專題12-應(yīng)用文寫作(12)-研讀近十年高考英語滿分書面表達(dá)聚焦2023高考

研讀近十年高考英語滿分書面表達(dá)聚焦2023高考Part1應(yīng)用文寫作文（十二）1．（2013·山東卷）假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)雙下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件：1.未及時(shí)回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1.詞數(shù)：120-150；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearTom,Howiseverythinggoing?Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.Youknow,I’vebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays,soIforgottowriteback.Inyourletter,youaskedmeformyplansonsummervacation.Now,Iamwritingtotellyousomespecificdetails.Overall,threethingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningful.Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Inaddition,itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation,inordertoenjoyappealingsceneryandmakemorefriends.Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.Isincerelyapologizeagainformymistake.Bytheway,what’syourplantospendyoursummervacation?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本書面表達(dá)考查提綱類作文?！驹斀狻空w來看，今年山東卷作文難度不大，沿襲了山東卷提綱類書信體作文的傳統(tǒng)，題干依然保持“字?jǐn)?shù)雖少，但信息量不小”的特點(diǎn)，寫作試題的考查上體現(xiàn)了命題人穩(wěn)中求變和創(chuàng)新的原則。今年山東卷考查的書信類型，而為了考查考生審題能力，命題人并沒有把如“感謝”、“道歉”、“建議”、“申請(qǐng)”等明顯的字眼放在題中，而是通過考查學(xué)生對(duì)題干的審題能力暗示學(xué)生此書信體作文應(yīng)大體包含道歉和告知兩個(gè)方面。因此文章的主干部分要先表示歉意、解釋原因，后寫假期的打算。從寫作要點(diǎn)和得分點(diǎn)來看，考生應(yīng)在宏觀上把握書信體寫作的要求，如格式、文體等，寫作段落以三段式為宜，首段體現(xiàn)問候、寫信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可詢問Tom暑假里的打算，體現(xiàn)書信體的交際性；而中間段具體交待未及時(shí)回信的原因、假期的打算?？忌谖⒂^層面上應(yīng)具體把握寫作的內(nèi)容和語言，做到句子之間有效的連接，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，多用doing及物做主語，句子加半句原因、結(jié)果、目的等具體細(xì)節(jié)的解釋、利用簡(jiǎn)單而有效的中文思路擴(kuò)展英文細(xì)節(jié)。考生若能在寫作部分做到內(nèi)容充實(shí)符合要求、語言精彩與眾不同、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰一目了然，相信這樣的文章能讓考生獲得一個(gè)相對(duì)滿意的成績(jī)?！军c(diǎn)睛】此范文表達(dá)流暢，語言優(yōu)美，內(nèi)容全面，符合題目要求。其中值得學(xué)習(xí)的句型有：不定式作目的狀語：Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.非謂語動(dòng)詞和定語從句：Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.2．（2013·四川卷）某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)近期開辟專欄，討論學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣問題。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)際，按以下提示，用英文為該專欄寫一篇稿件。1.說明學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣與學(xué)習(xí)效果之間的關(guān)系；2.介紹一種好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習(xí)慣的建議；3.描述自己在學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣方面存在的某個(gè)問題并給出改進(jìn)措施。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右，開頭語已為你寫好；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。It'susefulandnecessarytodiscusslearninghabits..___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It'susefulandnecessarytodiscusslearninghabits.Asisknowntous,goodlearninghabitscontributetoimprovinglearningefficiency.Thatistosay,withoutgoodlearninghabits,theefficiencycannotbeguaranteed.Therefore,inordertoestablishagoodlearninghabit,suchasreviewingwhatwehavestudiedregularly,weshouldrevisethecoursewehavelearnedandtryhardtorecitesomethingimportant.Onlybydoingthiscanwelearnallthecourseswellandachievebettergrades.However,oneofmyproblemsliesinthatIcannotsticktoreviewingtheknowledgeregularly,soIoughttomakeaproperscheduleandpersistinit.【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇提綱類作文?！驹斀狻勘疚奶接憣W(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣與學(xué)習(xí)效率之間的關(guān)系，對(duì)于學(xué)生來說比較熟悉的，但是在寫作的過程注意一下幾點(diǎn)：①文章的時(shí)態(tài)，本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主或者表示建議的情態(tài)動(dòng)詞為主；②注意要點(diǎn)寫全，不能寫漏其中一點(diǎn)并且注意要點(diǎn)之間的承接；③注意要點(diǎn)的條理性。因此考生應(yīng)努力把自己掌握的較為復(fù)雜的句型和高級(jí)表達(dá)法運(yùn)用到寫作中去，以增加亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如Asisknowntous,goodlearninghabitscontributetoimprovinglearningefficiency.運(yùn)用了定語從句；Therefore,inordertoestablishagoodlearninghabit,suchasreviewingwhatwehavestudiedregularly,weshouldrevisethecoursewehavelearnedandtryhardtorecitesomethingimportant.運(yùn)用了賓語從句；Onlybydoingthiscanwelearnallthecourseswellandachievebettergrades.運(yùn)用了倒裝句；However,oneofmyproblemsliesinthatIcannotsticktoreviewingtheknowledgeregularly,soIoughttomakeaproperscheduleandpersistinit.使用了賓語從句。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。3．（2013·重慶卷）調(diào)查顯示，中國(guó)長(zhǎng)江江豚（finlessporpoise）受人類活動(dòng)影響而瀕臨滅絕，目前總數(shù)不足1000只。假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英文給WWF(世界自然保護(hù)基金組織)寫一封信，請(qǐng)他們關(guān)注這一情況并提供幫助。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：●說明寫信目的●簡(jiǎn)述江豚現(xiàn)狀●希望WWF如何幫助（比如：資助江豚保護(hù)項(xiàng)目等）●表示感謝并期待回復(fù)注意：1)詞數(shù)不少于80；2)在答題卡上作答。3)書信格式及開頭均已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSirorMadam,I’mastudentfromChongqing,China.IamwritingtoyoutotellyousomethingaboutYangtzeFinlessPorpoise.Duetolackofhumanprotection,thenumberofYangtzeFinlessPorpoiseisbecomingsmallerandsmaller,onlylessthan1000left.Mostofthemaredyingout.Therefore,it’shightimewetookimmediatemeasurestochangethesituation.SoIhopeWWFwilldosomethingtohelpYangtzeFinlessPorpoisebysettingupaspecialfundorganizationordrawingupsomerulesonhowtoprotectitandsoon.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Thankyou!Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生用英文給WWF(世界自然保護(hù)基金組織)寫一封信，請(qǐng)他們關(guān)注因受受人類活動(dòng)影響而瀕臨滅絕的中國(guó)長(zhǎng)江江豚（finlessporpoise）?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累由于：dueto→becauseof滅絕：dieout→becomeextinct立即的：immediate→instant建立：setup=found2.句式拓展原句：SoIhopeWWFwilldosomethingtohelpYangtzeFinlessPorpoisebysettingupaspecialfundorganizationordrawingupsomerulesonhowtoprotectitandsoon.拓展句：TohelpYangtzeFinlessPorpoise,IhopeWWFcansetupaspecialfundorganizationordrawupsomerulesonhowtoprotectitandsoon.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Therefore,it’shightimewetookimmediatemeasurestochangethesituation.(運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣)[高分句型2]SoIhopeWWFwilldosomethingtohelpYangtzeFinlessPorpoisebysettingupaspecialfundorganizationordrawingupsomerulesonhowtoprotectitandsoon.(運(yùn)用了省略that的賓語從句)4．（2013·全國(guó)I卷）假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會(huì)，帶去他想要的那幅中國(guó)畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明：李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡航班號(hào)：CA985到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.開頭語和結(jié)已為你寫好。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?MyuncleLiMingwillattendameetinginyourcity.Heistallandwearsapairofglasses.Andhewillbeinawhiteshirtandblacktrousers.IhaveaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingthatIpromisedyou.HewilltakeflightCA985andarriveatBaiyunAirportat11:30a.m.onAugust6th.Iwanttoknowifitisconvenientforyoutopickhimupattheairportandtakeyourpaintingback.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給筆友Peter寫封信，詢問他是否能去機(jī)場(chǎng)接李明叔叔并取回送他的畫?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累會(huì)議：meeting→conference取回：takeback→getback接某人：picksbup→meetsb到達(dá)：arriveat→getto2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：MyuncleLiMingwillattendameetinginyourcity.Heistallandwearsapairofglasses.拓展句：MyuncleLiMingwhoistallandwearsapairofglasses,willattendameetinginyourcity.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IhaveaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingthatIpromisedyou.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)[高分句型2]Iwanttoknowifitisconvenientforyoutopickhimupattheairportandtakeyourpaintingback.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和it作形式主語)5．（2013·全國(guó)II卷）假定你是李華，自制一些中國(guó)結(jié)（Chineseknot)。給開網(wǎng)店的美國(guó)朋友Tom寫封信，請(qǐng)他代賣，要點(diǎn)包括：1.外觀（尺寸、顏色、材料）2.象征意義3.價(jià)格注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語已為你寫好。DearTom,Howareyoudoing?IwonderifyoucouldsellsomeChineseknotsforme._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTom，Howareyoudoing?IwonderifyoucouldsellsomeChineseknotsforme.Imadethemmyselfwithredstillthreads,clothsandothermaterials.Theylookreallybeautifulintheshapeofadiamond,about5incheslongand4incheswide.InChina,theseknotsstandforfriendship,loveandgoodluck.Peoplecaneithergivethemasgiftstofriendsorhangthemintheirhouses.Theyareonly12.99USdollarseach.Ifanyonewantstoknowmoreabouttheknots,letthemwritetome.Also,doletmeknowifyouneedfurtherinformation.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給開網(wǎng)店的美國(guó)朋友Tom寫封信，請(qǐng)他代賣自制一些中國(guó)結(jié)（Chineseknot)。【詳解】1.詞匯積累想知道：wanttoknow→wonder進(jìn)一步：redouble→further代表：represent→standfor用：use→with2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句Peoplecaneithergivethemasgiftstofriendsorhangthemintheirhouses.Theyareonly12.99USdollarseach.拓展句：Peoplecaneithergivethemasgiftstofriendsorhangthemintheirhouses,whichareonly12.99USdollarseach.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Ifanyonewantstoknowmoreabouttheknots,letthemwritetome.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）【高分句型2】Also,doletmeknowifyouneedfurtherinformation.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）6．（2013·北京卷圖畫作文）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英文寫一篇周記。記述爸爸出差期間，媽媽生病，你照顧她的過程。注意：1.周記的開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好。2.詞數(shù)不少于60.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastMonday,myfathersaidgoodbyetomymotherandmeandwentonabusinesstrip.Hewouldbeawayforthreedays.Onthenextmorning.Ifoundmymotherwasn'tfeelingwell.Shehadacold.Iimmediatelywenttogethersomemedicineandthenpreparedsomenoodlesforher.Withmyspecialcare,mymotherrecoveredquickly.Whenmyfathercamebackhome,mymothertoldhimwhathadhappened.HepraisedmeforwhatIhaddone.IfeelveryhappythatIhavedonesomethingformymother.【詳解】北京的情景作文歷年來都是記敘文，去年寫的是寫一篇日記，記錄的是做好事的經(jīng)過。今年是爸爸出差，兒子照顧媽媽的故事。故事看似很簡(jiǎn)單，但是要想把文章寫好，寫的連貫，自然，要求考生要在給出的圖片信息中撲捉到有用的信息，有時(shí)候要適當(dāng)?shù)倪M(jìn)行擴(kuò)充才行，不如第二、第三幅圖，需要考生根據(jù)自己的生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)，做出合理的補(bǔ)充，是文章的內(nèi)容充實(shí)而又自然，同時(shí)要注重文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，前后時(shí)態(tài)、動(dòng)作要做到一致，連貫?？傊?，把沒一幅圖吃透，加上合理聯(lián)想，還是可以寫出優(yōu)秀的作文的。7．（2013·天津卷）假設(shè)你是某大學(xué)的學(xué)生李津。你學(xué)校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席，負(fù)責(zé)規(guī)劃、組織俱樂部的相關(guān)活動(dòng)。你欲參選。請(qǐng)按以下提示，寫一篇競(jìng)選演講稿。個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹（如性格、特長(zhǎng)等）；組織校內(nèi)活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦講座、英語晚會(huì)等）；組織校際交流活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦辯論賽、演講比賽等）；表達(dá)當(dāng)選的愿望。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校名稱；3.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；4.開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：副主席vicepresident競(jìng)選runforGoodafternoon,mydearfriends.MynameisLiJin.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【答案】Goodafternoon,mydearfriends.MynameisLiJin.I’moutgoing,andgetonwellwithmyclassmatesandteachers.Iamskilledinorganizingallkindsofactivities.I’dliketorunforthevicepresidentoftheEnglishclubinourschool.Iknow,asthevicepresident,Imustdothefollowingthingsfortheclub:Iwilltrytomakeitknowntoeverystudentandmorestudentsinvolvedintheactivitiesorganizedbytheclub.Also,toimproveourEnglishandgetmorestudentsinterestedinEnglish,IintendtoorganizesomeactivitiesatschoollikelecturesandEnglishpartiesandinter-schoolonessuchasEnglishdebatecompetitionsandspeechcontests.Ihopeallofyouwillvoteforme.Thankyou.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生假設(shè)你是某大學(xué)的學(xué)生李津。你學(xué)校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席，負(fù)責(zé)規(guī)劃、組織俱樂部的相關(guān)活動(dòng)。你欲參選。請(qǐng)按以下提示，寫一篇競(jìng)選演講稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累外向的：outgoing→extraverted各種各樣的：allkindsof→avarietyof組織，舉辦：organize→hold打算：intendtodo=plantodo2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Iwilltrytomakeitknowntoeverystudentandmorestudentsinvolvedintheactivitiesorganizedbytheclub.拓展句：Iwilltrytomakeitknowntoeverystudentandmorestudentsinvolvedintheactivitieswhichareorganizedbytheclub.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Also,toimproveourEnglishandgetmorestudentsinterestedinEnglish,IintendtoorganizesomeactivitiesatschoollikelecturesandEnglishpartiesandinter-schoolonessuchasEnglishdebatecompetitionsandspeechcontests.(運(yùn)用了不定式用作目的狀語)[高分句型2]Ihopeallofyouwillvoteforme.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that)8．（2013·遼寧卷）一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)站面向中學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語稿件，介紹“中秋節(jié)”及這個(gè)節(jié)日里的主要活動(dòng)。寫作要點(diǎn)：它是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；家人團(tuán)聚；賞月、吃月餅；還有旅游、訪友等其他活動(dòng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：中秋節(jié)theMid-AutumnFestival農(nóng)歷lunarcalendar賞月enjoythefullmoon月餅mooncakeTheMid-AutumnFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestivalfallsonthe15thoftheeighthmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________