高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：送花之行傳遞溫暖與愛

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)送花之行，傳遞溫暖與愛1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ItwassomewherebetweenspringandsummermymomandIweredrivingthroughthecountrysideBackthenIwas13yearsoldandalwaysfeltunhappywithMom.ButlittledidIknowthatthistripwasgoingtobeaspecialone．Apotofflowerssatinthebackseat,whoseheavenlyscentfilledthecar．Suddenly,inthemiddleofnowhere,mymompulledover．“Whatareyoudoing?”Icried,fearingthatthecarhadbrokendownandwe’dbestuckthere,sofarfromhome.Butthatwasn’tthecase.Mymomhoppedoutofthecar,grabbingtheflowersfromthebackseat．“It’lljustbeaminute，”shecalledbackthroughtheopenwindows．4續(xù)寫原文Myeyesimpatientlyskimmedtheedgeoftheroadbeforesettlingonalittlesignshowingthatitwasanursinghome.Ilookedbacktothebuilding,somewhatannoyed,asmymomreappeared—empty-handed．Beforeshestartedthecar,curiositydrovemetoask，“Doyouknowsomeonethere?”Sheshookherhead．“Thenwhatdidyoudowiththeflowers?”Shesmiledslightly，“Igavethemtothereceptionist(前臺(tái)接待員).”“What?”Shelaughedatmyconfusion．“Itoldthereceptionisttogivetheflowerstowhoeverneededthem,especiallywhohasn’tgottenanyinawhile．”5續(xù)寫原文Ikeptsilentforamoment.Notlongafterwecontinuedourdriving,Ispokeagain，“Didyouleaveyourname?”Tothissheansweredinstantly，“No.Leavingflowersthereforsomeonewhowillappreciatethemmakesmefeelgood,whichisenoughofathankforme.”Suddenly,stillthinkingaboutMom’sdeeds,Iheardsomethingburstloudly.Itwasourcarthatbrokedown!Nothingcouldbeworse,becauseneithermymomnorIunderstoodhowtorepairit,andwedidn’tknowwherethegaragewas.Italsoseemedimpossibletowaitforanypasser-by,sincewehadseensofewalongtheway．6段首句Paragraph1：Wewereworryingaboutwhatcouldbedone.Paragraph2：Aswedrovealong,aflowershopcameintosightontheroad.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了13歲的“我”和媽媽開車穿行在鄉(xiāng)村，途中媽媽突然停車，將后座的花送給養(yǎng)老院前臺(tái)接待員，讓其轉(zhuǎn)交給有需要的人?！拔摇睂?duì)此感到困惑，媽媽表示不求回報(bào)，送花的行為本身就讓她開心。之后車突然拋錨，正當(dāng)“我們”發(fā)愁時(shí)，養(yǎng)老院的接待員開車出現(xiàn)并幫忙叫來修理工。修好車后，“我們”繼續(xù)前行，路上看到花店，媽媽又有了新舉動(dòng)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Wewereworryingaboutwhatcouldbedone.我們正為束手無策而發(fā)愁，滿心焦慮地張望著四周。就在這時(shí)，一輛車緩緩?fù)Ｔ诹宋覀兩砗?。車門打開，走下來的竟然是養(yǎng)老院的那位接待員。她微笑著說，看到我們的車停在這兒，放心不下就過來看看。得知我們的車壞了，她二話不說，立刻拿出手機(jī)聯(lián)系了修理工。在等待的過程中，她興致勃勃地給我們講述著老人們收到花時(shí)那驚喜又開心的模樣，每個(gè)人的臉上都洋溢著幸福的笑容。不一會(huì)兒，修理工趕到了，熟練地檢查一番后，開始動(dòng)手修理。在他的努力下，車子很快就修好了。我們滿心感激，不住地向他們道謝。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Aswedrovealong,aflowershopcameintosightontheroad.我們重新上路，沿著公路繼續(xù)前行。突然，一家花店映入眼簾。媽媽像是被什么吸引住了，毫不猶豫地把車停在了花店門口。她快步走進(jìn)花店，在花束間仔細(xì)挑選，眼神中透著堅(jiān)定。不一會(huì)兒，她捧著一束嬌艷欲滴的鮮花走了出來。“孩子，咱們?cè)偃ソo養(yǎng)老院的老人們送些溫暖。”媽媽說道。于是，我們?cè)俅蝸淼金B(yǎng)老院。這一次，我和媽媽一起走進(jìn)養(yǎng)老院，將鮮花送到老人們手中。看著他們臉上綻放出的笑容，我也真切地感受到了給予的快樂。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Wewereworryingaboutwhatcouldbedone.Justthen,acarpulledupbehindus.Toourgreatsurprise,itwasthereceptionistfromthenursinghome.Shesaidshenoticedourcarstoppedontheroadandwasconcerned,soshecametocheck.Afterlearningaboutourcartrouble,sheimmediatelytookoutherphoneandcalledamechanic.Whilewaiting,shetoldushowtheflowerswesenthadbroughtsomuchjoytotheelderly.Theirfaceslitupwithhappinesswhentheyreceivedtheflowers.Soon,themechanicarrived.Afterathoroughinspection,hegotdowntowork.Withhisprofessionalskills,hefixedthecarinnotime.Wewereextremelygratefulandthankedthemsincerely.14范文呈現(xiàn)Aswedrovealong,aflowershopcameintosightontheroad.Withouthesitation,Mompulledover.Shewalkedintotheflowershop,lookingaroundcarefully.Hereyessparkledwithdeterminationassheselectedabeautifulbouquetoffreshflowers."Let'sbringmorehappinesstothenursinghome,"Momsaid.Thenwedrovebacktothenursinghome.Thistime,IwalkedintothenursinghomewithMom.Wehandedtheflowerstotheelderlyonebyone.Theirfaceswerefilledwithsmiles,andItrulyfeltthejoyofgiving.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Wewerefrettingoverwhatcouldbedone.Justthen,avehiclepulledupbehindus.Toourutterastonishment,itwasnoneotherthanthereceptionistfromthenursinghome.Sheexplainedthatshehadspottedourcarstationaryontheroadsideand,filledwithconcern,decidedtocomeoverandseeifweneededassistance.Uponlearningofourautomotivepredicament,shepromptlywhippedoutherphoneandsummonedamechanic.Aswewaited,sheregaleduswithtalesofhowtheflowerswehaddeliveredhadtransformedthefacesoftheelderlyresidents.Theircountenanceshadbeenilluminatedwithsheerdelightuponreceivingthefloralgifts.Beforelong,themechanicarrived.Afterameticulousexamination,hesettoworkwithgusto.Thankstohisexpertise,thecarwasrepairedinajiffy.Overwhelmedwithgratitude,weexpressedourheartfeltthankstobothofthem.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Aswemotoredalong,aflowershopcameintoviewontheroad.Withouttheslightesthesitation,Momsteeredthecartothecurb.Shestrodeintothefloweremporium,hereyesscanningthedisplaysintently.Withadeterminedglintinhereyes,shecarefullyselectedaresplendentbouquetoffreshblooms."Let'sbestowevenmorehappinessupontheresidentsofthenursinghome,"Momdeclared.Subsequently,wemadeourwaybacktothenursinghome.Thistime,IaccompaniedMomasweenteredtheestablis