2025八省聯(lián)考卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)及滿分語(yǔ)料10類40句 (機(jī)車黨硬漢柔情) 解析版

2025八省聯(lián)考卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)及滿分語(yǔ)料10類40句(機(jī)車黨硬漢柔情)解析版【讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)真題深度解讀】【原題呈現(xiàn)】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(紀(jì)錄片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.在費(fèi)城開(kāi)會(huì)，想?yún)⒓觿?dòng)物籌款活動(dòng)。Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn’tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.本想待在室內(nèi)，后來(lái)決定出門(mén)去劇院。Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers—verybig,tough-lookingbikers.天黑出發(fā)，劇院門(mén)口遇到一群騎手。I’veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen—allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub—standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?孤身遇騎手，心生警惕起疑惑。AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.確定地方正確，決定進(jìn)劇院躲避騎手。注意：(1)續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【步步為贏】一、知故事大意閱讀材料講述了作者在費(fèi)城出差時(shí)，看到一則關(guān)于當(dāng)?shù)貏?dòng)物救助組織的紀(jì)錄片宣傳廣告。由于不愿獨(dú)自一人外出，作者本打算在酒店房間度過(guò)這個(gè)晚上。然而，在感到無(wú)聊后，作者鼓起勇氣前往劇院觀看紀(jì)錄片，但在劇院前遇到了一個(gè)由許多大塊頭騎士組成的團(tuán)體。作者一開(kāi)始感到非常緊張，認(rèn)為自己可能會(huì)遇到麻煩，甚至有點(diǎn)后悔自己的決定。盡管如此，作者最終決定進(jìn)入劇院，希望能安全觀看電影。續(xù)寫(xiě)部分要求構(gòu)思作者進(jìn)入劇院后發(fā)生的事情，特別是揭示摩托車騎士的真實(shí)身份，以及作者是如何從恐懼轉(zhuǎn)向安心。二、審篇章段落閱讀材料由五段組成，各段段落大意如下：第一段：作者在費(fèi)城參加會(huì)議時(shí)，看到一個(gè)關(guān)于動(dòng)物救助的紀(jì)錄片廣告，想去觀看募捐活動(dòng)，但由于沒(méi)有同事陪伴，且擔(dān)心獨(dú)自外出，猶豫是否前往。第二段：作者回到酒店后感到無(wú)聊和不安，決定克服恐懼，前往劇院。劇院距離酒店只有五個(gè)街區(qū)，周圍環(huán)境看起來(lái)不危險(xiǎn)，于是決定出發(fā)。第三段：天色已晚，街道幾乎空無(wú)一人。作者找到了劇院所在的街道，但轉(zhuǎn)角后卻被眼前的一群看起來(lái)強(qiáng)壯威猛的摩托車騎行者嚇到。第四段：雖然作者知道許多摩托車愛(ài)好者是友善的人，但此時(shí)作為一個(gè)獨(dú)自女性，身處陌生的街區(qū)，面對(duì)一群身穿標(biāo)志的摩托車騎行者，作者感到非常害怕，并開(kāi)始懷疑自己是否來(lái)錯(cuò)了地方。第五段：盡管感到害怕，作者看到劇院的標(biāo)志確認(rèn)自己來(lái)對(duì)了地方。她決定進(jìn)入劇院，希望里面會(huì)更安全，并祈禱摩托車騎行者會(huì)離開(kāi)。三、定敘事結(jié)構(gòu)從結(jié)構(gòu)上看，文章采用了“設(shè)懸念—解謎”的敘事方式。閱讀材料部分通過(guò)詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)作者的心理活動(dòng)，尤其是對(duì)這群騎士的恐懼，制造了緊張氛圍。而續(xù)寫(xiě)部分則要求合理構(gòu)思情節(jié)解開(kāi)這個(gè)謎團(tuán)，讓整個(gè)故事從緊張轉(zhuǎn)為輕松，傳遞出一個(gè)積極向上的信息。續(xù)寫(xiě)部分要繼續(xù)延續(xù)這個(gè)懸念并最終解答，保證故事有完整的閉環(huán)。情節(jié)發(fā)展故事細(xì)節(jié)開(kāi)端(Beginning)在費(fèi)城的一家酒店，作者看到關(guān)于動(dòng)物救助的募捐廣告，決定去劇院觀看。發(fā)展(Development)在到達(dá)劇院時(shí)，作者看到一群摩托車騎士站在劇院門(mén)外，感到緊張和不安。高潮(Climax)她決定進(jìn)入劇院，但在劇院內(nèi)，她發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有更多摩托車騎士，這讓她更加困惑和不安。結(jié)局(Ending)當(dāng)電影開(kāi)始后，作者發(fā)現(xiàn)這些摩托車騎士實(shí)際上是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救助組織的成員，他們是來(lái)支持這次募捐活動(dòng)的。四、構(gòu)寫(xiě)作思路1.續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段寫(xiě)作思路續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段的段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)是“我匆匆進(jìn)入劇院，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)劇院里還有更多的摩托車騎士?！边@暗示作者原本的恐懼沒(méi)有完全消失，她進(jìn)入劇院后發(fā)現(xiàn)情況并沒(méi)有改善，反而有更多的騎士。這一段我們需要保持文章的緊張氣氛和懸疑感，可通過(guò)環(huán)境的描寫(xiě)、作者的心理活動(dòng)，以及騎士們的舉止，來(lái)繼續(xù)加強(qiáng)這種懸疑氛圍。

2.續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段寫(xiě)作思路續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段的段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)是“在電影開(kāi)始后，我意識(shí)到這些騎士其實(shí)是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救助組織的成員?！痹谶@一段的續(xù)寫(xiě)中，我們需要揭示這些騎士其實(shí)是參與動(dòng)物救援活動(dòng)的志愿者?？梢酝ㄟ^(guò)對(duì)影片內(nèi)容的描述、騎士們的行為等，讓讀者逐漸意識(shí)到他們并不是“壞人”，而是為了公益事業(yè)而聚集在一起。通過(guò)這個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折，消除之前的緊張氛圍，并傳達(dá)一種溫暖和正能量。步驟分析結(jié)果找出矛盾沖突故事中的主要矛盾是主人公的興趣和安全擔(dān)憂之間的對(duì)立，以及對(duì)陌生人外表的恐懼和內(nèi)心勇氣的沖突。主人公熱愛(ài)動(dòng)物，想去支持募捐活動(dòng)，但她害怕獨(dú)自一人前往陌生環(huán)境并面對(duì)看似威脅的騎士群體。矛盾集中在興趣與恐懼的對(duì)立以及偏見(jiàn)與真實(shí)情況的反差，通過(guò)勇氣的表現(xiàn)推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展，體現(xiàn)成長(zhǎng)與突破自我。分析情感轉(zhuǎn)折情感的轉(zhuǎn)折從主人公初步猶豫到最終進(jìn)入劇院，表現(xiàn)她對(duì)恐懼的克服。開(kāi)始時(shí)她因騎士們的外表感到震驚和恐懼，但在克服內(nèi)心的矛盾后，她選擇了信任和堅(jiān)持。最終，她發(fā)現(xiàn)騎士們實(shí)際上是動(dòng)物救援組織的成員，這一情感轉(zhuǎn)變突出了對(duì)陌生人和環(huán)境的重新認(rèn)識(shí)。情感轉(zhuǎn)折體現(xiàn)在從不安與猶豫到勇氣與突破，再到偏見(jiàn)消解后的溫暖感動(dòng)，推動(dòng)了故事的情感遞進(jìn)和主題的升華。推導(dǎo)主題故事通過(guò)主人公從恐懼到勇氣的成長(zhǎng)，以及對(duì)騎士群體偏見(jiàn)的改變，探討了勇氣的力量和打破偏見(jiàn)的重要性。主人公不僅突破了自身的心理障礙，還感受到了陌生人善意的溫暖，從中領(lǐng)悟到不應(yīng)以貌取人。主題為“勇氣與善意”，強(qiáng)調(diào)克服內(nèi)心恐懼的重要性以及通過(guò)行動(dòng)理解和接納他人的必要性，從而展現(xiàn)人際互動(dòng)中信任與共鳴的力量。五、潤(rùn)參考答案Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Theywerechattingloudlyandseemedtofilleverycorneroftheplace.Myheartsankevenfurther.Iquicklyfoundanemptyseatinthebackrow,tryingtomakemyselfasinconspicuousaspossible.Iclutchedmybagtightly,constantlyglancedaroundandprayedthatnothingbadwouldhappen.Everynowandthen,Ipeekedatthebikers,wonderingwhattheyweredoinghere.Weretheygoingtocausetrouble?Thetensionintheairwaspalpable,andIregrettedmydecisiontocomealone.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Theyhadcometosupportthefundraiserforthelocalanimalshelters.Asthedocumentaryunfolded,showingtheplightoftheabandoneddogs,Isawmanyofthebikerswipingawaytears.TheywereasmovedasIwasbytheheartwarmingandheartbreakingstories.Duringtheintermission,someofthemevencameovertome,smilingkindlyandaskingifIwasenjoyingthefilm.Theirtoughexteriorshidbig,softhearts.IfeltashamedofmyinitialfearandwastrulygratefulthatIhaddecidedtocome.Wespenttherestoftheeveningsharingourloveforanimalsanddiscussingwaystohelp.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了作者在費(fèi)城參加會(huì)議期間，看到酒店附近劇院有一場(chǎng)關(guān)于動(dòng)物救助站救助流浪狗的紀(jì)錄片放映及籌款活動(dòng)，作者因喜愛(ài)動(dòng)物想去參加，卻在劇院外看到一群看起來(lái)兇巴巴的摩托騎手，猶豫后還是進(jìn)入劇院，希望電影結(jié)束時(shí)騎手們已離開(kāi)?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句“我匆匆走進(jìn)劇院，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有更多的騎手?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼?xiě)作者進(jìn)入劇院后，面對(duì)更多騎手時(shí)內(nèi)心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的試圖讓自己安全、不引人注意的行動(dòng)，比如找角落座位、緊緊抓包、頻繁觀察騎手等，展現(xiàn)當(dāng)時(shí)緊張氛圍。②由第二段首句“電影開(kāi)始時(shí)，我意識(shí)到這些騎手是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救援組織?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼?xiě)電影播放過(guò)程中作者看到騎手們被紀(jì)錄片觸動(dòng)的表現(xiàn)，以及中場(chǎng)休息時(shí)騎手們與作者友好互動(dòng)的情景，體現(xiàn)出騎手們外表與內(nèi)心的反差，突顯溫暖主題。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：進(jìn)入劇院，遇到更多騎手——內(nèi)心恐懼找座躲避——電影開(kāi)場(chǎng)，知曉騎手身份——觀影中騎手真情流露——中場(chǎng)休息友好交流3.詞匯激活：行為類：①緊握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize②偷看：peekat/stealalookat/glanceat③支持：support/back/uphold/advocate情緒類：①感動(dòng)：moved/touched/affected②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Everynowandthen,Ipeekedatthebikers,wonderingwhattheyweredoinghere.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)和what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Asthedocumentaryunfolded,showingtheplightoftheabandoneddogs,Isawmanyofthebikerswipingawaytears.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ))【讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)真題滿分語(yǔ)料】滿分語(yǔ)料一、無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、情感、自然現(xiàn)象、動(dòng)作行為類名詞作主語(yǔ)）1.MyheartsankandIfeltlikeIhadwalkedintoalion'sden.1.我的心沉了下去，感覺(jué)自己好像走進(jìn)了獅子窩。2.AwaveofpanicsweptovermeasInoticedaseaofbikers,allwearinginsignia.2.當(dāng)我注意到一大群騎自行車的人時(shí)，一陣恐慌席卷了我，他們都戴著徽章。3.Theirtoughappearancedidn’tseemtomatchthepeacefulatmosphereinsidethetheater.3.他們強(qiáng)硬的外表似乎與劇院里的寧?kù)o氣氛不相稱。4.ThefearIhadfeltearlierfaded,replacedbyadeeprespectfortheirdedicationandkindness.4.我早些時(shí)候感到的恐懼消失了，取而代之的是對(duì)他們的奉獻(xiàn)精神和善良的深深敬意。5.Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinmymind-maybeIhadmisjudgedthem.5.他們出乎意料的舉動(dòng)在我心中播下了懷疑的種子——也許我誤判了他們。6.Feartookovermeinaninstant,soIheldmywalletreallytightandtriedmybesttogounnoticed.6.恐懼瞬間籠罩了我，所以我緊緊地攥著錢(qián)包，盡量不被人注意。滿分語(yǔ)料二、動(dòng)作鏈（AandB型，A,BandC型）7.Iclutchedmybagtightly,constantlyglancedaroundandprayedthatnothingbadwouldhappen.7.我緊緊地抓著包，不停地環(huán)顧四周，祈禱不會(huì)發(fā)生什么壞事。8.Oneofthebikersevensmiledatmeandhandedmeabookletabouttheirrescuework.8.其中一名摩托車手甚至對(duì)我微笑，遞給我一本關(guān)于他們救援工作的小冊(cè)子。9.Touchedbytheirpassionandkindness,Iapproachedthemexpressedmyadmirationandrespect.9.我被他們的熱情和善良所感動(dòng)，走近他們表達(dá)了我的欽佩和尊重。滿分語(yǔ)料三、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)/with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)10.Withthedocumentaryon,thebikerswatchedthefilmattentively.10.隨著紀(jì)錄片的播放，摩托車手們聚精會(huì)神地看了這部電影。11.Isteeledmyselfandslidintoaseatattheback,myheartpoundinglikeadrum.11.我挺直了身子，滑到后面的座位上，我的心像鼓一樣砰砰直跳。12.Iapproachedoneofthem.“Thankyouforwhatyoudo,”Isaid,myvoicetrembling.12.我走近其中一人。“謝謝你所做的一切，”我說(shuō)，聲音顫抖。13.Withpanicwashingoverme,myheartsank,regrettingIshouldhaverushedbacktothehotel.13.我驚慌失措，心沉了下去，后悔自己應(yīng)該趕緊回酒店。滿分語(yǔ)料四、非謂語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)（作主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)、定語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)等）14.Ikeptstealingglancesatthem,stillfeelingextremelynervous.14.我偷偷地瞥了他們一眼，仍然感到非常緊張。15.Theyorganizedthiseventtoraisefundsandawarenessfortheabandoneddogs.15.他們組織了這次活動(dòng)，為被遺棄的狗籌集資金和提高認(rèn)識(shí)。16.Overwhelmedbyamixtureofconfusionandworry,Iwaitedforthefilmtostart.16.困惑和擔(dān)憂交織在一起，我等待著電影的開(kāi)始。17.Takingadeepbreath,Imanagedtofindanemptyseatasfarawayfromthemaspossible.17.我深吸一口氣，設(shè)法找到了一個(gè)離他們盡可能遠(yuǎn)的空座位。18.Wespenttherestoftheeveningsharingourloveforanimalsanddiscussingwaystohelp.18.我們花了剩下的時(shí)間分享我們對(duì)動(dòng)物的愛(ài)，并討論如何提供幫助。19.HoldingmywallettightlyIseatedmyselfatthebackofthetheater,tryingtoremainunnoticed.19.我緊緊地握著錢(qián)包，坐在劇院后面，盡量不被人注意。滿分語(yǔ)料五、形容詞/副詞開(kāi)頭20.Surprisedandamazed,Inoticedthatallthebikerswereallinanorderlymanner.20.我驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)，所有的騎手都很有序。21.Unabletocontainmyemotion,Iwastouchedtotears.21.我無(wú)法控制自己的情緒，感動(dòng)得流下了眼淚。滿分語(yǔ)料六、特殊句式（倒裝+強(qiáng)調(diào)+省略）22.NosoonerhadIsettledinthanInoticedabikergentlypettingasmalldogbyhisside.22.我剛安頓下來(lái)，就注意到一個(gè)騎自行車的人輕輕地?fù)崦磉叺囊恢恍」贰?3.StillnervousasIwas,Itriedtocalmmyselfdown,waitingforthefilmtostart.23.盡管我仍然很緊張，但我還是努力讓自己冷靜下來(lái)，等待電影開(kāi)始。24.LittledidIknowthattheywereheretosupportthelocalanimalshelters.24.我?guī)缀醪恢浪麄儊?lái)這里支持當(dāng)?shù)氐膭?dòng)物收容所。25.NotonlydidIlearnnottojudgeapersonbytheirlooks,butalsoIencounteredbikersmakingtheworldbetterforanimals.25.我不僅學(xué)會(huì)了不以貌取人，還遇到了為動(dòng)物創(chuàng)造更美好世界的摩托車手。滿分語(yǔ)料七、介詞短語(yǔ)位于句首26.Despitetheirtoughappearance,theyweren’tasdangerousastheylooked.26.盡管他們外表強(qiáng)硬，但并不像看上去那么危險(xiǎn)。27.Atthesightofscenes,mypreviouspanicgavewaytorespect.27.看到這些場(chǎng)景，我之前的恐慌讓位于尊重。28.Insteadofbeingscary,theywereworkingtomaketheworldabetterplaceforthehelplessanimals.28.他們非但沒(méi)有表現(xiàn)出恐懼，反而致力于讓世界變得更適合無(wú)助的動(dòng)物。滿分語(yǔ)料八、環(huán)境描寫(xiě)29.Thelightdimmingdown,Ihadnochoicebuttowatchthefilmwithafrightenedheart.29.燈光變暗了，我別無(wú)選擇，只能帶著一顆害怕的心看電影。30.Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andimpolitestaresmademyheartpoundevenfaster.30.皮夾克、沉重的靴子和無(wú)禮的眼神讓我心跳得更快。滿分語(yǔ)料九、主從復(fù)合句31.IfeltashamedofmyinitialfearandwastrulygratefulthatIhaddecidedtocome.31.我為最初的恐懼感到羞愧，并對(duì)自己決定來(lái)感到非常感激。32.Ihesitatedforamomentatthedoor,unsurewhetherIshouldstayorleave.32.我在門(mén)口猶豫了一會(huì)兒，不確定是留下還是離開(kāi)。33.Bythetimethecreditsrolled,myperceptionofthesemenhadshiftedentirely.33.當(dāng)學(xué)分滾動(dòng)時(shí)，我對(duì)這些人的看法已經(jīng)完全改變了。34.Themomenttheyapproached,Igotalmostchoked,hardtobreath.34.他們走近的那一刻，我?guī)缀醮贿^(guò)氣來(lái)。滿分語(yǔ)料十、主題升華句35.ItwasnotuntilthenthatIreallyunderstood“don’tjudgeabookbyitscover”.35.直到那時(shí)，我才真正明白“不要以貌取人”。36.AsenseofreliefwashedovermeasIrealizedthatthesebikerswerethereforanoblecause.36.當(dāng)我意識(shí)到這些騎自行車的人是為了崇高的事業(yè)而來(lái)時(shí)，一種解脫感涌上心頭。37.IwastouchedbytheirloveforanimalsandgladthatIhadn'tletmyfearstopmefromcoming.37.他們對(duì)動(dòng)物的熱愛(ài)讓我感動(dòng)，我很高興我沒(méi)有讓恐懼阻止我來(lái)。38.AsIwalkedoutofthetheater,Ilookedbackatthebikerswithnewfoundrespectandadmiration.38.當(dāng)我走出劇院時(shí)，我?guī)е碌淖鹬睾蜌J佩回頭看了看那些騎自行車的人。39.ItwasthroughthisbraveadventurethatIgotacquaintedwiththeseenthusiasticanimalrescuers.39.正是通過(guò)這次勇敢的冒險(xiǎn)，我結(jié)識(shí)了這些熱情的動(dòng)物救援人員。40.Irealizedthatcourageisnotonlyaboutfacingdangerbutalsoaboutseekingthegoodnessinothers.40.我意識(shí)到，勇氣不僅意味著面對(duì)危險(xiǎn)，還意味著尋求他人的善良。【讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)真題好題調(diào)研】1．（24-25高三下·山東·開(kāi)學(xué)考試）犬吠傳希望，忠誠(chéng)救主歸閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。GrgaBrkieneverexpectedthatamountain-climbingtripwouldputhiminsuchadesperatesituation.ThatSunday,whileclimbingthehighestpeakoftheVelebitmountainrange,whichwasabout5,800feetabovecoastline,heaccidentallyslippedandfellnearly500feetdownasnowyslope(斜坡).Thefallcausedhislegtobeseverelybrokenandhecouldn’tmoveatall.Hewasfilledwithfear,knowingclearlythatifnoonecametorescuehim,hemightdieofthefreezingtemperatureinthissnowyplace.Fortunately,twonearbyhikersspottedBrkeandhiseight-month-oldAlaskanmalamute(阿拉斯加犬),North,atthebottomoftheslope.However,theycouldn’treachthemsafely.Afterabriefdiscussion,theyknewtheyhadnochoicebuttorushoffinsearchofprofessionalrescuers.Beforetheyleft,theydroppedsomenecessarysuppliestothebottomoftheslopesothatBrkiccouldkeephisstrengthandenergy.Inspiteofthat,Brkiccouldn’thelpbeingshivering(顫抖)inthesnowwiththetemperaturegettinglowerandlower.Atthiscriticalmoment,North,sensingitsmaster’sgreatdanger,immediatelysprangintoaction.ItcircledaroundBrkicafewtimes,asifassessingthebestwaytohelp.Then,withagentleyetdeterminedmotion,itslowlyandcarefullylaiditselfoverBrkie’sbody,makingsuretocoverasmuchofhimaspossible.AsanAlaskanmalamute,Northarenaturallyresistanttocold,whosewaterproofdoublecoatscankeepitwarmevenintemperaturesaslowas-20°F.Nowitwaslikeawarmlittlesun,tightlyguardingBrkie.Northremainedperfectlystill,andwasalerttoanysignsofapproachinghelporpotentialdanger,asifithadtakenonthegreatresponsibilityofbeingBrkie’sguardianandprotectinghismasterfromanypossibledanger.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。BeforeBrkiclostconsciousness(意識(shí)),heheardNorthbarkingloudly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,therescuersmanagedtosaveandrushBrkietothehospitalwithNorth.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】BeforeBrkiclostconsciousness,heheardNorthbarkingloudly.Thebarkingwasasignalofhopewhichechoedthroughthemountains,leadingtherescuerstofindthem.WhentheyfoundBrkic,theyweresurprisedtofindthatNorthwasstillwarminghismasterwithoutanymovementuntilitrealizedthattheywereheretohelp.Therescuersquicklylaunchedtherescueoperation.TheycarefullyfixedBrkic'sbrokenlegwithasplint,thengentlyliftedhimontoastretcher.Duringthewholeprocess,Northrefusedtobeseparatedfromitsownerandwatchedpatiently.Finally,thererescuersmanagedtosaveandrushBrkictothehospitalwithNorth.Inthehospital,BrkicunderwentanemergencyoperationwhileNorthwasunharmed.ThemomentBrkicregainedconsciousness,hethankedthosekindpeopleandsearchedforNorth,whowasalsolookingathimwiththosewarmandloyaleyes.BrkicreachedouthishandweaklytopetNorth,withhisvoicechokedwithemotionashewhisperedwordsofloveandthanks.Infaceoftheemergency,itwasloyaltyandkindnessthatcrossallboundariesandbroughthopeofsurvival.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了GrgaBrkie帶著阿拉斯加犬North爬山時(shí)不小心摔倒，從雪坡上滑下來(lái)受傷，無(wú)法動(dòng)彈，幸好附近的兩名徒步旅行者在斜坡底部發(fā)現(xiàn)了他們，但是他們無(wú)法到達(dá)那里，只能趕緊去尋找專業(yè)的救援人員，隨著氣溫越來(lái)越低，Brkic忍不住在雪地里打哆嗦，North覺(jué)察到主人的危險(xiǎn)情況，溫柔地躺在Brkie身上為他保暖，并保持著警惕，保護(hù)他的主人免受任何可能的危險(xiǎn)。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“在Brkie失去知覺(jué)之前，他聽(tīng)到North在大聲吠叫。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)North的叫聲引導(dǎo)救援人員找到他們并展開(kāi)救援。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“最后，救援人員設(shè)法救出了Brkic，并將其與North一起送往醫(yī)院?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)B(tài)rkic經(jīng)過(guò)手術(shù)后恢復(fù)知覺(jué)，感激那些善良的人和忠誠(chéng)的North。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：救援人員發(fā)現(xiàn)Brkic和North——展開(kāi)救援——送到醫(yī)院——恢復(fù)知覺(jué)——感激3.詞匯激活行為類①帶領(lǐng)：lead/direct②意識(shí)到：realize/beaware③尋找：searchfor/lookfor情緒類①驚訝：surprised/astonished②感謝：thanks/appreciation【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Thebarkingwasasignalofhopewhichechoedthroughthemountains,leadingtherescuerstofindthem.（運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】ThemomentBrkicregainedconsciousness,hethankedthosekindpeopleandsearchedforNorth,whowasalsolookingathimwiththosewarmandloyaleyes.（運(yùn)用了themoment引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型3】BrkicreachedouthishandweaklytopetNorth,withhisvoicechokedwithemotionashewhisperedwordsofloveandthanks.（運(yùn)用了獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)以及從屬連詞as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）2．（23-24高三上·浙江·開(kāi)學(xué)考試）寶寶落水，狗狗上演生死救援閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AFour-leggedGuardianAngelSnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach.Ihadjustcleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjob,andnowourfinancialsituationwasdepressing.Finally,Ihadputthehomeonthemarket.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane(大丹犬),Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.ThethoughtoflosingthedogandourbeautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.Deepindiscouragement,Isattypingupmyapplicationletters.OutofthecornerofmyeyeIcouldseemythirteen-month-oldson,Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentleBrigitte.ItseemedasifBrigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamilyandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanion.BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmaspackageshadarrived.

Irantothedoorbutnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.Thinkingofthese,Icouldn’thelpsighingandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn’ttypedmorethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingandrunningbackandforthtotheslidingglassdooroverlookingourpool.Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,IrealizedForrestwasnowheretobeseen.

Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文1】ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Breathlessandastonished,IwatchedBrigittemusteringhercouragetoswimtowardsmyson,whowasstrugglingdesperatelyintheicywater.Almostmeanwhile,Isprangintoaction.Witheverypowerfulstroke,IgotclosetowhereForrestwasfloating.Fortunately,hewasabouttosinkwhenIgrabbedhimbythearmanddraggedhimtotheshallowendofthepool,withBrigittepaddlingalongside,concernobviousinherbigandintelligenteyes.ThemomentIgotmyboyout,ourbeloveddogbouncedaroundhim,constantlylickinghispalefaceasiftowarmhim.Voicetrembling,Icalled911andsoonwewererushedtothenearesthospital.Everysecondcounted!Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.Atthis,Iheavedasighofrelief.Onarrivinghome,ourdogBrigitteleapedhighuptogiveuswarmandwetkisses,wagginghertailcheerfully.Lookingdirectlyintohereyeswithgratitudeandabitofguilt,Iscoopedherupandheldherclosetomychest,unwillingtolethergoforasingleminute.ItwasthenthatIsuddenlybecameawarethatlifesometimescanbecruelandmiserable,buttherewasalwayssomeoneorsomethingguidingyou,protectingyou,andaccompanyingyouwithunconditionalloveandloyalty.Ourdogwasjustourguardianangel,shatteringmydespairaboutlosingourhomeandguidingusoutoftrouble.HowcouldIleaveher?【滿分范文2】ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.The