高中英語建議信整理版本PPT課件.ppt

1、Persuasive writing,-A letter of suggestion,What is a good writing passage (group 1) 1.beautiful sentences 2.correct grammar structures 3.logical writing 4. nice handwriting ,A good piece of writing,Excellence （優(yōu)良性）,應用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 詞匯,句型 （高級）和語法多樣化（較復雜）語言地道,Coherence (連貫性）,Accuracy （準確性）,有效地使用了語句間的連接成分

2、，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。,準確無誤地表達作者意圖 覆蓋要求的所有要點 單詞、句子沒有拼寫、語法錯誤,A letter of suggestion ( group 2) practical writing (應用文). four elements: Salutation(稱呼), main body(正文), ending(結(jié)束語)and signature(簽名). tense :present / future three paragraphs First Para. Intention Second Para. suggestions / reasons Third Para

3、. ending,Usually- used expressions (group 3 ) 首段：表明寫作意圖，陳述事由。 I am writing to express my ideas concerning . I am writing to suggest that .(虛擬) 主體：提出建議并闡述理由。 If I were you, I would . It seems to me that you could also . On the one hand On the other hand 結(jié)尾：希望收信人接受建議。 I hope you will find these sugges

4、tions useful / helpful. I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration.,Practice ( group 4) 假如你是第一中學二年級的學生李華，你校就要不要在學校內(nèi)開辦藝術畫廊征求全校師生建議，請你給校委員會寫一封信，給出自己的建議及理由，內(nèi)容包括： 1. 建議開辦一個校園藝術畫廊，展示在校學生自己的作品； 2. 畫廊可以給學生提供一個展示自我的平臺，開闊學生視野、豐富校園文化。 有用詞匯： 平臺 Platform 開闊眼界 broaden ones horizons 豐富 enrich,Para1.你是

5、第一中學二年級的學生李華,建議開辦一個校園藝術畫廊，展示在校學生自己的作品；,Para 2. 畫廊可以給學生提供一個展示自我的平臺，開闊學生視野、豐富校園文化。 有用詞匯： 平臺 Platform 開闊眼界 broaden ones horizons 豐富 enrich,Para 3 希望建議被采納、落款,Dear Committee members, Im Li Hua, one of grade two students in NO.1 middle school. Im writing to suggest that we should open an art gallery to di

6、splay students own works. The reasons are as follows. First, the art gallery can provide a platform for us students to show ourselves, which helps to improve students self-confidence as well as communication skills. Second, It can also help to broaden students horizons .Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well. Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will take my su