張美麗看圖作文-簡(jiǎn)化版.ppt

英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè) 看圖作文,Part I. 看圖作文的分類(lèi)&典型提綱,（三段論）,Part II 看圖作文的解題步驟,Part III 看圖作文的解題思路,1. Introduction,2. Body,3. Conclusion,分類(lèi)：圖畫(huà)作文可分為圖片、漫畫(huà)與照片等多種。,Part I.看圖作文圖畫(huà)作文,特點(diǎn)：圖畫(huà)作文總體上比圖表作文的結(jié)構(gòu)變化多，更為靈活，因此難度也更大。,圖畫(huà)類(lèi)作文提綱,1) describe the drawing briefly； 2) explain its intended meaning； 3) give your comments,Part II看圖作文解題步驟,1.認(rèn)真審題 （把握?qǐng)D中提示語(yǔ)，附文, 對(duì)比、類(lèi)似等細(xì)節(jié)，準(zhǔn)確把握出題者意圖） 2. 列出提綱(已給），整理基本的框架 3. 開(kāi)始落筆寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意如下幾點(diǎn)： 突出重點(diǎn) 用詞準(zhǔn)確（語(yǔ)法、詞匯、語(yǔ)氣、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等） 字?jǐn)?shù)要達(dá)標(biāo),Part III 看圖作文思路,寫(xiě)作三段論 Introduction圖畫(huà)描述段，引言段，起始段 Body主體/拓展段,意義闡釋段 Conclusion結(jié)論段，你的評(píng)價(jià)，建議措施段,2019/7/6,Writing,6,消極寓意類(lèi),積極寓意類(lèi),三至四句(50-55詞)： 1. General description：套話+總體描述 2. Details：挖掘細(xì)節(jié)詞，聯(lián)結(jié)成句 3. Caption（字幕）：文字說(shuō)明+段尾套話過(guò)渡,7,第一段：圖畫(huà)描述段的寫(xiě)法,Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on this cartoon. You should write at least 150 words but no more than180 words.,Dad：Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad.,圖畫(huà)類(lèi)作文提綱,1) describe the drawing briefly； 2) explain its intended meaning； 3) give your comments,確定關(guān)鍵詞：,中心：,細(xì)節(jié),Blog,字幕,Dad：Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad.,Internet,interpersonal communication,人際交流 (面對(duì)面，網(wǎng)路）,博客,網(wǎng)絡(luò),The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication,描述段寫(xiě)作套路與表達(dá),What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is! The cartoon reveals a very thought-provoking scene.,圖畫(huà)描述段首 套話,provoke: stimulate 鼓動(dòng)，激勵(lì)，刺激,圖畫(huà)描述套話-半套+描述1（圖畫(huà)總述）,As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, （圖畫(huà)總述）,圖畫(huà)描述套話 -半套+細(xì)節(jié)描述（重點(diǎn)信息）,What impresses me most is that （圖畫(huà)重點(diǎn)信息）. The most striking feature of the drawing is that ,圖畫(huà)描述段尾套話 (承上啟下/總結(jié)),Simple as the picture seems to be, the implied meaning goes far deeper. Simply designed as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is rather deep and profound.,第一段的思路： 段首套話半套+描述1 (宏觀概述) 半套+描述2(細(xì)節(jié)重點(diǎn)，提示語(yǔ)) 段尾套話,What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is! As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, 描述1（圖畫(huà)概述） . What impresses me most is that 描述2（圖畫(huà)重點(diǎn)信息）. Simple as the image is, the symbolic meaning is rather deep and profound.,What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is! As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, when the dad asks his daughter “how was school today?”, his daughter tells her father to read all about it on her blog rather than face-to-face communication. Simple as the image seems to be, the implied meaning goes far deeper.,五至六句(80-90詞)： 1. Topic sentence:主題句，1句 該句說(shuō)明圖畫(huà)的象征意義(symbolic meanings)，即闡釋圖畫(huà)的深層寓意。此句為文章的中心思想，也是第二段的主題句，承上啟下。 2. Arguments：論證，3-4句 常用手段：因果論證；對(duì)比論證；例證；利弊分析等 3.Summary：小結(jié)，1句 對(duì)論證的句子進(jìn)行總結(jié)，與本段主題句首尾呼應(yīng)。,20,第二段：Body 主體/意義闡釋段/拓展段,中心句子套話,The pictures have subtly (巧妙地）reflected the social phenomenon that Undoubtedly, the drawing has symbolically revealed a serious problem in our daily life：,Topic sentence 主題句(中心句）的寫(xiě)法,在圖畫(huà)背后的含義顯而易見(jiàn)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)交流改變著傳統(tǒng)的面對(duì)面的交流。,The pictures have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that the internet communication is changing the traditional face-to-face communication.,Argument 論證部分的寫(xiě)法,1. 因果分析論證； 2. 舉例論證； 3. 利弊分析 ,主要手段,思路 A 談背景 B 擺事實(shí) C 駁觀點(diǎn)（欲揚(yáng)先抑） D 講原因 E 論后果（利弊）,1）五至六句(80-90詞)： 第一句說(shuō)明寓意(承上啟下)后；第二句說(shuō)明原因 如下；第三四句一個(gè)原因及擴(kuò)展；第五六句一個(gè)原因及擴(kuò)展。 具體化切忌以理說(shuō)理。 2）常見(jiàn)原因法律法規(guī)不完善、教育體制不健全、個(gè)人意識(shí)較薄弱(選一，原創(chuàng)一),2019/7/6,Writing,24,1. 原因分析,常見(jiàn)原因,The lack of serious punishment according to the laws and regulations is the chief reason of Peoples awareness is not that strong in , which is decisive to the phenomenon. The inadequate education may lead to ,2019/7/6,Writing,25,（1）舉例論證 For example, for instance, take for example（2）數(shù)據(jù)論證 As is shown in the statistics of a recent survey launched by a non-profit institution, the increase/decline of is so prominent that the results caused by it may be concluded as follows.,原因擴(kuò)展方式,原因分析常用過(guò)渡句： The following reasons may be responsible for the symbolic meaning. Several factors, both individual and social, could contribute to the negative phenomenon.,27,1）五至六句(80-90詞)： 第一句說(shuō)明寓意(承上啟下)后；第二句說(shuō)明如下事例可以證明；第三四句一個(gè)事例及擴(kuò)展；第五六句另一個(gè)擴(kuò)展。 2）注意事項(xiàng)切忌例子私人化。 3）擴(kuò)展方式數(shù)據(jù)論證、借用常識(shí)、引用權(quán)威、因果論證、比較論證,2019/7/6,Writing,28,2. 舉例論證,Take for an example/instance. A good case in point is (短語(yǔ)/that主語(yǔ)從句) provides us with an excellent example. Eg. Teenagers surfing on line provides us with an excellent example.,29,舉例論證常用過(guò)渡句：,積極中帶有消極，消極中暗含積極 1）五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說(shuō)明寓意(承上啟下)后；第二句說(shuō)明有利有弊；on the one hand, 第三四句一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)及擴(kuò)展；on the other hand, 第五六句一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)及擴(kuò)展。 2) 擴(kuò)展方式-舉例/數(shù)據(jù)/權(quán)威/常識(shí)/結(jié)果(五種論證),2019/7/6,Writing,30,3. 利弊論證,好：influence bring about a far-reaching influence / impact on lay a solid foundation for,利：表示影響,壞：consequence undermine（vt）削弱、逐漸破壞 adversely（不利地） affect sound an alarm（警告） to something put an enormous pressure upon bring about a(n) adverse / unfavorable consequence on pose a potential and probable threat to / on對(duì)構(gòu)成潛在威脅,2.影響：積極，消極,網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)于人際交流的影響,1.圖畫(huà)寓意,思路：,great convenience to our communication eliminate the barrier of distance,b. impair /undermine face-to-face communication make peoples relationship become remote,（中心句）The pictures have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that the internet communication is changing the traditional face-to-face communication. Apparently, the impacts of the Internet on interpersonal communication are diverse. （利弊分析） For one thing, Internet brings great convenience to our communication, eliminates the barrier of distance, and helps humans to keep in touch wherever and whenever. For another, it is Internet that does not enables family members, friends or classmates to communicate more in a face-to-face way. One case in point is that youngsters may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face. Unfortunately, it we let this trend to continue as it is, the interpersonal relationship will, definitely, become remote.,三至四句(50-55詞) ： 1+2+1 總分總 1. Concluding sentence: 結(jié)論句，1句 引出重復(fù)論點(diǎn)（總結(jié)歸納中心句） 2. Suggestions： 2句 兩點(diǎn)建議或兩句評(píng)論 3. 包裝結(jié)尾，展望未來(lái)/趨勢(shì)，1句,35,三、Conclusion: 結(jié)論段、建議措施段,1. Concluding sentence: 結(jié)論句（1句）,Accordingly, it is vital for us to (1)derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawing. / (2) We should take some effective and efficient measures to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the pictures.,（1） 總之，我們很有必要從這些發(fā)人深省的圖畫(huà)中獲得積極的含義。/采取有效措施扭轉(zhuǎn)這些圖畫(huà)中所反映的負(fù)面趨勢(shì)。,（2）因此，偶像崇拜這一發(fā)人深省的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，是能夠?qū)δ贻p人成長(zhǎng)產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)影響的一柄雙刃劍。,Hence/Therefore, idol worship, the thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can exert profound influence on the growth of young people.,(3) Judging from what have been argued above, people have come to realize the value of mutual aid. (積極寓意類(lèi)）,2. suggestions兩點(diǎn)建議或兩句評(píng)論（2句）,經(jīng)常提到的幾個(gè)方面： A. authorities(專(zhuān)家參與）; B. education（增強(qiáng)意識(shí)）; C. public; D. media（社會(huì)和媒體關(guān)注） E. self-effort,法律： Relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who (shun the responsibilities of caring their parents.),意識(shí)：,In addition, people should enhance the awareness of (caring each other especially when they are in trouble. ),教育： In addition, we should enlighten（啟發(fā)） / educate the awareness of (the young that academic honesty is extremely vital to us.,3. 包裝結(jié)尾，展望未來(lái) （1句）,三大常用句型,1）倒裝句,2）強(qiáng)調(diào)句,3）虛擬語(yǔ)氣,倒裝句,Only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our world colorful and vigorous.,強(qiáng)調(diào)句,In conclusion, it is persistent work that is conducive to (對(duì)有利）your grasping a considerable vocabulary.,虛擬語(yǔ)氣,It is high time that we placed great emphasis on this phenomenon.,(中心句) To sum up，communication through the internet is a double-edged sword which could bring us both convenience and inconvenience. (建議句)We should strike a balance between th