讀后續(xù)寫練習+少年齊心護公園攜手助力環(huán)境美++課件-2025屆高三上學期英語一輪復(fù)習專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習少年齊心護公園，攜手助力環(huán)境美1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文OnahotSeptemberafternoon,PeterandhisfriendIsabelwereontheirwaytothelibrary.WhentheypassedbyTubmanpark,Isabelsuggestedcuttingthroughittogettothelibrary.Astheyenteredthepark,thesightoftheswings(秋千)andthemerry-go-roundbroughtbackafloodofmemoriesoftheirchildhoodspentthere.Butnoweverythinglookedsoold,sad,anddirty.Litterlayonthegroundnexttoanoverflowingtrashbin.Therewerestillyoungschoolchildrenplayingtherebuttheyhadtoavoidthetrashthatlitteredtheplayground.Alittleboytoldthemthatthecitytooktheothertrashcansawayandtheremainingonenevergotemptiedoften.Astheyheadedtowardthelibrary,thetwohighschoolstudentswrinkledtheirforehead.Inthelibrary,theyencounteredMrs.Evans,theirkind-heartedfifth-gradeteacher,retiredyetstillpassionate.Mrs.EvanslistenedasIsabelandPetereagerlyexplainedwhatthey’dseen.Finally,sherecommendedthemtogototheCityHalltovoicetheirconcerns.4續(xù)寫原文Thenextday,IsabelandPeterwentintothebuildingoftheCityHallbutweremetwithanimpatientofficer.Theywereinformedthatthecitycouldn’thelpwiththeirproblemduetoatightbudget.Discouraged,theyleftandturnedtoMrs.Evansforhelp.Underherguidance,theydecidedtoaskGoGreen,anon-profitorganizationwhosegoalistoprotecttheenvironment,forhelp.“Thisgroupisgoodatraisingmoneyforprojectsjustlikeyours,”saidMrs.Evans.ShepromisedtoarrangethemtopresenttheirideastoGoGreen.Hearingthis,theirfacelitup.5續(xù)寫原文Twomaintasksremainedahead:researchingwaystocleanuptheparkandpreparingaconvincingpresentation.AsIsabelwasgoodatresearchingwhilePeteralwayshadatalentforspeaking,theycooperatedquitewell.Isabellearnedfromasciencemagazinethatanewtypeoftrashbincansqueezethetrashdownwithoutbeingemptiedoften,whichsavestime,money,andenergy.Basedonthis,Peterpracticedhispresentationoverandoveragain.6段首句Paragraph1：Aweeklater,PeterstoodnervouslyatthebackofthehallwhereGoGreenwasmeeting.Paragraph2：Afterthemeeting,IsabelexcitedlytoldPeterthegoodnews.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9九月炎熱的午后，彼得和伊莎貝爾路過塔布曼公園，發(fā)現(xiàn)這里臟亂差，垃圾桶少且清理不及時。在圖書館向退休老師埃文斯夫人傾訴后，他們前往市政廳反映問題，卻因預(yù)算緊張被拒。在埃文斯夫人的指引下，他們求助非營利組織“走向綠色”。伊莎貝爾負責研究，發(fā)現(xiàn)新型垃圾桶優(yōu)勢，彼得則準備演講，兩人分工合作，期待解決公園問題。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Aweeklater,PeterstoodnervouslyatthebackofthehallwhereGoGreenwasmeeting.一周后，彼得緊張地站在“走向綠色”組織會議大廳的后排。大廳里人頭攢動，大家都在熱烈討論著各種環(huán)保話題。彼得的手心全是汗，心臟也砰砰直跳，他擔心自己的演講無法引起大家的共鳴。但當主持人念到他的名字，他深吸一口氣，走上了演講臺。他先展示了公園如今垃圾遍地、設(shè)施破舊的照片，接著詳細介紹了新型垃圾桶的功能和優(yōu)勢，還描述了公園未來在新垃圾桶幫助下變得整潔美麗的場景。隨著演講的進行，彼得越來越自信，臺下的聽眾也被他的熱情所感染，開始認真傾聽并頻頻點頭。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afterthemeeting,IsabelexcitedlytoldPeterthegoodnews.會議結(jié)束后，伊莎貝爾興奮地跑來告訴彼得，“走向綠色”組織決定資助他們的項目！組織成員被彼得的演講深深打動，認可新型垃圾桶能有效解決公園垃圾問題。他們承諾會提供資金購買新型垃圾桶，并協(xié)助聯(lián)系相關(guān)部門進行安裝。彼得聽到這個好消息，激動得跳了起來。之后，他們和組織成員一起制定了詳細的實施計劃，明確了各個階段的任務(wù)和時間節(jié)點。在大家的共同努力下，塔布曼公園很快迎來了新垃圾桶，公園環(huán)境逐漸改善，孩子們又能在干凈整潔的環(huán)境中快樂玩耍了。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Aweeklater,PeterstoodnervouslyatthebackofthehallwhereGoGreenwasmeeting.Thehallwascrowdedwithpeople,engagedinlivelydiscussionsaboutenvironmentalprotection.Peter'spalmsweresweaty,andhisheartwaspoundinghard.Hewasextremelyworriedthathispresentationmightnotresonatewiththeaudience.However,whenhisnamewascalledbythehost,hetookadeepbreathandsteppedontothestage.First,heshowedsomepicturesofthepark,whichwaslitteredwithtrashandinadilapidatedcondition.Then,heintroducedthefunctionsandadvantagesofthenew-typetrashbinindetail.Healsodescribedthebeautifulfutureoftheparkwiththehelpofthesenewbins.Ashecontinuedhisspeech,Peterbecamemoreandmoreconfident.Theaudiencewasgraduallyattractedbyhisenthusiasmandbegantolistenattentively,noddingfrequently.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afterthemeeting,IsabelexcitedlytoldPeterthegoodnews.TheGoGreenorganizationhaddecidedtofundtheirproject!ThemembersweredeeplyimpressedbyPeter'sspeechandrecognizedthatthenew-typetrashbincouldeffectivelysolvethepark'sgarbageproblem.Theypromisedtoprovidefundstopurchasethenewbinsandassistincontactingrelevantdepartmentsforinstallation.Peterjumpedforjoywhenheheardthis.Later,theyworkedtogetherwiththeorganizationmemberstoformulateadetailedimplementationplan,clearlydefiningthetasksandtimenodesforeachstage.Withthejointeffortsofeveryone,Tubmanparksoonwelcomedthenewtrashbins.Theparkenvironmentgraduallyimproved,andchildrencouldplayhappilyinacleanandtidyenvironmentagain.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Aweeklater,PeterstoodnervouslyatthebackofthehallwhereGoGreenwasholdingitsmeeting.Thehall,filledtothebrimwithpeople,buzzedwithanimatedconversationscenteredaroundenvironmentalprotectioninitiatives.Peter,hispalmsclammyandheartthumpingvigorously,wasplaguedbythefearthathispresentationmightfallflat.However,whenthehostannouncedhisname,hesummoneduphiscourage,tookadeepbreath,andsteppedontothestage.Initially,hepresentedaseriesofpicturesvividlydepictingthepark'scurrentstate,marredbylitteranddilapidatedfacilities.Subsequently,hedelvedintoadetailedintroductionofthenew-typetrashbin'sfunctionsandadvantages.Moreover,hepaintedavividpictureofthepark'sfuture,transformedintoacleanandinvitingspacewiththeaidofthesenewbins.Asheprogressedthroughhisspeech,Peter'sconfidencegrewexponentially.Theaudience,captivatedbyhispassion,becameincreasinglyengaged,listeningintentlyandnoddinginagreementfromtimetotime.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterthemeeting,IsabelrushedtowardsPeter,herfacebeamingwithexcitement,toconveythewonderfulnews.TheGoGreenorganizationhadmadethedecisiontofinancetheirproject!Themembers,deeplymovedbyPeter'scompellingspeech,wereconvincedthatthenew-typetrashbinheldthekeytoresolvingthepark'sgarbagewoes.Theypledgedtoallocatefundsforthepurchaseofthenewbinsandoffe