2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：從抵觸到期待：非洲山地之旅的轉(zhuǎn)變+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)從抵觸到期待：非洲山地之旅的轉(zhuǎn)變1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Summervacationwasfinallycoming,andRosecouldn’twaittohaveatripwithherparents.Sherecalledthejoyfulexperiencestheysharedlastsummer,whichfilledherwithexcitementfortheupcomingholiday.“Girls!”Roseheardherfathercalling.Sheracedtoherbigsister’sroom,tellingherthatDadwascallingthem,andtheyrusheddownstairslogeither.DadputhisarmaroundMomandtoldthemthattheyweregoingonatriptotheVirungaMountainsofAfrica.Therewerethreenationalparksthattheywouldvisit.RoseandGinalookedateachother.“What?”theysaidwithonevoice.Momtoldthemitwouldbereallyexcitingtogothereonatrip.At12yearsold,Rosewouldprefergoingtoanamusementparkorabeach.Shethoughtitimportanttoletherparentsknowshedidn’twanttogotherebuttothebeachforaweekortwo.4續(xù)寫原文“Well,”saidDad,“Ihavetogoforanassignmentforthepaper.We’recoveringthemountaingorillas(大猩猩)becausethey’recriticallyendangeredtheseyears.So,Ithoughtit’dalsobeagreatplacetotakeavacation.I’msureit’llbeveryeducationalforyougirls.”Ginaletoutasigh,unabletocontainherdisappointment.ShewantedtosaysomethingbutMominterruptedandannouncedthatthetripwassetonthenextMonday.“Sitdown,bothofyou.”Dadhadonhisseverelook.“Girls,it’simportantforyoutoknowabouttheworldaroundyou.Thisisawonderfulchanceforyoutoexperienceandlearnanamazingplace.Doyouknowanythingaboutthemountaingorillas?”Thesistersshooktheirheads.“Well,getyourlaptopcomputer,Gina.Iwantyoutolookthemuprightnow,”saidDad,“Rose,thereisabookonthebookshelfaboutthecutemountaingorillas.Finditandreadit.”5段首句Paragraph1：Thegirlsdraggedtheirfeetupstairs.Paragraph2：ThenextMondaycameandthefamilysetoutexcitedly.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8暑假將至，羅斯?jié)M心期待和父母旅行，憶起去年的歡樂時光，她格外興奮。父親告知全家要去非洲維龍加山脈旅行，他們將參觀三個國家公園。羅斯和姐姐吉娜原本更想去游樂園或海灘，對此感到失望。父親解釋是為報紙報道瀕危的山地大猩猩，且認(rèn)為這對姐妹是很好的學(xué)習(xí)機(jī)會，要求她們?nèi)チ私馍降卮笮尚?。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thegirlsdraggedtheirfeetupstairs.姐妹倆拖著沉重的腳步上樓。她們心里都很不情愿，覺得去非洲的維龍加山脈一點(diǎn)都不好玩。吉娜打開筆記本電腦，開始查找山地大猩猩的資料，一開始她還皺著眉頭，滿臉不滿。羅斯則在書架上找到了那本關(guān)于山地大猩猩的書，坐在床邊開始翻閱。隨著閱讀和查找的深入，她們漸漸被山地大猩猩的故事吸引。書上說山地大猩猩十分聰明且有獨(dú)特的社會結(jié)構(gòu)，它們的生存現(xiàn)狀卻岌岌可危。吉娜看到一些可愛的山地大猩猩圖片，不禁露出了微笑。羅斯也開始想象自己能親眼見到這些神奇動物的場景，心中的抵觸情緒慢慢消散。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：ThenextMondaycameandthefamilysetoutexcitedly.下周一到了，一家人興奮地出發(fā)了。羅斯和吉娜早早地起床，收拾好行李，臉上洋溢著期待的笑容。在去機(jī)場的路上，她們熱烈地討論著即將見到的山地大猩猩。到了非洲的維龍加山脈，她們被那里獨(dú)特的自然風(fēng)光震撼。當(dāng)終于看到山地大猩猩時，羅斯和吉娜都激動得說不出話來。它們在樹林間穿梭、玩耍，十分可愛。這次旅行讓姐妹倆收獲滿滿，不僅增長了見識，還深刻體會到保護(hù)動物和大自然的重要性。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Thegirlsdraggedtheirfeetupstairs.TheywerereallyreluctantandthoughtthatgoingtotheVirungaMountainsinAfricawasnotfunatall.Ginaopenedherlaptopandbegantolookupinformationaboutmountaingorillas.Atfirst,shefrowned,showingherdissatisfaction.Rosefoundthebookaboutmountaingorillasonthebookshelfandsatonthebedtoreadit.Astheydelveddeeperintoreadingandsearching,theyweregraduallyattractedbythestoriesofmountaingorillas.Thebooksaidthatmountaingorillaswereveryintelligentandhadauniquesocialstructure,buttheirsurvivalsituationwasextremelycritical.Ginasmiledwhenshesawsomecutepicturesofmountaingorillas.Rosealsobegantoimaginethesceneofseeingthesemagicalanimalswithherowneyes,andtheresistanceinherheartgraduallydissipated.13范文呈現(xiàn)ThenextMondaycameandthefamilysetoutexcitedly.RoseandGinagotupearly,packedtheirluggage,andtherewereexpectantsmilesontheirfaces.Onthewaytotheairport,theytalkedenthusiasticallyaboutthemountaingorillastheywereabouttosee.WhentheyarrivedattheVirungaMountainsinAfrica,theywereshockedbytheuniquenaturalscenerythere.Whentheyfinallysawthemountaingorillas,RoseandGinaweretooexcitedtospeak.Theyshuttledandplayedinthewoods,lookingextremelycute.Thistripwasarewardingexperienceforthesisters.Theynotonlybroadenedtheirhorizonsbutalsodeeplyunderstoodtheimportanceofprotectinganimalsandnature.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thegirlsdraggedtheirfeetupstairs.Filledwithreluctance,theyfirmlybelievedthatatriptotheVirungaMountainsinAfricawasfarfromappealing.Ginafiredupherlaptopandstartedscouringforinformationaboutmountaingorillas,herbrowfurrowedindiscontentattheoutset.Meanwhile,Roselocatedthebookaboutthesecreaturesonthebookshelfandsettledontothebedtoperuseit.Astheydelveddeeperintotheirresearch,theyfoundthemselvesirresistiblydrawntothetalesofmountaingorillas.Thebookrevealedthattheseanimalswerehighlyintelligent,boastingauniquesocialstructure,yettheirsurvivalhunginthebalance.Ginacouldn'thelpbutcrackasmileuponglimpsingsomeadorablepicturesofmountaingorillas.Rose,too,begantovisualizethemomentoflayingeyesonthesemagnificentbeings,andtheresistancewithinhergraduallymeltedaway.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ThenextMondayarrived,andthefamilysetoffwithgreatexcitement.RoseandGinaboundedoutofbedearly,efficientlypackedtheirbags,theirfacesbeamingwithanticipation.Enroutetotheairport,theyengagedinanimatedchatterabouttheupcomingencounterwithmountaingorillas.UponreachingtheVirun