2021高考英語學(xué)案：短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)(5)及答案解析

2021高考英語學(xué)案：短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)（5）及答案解析【英語卷（解析）·2021屆廣西桂林十八中高三上學(xué)期第一次月考（202209）】第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）（注：本題為新課改內(nèi)容）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線（___），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。留意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。InthefirstdaywhenIwenttoworkinaveryfamousrestaurant,mybosscomplainedthattherewereveryafewpeoplecomingfordinner.SoIam“invited”tohaveamealintherestaurant.AfterorderedtwoFrenchdishesandsomefood,Ibegantolookfrequentlyattheirwatchtimingtheservingofthemeal.Meanwhile,Ilookedaroundtoseethattherewasanythingelsewrongthere.Iwrotesomethingimproperdownsecret.Mymealwasnotservingyet.Ilookedatmywatch32minutespassed!Irealizedthatwaittoolongforservicewasthemainreasonwhythebusinesswaspoor.ThenIwroteareportaboutmyfindingsandpresentedittheboss.【答案】【學(xué)問點(diǎn)】E1短文改錯(cuò)記敘文【答案解析】71.第一句第一個(gè)in改為on。在具體的某一天用介詞on。72.afew改為few。老板埋怨沒幾個(gè)人來餐館吃晚飯。73.其次句am改為was。敘述過去的事情，用一般過去時(shí)。74.第三句ordered改為ordering。Order的規(guī)律主語是主句的主語I,I和order是規(guī)律上的主謂關(guān)系，所以用ordering。75.their改為my。本句的主語是I,它的形容詞性物主代詞是my。76.第四句that改為whether。我環(huán)顧四周看看是否還有別的不對的地方。77.第五句secret改為secretly修飾動(dòng)詞短語writedown,要用副詞。78.第六句serving改為served。Meal和serve是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，飯還沒有被端上來。79.第八句wait改為waiting。動(dòng)名詞短語作主語。80.第九句theboss前加to。presentsthtosb將某物呈獻(xiàn)給某人【英語卷（解析）·2022屆西藏自治區(qū)高三最終一次模擬統(tǒng)一考試（202205）】E1第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：把缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：1.在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Iamwritingtoaskforwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.Iwanttohaveapenpal,hopefullyagirlintheearlytwenties,andwithinterestssimilarlytomine.Inmymind,heissomeoneinterestingintraveling,swimming,andplayingtabletennis.Beside,itwillbebetterforhertohaveapetdogasIhavebeenkeepingoneathomeforsometime.Withsuchpenpal,IhopeIcansharewithhermyexperiencesintraveling,takingcareofpets,orwhicheverwehaveincommon.IbelievedIwillimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearningmoreabouthercountry.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.【答案】1.把for去掉 askfor意為“懇求”。這里是“問詢”之意，故去掉for2.the改為her inone'stwenties在某人二十幾歲的時(shí)候3.similarly改為similar similarto是后置定語修飾interests。要用形容詞形式。4.he改為she 這里指代的是agirl，所以要用eresting改為interested beinterestedin對……感愛好。這里同第3題，interested作后置定語。6.Beside改為Besides besideadv.旁邊地。besidesadv.除此之外。這兩個(gè)為易混詞，應(yīng)特殊留意。7.such后加a suchapenpal這樣一個(gè)筆友。sucha如此一個(gè)。8.whichever改為whatever whatever無論什么，強(qiáng)調(diào)不明什么對象。whichever無論哪個(gè)，強(qiáng)調(diào)在明確的對象中不知要選哪個(gè)。9.believed改為believe 依據(jù)后面的從句的時(shí)態(tài)可知這里是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。10.learning改為learn learn是will的賓語所以用原形。(2021·寶雞市三模)Jackhasregardedasayoungheroinhistownforhisheroicdeed.Theotherday,Jackwasgoinghomebybikeasusualwhileheheardawomanscreamingforhelp.Thenhewasridingquicklytowardsthedirectionofthevoice.Atthecorner,hesawawomanstoppingbyamanwithaknifeinherhand.Withouthesitation,Jackmadeaimmediatedivefortherobberandcontrolledhimbyheldhimdownagainsttheground.Afewminuteslater,threepolicemancameandtooktherobberaway.Slightwoundedashewasinthelefthand,butsincethenhehasbecomewellknownasayoungheroalloverthetown.答案：Jackhaseq\o(∧,\s\do14(been))regardedasayoungheroinhistownforhisheroicdeed.Theotherday,Jackwasgoinghomebybikeasusualeq\o(while,\s\do14(when))heheardawomanscreamingforhelp.Thenhewasridingquicklyeq\o(towards,\s\do14(in))thedirectionofthevoice.Atthecorner,hesawawomaneq\o(stopping,\s\do14(stopped))byamanwithaknifeineq\o(her,\s\do14(his))hand.Withouthesitation,Jackmadeeq\o(a,\s\do14(an))immediatedivefortherobberandcontrolledhimbyeq\o(held,\s\do14(holding))himdownagainsttheground.Afewminuteslater,threeeq\o(policeman,\s\do14(policemen))cameandtooktherobberaway.eq\o(Slight,\s\do14(Slightly))woundedashewasinthelefthand,eq\o(but,＼)sincethenhehasbecomewellknownasayoungheroalloverthetown.(2021·長春市第四次調(diào)測)IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinChangchun.IwastheninschoolforstudentfromWenchuan.Aswewerealllefthomeofanearlyage,wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife.Wehadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyus.However,weseldomfeltlonelyorhelplessly.Weenjoyedourhappylife.Atweekends,wewillplaybasketballontheplayground,swimminginthepoolorgoforapicnicinthepark.Wewerelivinginabigfamily.Wetreateachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ithasbeenfiveyearswhenwegraduated,butthosememoriesareassweetaseverbefore.答案：IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinChangchun.Iwasthenineq\o(∧,\s\do14(a))schoolforeq\o(student,\s\do14(students))fromWenchuan.Asweeq\o(were,＼)alllefthomeeq\o(of,\s\do14(at))anearlyage,wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife.Wehadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyeq\o(us,\s\do14(ourselves)).However,weseldomfeltlonelyoreq\o(helplessly,\s\do14(helpless)).Weenjoyedourhappylife.Atweekends,weeq\o(will,\s\do14(would))playbasketballontheplayground,eq\o(swimming,\s\do14(swim))inthepoolorgoforapicnicinthepark.Wewerelivinginabigfamily.Weeq\o(treat,\s\do14(treated))eachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ithasbeenfiveyearseq\o(when,\s\do14(since))wegraduated,butthosememoriesareassweetaseverbefore.(2021·甘肅省二診)Manyteachersworriedabouttheeffectsoftelevisiononyoungpeople.Accordingtostudies,anychildrenspendmoretimewatchingtelevisionthantheyspendinschool.Becausesomuchviewing,childrenmaynotbedevelopthehabitofreadandtheabilitytoenjoythemselves.Nooneworriesmuchabouttheradioprogramyoungpeoplelistento,althoughradioscanbeverynoise.Teachersalsowonderabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Ononeyeartheaveragechildwillsee25,000televisioncommercials,allplannedandwrittenbygrownupstomakechildrentowantthingsthattheydon'trealneed.答案：Manyteacherseq\o(∧,\s\do14(are))worriedabouttheeffectsoftelevisiononyoungpeople.Accordingtostudies,eq\o(any,\s\do14(many))childrenspendmoretimewatchingtelevisionthantheyspendinschool.Becauseeq\o(∧,\s\do14(of))somuchviewing,childrenmaynoteq\o(be,＼)developthehabitofeq\o(read,\s\do14(reading))andtheabilitytoenjoythemselves.Nooneworriesmuchabouttheradioeq\o(program,\s\do14(programs))youngpeoplelistento,althoughradioscanbeveryeq\o(noise,\s\do14(noisy)).Teachersalsowonderabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.eq\o(On,\s\do14(In))oneyeartheaveragechildwillsee25,000televisioncommercials,allplannedandwrittenbygrownupstomakechildreneq\o(to,＼)wantthingsthattheydon'teq\o(real,\s\do14(really))need.(2021·烏魯木齊三診)Rockclimbingisincreasinglybecomingamorepopularsportforpeopleofallages.Inmymind，itisrealpositiveinourlife.Ononehand，itisgreatexercise.Itnotonlybuildupourstrengthandenduranceanditalsohelpsincreaseourbalanceanddetermination.Ontheotherhands,itallowsustogetoutsideenjoynature.Forthoseofthemwhospendourdaysoutsideworkingorstudying,gettingoutandseeingplantsandanimalsinnaturecanbequiterefreshed.Forconclusion,itisagoodtogoclimbingatleastonceamonth.Workingupagoodsweat,havingfunwithfriends,andfinishingtheroute,wewillgetasenseofsatisfaction