一輪復(fù)習(xí)微專題 考向30 書面表達(dá)（解析版）

PAGEPAGE1考向30書面表達(dá)（2021·浙江紹興市·中考真題）上個(gè)月，你們班為Children’sHome的孩子們組織了一次愛心義賣活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息用英語寫一篇短文，向某英語網(wǎng)站投稿，談?wù)劚敬位顒?dòng)和你的體會(huì)。ThingsyoudidThingsyou’velearnedhandoutnoticesmakethingslike…sellthethingsgiveawaythemoneydeveloplifeskills…注意：（1）短文必須包括上表所有信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的體會(huì)至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：義賣活動(dòng)charitysale短文首句：Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.Twodaysbeforethesale,wehandedoutnoticestomakeoursaleknownbyothers.Thenwemadedifferentthingslikefoodandtoys.Itwassomuchfun!Wheneverythingwasready,westartedtosellthethings.Tooursurprise,allthethingsweresoldoutinashorttime!Atlast,wegaveawaythemoneywemadetoChildren’sHome.Ithinkitwasameaningfulexperience.Makingthingshelpsdevelopourlifeskills.Meanwhile,wecanlearnhowtocommunicatewithotherswell.Lastbutnotleast,helpingpeoplemakesushappy.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)表格信息寫短文，談?wù)劙嗌辖M織的愛心義賣活動(dòng)及自己的感受。要包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱為主，以一般過去時(shí)介紹班上的愛心義賣活動(dòng)，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主表達(dá)自己的感受。要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。一般來說，觀點(diǎn)看法類文章的內(nèi)在邏輯關(guān)系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基礎(chǔ)，還考查考生的邏輯能力。具體來說就是上下文的銜接過渡和文章層次的體現(xiàn)。文章段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系主要由過渡性的詞和短語來完成，在修辭中稱為＂啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合＂。＂啟＂就是開頭，＂承＂就是承接，＂轉(zhuǎn)＂是轉(zhuǎn)折，＂合＂是綜合或總結(jié)。1.用于表示＂啟＂的過渡性的詞和短語通常用在段落或文章的開頭。此類過渡性的詞和短語有first,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,firstly,tobeginwith,tostartwith,recently,now,atpresent,inrecentyears,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,lately等。2.用于表示＂承＂的過渡性的詞和短語通常用在段落中的第一個(gè)擴(kuò)展句中。此類過渡性的詞和短語有second,inaddition,besides,then,moreover,what’smore,what’sworse,forexample,certainly,obviously,inotherwords,still,atthesametime,nodoubt等。3.用于表示＂轉(zhuǎn)＂的過渡性的詞和短語通常用在段落中的第二個(gè)擴(kuò)展句中。此類過渡性的詞和短語有but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,otherwise,while,despite,inspiteof等。4.用于＂合＂的過渡性的詞和短語通常用在段落的結(jié)論句或文章的結(jié)論段中。過渡性詞和短語有inaword,inshort,aboveall,afterall,finally,therefore,asaresult,onthewhole,insummary等。總之，要做好書面表達(dá)，需要大家把握以下幾個(gè)原則：細(xì)讀提示，抓要點(diǎn)：選擇句型，準(zhǔn)表達(dá)；確定線索，巧組合；適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，保完整；規(guī)范書寫，爭(zhēng)高分；細(xì)查全文，除筆誤。一、寫作方法——十句作文法第一段為開頭，包括兩句。第一句為主題句，提出問題并通過問題點(diǎn)明全文主題；第二句為擴(kuò)展句，進(jìn)一步說明和支持主題句。另外，也可調(diào)整兩句的順序，由第一句說明情況，第二句提出問題。第二段為正文，共七句。第一句為主題句，提出本段的主題，它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相一致。第二句至第七句為擴(kuò)展句，說明和支持本段的主題。句與句之間要注意運(yùn)用好過渡詞，以使行文流暢。第三段為結(jié)尾，簡(jiǎn)化為一句，是對(duì)全文的總結(jié)，并說明作者自己的觀點(diǎn)。三段之間的銜接要靈活運(yùn)用＂啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合＂的過渡手段。二、應(yīng)急百寶箱一代，五加，一擴(kuò)＂具體說來就是：1.以實(shí)代虛——寫實(shí)2.增加限定語——定語、狀語等3.增加例子——forexample,suchas4.增加原因——進(jìn)一步說明5.加套語（詞塊）6.加格言、諺語等——進(jìn)一步說明7.擴(kuò)充建議——自主發(fā)揮，點(diǎn)到即可三、注意事項(xiàng)1.觀點(diǎn)鮮明，文章一定有一個(gè)明確的中心論點(diǎn)——主題。2.層次分明，一個(gè)中心論點(diǎn)通常有幾個(gè)分論點(diǎn)支持，層次要分明，過渡要自然。3.最后一段一般要總結(jié)全文，得出一個(gè)符合邏輯的結(jié)論，突出中心思想。4.通常采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。5.語言簡(jiǎn)潔有力，一般不采用口語。一、開頭句型Asfaras...isconcernedItgoeswithoutsayingthat...Itcanbesaidwithcertaintythat...Astheproverbsays...Ithastobenoticedthat...It’sgenerallyrecognizedthat...It’slikelythat...It’shardlytoomuchtosaythat...Whatcallsforspecialattentionisthat...需要特別注意的是There’snodenyingthefactthat...毫無疑問，無可否認(rèn)Nothingismoreimportantthanthefactthat...What’sfarmoreimportantisthat...二、銜接句型Acaseinpointis...Asisoftenthecase...Asstatedinthepreviousparagraph如前段所述Buttheproblemisnotsosimple.Therefore...然而問題并非如此簡(jiǎn)單，所以……Butit’sapitythat...Forallthat...Inspiteofthefactthat...Further,weholdopinionthat...However,thedifficultiesin...Similarly,weshouldpayattentionto...not(that)...but(that)...不是……而是……Inviewofthepresentstation...鑒于目前形勢(shì)Ashasbeenmentionedabove...綜上所述Inthisrespect,wemanyaswell(say)...從這個(gè)角度上我們可以說……However,wehavetolookattheothersideofthecoin,thatis...然而我們還得看到事物的另一方面，即……三、結(jié)尾句型Iwillconcludebysaying...Therefore,wehavethereasontobelievethat...Allthingsconsidered總而言之Itmaybesafelysaidthat...Therefore,inmyopinion,it’smoreadvisable...Itcanbeconcludedfromthediscussionthat...從中我們可以得出這樣的結(jié)論Frommypointofview,itwouldbebetterif...在我看來……也許更好四、萬能句型Let’stake...toillustratethis.試舉例以茲證明Let’staketheabovechartasanexampletoillustratethis.Itremainstobefurtherstudied...There’squestionishow...觀點(diǎn)看法類作文的整體結(jié)構(gòu)有一定的模式可循，可以先寫對(duì)比的一方面，再寫另外一方面；也可以將對(duì)比的兩個(gè)方面的不同點(diǎn)——比較著寫。觀點(diǎn)看法類作文的整體結(jié)構(gòu)有一定的模式可循，可以先寫對(duì)比的一方面，再寫另外一方面；也可以將對(duì)比的兩個(gè)方面的不同點(diǎn)——比較著寫。對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)看法類作文的寫作摸板Thetopicof主題isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavourite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof理由一.What’smore,理由二.Moreover,理由三.WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.First,理由一.Second(Besides),理由二.Third(Finally),理由三.Frommypointofview,Ithink我的觀點(diǎn).Thereasonisthat原因.Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformer(later)issurelyawisechoice.應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文是人們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪袕V泛使用的文體。它最突出的特點(diǎn)是它的實(shí)際應(yīng)用性，應(yīng)用文包括很廣，如書信、通知、日記、海報(bào)、便條、啟事、請(qǐng)柬、電報(bào)、合同等。應(yīng)用文的語言應(yīng)使用規(guī)范語言，重在實(shí)用，力求樸實(shí)、準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。常用寫作模板一、書信一、書信...MiddleSchool,...（寫信人地址）...MiddleSchool,...（寫信人地址）April8th,2016（寫信的日期）DearXXX____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,____________信頭稱呼簽名結(jié)束語正文二、日記二、日記三、通知三、通知Announcement/NoticeAnnouncement/NoticeLadiesandgentlemen,Yourattention,please.Ihavesomethingtotellyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening./That’sall.Thanks.標(biāo)題開場(chǎng)白稱呼內(nèi)容結(jié)束語四、啟事四、啟事1.遺失啟事2.招領(lǐng)啟事3.招聘啟事五、便條五、便條六、發(fā)言稿六、發(fā)言稿七、倡議書七、倡議書八、調(diào)查報(bào)告八、調(diào)查報(bào)告A為了培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的興趣，發(fā)展學(xué)生的能力，我校將開設(shè)一些特色課程，學(xué)生可根據(jù)興趣進(jìn)行選擇。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示為學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)頁(yè)寫一篇短文。1.Whatdoyouthinkofthecoursesthatourschoolwillhave?2.Whatothercoursesdoyouwanttoadd?(Atleast1course)3.Whydoyouwanttoaddit/them?1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)100左右，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Inordertodevelopstudents’interestsandskills,ourschoolwillprovidesomespecialcoursesforustochoosefrom.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertodevelopstudents’interestsandskills,ourschoolwillprovidesomespecialcoursesforustochoosefrom.IfyouwanttoimproveyourEnglish,Englishdramamaybethefirstchoice.ItisagoodchancetopracticenotonlyspokenEnglishbutalsoperformingskills.Ifyouarecrazyaboutfootball,takethefootballcourse.Itisgoodforyourphysicalhealth.Besides,youcanlearnmoreaboutteamwork.Whataboutmodelmaking?YouwillbeamazedbythescienceworldandbecomeinterestedinDIY.Inmyopinion,apaintingcoursecanbeadded,becauseIhavearealgiftforpainting.IloveitsomuchthatIenjoymyselfintheworldofcolorseverytimeIpaint.AndIthinkafarmingcoursewillbepopulartoo.Itcanprovideuswithachancetobeclosetonature.Wecanalsoplantvegetablesbyourselvesandfeelthejoyofharvest.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，寫出對(duì)學(xué)校要開設(shè)的課程的看法，自己會(huì)選擇什么課程以及理由等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

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寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭融合起來，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱、第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。B某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以“MySchoolLife”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)參考詞匯SubjectsEnglish,Science,...Teachers/Classmateskind,helpful,...ActivitiesSports,hobbies,...注意：1.文中必須包括表格中全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，參考詞匯僅供選擇使用；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；3.詞數(shù)：110詞左右；4.短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MySchoolLifeI’mLiHuafromSunnyHillMiddleSchoolinChina.I’dliketosharemyschoollifewithyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I’mLiHuafromSunnyHillMiddleSchoolinChina.I’dliketosharemyschoollifewithyou.Wehavemanysubjectsatschool,suchasChinese,Englishandsoon.IamfocusedmoreonChinese,forIthinkit’sgettingmoreandmorewidelyusedthroughouttheworld.Ourteachersarekindandhelpful.WheneverIhaveproblems,theyarealwaysreadytogivemeahand.Schoolactivitiesarerichandcolorful.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyclassmates,whichbringsmelotsoffun.Ilikereadingaswell.SoIoftenspendmyfreetimereadingintheschoollibrary.MyschoollifeiswonderfulandIenjoyitverymuch.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示介紹我的學(xué)校生活?？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。分為四段式：第一段已給出；第二段介紹所學(xué)的科目；第三段介紹學(xué)校的活動(dòng)；最后一段表達(dá)自己對(duì)學(xué)校生活的觀點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。A英雄源于平凡，在新冠病毒(NovelCorona-virus)疫情發(fā)生期間涌現(xiàn)出了很多平凡而偉大的英雄，張敏的姑姑就是其中之一。她是一位支持武漢醫(yī)療隊(duì)的護(hù)士。假如你是張敏，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息及提示，以“Myauntismyhero”為題完成一篇學(xué)?！皯?zhàn)疫情”主題征文?；厩闆r1.醫(yī)生，40多歲，工作15年。2.善良，熱心……具體行動(dòng)1.面對(duì)危險(xiǎn)，主動(dòng)請(qǐng)戰(zhàn)，救治病人。2.每天工作超過12小時(shí)，奮戰(zhàn)了一個(gè)月。對(duì)我的影響1.姑姑微信(WeChat)告訴我……(自擬1-2點(diǎn))2.我為姑姑感到驕傲，因?yàn)椤?自擬1-2點(diǎn))要求：1)表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2)必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3)詞數(shù)：100詞左右(征文的開頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。MyauntismyheroAftertheoutbreakofNovelCorona-virus,manypeoplehavedonealottofightwithit.Inmyhearttheyareallheroesandmyauntisoneofthem.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AftertheoutbreakofNovelCorona-virus,manypeoplehavedonealottofightwithit.Inmyheart,theyareallheroesandmyauntisoneofthem.Myauntisanurse.SheisinherfortiesandhasworkedinPeople’sHospitalforfifteenyears.Myauntiskindandwarm-heartedandsheoftenhelpsthesickinourcommunity.AfterhearingoftheoutbreakofNovelCorona-virus,myauntofferedtojointhemedicalteamforWuhan.Sheworkedhardandcarefully.Sheworkedforovertwelvehoursadayanddidwhatevershecouldtohelpthesick.Allherpatientsbelievedinherbecauseshenotonlysavedtheirlivesbutalsogavethemhope.DuringthestayinWuhan,myauntsometimeschattedwithmeonWeChat.Shetoldmenottoworryaboutheranditwasherdutytosavelives.SheismyheroandIhopetobeagreatpersonlikeherwhenIgrowup.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是材料類書面表達(dá)，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示完成，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，補(bǔ)充剩余內(nèi)容即可。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：該題目主要使用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要使用一般過去時(shí)；內(nèi)容包括作者姑姑的基本信息、在武漢的具體工作內(nèi)容以及對(duì)作者的影響，同時(shí)保證結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，敘述有條理，無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤和語法使用錯(cuò)誤。B三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，我們的點(diǎn)滴成長(zhǎng)和進(jìn)步都離不開家長(zhǎng)的悉心照質(zhì)和支持，老師的辛勤教誨和鼓勵(lì)，以及其他人對(duì)我們的幫助。學(xué)校針對(duì)畢業(yè)班開展了“PeopleIWanttoThank”的英語征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)按照以下表格提示，寫一篇英語征文投稿。感謝誰父母老師(請(qǐng)選擇其中一項(xiàng)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充)祖父母，同學(xué)，朋友……為什么給予我照顧與愛，直支持我……耐心教導(dǎo)和鼓勵(lì)我……（請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充）怎么做表達(dá)你的愛，如做飯，做家務(wù)；會(huì)繼續(xù)努力學(xué)習(xí)，盡力取得更大進(jìn)步（請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充）參考詞匯：取得更大進(jìn)步：makegreaterprogress注意：1、文章必須包含家長(zhǎng)、老師以及自選的一位人物的感謝。2、字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）3、不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。PeopleIWanttoThankHowtimeflies!Thethreeyearschoollifeisgoingtoend.HereIwanttosaythankyoutothosewhohavehelpedme.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】PeopleIWanttoThankHowtimeflies!Thethreeyearschoollifeisgoingtoend.HereIwanttosaythankyoutothosewhohavehelpedme.Firstofall,Iwanttothankmyparentswhohavebeensupportingmeandgivingmeloveandcareallthetime.IwanttoshowmylovetothembycookingmealswhenIamfreeorhelpingthemwithsomehousework.Secondly,Iwanttosay“thankyou”tomyEnglishteacher.Heteachesussowell.Heishumorousandalwaysmakeshisclasseslivelyandinteresting.HealwaysencouragesmetospeakEnglishasoftenasIcan.MyEnglishhasgreatlyimprovedwithhishelp.Iwillstudyhardandtrymybesttogetagoodgrade.Lastbutnotleast,Iwanttothankmyclassmate,John,whohasstayedwithmeallthetimeandoftenhelpedmewithmyhomework.Iwillwriteathank-youcardtohimandrememberhimforever.SomanypeoplehavehelpedmewheneverIaminneed.IwilltrymybesttohelpthosewhoareintroubleasmuchasIcan.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題要求以“我想要感謝的人們”為標(biāo)題寫一篇英文征文投稿，內(nèi)容則是要向初中三年里幫助過我們的家長(zhǎng)、老師以及一位自選人物表達(dá)謝意以及寫下愿意為這些人而做的事情。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)用第一人稱來進(jìn)行寫作。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)把表格中的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)都涉及到，此外還需圍繞最后一位自選人物進(jìn)行自我發(fā)揮。為了使文章層次清晰、行文流暢，寫作時(shí)可將對(duì)三位人物的感謝分成三段，最后再用一段總結(jié)性段落結(jié)束文章，還可以使用連接詞，比如Firstofall，Secondly等。最后在檢查時(shí)應(yīng)注意文章是否有遺漏要點(diǎn)，語言是否符合英文表達(dá)習(xí)慣。C在人的成長(zhǎng)過程中你會(huì)遇到很多人。有好的有壞的。但是都會(huì)給我們帶來影響，這個(gè)影響促進(jìn)了你的發(fā)展。請(qǐng)以apersonwho________me為題寫一篇作文。內(nèi)容提示：1.Whoistheperson?2.Whathappe