.So I decided to learn English hardly.Although it was very difficult at first，but with the help of my teacher，I made rapidly progress.Just as the old saying goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way.”答案：I still remember the first day when I to this new school.Everything was new to me， made me realize I was no longer a small child.I had to depend on .Luckily，I made several good .Their interests were similar mine.I had great English teacher，Maggie.She let me know the of English.So I decided to learn English .Although it was very difficult at first， with the help of my teacher，I made rapidlyrapid progress.Just as the old saying goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way.”【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文主要記敘了作者上學(xué)第一天的事情。1解析：該文介紹的發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事情，故要將come改為came。答案：comecame2解析：“.made me realize I was no longer a small child”是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，要用which在從句中作主語(yǔ)，代指前面一句話Everything was new to me，故把what改為which。答案：whatwhich3解析：該句主語(yǔ)為“I”，將me改為反身代詞myself。答案：memyself4解析：friend是可數(shù)名詞，前面有several修飾，故要用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。答案：friendfriends5解析：be similar to意為“和相似”，是固定搭配。答案：withto6解析：teacher是可數(shù)名詞，該處指“我”有一個(gè)好老師Maggie，故要在had和great之間加a。答案：had后面加a7解析：the是定冠詞，后面要接名詞。the importance of English意為“英語(yǔ)的重要性”。答案：importantimportance8解析：hardly意為“幾乎不”，hard意為“努力地”。該處指“我”決定努力地學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。故要將hardly改為hard。答案：hardlyhard9解析：although和but不能連用。兩個(gè)句子只需要一個(gè)連詞。答案：去掉but10解析：progress是名詞，修飾名詞要用形容詞。make rapid progress意為“取得快速進(jìn)步”。答案：rapidlyrapid名師點(diǎn)睛名詞是短文改錯(cuò)中一個(gè)常見考點(diǎn)。圍繞名詞，可以對(duì)冠詞，形容詞等進(jìn)行考查。例如：在該文中，several good friend，had great English teacher，Maggie，the important of English，made rapidly progress，分別考查了可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞前加不定冠詞，冠詞后加名詞，形容詞修飾名詞這幾個(gè)考點(diǎn)。所以，在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)，學(xué)生要注重對(duì)名詞詞性、詞義的理解和掌握。Passage 4(2017石家莊二中高三模擬)(導(dǎo)學(xué)號(hào) 58210043)Dear teachers and students，its great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I spend a lot of time learn English because I believe English is very important nowadays.As for me，the following learning methods are very effect.First，I always prepare lessons careful before class，so it is easy that for me to keep up with the teacher in class.Second，I listen closely in class and do exercise immediately after class，which helps me gain a deep understanding of which I learned.Third，I read English novels in my spare time so that I can learn more about western cultures and enlarge my vocabulary.Instead，listening to English songs helps correct my pronunciation.The more I learn English，the easy it becomes.I wish you will enjoy learning English as well.答案：Dear teachers and students，its great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I spend a lot of time English because I believe English is very important nowadays.As for me，the following learning methods are very .First，I always prepare lessons before class，so it is easy for me to keep up with the teacher in class.Second，I listen closely in class and do immediately after class，which helps me gain a deep understanding of I learned.Third，I read English novels in my spare time so that I can learn more about western cultures and enlarge my vocabulary. ，listening to English songs helps correct my pronunciation.The more I learn English，the it becomes.I you will enjoy learning English as well.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文主要講述了作者是怎樣學(xué)英語(yǔ)的。1解析：pleasure指“一件快樂的事情”，是抽象名詞具體化，用不定冠詞修飾。故great pleasure前加a。答案：great pleasure前加a2解析：使用短語(yǔ)spend a lot of time (in) doing sth.意為“花費(fèi)很多時(shí)間做某事”。故learn English改成learning English。答案：learnlearning3解析：系動(dòng)詞are后面用形容詞。故effect改成effective。答案：effecteffective 4解析：修飾動(dòng)詞prepare用副詞。故careful改成carefully。答案：carefulcareefully5解析：使用句型It is形容詞for sb.to do sth.因此that是多余的。故去掉that。答案：that去掉6解析：exercise作為“練習(xí)”是可數(shù)名詞，這里用復(fù)數(shù)。故exercise改成exercises。答案：exerciseexercises7解析：gain a deep understanding of后面是賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句缺少賓語(yǔ)，用what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句。故第二個(gè)which改成what。答案：whichwhat8解析：根據(jù)上文的First，Second，Third，可知，這里是另外一個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)方法，用besides“此外”。故Instead改成Besides。答案：InsteadBesides9解析：根據(jù)上文“The more I learn English，”可知，使用the比較級(jí)主謂，the比較級(jí)主謂的句型。故easy改成easier。答案：easyeasier10解析：wish接從句表示“但愿就好了?！币话阒覆惶赡軐?shí)現(xiàn)的事情，從句中用虛擬語(yǔ)氣。這里應(yīng)用hope表示愿望。故wish改成hope。答案：wishhopePassage 5(2017荊門高三調(diào)研)When I was in Grade 5，I met an teacher who made me remembered her forever.Her family name is called Ding.And Miss Ding was a very kind women teacher.She often played games with us，and sometime she talked with us.He had a unique set of teaching methods.We students could get good marks without write so much homework.She was very so popular in the school that many teachers also liked to interact with her.There was always a big smile on face，and she seldom lost her temper.She was always patiently with us.There are so many teachers in my heart.Whatever，Miss Ding is the most unforgettable.答案：When I was in Grade 5，I met teacher who made me her forever.Her family name is called Ding.And Miss Ding was a very kind teacher.She often played games with us，and she talked with us. had a unique set of teaching methods.We students could get good marks without so much homework.She was so popular in the school that many teachers also liked to interact with her.There was always a big smile on face，and she seldom lost her temper.She was always with us.There are so many teachers in my heart. ，Miss Ding is the most unforgettable.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文是作者介紹自己的老師丁老師。1解析：考查冠詞。teacher首字母發(fā)的是輔音，所以只能用a。答案：an改為a2解析：考查固定搭配。make sb. do sth.“讓某人做某事”，故改為remember。答案：remembered改為remember3解析：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。此處是指我的老師，單數(shù)概念，故用woman。答案：women 改為 woman4解析：考查副詞。此處意為有時(shí)候，用sometimes。答案：sometime改為sometimes5解析：考查代詞。此處人稱用錯(cuò)，是女性，故用She。答案：He改為She6解析：考查動(dòng)名詞。此處without是介詞，后接動(dòng)名詞，故用writing。答案：write改為writing7解析：考查副詞。very和so都是修飾詞，只能用一個(gè)，而且此處是sothat句型，故去掉very。答案：刪除so之前的very8解析：考查代詞。此處是指她的臉上，故加一個(gè)her。答案：face前添加her9解析：考查副詞。此處為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，形容詞作表語(yǔ)，故改為patient。答案：patiently改為patient10解析：考查連詞。此處前后句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用However。答案：Whatever改為HoweverPassage 6(2017九江十校高三模擬)When I was in Junior Middle School，I once quarrel with my favorite teacher Mr.Yang because he criticized me strictly.Before that，I was so ashamed that I had no courage to see her again.To my surp