2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：雪中邂逅開啟紐約溫暖之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習雪中邂逅，開啟紐約溫暖之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ItwasmyfirstwinterinNewYork,andthecitywascoveredinathickblanketofsnow.IdecidedtoembracetheextremelycoldweatherbyvisitingCentralParktoseeittransformedbythewinter’stouch.AsIwalkedthroughthepark,thefreshsnowcrunchedundermyboots,whichsoundedlikeapieceofcheerfulmusic,andIcouldseefamiliesenjoyingskiingdownthesmallhills,fulloffunandlaughter.Ifeltamixtureofexcitementandhomesickness,missingmyhometown’swarmerwintersyetthrilledbythenewexperiencesaheadofme.4續(xù)寫原文ItwasonthatverydaythatImetAlex,afreelance(自由職業(yè)的)photographer.Whilewanderingintheworldoficeandsnow,Inoticedonethatcapturedthewinterscenes,andhiscamerawasfocusedonagroupofchildrenbuildingahugesnowman,whichstimulatedmycuriosity.IwalkedtowardshimandstruckupaconversationwithhimaboutphotographyandthemagicofNewYorkinwinter.Heofferedtosharesometipsandshowmesomeofhisfavoriteshotsandimages.Inspiredbyhisworksandpassion,Iwaswonderingandaskedifhewouldmindgivingmeaquickphotographylessonrightthereinthepark.5續(xù)寫原文Alexagreedreadilyandenthusiastically,invitingmetojoinhim,andwespentthenexthourexperimentingwithdifferentsettingsonmycamera.Devotedtothiscommunicationandlearning,Ifeltthattimepassedquickly.Asthesunbegantoset,castingagoldenglowoverthesnow,wecapturedsomebeautifulshotswhileenjoyingthemagnificentscenehere.Feelinggratefulfortheimpromptu(即興的)lesson,Ithankedhimandstartedtoheadhome,filledwithjoyandasenseofsatisfaction.AsIwalkeddownthewayoutofthepark,IrealizedIhadleftmyglovesnexttowherewehadbeenstanding.6段首句Paragraph1：IturnedbacktofindthemandsawAlexwavingtheminhishand.Paragraph2：Afewdayslater,IwenttothenursinghousewithAlex.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9初到紐約的冬天，“我”前往中央公園感受冬日魅力，在這里偶遇自由攝影師亞歷克斯。他專注拍攝雪景，“我”被吸引，與之交談并向他請教攝影。亞歷克斯熱情應(yīng)允，教“我”調(diào)試相機，一起捕捉夕陽雪景。離開時，“我”落下手套，折返時亞歷克斯正拿著手套等“我”，還提議一起去養(yǎng)老院拍照，“我”欣然同意。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：IturnedbacktofindthemandsawAlexwavingtheminhishand.我轉(zhuǎn)身回去尋找手套，看到亞歷克斯正揮舞著它們。他臉上掛著燦爛的笑容，大步朝我走來?！拔揖椭滥銜貋碚遥@么冷的天，可不能沒有手套?！彼呎f邊把手套遞給我。我接過手套，再次向他表達了感激之情，并再次提及今天的攝影教學讓我收獲頗豐。亞歷克斯聽后，興致勃勃地跟我分享他常去養(yǎng)老院為老人們拍照的經(jīng)歷，他說那里的老人們生活單調(diào)，照片能給他們帶來很多歡樂。說著，他便邀請我也一同前往，我聽后，腦海中浮現(xiàn)出老人們看到照片后開心的樣子，當即毫不猶豫地答應(yīng)了。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afewdayslater,IwenttothenursinghousewithAlex.幾天后，我和亞歷克斯帶著相機和精心準備的道具來到養(yǎng)老院。剛踏入養(yǎng)老院，老人們就用熱情的笑容迎接我們。我們先為老人們拍攝單人照，鏡頭下，他們的眼神里滿是歲月的故事。隨后，我們精心布置了一場以雪為主題的拍攝活動，雖然是人工雪，但老人們玩得不亦樂乎。一位老奶奶小心翼翼地捧著“雪花”，仿佛回到了童年；一位老爺爺假裝在“雪中”滑雪，逗得大家哈哈大笑。在歡聲笑語中，我們按下快門，記錄下這一個個珍貴的瞬間。這次經(jīng)歷，不僅讓我攝影技術(shù)更上一層樓，更讓我深刻體會到給予他人快樂的意義。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)IturnedbacktofindthemandsawAlexwavingtheminhishand.Withabroadsmileacrosshisface,hewalkedbrisklytowardsme."Iknewyou'dcomebackforthese.It'sfartoocoldtobewithoutthem,"hesaid,handingoverthegloves.IthankedhimagainandreiteratedhowmuchIhadenjoyedthephotographylesson.Alexthenbegansharinghisexperiencesofregularlyvisitinganursinghometotakepicturesfortheelderly.Heexplainedthatthephotosbroughtalotofjoytotheirrathermonotonouslives.Ashespoke,heextendedaninvitationformetojoinhim.Imaginingthehappyexpressionsontheelderly'sfaceswhentheysawthephotos,Ireadilyagreedwithouthesitation.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afewdayslater,IwenttothenursinghousewithAlex.Wearrivedwithcamerasinhandandcarefullypreparedprops.Assoonasweentered,theelderlygreeteduswithwarmsmiles.Westartedbytakingindividualportraitsoftheelderly,andthroughthelens,theireyeswerefilledwiththestoriesoftheirlives.Then,wesetupasnow-themedphoto-shoot.Althoughitwasartificialsnow,theelderlyhadagreattime.Anoldladyheldthe"snowflakes"carefully,asifshehadreturnedtoherchildhood.Anoldmanpretendedtoskiinthe"snow",makingeveryoneburstintolaughter.Amidstthelaughterandjoy,wepressedtheshutter,capturingthesepreciousmoments.Thisexperiencenotonlyenhancedmyphotographyskillsbutalsomademedeeplyunderstandthesignificanceofbringinghappinesstoothers.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Uponrealizingmygloveswereleftbehind,Iswiftlyturnedback,onlytospotAlexwavingthemintheair.Hisfaceadornedwitharadiantsmile,hemadehiswaytowardsmewithpurposefulstrides."Iwascertainyou'dretraceyourstepsforthese.Inthisfrigidweather,glovesareanabsolutenecessity,"heremarked,presentingmewiththegloves.IexpressedmygratitudeoncemoreandemphasizedhowmuchIhadrelishedthephotographysessionearlier.Alex,inresponse,delvedintosharinghisfrequentvisitstoalocalnursinghome,wherehededicatedhimselftocapturingmomentsfortheelderly.Heelaboratedonhowthesesimpleactsofphotographyinjectedmuch-neededjoyintotheirotherwisemonotonousroutines.Ashesharedhisexperiences,heextendedaninvitationformetoaccompanyhimonhisnextvisit.Visualizingtheelatedexpressionsthatwouldgracethefacesoftheelderly,Iconsentedwithoutamoment'shesitation.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afewdayselapsed,andIfoundmyselfaccompanyingAlextothenursinghome,camerasslungoverourshouldersandanarrayofcarefully-chosenpropsintow.Themomentwesteppedthroughthedoors,weweregreetedbyaseaofwarmsmilesfromtheelderlyresidents.Wecommencedbytakingindividualportraits,eachclickoftheshutterfreezingintimetheuniquestoriesetchedintheireyes.Subsequently,weorchestratedasnow-themedphoto-shoot.Despitethesnowbeingartificial,itdidn't