基礎課時分層-Unit3-Grammar-＆-Writing-語言能力提升

4/4基礎課時分層-Unit3Grammar＆Writing語言能力提升一、書面表達1.目前，外出旅行的人越來越多，因此旅行成了一個熱門話題，某英語報的"旅行大家談"欄目正在征文，請你寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文談談人們喜歡旅行的原因。2.假如你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友peter給你發(fā)了一封e-mail，告訴你他將于國慶節(jié)期間到你所在的城市北京來旅游，請你給他回一封e-mail歡迎他來北京,并表示愿意提供幫助，同時提醒他一些注意事項。注意：(1)文章必須包括題目提示的全部內容，可適當增加細節(jié)；(2)開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；(3)100詞左右。DearPeter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua二、短文改錯1.DearToni,Iheardthatyou’vejustmovedhere.Asoneofourtraditionalfestivalandtheonethatreceivesgreatpopularity,todaywastheDragonBoatFestival.Fallonthe5thdayofthelunarmonthofMayeveryyear,itissetinpraiseonanancientChinesepoetQuYuan.Herpoemsaresupposedinspirepeople’sloveoftheircountry.Zongzi,boilingricewrappedbybambooleaves,isthefamouslyfoodthatyoucan'tmissduringthefestival.Sinceyouarebusywithyourworkallthedaylong,Ihavespeciallycookedsomeforyou.Unlessitisconvenient,I’llgiveittoyoutonight.I’llbeveryhappyifyoulikeit.Yours,LiHua2.WhenIwasachild,Ispentmorethantenyearslearntheviolin.Therefore,Icouldn’tunderstand"realmusic".AfterIgraduatedhighschool,afriendofminesuggestedthatwestartedtolearntheguitarbecauseweboththoughtitwascool.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhichwewenttobuyguitarsintheguitarstore.ThereIsawaguitarplayerplayingaguitar,whichIreallyenjoyedit.Hebecamemyfirstguitarteacher.Ittookmesuchalongtimetochoosingaguitaramongseveralwonderfulmodel.NowtheguitaristhemostimportantlypartofmylifeandIpracticeiteveryday.

參考答案：一、書面表達1.【范文賞讀】AsfarasI’mconcerned,anincreasingnumberofpeoplearegoingtravelingforatleasttworeasons.Manypeopletravelforpleasureandrelaxation.Afterworkinghardforalongtime,peoplemayfin^itgreatfuntravelingtoenjoythebeautifulsceneryofnatureindifferentplaces.Atthesametime,apleasanttripcanreallyhelpthemrelax.Asaresult,theywillbereadytoworkharderafterwards.Inaddition,travelingisanexcellentwayoflearning.Whiletraveling,peoplemaylearnsomethingaboutdifferentculturesaswellasthegeographyoftheirdestinationsthroughcommunicatingwithlocalsandcarefulobservation.Withtheaboveadvantages,it’snowonderthattravelingisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.【思路導航】(1)這是一篇說明文，沒有給出詳細的說明，需要學生根據(jù)自己的知識來組織材料。隨著人們生活水平的提高，喜歡旅行的人越來越多。旅行的確是一種較為健康的休閑和學習的方式，并且對旅行者和社會都有很大的好處。本文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。(2)在語言運用方面，描述某種社會現(xiàn)象時，要盡量使用信息含量較大的復合句，同時結合其他句型和非謂語動詞，從而使句子結構多樣。(3)在文章結構方面，社會現(xiàn)象類文章一般常見的結構為：首先描述這一現(xiàn)象，然后對其原因進行分析，接著說明其利弊，最后提出建議或方法。寫作時，注意使用連接詞從而使文章結構更加連貫。2.DearPeter,Howareyouthesedays?Iwashappytoreceiveyoure-mail,sayingyou’regoingtocometoBeijingduringthecomingNationalDay.I’monholidaythen.Therefore,I'dliketobeyourguideandshowyouaroundsomeofthemostpopularplacesofinterestifyoulike.Bytheway,myfamilyinviteyouincelebratethisimportantChinesefestivalatmyhome.Thenyoucanlearnsomethingmoreaboutourculture.Asyouknow,unlikeinyourhometown,itcanbealittlecoldtheninBeijing.Soyou’dbettertakemoreclotheswithyoutopreventyoufromcatchingacold.I’mexpectingyourcomingandcanhardlywaittoseeyou.I’msurewe’llhaveagoodtime.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【思路導航】1.本文要求給朋友回一封e-mail屬于應用文體中的書信類。在當今的社會里，e-mail是一種常用的通訊和交流方式，通過寫作訓練，幫助學生掌握e-mail的寫作技巧是非常重要的。根據(jù)這封e-mail的提示內容可知，本文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。2.在語言運用方面，為了滿足書信類文體簡潔明了的特征，應該注意非謂語動詞的使用。同時要充分關注禮貌用語的使用。3.在文章結構方面，首先要說明寫信的目的，接下來進行細節(jié)描述，最后表明自己的愿望或向對方表示祝愿、感謝等.二、短文改錯1.(1)festival改為festivals(2)was改為is(3)Fall改為Falling(4)on改為of(5)Her改為His(6)supposed后加to(7)boiling改為boiled(8)famously改為famous(9)去掉第二個the(10)Unless改為If