楊恒四級(jí)寫作講座.ppt

1,Lecture 5,CET-4 寫作,2012年5月10日,Way to success,2,CET-4 寫作,分值比例 評(píng)分原則 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 寫作時(shí)間安排 寫作學(xué)習(xí)方法,Way to success,3,四級(jí)寫作分值比例,四級(jí)總分710分，作文占15%，下面是作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分的換算方式： 分?jǐn)?shù) 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分 分?jǐn)?shù) 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分 分?jǐn)?shù) 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分 15 106.5 10 81 5 58.5 14 100.5 9 76.5 4 55.5 13 94.5 8 72 3 52.5 12 90 7 67.5 2 49.5 11 85.5 6 63 1 46.5 0 43.5,Way to success,4,評(píng)分原則,1、檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的四級(jí)教學(xué)要求。 2、采用總體評(píng)分（Global Scoring)方法 閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分（reward scores),而不是按語言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。 3、 從內(nèi)容和語言兩方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合判斷。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。評(píng)分要考慮文章是否切題，是否清楚而合適地表達(dá)思想，語言錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解障礙。,Way to success,5,評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),1. 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分為五個(gè)等級(jí)：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。 2. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)（如8分）相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)（即8分）；若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)，則可加1分（即9分）或減1分（即7分），但不得加或減0.5分。,Way to success,6,評(píng)分原則和評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),對(duì)各等級(jí)的具體解釋為： 2分：條理不清，思路紊亂；語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 5分：基本切題；表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字連貫性差；有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。 8分：基本切題；有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 11分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。 14分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。 注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想，0分。字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分。,Way to success,7,各分值范文,2009年6月英語四級(jí)作文 Free admission to museums,越來越多的博物館現(xiàn)在免費(fèi)向公眾開放,目的是 有人認(rèn)為這樣做會(huì)帶來一些問題 在我看來,Way to success,8,2分 一塌糊涂,條理不清，思想紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 Nowdays, Social appeared more more free Admissions to museums. its in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in peoples life and increase more knowldeges But some people thought free Adimssions to museums have brought much problems. In hand, a plenty of people visited,Way to success,9,5分糊里糊涂,基本切題，表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差，有較多嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。 In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more musuems were provided free admissions. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that. The first, because of free admissions of Museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested in all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffic crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to the museum life,Way to success,10,8分馬馬虎虎,基本切題。 有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 There is an interesting and instractive picture which goes like this: More and more museums are free for people. They want more people go to museums. But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse than before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to the museums. ,Way to success,11,11分清清楚楚,切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤 Now more and more museums are free without charge to the public. Does that make any sence? Free admission to musuems helps us save money, but it also encourages us to go to museums to learn something else and get more knowledge. This contributes to improve the living level of the public. It can certainly let us know more about our country and the world, which has a good effect on our development. Every coin has two sides. It can also bring some problems. For example,Way to success,12,14分漂漂亮亮,切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤。,Nowadays, more and more museums are open to the public for free. Free admissions to museums will motivate peoples interests in history, arts and science. In this way, museums can provide people with easier access to knowledge, which is of vital importance for the whole nation.,Way to success,13,However, some people hold that free admissions to museums can bring about many problems. Since anybody can enter a museum without paying, the museum can be overcrowded and it will be a difficult job for museums to maintain their collections. Besides, museums will face financial problems since they cant make profits from the admission fee. Due to the decrease in profits, museums have less motivation to up-date their collections and out-of-date museums cant avoid the fate to close up in the long run.,Way to success,14,In my opinion, free admissions to museums are good for the public, but on the other hand they may pose problems to the museum management. Governments should provide help to museums and guide them to serve the public better.,Way to success,15,寫作時(shí)間安排,9：10 考試正式開始 8：509：00 試音時(shí)間 9：009：10 播放考場指令，發(fā)放作文考卷 9：10 開始作文考試 9：35 發(fā)放含有快速閱讀的試題冊(cè)（但9：40才允許開始做） 9：409：55 做快速閱讀 9：5510：00 收答題卡一（即作文和快速閱讀） 9：5510：00重新戴上耳機(jī)，試音尋臺(tái)，準(zhǔn)備聽力考試 10：00開始聽力考試，電臺(tái)開始放音 ，聽力結(jié)束后完成剩余考項(xiàng)。 11：20全部考試結(jié)束。,Way to success,16,寫作時(shí)間安排,30分鐘完成寫作 1. 3 分鐘審題 2. 25分鐘寫作 3. 2分鐘檢查 拼寫 標(biāo)點(diǎn) 語法,Way to success,17,寫作學(xué)習(xí)方法,一、提高實(shí)力 背誦 默寫 中譯英 寫作,Way to success,18,2001-2011年歷年四級(jí)作文題目,2001年1月四級(jí)作文 How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 議論文：闡述面試在求職過程中的作用及注 意事項(xiàng) 2001年6月四級(jí)作文 A letter to a Schoolmate 書信：給同窗好友寫信邀請(qǐng)他參加度假活動(dòng)。,Way to success,19,2001-2011年歷年四級(jí)作文題目,2002年1月四級(jí)作文 書信：就本校食堂衛(wèi)生狀況給校長寫一封抱怨 信 2002年6月四級(jí)作文 Student Use of Computers 圖表：根據(jù)圖表闡述大學(xué)生使用計(jì)算機(jī)的情況并解釋原因。,Way to success,20,2001-2011年歷年四級(jí)作文題目,2003年1月四級(jí)作文 It Pays to Be Honest 議論文：做人應(yīng)該誠實(shí) 2003年6月四級(jí)作文 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident 書信：假設(shè)你在某地目擊一起車禍就此向警察同志寫一份見證書 2003年9月四級(jí)作文 記敘、議論：簡單敘述一下這位同學(xué)生?。ɑ蚴軅┑那闆r，以及同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的。最后談?wù)勅伺c人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是什么。,Way to success,21,2001-2011年歷年四級(jí)作文題目,2004年1月四級(jí)作文 A Letter in Reply to a Friend 書信：關(guān)于報(bào)考大學(xué)專業(yè)問題給朋友回信 2004年6月四級(jí)作文 導(dǎo)游詞：名勝古跡介紹及一天的旅游活動(dòng)計(jì)劃安排,Way to success,22,2001-2011年歷年四級(jí)作文題目,2005年1月四級(jí)作文 A Campaign Speech 演講稿：寫一份競選學(xué)生會(huì)主席的演講稿 2005年6月四級(jí)作文 In honour of teachers on the occasion of Teachers Day 書信：在教師節(jié)給老師寫信表示感謝,Way to success,23,2001-2011年歷年四級(jí)作文題目,2005年12月四級(jí)作文 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 議論文：如何看待大學(xué)校園成為旅游熱點(diǎn)？ 2006年6月英語四級(jí)作文 An announcement for a voluntary program 海報(bào)：校學(xué)生會(huì)組織一次暑假志愿活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)招聘志愿者,Way to success,24,2001-2011年歷年四級(jí)作文題目,2006年12月四級(jí)作文 議論文： CCTV 春節(jié)晚會(huì)是否應(yīng)該開，有的人認(rèn)為該開，有的人認(rèn)為不該開，你的觀點(diǎn) 2007年6月英語四級(jí)作文 Welcome to our club 歡迎辭：歡迎加入俱樂部。,Way to success,25,2007年12月四級(jí)作文 What electives to choose 議論文：各大學(xué)開了很多選修課，學(xué)生出于各種原因選擇不同的選修課，以我為例。 2008年6月英語四級(jí)作文 The Internet 議論文：有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)可以讓學(xué)習(xí)、工作更有效率，還有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)讓青少年沉迷，進(jìn)而影響學(xué)習(xí) ，你的看法,Way to success,26,2008年12月四級(jí)作文 Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags 議論文：一次性塑料袋曾被廣泛的使用，造成的問題，限制使用塑的意義。 2009年6月英語四級(jí)作文 Free admission to museums 議論文：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)開放的目的是什么? 這也會(huì)帶來一些問題，你的看法,Way to success,27,2009年12月英語四級(jí)作文 Create a green campus 議論文：建設(shè)綠色校園十分重要 ，綠色校園不僅指綠色環(huán)境 ，為了建設(shè)綠色校園我們應(yīng)該 2010年6月英語四級(jí)作文 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 議論文：如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫，出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因，我認(rèn)為(措施),Way to success,28,2010年12月四級(jí)作文 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent 議論文：目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切，為了讓孩子獨(dú)立，父母應(yīng)該 2011年6月英語四級(jí)作文 Online Shopping 議論文：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚，網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題，我的建議,Way to success,29,寫作學(xué)習(xí)方法,二、掌握技巧 - 模版（思路與表達(dá)） Bicycle- An Important Means of Transport in China Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people men and women, the old and the young ride their bicycles to work or study. That is why China is called “ The Kingdom of Bicycles”.,Way to success,30,第一句模版提煉,Bicycles are very popular in China. 詞性轉(zhuǎn)化：popular popularity In China, bicycles have gained great / wide popularity among Chinese people.,Way to success,31,練習(xí)：請(qǐng)完成以下真題句子的寫作,2011-06：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚 2010-06：如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫 2009-12：建設(shè)綠色校園很重要 2009-06：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對(duì)外開放的目的是 什么？ 2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用 2008-06：娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣,Way to success,32,2011-06：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚 In the recent decade, shopping online has gained wide popularity among youngsters.,Way to success,33,2010-06：如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫 In China, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. However, ,Way to success,34,2009-12：建設(shè)綠色校園很重要 In the contemporary society, the concept of green campuses has gain great popularity among universities and colleges.,Way to success,35,2009-06：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對(duì)外開放的目的是 什么？ In the present day society, free admission to museums is enjoying great popularity among Chinese citizens.,Way to success,36,2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用 During the past decades, disposable plastic bags gained wide popularity among people in the whole world.,Way to success,37,2008-06：娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣 In this day and age, a variety of recreational activities have gained wide popularity among individuals.,Way to success,38,模版的提煉：思路和提煉,Bicycles are very popular in China. In my eyes, you are the most beautiful. In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you. In China, no means of transportation is more popular and important than bicycles.,Way to success,39,第二句模版提煉,Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. 調(diào)查法描述：Based on a recent report, a majority of Chinese families acknowledge that they have two or three bicycles.,Way to success,40,練習(xí)：在完成首句之后，對(duì)以下現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行描述,2011-06：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚 2010-06：如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫 2009-06：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對(duì)外開放的目的是 什么？ 2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用 2008-06：娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣,Way to success,41,2011-06：現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚 Based on a recent report from China Daily, 72.34% of young people reckon that they have purchased clothes, books and other items on Taobao, Dangdang, Amazon and Group-buying websites.,Way to success,42,2010-06：如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫 However, according to a recent survey, a great many learners admit that they pay less attention to words spelling.,Way to success,43,2009-06：越來越多的博物館免費(fèi)對(duì)外開放的目的是 什么？ Based on an investigation, a majority of visitors reckon that by visiting museums freely, they acquire rich knowledge on history, military and customs.,Way to success,44,2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用 As a recent report reveals, a majority of residents acknowledge that they have been using these bag