人教版必修三課件：unit2_healthy_eating_basic_writing_).ppt

1、,Unit2 Healthy eating,Basic Writing,Round1（第一輪）競賽規(guī)則 全班分四組：奔奔隊(duì)，跑跑隊(duì)，家家隊(duì)，族族隊(duì) 選擇明星隊(duì)長，并完成隊(duì)長布置任務(wù)，即可獲得相應(yīng)分?jǐn)?shù)，分?jǐn)?shù)高的將在本輪獲勝。 注意：組內(nèi)每人限答一題！,Competition！,Competition！,Choose your captain! 選隊(duì)長吧！,1. 健康(1分) n. _ adj. _,health,healthy,2.再好不過了。（2分） _,Nothing could be better.,3. 我不會(huì)允許你再次遲到卻逃脫懲罰。(3分) (can/could/will not h

2、ave sb doing, get away with) _ _,I wont have you getting away with getting late again.,1. 平衡膳食(1分) _,balanced diet,2. 強(qiáng)項(xiàng)和缺點(diǎn)(2分) _,3. He did not look forward to being in debt. His restaurant was no longer popular. (合成一句話，tips：because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句) (3分) _,He did not look forward to being in debt because hi

3、s restaurant was no longer popular.,strengths and weaknesses,1. 減肥(1分) _,2. 勞(study)逸(exercise)結(jié)合(2分) _,lose weight,combine study with exercise,3. 我們很有必要學(xué)會(huì)應(yīng)對(duì)壓力。 (3分) (Its adj. for sb. to do sth.) _ _,Its necessary/essential for us to learn how to deal with stress.,1. 應(yīng)當(dāng)，應(yīng)該(1分) _,2. 權(quán)衡利弊(2分) _,ought

4、to,balance the advantages against the disadvantages,3. 這部電影那么有趣，我們大多數(shù)人都已看過兩遍。(3分) (sothat ) _,The film is so interesting that most of us have seen it twice.,An article consists of many _, and a sentence is made of _.,各位童鞋，你們詞匯量有多少啊？句式靈活度呢？,Running Lan,sentences,words,1.短文改錯(cuò) 10分 2.書面表達(dá) 25分,高考寫作：,Roun

5、d2（第二輪）競賽規(guī)則 本輪有三道問答題，搶答開始命令下發(fā)后，最先 舉手的小組獲得回答機(jī)會(huì)，回答完整正確獲得相應(yīng) 分?jǐn)?shù)。,Competition！,Task 1,回憶基礎(chǔ)寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，針對(duì)哪三方面？ （說出一點(diǎn)得1分，共3分）,【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。,correctness completeness coherence 正確性 完整性 連貫性,Task 2,如何做到句式靈活，可以用什么結(jié)構(gòu)或句式？（說一點(diǎn)得1分）,1. 并列句 2. 復(fù)合句 (定語從句, 狀語從句,名詞 性從句等) 3. 非謂語動(dòng)詞 4. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句型 5. with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等 其他句型及結(jié)構(gòu),

6、Tips：趨利避害,簡單句基本句型 主語+系動(dòng)詞+表語（SVP） 主語+動(dòng)詞（SV） 主語+動(dòng)詞+賓語（SVO） 主語+動(dòng)詞+間接賓語+直接賓語（SVOO） 主語+動(dòng)詞+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語（SVOC）,Task 3,回憶基礎(chǔ)寫作的寫作步驟主要包括哪六步？ （說出一點(diǎn)得1分，共6分）,1.【審題】 2.【整合信息】 3.【確定短語句型】 4.【連詞成句】 5.【連句成篇】 6.【檢查修改】,最近你們班進(jìn)行了一次關(guān)于“健康”的討論。請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容介紹這次討論的情況。,【寫作要求】使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。,一、審題 文體：議論文 人稱： 時(shí)態(tài)：,第一或第三人稱,一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),二、整合信息（

7、5句話）,【寫作要求】使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。,信息整合后為： （1）上周五下午，我們?nèi)嗤瑢W(xué)在教室里進(jìn)行了一次關(guān)于“健康”的討論。 （2）健康是由于有強(qiáng)壯的身體，也就是說，多運(yùn)動(dòng)。 （3）關(guān)注健康飲食。 （4）保持心理上的健康，身心健康才是真正的健康； （5）有積極樂觀的態(tài)度，學(xué)會(huì)應(yīng)對(duì)壓力和適時(shí)進(jìn)行自我放松。,三、確定短語,have a discussion about,that is to say,pay attention to,mentally and physically healthy,deal with stress,relax oneself,attitude(towards

8、),due to,四連詞成句,1. 上周五下午，我們?nèi)嗤瑢W(xué)在教室里進(jìn)行了一次關(guān)于“健康”的討論。,_afternoon, our class _health in the classroom.,had a discussion about,Last Friday,2.健康是由于有強(qiáng)壯的身體，也就是說，多運(yùn)動(dòng)。,Health is _ strong body, _, much exercise.,due to,that is to say,3.關(guān)注健康飲食。 （Its suggested that）,We should _ having a healthy diet.,誰關(guān)注？缺主語,Its

9、suggested that _.,pay attention to,we should pay attention to having a healthy diet,4.保持心理上的健康（也是很重要的），身心健康才是真正的健康 。,_is also very important, _being healthy in mind and body is true health.,多少句話？關(guān)系？,Being mentally healthy,because,5.(我們要)有積極樂觀的態(tài)度，知道如何學(xué)會(huì)應(yīng)對(duì)壓力和進(jìn)行自我放松。 （Its adj. for us to do）,We must hav

10、e_, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.,Its _to have a positive attitude, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.,a positive attitude,essential for us,Last Friday afternoon, our class had a discussion about health in the classroom. Health is due to strong body, that is to say

11、, much exercise. Its suggested that we should pay attention to having a healthy diet. Being mentally healthy is also very important, because being healthy in mind and body is true health. Its essential for us to have a positive attitude, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.,Is it a good

12、 paragraph?,Task 4,請問如何使文章具有連貫性？（1分）,恰當(dāng)使用連接詞,A、表并列： B、表轉(zhuǎn)折： C、表原因： D、表結(jié)果： E、表列舉等：,如何使文章連貫,and, also, besides=in addition(而且)= Whats more, or(或者/否則).,but, however, yet,because, because of, due to,so, therefore, as a result,such as, for example, like,Last Friday afternoon, our class had a discussion ab

13、out health in the classroom. health is due to strong body, that is to say, much exercise. 1._, its suggested that we should pay attention to having a healthy diet. 2._, being mentally healthy is also very important, because being healthy in mind and body is true health. 3._, its essential for us to

14、have a positive attitude, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.,如何使文章連貫？,According to some students,Besides,Whats more,Therefore,五、連句成篇,四人一組，完成寫作任務(wù)，每人扮演重要角色如下：Role 1：Leader(領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者，分配任務(wù)) Role 2: Grammarian(語法大師，檢查句法) Role 3: Coherence Master（流暢大師，連句成篇） Role 4: Presenter（展示者將展示作品） 用時(shí)：10分鐘 Tip

15、s：分工每人至少寫一句,你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪：,寫作要求 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。,Last Thursday, I had an interview with Miss Liu, a PE teacher in our school, concerning the health issues of middle school students. According to Miss Liu, more and more students are getting overweight in recent years a

16、nd there is also a decline in their physical strength. She also pointed out that the stress from study make them have less sport time. She suggested that teachers should assign a proper amount of homework and at the same time, school should improve their sports facilities. She particularly reminded us that it is important to keep a balance between study and exercise.,Sample:,在方面逐漸衰弱(或敗落) 人口減少decline in population,Summary,1. 注意體裁，_和_。 2. 避免逐詞翻譯，要用較好的_提升寫作水平。 3. 句與句間添加_使文章更加連貫。,時(shí)態(tài),人稱,詞語和句式,連詞,Homework,寫一篇短文： 學(xué)考評(píng)價(jià)階段檢測卷（二） 書面表達(dá)P52 周三早讀前收齊,下期見！,He had plenty of money and he spent it freely. 他有