諺語警句型作文.ppt

1、諺語警句型作文,2006,6-2011,6,綜合評(píng)述型 5 利弊型 4 對(duì)比型 1 （06，12） 應(yīng)用文（演說詞） 1 （07，6）,2011,12,Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of ti

2、me.“ Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。,分析：出題風(fēng)格出現(xiàn)巨大“顛覆”,顛覆一：話題發(fā)生大的變化。歷年四級(jí)作文的話題都是針對(duì)某一校園或社會(huì)現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行評(píng)述，而此次作文更像是對(duì)一句諺語進(jìn)行評(píng)述。 顛覆二：題目形式更加復(fù)雜。傳統(tǒng)的四級(jí)議論文出題形式非常簡(jiǎn)單，就是圍繞一個(gè)標(biāo)題寫一篇議論文。而此次作文要先點(diǎn)評(píng)一句笑話，在此基礎(chǔ)之上再來寫文章的標(biāo)題，以至于很多考生在寫作時(shí)根本都沒有提起這句笑話。 顛覆三：取消了傳統(tǒng)的提綱作文模式。傳統(tǒng)的四級(jí)議論文都是有兩至三條提綱，面對(duì)完全無提綱的作文，學(xué)生對(duì)整篇文章的框架結(jié)構(gòu)不知如何安排

3、。 顛覆四：字?jǐn)?shù)有了上額限制。傳統(tǒng)的四級(jí)作文字?jǐn)?shù)都只有下限不低于120字。而此次作文字?jǐn)?shù)明確規(guī)定在120-180之間，那么不夠或超出這個(gè)范圍之外就會(huì)扣除相應(yīng)的分?jǐn)?shù)。,題材和內(nèi)容都是相當(dāng)?shù)亓钊四吧?兩點(diǎn)命題思路： 一、2011年6月份網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物利弊的這篇題目過于簡(jiǎn)單，常見，容易被押題，因此今年的作文題目當(dāng)然波動(dòng)性地出現(xiàn)難度上升； 二，反押題精神，今年并沒有考到之前的熱點(diǎn)，如“酒駕安全問題”、“明星選秀問題”等等。,一、出題風(fēng)格出現(xiàn)巨大“顛覆”； 二、文章主題：人生哲理，勵(lì)志 接近2004、2007考研寫作 考研真題普及面很廣的“個(gè)人價(jià)值觀、人生哲理類話題” ： 2008年考研寫作真題的題目是“合

4、作人要學(xué)會(huì)合作共贏”； 2007年考研寫作真題是“自信自信很重要” 2004年的考研真題寫作是“堅(jiān)持和毅力的重要性” 三、出題形式重復(fù)1997年1月CET4的“practice makes perfect”;,諺語警句型作文,寫作思路 一般要求以議論為主體，以例證為手段 首段： 揭示寓意 主體段：（以例證）展開議論 結(jié)論段：提出勸誡,歷屆考題,97，1 : Practice Makes Perfect 1. 怎樣理解“熟能生巧” 2. 例如在英語學(xué)習(xí)中 3. 又如,歷屆考題,97，1 CET6 Haste Makes Waste 1. 為什么“欲速則不達(dá)” 2. 舉例說明,歷屆考題,97，1

5、: Practice Makes Perfect 1. 怎樣理解“熟能生巧” 2. 例如在英語學(xué)習(xí)中 3. 又如,There is an old saying in china: practice makes perfect. Practice is a means and perfect is a goal. Only when you do more practice can you make things perfect. This is true not only in our learning but also in other walks of life.,Take the stu

6、dy of English for example. Practice enables us to spell words correctly and master the rules of grammar quickly and practice also makes us become fluent in speaking and writing. It is almost impossible for a person to speak English fluently and accurately without a lot of practice.,Another case in p

7、oint is cooking. A good cook can prepare a delicious meal but you will not be surprised at his performance if you know how much time he has spent practicing. Through practice, he then becomes an expert at cooking.,It goes without saying that practice makes perfect. Only through practice can one be g

8、ood at doing things. Since we have realized the importance of practice, why not put it into practice?,歷屆考題,97，1 CET6 Haste Makes Waste 1. 為什么“欲速則不達(dá)” 2. 舉例說明,Haste Makes Waste,Haste makes waste is an English proverb which means that one should do everything step by step. Even simple operations can ea

9、sily be spoiled if we rush to complete them, neglecting important stages in the process. One should make full preparations before beginning an task.,Take English study for example. Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable way. Similarly, if we do not l

10、earn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good composition.,In short, laying a solid foundation is essential if we want to make achievements in our studies or work, or indeed in any other aspect of our lives. At every step, review what has been

11、achieved and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step. And remember, Rome was not built in a day.,諺語格言題文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu) ： Paragraph I:（1）點(diǎn)明要闡釋的諺語或名言(general)； （2）用自己的話解釋這一諺語或名言的意思，有時(shí)有正反兩面的邏輯(specific)。 Paragraph II: （1）作者對(duì)該諺語或名言的觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度，即文章的論點(diǎn)句； （2）支持性的細(xì)節(jié)分論點(diǎn)，舉例子論證（至少兩點(diǎn)，有時(shí)有正反兩面的邏輯）； （3）本段總結(jié)（可以省略）。

12、 Paragraph III: （1）總結(jié)全文，定下結(jié)論（通常為闡明其現(xiàn)實(shí)或更深遠(yuǎn)意義）。,歷屆考題,97，1 Cet4 Practice Makes Perfect 1. 怎樣理解“熟能生巧” 2. 例如在英語學(xué)習(xí)中 3. 又如,97，1 CET6 Haste Makes Waste 1. 為什么“欲速則不達(dá)” 2. 舉例說明,2011年6月Cet4 1.現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時(shí)尚 2.網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題 3.我的建議,2011年6月CET6 1. 現(xiàn)在許多人熱衷于各種證書考試； 2. 其目的各不相同； 3. 在我看來。,2010， 6 Cet4 Due Attention

13、Should Be Given to Spelling 1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫 2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因 3.針對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象我認(rèn)為,2010，6 Cet6 Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese 1. 近年來在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象；2. 出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因和后果；3. 我認(rèn)為,2011,12 CET4 Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong

14、Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time.Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。,2011,12 CET6 Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitledThe Way to Successby

15、commenting on Abraham Lincolns famous remark, Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend, the first four sharpening the axe. You should write at least150words but no more than200words.,遙相呼應(yīng) 大同小異,12月的四級(jí)作文要求寫一篇意志和成功的關(guān)系的短文。 首先，這個(gè)題目沒有任何題材范圍上的突破，和大學(xué)生的日常生活和成長(zhǎng)有關(guān)。 第二，這個(gè)題目其實(shí)很有利于考生的發(fā)揮。 如何寫,2011,1

16、2 CET4,Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time.Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。,Nothing

17、Succeeds without a Strong Will,P1. 點(diǎn)評(píng)諺語+引出話題 首先依據(jù)背景材料來提出問題，“從戒煙的問題引出做任何事情都需要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志，需要堅(jiān)持到底，不可半途而廢?！?P2. 觀點(diǎn)+舉例 分析這一問題，可以正反論證，也可舉例成功的實(shí)例進(jìn)行論證，此為主體段落， P3.點(diǎn)題收尾+提出勸誡 總結(jié)來論證堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志對(duì)于成功的重大意義,范文一,The humorous saying has subtly revealed the truth that nothing succeeds without a strong will. Seemingly easy as quitti

18、ng smoking is, it requires a determined mind and a strong will, the lack of which may give rise to the ultimate failure.,Undoubtedly, being determined is the most important quality that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess. A good case in point is Helen Keller who is a famous novelist,

19、 educator and philanthropist. Despite her paralysis, she has learned altogether five languages, namely English, French, German, Latin and Greek. Apparently, it is strong will that enables her to overcome all the difficulties and fulfill her ambitions eventually.）,To sum up, since there is no royal r

20、oad to success, we should always possess the unyielding spirit and never shrink in front of setbacks. Only by building a strong will, can we find the eventual pay-off could well be worth our effort and embrace a brighter future. Just as the saying goes, “When the going gets tough, the tough get goin

21、g” （環(huán)境越艱困 硬漢越吃香） . （172）,2011，12 范文二,There is a widespread humorous saying that,“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.” Funny as it is, the saying ironically reflects the fact that strong will is the most essential quality for anyone who wants to achieve

22、success.,Our life involves all kinds of obstacles and setbacks which may exhaust us and knock us down. Therefore, we must have strong will to meet the challenge of them. Whats more, there are many temptations waiting for us when we are striving for success. For example, when you are doing your utmos

23、t to quit playing computer games, your friends just play with great satisfaction. Then how can you resist such terrible temptation? Obviously, only with strong will can you conquer yourself and realize your goals.,All in all, success only belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil an

24、d constant efforts, just as the old popular saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”,范文三,Sometimes, in our daily life, the easiest thing might be the most difficult thing, as in the case of some people trying to quit smoking for hundreds of times and still making endless efforts without

25、 any hope of success. The reason for their failure is their lack of a strong will。,In our modern world, nothing is simple and straightforward. Something might appear deceptively easy at first, but as we proceed on, we will find that it is actually extremely difficult. Therefore, we must take whateve

26、r we do seriously and be mentally prepared to make our utmost exertions. When we encounter obstacles and setbacks, we must apply our strong willpower and persevere until we finally succeed。,For us university students, in our academic studies or in our daily life on campus, we might not be faced with

27、 insurmountable challenges. But we need to get prepared, right now, to take things seriously, try to cultivate our strong will, and be ready to pursue our goals through persistence and indefatigable(不屈不撓的) will. I believe its the only way we can achieve our success。,雖然這次作文大爆冷門，但也給我們一個(gè)新的提示： 四級(jí)作文的革新之路

28、已經(jīng)開始了！ 四級(jí)大綱明確規(guī)定，要求學(xué)生根據(jù)規(guī)定的題目和所提供的提綱、情景、圖片、圖表等寫一篇不低于120字的短文， 在過去近12次考試中，基本上都是“題目+提綱”的組合， 那么以后“題目+情景、圖片、圖表”的形式也要引起大家的關(guān)注了！,典型句式,As the old saying goes, Examples can be easily found to make a case for this proverb. Take for example/instance. Another good example is is a case in point(是恰如其分的例子) One（Anothe

29、r） case in point is Another illustration of this is sth is best exemplified by, To illustrate/demonstrate/In order to specify this statement, I would like to cite the experience of sb as an example.,An English proverb says, One of the great men once remarked, Haste Makes Waste. Nearly every civiliza

30、tion has its own equivalent to the proverb: History/Our society abounds with the examples of Haste Makes Waste. . On the other hand/On the contrary, . For us college students, the saying/proverb has a profound and realistic significance: .,模板一,It is well know to us that the proverb: _諺語_ has a profo

31、und significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means _諺語的含義_. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) A case in point is _例子一_. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the prove

32、rb _諺語_. With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: _諺語_. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and

33、job,模板二,_(所給格言或諺語). This is a proverb full of logic. By this proverb, it is meant that _(解釋該格言或諺語的內(nèi)涵). In other words, _(換言之的解釋). Indeed, we can learn many things from it. Examples can easily be found to make this point clearer. _(例子) is a case in point. Another case is tha _(例子二) Whatever you do, p

34、lease remember the saying “_(該格言或諺語). If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, youll necessarily benefit a lot from it.,模板三,The good old proverb, _(所給格言或諺語), reminds us that _(詮釋該格言或諺語)。 On the one hand, _(詳述1). On the other hand, _(詳述2). Take _(某相關(guān)事例) for example, _(展開論述). However,

35、it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you hold it sooner or later.,Homework,A Fall into the Pit, A Gain in your Wit 1. 怎樣理解“吃一塹，長(zhǎng)一智” 2. 舉例說明 Suggested homework Its never too old to learn,A Fall into the Pit, A Gain in Your Wit,Since to err is human, no one could see to it that he didnt ever make a mistake. However,