讀后續(xù)寫+從傲慢到謙遜：一場(chǎng)生日帶來的心靈蛻變+講義 高中畢業(yè)生上學(xué)期第一次復(fù)習(xí)統(tǒng)一檢測(cè)英語試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TherewasalittlegirlnamedRadha,whoseparentswereextremelywealthy.Theyhadblessedherwithallthetoysandclothesofallcolorsandeverythingforherenjoyment.Shewastheappleofherparents’eyes.Theymadesurethatshehadallthecomfortsinlife.AnannystayedwithRadhathewholedaytotakecareofher.Giventheirwealthandbusyschedule,theparentsdidn’thavemuchtimetospendwiththeirlittleprincess.Notrealizingwhatshewasmissinginherlife,shebecameanarrogant(傲慢的)andoverprotectivegirl.Sheneverspokegentlywithpeopleofpoorlivingconditionsandalwaysmadefunoftheirpoverty.AsRadha’sbirthdaywasapproaching,shewasexcitedandlookedforwardtocelebratingthisspecialdaywithherfamilyandfriends.Onthedayofthebirthday,allthepreparationsforthecelebrationinthehousewerecarefullyarrangedbythenanny.Radha’sexcitementwasoverflowing,andshecouldhardlystopforamoment.Herroomwasfullydecorated,theballoonsandribbonsaddedtothefestiveatmosphere,andthesweetnessofthecakeinthekitchenmadehereagertostartcelebrating.Atthepartyintheeveningallofherfriendsbegantogathertowatchthecakebeingcut.Buttoherdisappointment,neitherofherparentsreturnedfromtheofficeandwerewithheronherspecialday.Shefeltsadtothecoreandwenttotheroomcryinguncontrollably.Coincidentallyafriendofherswhosefunshemadeallthetime,cametoherroomtowishherbirthday.SeeingRadhaburstintotears,shequicklyandgentlyaskedthereason.Shewonderedwhyherfriendwouldbesosadonthisdayofcelebration.So,Radhatoldallherhearttoherfriend.Asithappened,thenextdaywasherfriend’sbirthday.Tocelebratetheirbirthdaystogether,herfriendinvitedRadhatoherhome.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Radhaacceptedherfriend’sinvitation.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Fromthatdayon,Radhamadeuphermindtochangeherself.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意小女孩拉達(dá)家境富裕，父母為她提供了各種物質(zhì)享受，還有保姆全天照顧她。但由于父母忙碌，很少有時(shí)間陪伴她，這讓拉達(dá)變得傲慢且過度自我保護(hù)，她還常常嘲笑生活貧困的人。拉達(dá)生日時(shí)，滿心期待與父母朋友慶祝，可父母卻因工作未歸，她傷心痛哭。此時(shí)，曾被她嘲笑的朋友來祝她生日快樂，得知緣由后，因第二天是這位朋友的生日，便邀請(qǐng)拉達(dá)去自己家一起慶祝。故事山分析開端：拉達(dá)家庭富裕但缺少父母陪伴，性格傲慢，常嘲笑窮人。發(fā)展：拉達(dá)生日，父母未歸，她很傷心，被她嘲笑過的朋友來祝她生日快樂并邀請(qǐng)她去自己家一起慶祝生日。高潮：拉達(dá)接受朋友邀請(qǐng)去其家中，這是故事的關(guān)鍵轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，在朋友家的經(jīng)歷將對(duì)拉達(dá)產(chǎn)生重要影響。結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：要展現(xiàn)拉達(dá)在朋友家的所見所聞，以及這些經(jīng)歷如何促使她下定決心改變自己，體現(xiàn)成長(zhǎng)與感悟的主題。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)拉達(dá)家庭富裕但父母忙碌，缺少陪伴：在續(xù)寫中，拉達(dá)在朋友家可能會(huì)看到朋友家庭雖不富裕但充滿溫暖陪伴，形成對(duì)比，讓拉達(dá)意識(shí)到自己真正缺失的東西。拉達(dá)傲慢且嘲笑窮人：在續(xù)寫中，朋友家的生活場(chǎng)景和朋友的態(tài)度可能會(huì)讓拉達(dá)對(duì)自己以往的行為感到羞愧，從而引發(fā)她的改變。拉達(dá)生日父母未歸，她很傷心：在續(xù)寫中，這會(huì)成為她去朋友家的直接原因，而在朋友家的經(jīng)歷也會(huì)治愈她此時(shí)的傷心，同時(shí)成為她改變的契機(jī)。朋友邀請(qǐng)拉達(dá)去自己家慶祝生日：在續(xù)寫中，會(huì)詳細(xì)描述拉達(dá)在朋友家的經(jīng)歷，這是促使她改變的關(guān)鍵情節(jié)。朋友曾被拉達(dá)嘲笑：在續(xù)寫中，朋友不計(jì)前嫌的態(tài)度會(huì)讓拉達(dá)深受觸動(dòng)，對(duì)她的改變起到推動(dòng)作用。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：詳細(xì)描述拉達(dá)在朋友家的所見所聞，如朋友家雖然簡(jiǎn)陋但充滿溫馨，朋友的家人熱情友善，大家一起用心準(zhǔn)備生日，與拉達(dá)自己生日時(shí)的冷清形成鮮明對(duì)比，突出朋友家生活的溫暖和親情的珍貴。第二段：描述拉達(dá)看到朋友家的場(chǎng)景后內(nèi)心的觸動(dòng)和反思，她意識(shí)到自己以往的錯(cuò)誤，決定改變自己，如不再傲慢，學(xué)會(huì)尊重他人，珍惜身邊的人等，體現(xiàn)她的成長(zhǎng)和積極變化。情感線起初，拉達(dá)因生日父母缺席而極度傷心，接受朋友邀請(qǐng)時(shí)或許帶著一絲無奈和好奇。到了朋友家，看到朋友家的溫馨場(chǎng)景，她從驚訝、羨慕逐漸轉(zhuǎn)為羞愧和反思。在內(nèi)心掙扎后，她下定決心改變，此時(shí)的她充滿了對(duì)未來改變自己的期待和決心，完成了從被物質(zhì)包圍卻內(nèi)心空虛到渴望精神富足的情感轉(zhuǎn)變。故事線拉達(dá)家庭富裕但缺父母陪伴，性格傲慢，常嘲笑窮人。拉達(dá)生日父母未歸，她傷心，被她嘲笑的朋友來祝她生日快樂并邀請(qǐng)她去自己家。拉達(dá)接受朋友邀請(qǐng)去朋友家。拉達(dá)在朋友家看到溫馨的場(chǎng)景，與自己家形成對(duì)比。拉達(dá)內(nèi)心觸動(dòng)，反思自己的行為。拉達(dá)決定改變自己，變得更好。主旨升華句ThisexperiencetaughtRadhathattruehappinessliesnotinmaterialwealthbutinthewarmthoffamilyandthekindnessoffriends,andthateveryonedeservesrespectregardlessoftheirfinancialsituation.（這次經(jīng)歷教會(huì)拉達(dá)，真正的幸福不在于物質(zhì)財(cái)富，而在于家庭的溫暖和朋友的善意，并且每個(gè)人，無論經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況如何，都值得被尊重。）Throughthisjourney,Radharealizedthattheloveandtogethernessshehadbeenmissingwerefarmorepreciousthanallthetoysandcomfortsintheworld,andthatherarrogancehadblindedhertothebeautyofsimplejoys.（通過這次經(jīng)歷，拉達(dá)意識(shí)到她一直缺失的愛和團(tuán)聚遠(yuǎn)比世界上所有的玩具和舒適更珍貴，她的傲慢讓她忽視了簡(jiǎn)單快樂的美好。）Intheend,Radhaunderstoodthatahumbleheartandakindspiritcancreateamorefulfillinglifethanwealthevercould,andthatthemostvaluablegiftsinlifearetheonesthatmoneycan'tbuy.（最后，拉達(dá)明白了一顆謙遜的心和善良的精神能創(chuàng)造比財(cái)富更充實(shí)的生活，生活中最珍貴的禮物是金錢買不到的。）Thisstoryoftransformationshowsthateventhemostspoiledandarrogantpersoncanbechangedbyasimpleactofkindnessandthediscoveryoftruevalues,andthatit'snevertoolatetobecomeabetterperson.（這個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)變的故事表明，即使是最被寵壞和傲慢的人，也能被一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善舉和對(duì)真正價(jià)值的發(fā)現(xiàn)所改變，成為一個(gè)更好的人永遠(yuǎn)不晚。）Radha'sexperiencemadeherawarethatinthepursuitofahappylife,weshouldcherishthepeoplearoundus,respectthediversityoflife,andlearntofindjoyinthesimplethings,forthesearethetruetreasuresoflife.（拉達(dá)的經(jīng)歷讓她意識(shí)到，在追求幸福生活的過程中，我們應(yīng)該珍惜身邊的人，尊重生活的多樣性，學(xué)會(huì)在簡(jiǎn)單的事物中找到快樂，因?yàn)檫@些才是生活真正的財(cái)富。）寫作示范一Radhaacceptedherfriend’sinvitation.Whenshearrivedatherfriend’shome,shewassurprisedbythesimpleyetcozyenvironment.Thehousewassmall,butitwasfilledwithlaughterandlove.Herfriend’sparentsgreetedherwarmlyandwelcomedherwithopenarms.Theyspentthewholedaypreparingforthebirthdaypartytogether,cookingdeliciousfoodandmakingasimplebutheartfeltbirthdaycake.Radhawatchedasthefamilyworkedtogether,sharingstoriesandjokes,andshecouldn'thelpbutfeelapangofenvy.Thiswassodifferentfromherownhome,whereeverythingwasluxuriousbutlackedthewarmthoffamily.Fromthatdayon,Radhamadeuphermindtochangeherself.Sherealizedhowwrongshehadbeentolookdownonothersbecauseoftheirpoverty.Shestartedtotreateveryonearoundherwithkindnessandrespect,especiallythoselessfortunate.Shealsomademoreeffortstospendtimewithherownparents,understandingtheimportanceoffamily.Insteadofaskingformoretoys,shecherishedthemomentsshespentwithherlovedones.Radhabecameamorehumbleandlovinggirl,andherlifewasfilledwithanewkindofhappiness.寫作示范二Radhaacceptedherfriend’sinvitation.Asshesteppedintoherfriend'shouse,theairwasfilledwiththesweetsmellofhome-cookedfood.Thewallsweredecoratedwithhand-drawnpicturesmadebyherfriendandhersiblings,whichradiatedauniquecharm.Duringtheparty,Radhasawhowherfriend'sfamilycelebratedwithgreatenthusiasmdespitetheirlimitedresources.Theyplayedsimplegamestogether,andeveryoneparticipatedwholeheartedly.Radhawasdeeplytouchedbythestrongbondamongthem.Itmadeherrealizehowemptyherownlifewas,filledwithexpensivethingsbutlackingrealconnection.Fromthatdayon,Radhamadeuphermindtochangeherself.Sheapologizedtothoseshehadoncemadefunofandstartedtoengageinvolunteerworktohelpthepoor.Athome,shewouldwaitforherparentspatiently,andwhentheywereback,shewouldshareherdaywiththem.Shelearnedtoappreciatethelittlethingsinlife,likeasmilefromastrangerorakindwordfromafriend.Radha'stransformationwasnotonlynoticedbyherfriendsandfamilybutalsobroughtherasenseoffulfillmentshehadneverfeltbefore.【答案】Radhaacceptedherfriend’sinvitation.Shefeltamixofexcitementandnervousnessasshepreparedtovisitherfriend’shome.Whenshearrived,shewasgreetedwithwarmthandkindness.Thesimpledecorationsandthedelicioushome