高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：祖孫菜園記：耐心種下希望收獲成長與美味+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)祖孫菜園記：耐心種下希望，收獲成長與美味1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onasunnyearlyspringmorning,Anna,togetherwithhergrandchildrenJulie,FredandErik,wasplayinghappilyinthebackyard.Whileplaying,Annasaidtothekids,“Iamgoingtoplantsomethinginthegarden.Whowouldliketohelpme?”“Whatareyougoingtoplant,Grandma?”askedJulie.“Ilikecharming,bright-coloredroses.”“ButIlikelively,big,yellowsunflowers!”saidFred.“Well,I’mgoingtoplantsomevegetablessothatwecanhavefreshvegetablestoeatwhentheyareready,”saidAnna.“Howlongdoesthattake?”askedErik.Helikedvegetablessometimes,especiallytomatoes.“Itwilltakeseveralmonthsbeforeanythingisreadytoeat,”answeredAnna.Thekidsweresurprised.4續(xù)寫原文“Severalmonths?Whywouldyoudoallthatworkandthenhavetowaitsolong?”askedJulie.“Whynotjustgotothestoreandbuythem?”“Patience,mysweeties!Don’tyouknowfoodalwaystastesbestwhenyougrowityourself?”repliedAnna.“Andifallofyoucometohelp,itwon’tbetoomuchwork.”“I’llhelpyou,Grandma,”offeredErik.HeputdownthebasketballandwenttolookatthegardeningtoolsAnnahadlaidout.“Whatshouldwedofirst?”FredandJuliecameovertohavealook,too.5續(xù)寫原文Firstly,AnnataughtErikhowtouseatrowel(小鏟子)todigrowsofsmallholesfortheseeds.Next,sheshowedJuliehowtopourtheseedsintoeachholecarefully.AndthenitwasFred’sjobtocoveruptheholeswithsoillittlebylittle.Finally,JuliewrotethevegetablenamesonsticksthatErikpushedintotheground.“Thiswaywecanrememberwhichvegetableseedswehaveplanted,”saidAnna.Afterplantingeverything,thekidstookturnsinfillingupthewateringpotsothatAnnacouldmakethesoilniceandwetfortheseedstostarttogrow.“Fromnowon,wejustwaterthemalittleeachday,andwithsometimeandsunshine,we’llhavesomedeliciousthingstoeatinthesummer,”saidAnna.6段首句Paragraph1:Everytimethekidscametovisit,theywoulddashintothegardenasfastaspossible.Paragraph2:Eventually,Annasaid,“Itwasabouttimeforthefirstharvest.”7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9在一個(gè)陽光明媚的早春清晨，安娜和孫子孫女朱莉、弗雷德、埃里克在后院玩耍。安娜表示要在花園里種些東西，孩子們紛紛詢問種什么，朱莉喜歡玫瑰，弗雷德喜歡向日葵，而安娜打算種蔬菜，這樣成熟后就能吃到新鮮蔬菜。孩子們得知蔬菜要幾個(gè)月才能成熟，對此感到驚訝，朱莉甚至提議直接去商店買。安娜告訴孩子們自己種的食物味道更好，還鼓勵(lì)他們幫忙。埃里克率先響應(yīng)，安娜教他們?nèi)绾斡眯＄P子挖洞、播種、用土覆蓋以及插標(biāo)識牌，孩子們還輪流幫忙澆水。安娜說之后每天澆點(diǎn)水，等一段時(shí)間，夏天就能吃到美味的蔬菜了。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Everytimethekidscametovisit,theywoulddashintothegardenasfastaspossible.每次孩子們來拜訪，他們都會(huì)以最快的速度沖進(jìn)花園。他們滿心期待著看到種子的變化，渴望見證生命的成長。一到花園，他們就會(huì)圍在菜畦邊，眼睛緊緊盯著那些埋著種子的地方。最初的幾天，花園里并沒有什么明顯的變化，孩子們難免有些失落，但是他們并沒有放棄。每天他們都會(huì)認(rèn)真地給種子澆水，一邊澆水一邊還會(huì)對著種子輕聲說話，仿佛在鼓勵(lì)它們快快發(fā)芽。終于，在一個(gè)陽光燦爛的早晨，他們驚喜地發(fā)現(xiàn)土里冒出了嫩綠的小芽?！翱囱?，種子發(fā)芽啦！”朱莉興奮地大喊起來。孩子們都湊了過來，眼睛里閃爍著驚喜的光芒。他們蹲下身子，仔細(xì)地觀察著這些嫩綠的小生命，用手指輕輕地觸碰著葉片，感受著生命的力量。隨著時(shí)間的推移，小芽們茁壯成長，逐漸長出了更多的葉子。孩子們開始主動(dòng)查閱資料，了解不同蔬菜的生長習(xí)性，還會(huì)向安娜請教如何給蔬菜施肥、除草。他們認(rèn)真地按照安娜的指導(dǎo)，為蔬菜提供最好的生長環(huán)境。每一次看到蔬菜有新的變化，他們都會(huì)歡呼雀躍，充滿成就感。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Eventually,Annasaid,“Itwasabouttimeforthefirstharvest.”終于，安娜說：“是時(shí)候進(jìn)行第一次收獲了。”孩子們聽到這個(gè)消息，興奮得跳了起來。他們迫不及待地拿起小籃子和工具，來到花園里?？粗矍坝粲羰[蔥的蔬菜，他們的心中充滿了自豪。朱莉小心翼翼地摘下了紅彤彤的西紅柿，弗雷德則費(fèi)力地拔出了粗壯的胡蘿卜，埃里克也收獲了嫩綠的生菜。他們一邊采摘，一邊分享著自己的喜悅?！斑@些蔬菜都是我們親手種出來的，一定特別好吃！”朱莉開心地說?；氐轿堇?，安娜和孩子們一起用收獲的蔬菜準(zhǔn)備了一頓豐盛的晚餐。餐桌上擺滿了用自家蔬菜制作的美食，有西紅柿炒雞蛋、胡蘿卜燉肉、生菜沙拉等。孩子們品嘗著自己的勞動(dòng)成果，臉上洋溢著幸福的笑容?！澳棠?，自己種的蔬菜真的太好吃了！”埃里克一邊吃一邊說。安娜微笑著看著孩子們，語重心長地說：“這就是耐心和付出的回報(bào)，通過自己的努力收獲的東西總是格外珍貴?！边@次種菜的經(jīng)歷不僅讓孩子們品嘗到了美味的蔬菜，還讓他們懂得了耐心和勞動(dòng)的意義，成為了他們童年中一段難忘的回憶。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Everytimethekidscametovisit,theywoulddashintothegardenasfastaspossible.Theywerefullofanticipation,eagertoseethechangesoftheseedsandwitnessthegrowthoflife.Assoonastheyarrivedatthegarden,theywouldgatheraroundthevegetablebeds,theireyesfixedtightlyontheplaceswheretheseedswereburied.Inthefirstfewdays,therewerenoobviouschangesinthegarden,andthekidswereinevitablyabitdisappointed.However,theydidn'tgiveup.Everyday,theywouldcarefullywatertheseeds.Whilewatering,theywouldtalksoftlytotheseeds,asifencouragingthemtosproutquickly.Finally,onasunnymorning,theywerepleasantlysurprisedtofindtendergreenshootsemergingfromthesoil."Look!Theseedshavesprouted!"Julieshoutedexcitedly.Thekidsallrushedover,theireyesshiningwithsurprise.Theysquatteddownandcarefullyobservedthesetendergreenlives,gentlytouchingtheleaveswiththeirfingers,feelingthepoweroflife.Astimewentby,theshootsgrewvigorouslyandgraduallysproutedmoreleaves.Thekidsbegantotaketheinitiativetolookupinformationtolearnaboutthegrowthhabitsofdifferentvegetables.TheywouldalsoaskAnnaforadviceonhowtofertilizeandweedthevegetables.TheycarefullyfollowedAnna'sinstructionstoprovidethebestgrowingenvironmentforthevegetables.Everytimetheysawnewchangesinthevegetables,theywouldjumpforjoyandfeelasenseofaccomplishment.14范文呈現(xiàn)Eventually,Annasaid,"Itwasabouttimeforthefirstharvest."Whenthekidsheardthisnews,theyjumpedupexcitedly.Theycouldn'twaittopickupthesmallbasketsandtoolsandwenttothegarden.Lookingatthelushvegetablesinfrontofthem,theirheartswerefilledwithpride.Juliecarefullypickedtheredtomatoes,Fredstruggledtopulloutthethickcarrots,andErikalsoharvestedthetendergreenlettuce.Astheypicked,theysharedtheirjoy."Thesevegetablesareallgrownbyourselves.Theymustbeverydelicious!"Juliesaidhappily.Backinthehouse,Annaandthekidspreparedasumptuousdinnerwiththeharvestedvegetables.Thediningtablewasfilledwithdeliciousfoodmadefromtheirownvegetables,suchasscrambledeggswithtomatoes,carrotstew,andlettucesalad.Thekidstastedthefruitsoftheirlabor,withhappysmilesontheirfaces."Grandma,thevegetableswegrewourselvesarereallydelicious!"Eriksaidwhileeating.Annasmiledandlookedatthekids,sayingearnestly,"Thisistherewardofpatienceandhardwork.Thingsobtainedthroughourowneffortsarealwaysparticularlyprecious."Thisexperienceofgrowingvegetablesnotonlyallowedthekidstotastedeliciousvegetablesbutalsomadethemunderstandthemeaningofpatienceandlabor,becominganunforgettablememoryintheirchildhood.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Everytimethekidscametovisit,theywoulddashintothegardenasfastaspossible.Filledwithanticipation,theywereeagertowitnessthemiraculoustransformationoftheseedsandtheremarkablegrowthoflife.Uponarrivingatthegarden,theywouldimmediatelygatheraroundthevegetablebeds,theireyesfixatedonthespotswheretheseedswereburied.Intheinitialdays,thegardenremainedunchanged,andthekidscouldn'thelpbutfeelatwingeofdisappointment.However,theirdeterminationneverwavered.Eachday,theywouldmeticulouslywatertheseeds,whisperingwordsofencouragementtothem,asifwillingthemtosproutsooner.Then,onaradiantmorning,theirpatiencewasrewarded.Tendergreenshootsemergedfromthesoil,triggeringawaveofexcitement."Look!Theseedshavesprouted!"Julieexclaimed,hervoicefilledwithdelight.Thekidsrushedover,theireyessparklingwithwonder.Theycroucheddown,examiningthedelicatenewgrowth,gentlytouchingtheleavesandexperiencingtheessenceoflife.Asthedaysturnedintoweeks,theshootsflourished,growingmoreleavesandshowingsignsofmaturity.Thekidstooktheinitiativetoresearchthegrowthhabitsofdifferentvegetables,seekingAnna'sguidanceonfertilizingandweeding.Theyfollowedherinstructionsdiligently,ensuringthebestpossibleconditionsforthevegetablestothrive.Everynewdevelopmentinthegardenbroughtthemasenseofaccomplishmentandjoy.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Eventually,Annasaid,"Itwasabouttimeforthefirstharvest."Atthesoundofthesewords,thekidsleapedwithexcitement.Withouthesitation,theygrabbedthesmallbasketsandtoolsandhurriedtothegarden.Gazingatthelushvegetablesbeforethem,asenseofpridewelledupintheirhearts.Juliecarefullypluckedtheriperedtomatoes,Fredstruggledtouprootthethickcarrots,andErikharvestedthetendergreenlettuce.Astheyworked,theysharedtheirexcitementandjoy."Thesevegetablesareallourownhardwork.Theymustbe