專題10 書面表達（滿分范文18篇）-八年級英語上學期期末考點大串講（牛津上海版）（解析版）

專題10書面表達（滿分范文18篇）1．（23-24八年級上·上海浦東新·期末）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“_______BringsMeHappiness”（以“……帶給我快樂”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）在你的生活中，什么給你帶來快樂？請你談談看法并說明理由。_______BringsMeHappiness__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ReadingBringsMeHappinessMylifeisfullofhappinessbecauseofreading.Itbringsmealotofknowledgeaswellasplentyofimprovement.Besides,readingcanreducemytimeonwatchingTVandplayingcomputergames.Icanspendmoretimeonmysubjects.What’smore,readingisalsoextremelynecessaryinmystudylife,withwhichIcanmakegreatprogress.Allinall,readinghasbroughtmesomuchhappinessthatIcanhardlystopreading.Istronglyrecommendyoutoreadmorebooksandgetmoreusefulinformation.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：以“……帶給我快樂 ”為題，談談自己的看法及理由，注意行文連貫，無語法錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題，引出下文；第二步，具體闡述對其看法及帶來快樂的原因；第三步，總結，提出建議。[亮點詞匯]①becauseof因為②aswellas也③what’smore而且[高分句型]①Besides,readingcanreducemytimeonwatchingTVandplayingcomputergames.（and并列結構）②Allinall,readinghasbroughtmesomuchhappinessthatIcanhardlystopreading.（so...that引導的結果狀語從句）2．（23-24八年級上·上海崇明·期末）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“AValuable(寶貴的adj.)Lesson”.Suggestedquestions:▲Whathappened?▲Whatdidyoulearnfromit?注意：1.文章中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

AValuableLesson

Inmymemory,theyarefullofvaluablelessons.Themostunforgettableonehappenedlastterm.IwasnotgoodatsubjectsatschoolandIcouldn’t

getgoodmarksinexams.Ifeltworriedaboutmystudy.Atthattime,mymothertoldmenottogiveupandkepttrying.Shegaveabighugandalwayscheeredmeup,soIdecidedtoworkmuchharder.Ilistenedtotheteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddidmoreexercisesafterclass.

NowIhavedonebetterinmystudy.Ilearntfromtheexperiencealot.IbelievethatnothingistoodifficultifIputmyheartintoit.Inaword,onlythepersonwhoovercomesdifficultieswillbesuccessful.Thevaluablelessonisunforgettableforme.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是材料作文；②時態(tài)：主要時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏內容提示中“提示信息”的幾個要點均要一一闡述，適當發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。借用“在我的記憶中，有很多寶貴的經驗教訓”來引出重點介紹的內容。第二步：具體闡述寫作內容。依照提示信息的要點——所發(fā)生的事、所學到的東西等方面均要一一闡述。第三步：書寫結語。表達“這寶貴的一課令我難忘”的美好。[亮點詞匯]①giveup放棄②kepttrying繼續(xù)嘗試③afterclass放學后[高分句型]①Inaword,onlythepersonwhoovercomesdifficultieswillbesuccessful.(定語從句)②Atthattime,mymothertoldmenottogiveupandkepttrying.(tellsb.nottodosth.)3．（23-24八年級上·上海金山·期末）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Mymost______experience”.（結合你的實際，以“我最____________的一次經歷”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。寫作前先請你把題目補充完整。）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）Suggestedquestions:(1)Haveyoueverhadanysuccessful/unforgettable/interesting/...experienceinyourlife?Describeoneoftheseexperiences.(2)Whydoyouthinkitwas...?(3)Whatcanyoulearnfromtheexperience?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MymostsuccessfulexperienceInmymemory,therearefullofsuccessfulexperiences.Themostunforgettableonehappenedlastterm.IwasnotgoodatsubjectsatschoolandIcouldn’tgetgoodmarksinexams.IfeltworriedaboutmystudysoIdecidedtoworkmuchharder.Ilistenedtotheteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddidmoreexercisesafterclass.What’smore,Ioftenaskedmyteachersforhelp.AlthoughImetalotofdifficulties,Ididn’tgiveup.NowIhavedonebetterinmystudy.IbelievethatnothingistoodifficultifIputmyheartintoit.IfImeetwithdifficultiesinmylife,Ishouldtrymybesttoovercomethem.Inaword,onlythepersonwhoovercomesdifficultieswillbesuccessful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要注意不要遺漏題干中的提示，并適當增加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]①第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“難忘的經歷”來引出下文中對該經歷的描述；②第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“具體經歷、原因和感悟”三方面入手，重點介紹該經歷；③第三步，書寫結語。只有克服困難的人才會成功。[亮點詞匯]①befullof充滿②begoodat擅長③feelworriedaboutsth對某事感到憂慮④what’smore此外⑤asksbforhelp向某人求助⑥tryone’sbesttodosth盡全力做某事⑦inaword總之[高分句型]①AlthoughImetalotofdifficulties,Ididn’tgiveup.（although引導的讓步狀語從句）②IbelievethatnothingistoodifficultifIputmyheartintoit.（if引導的條件狀語從句）③IfImeetwithdifficultiesinmylife,Ishouldtrymybesttoovercomethem.（if引導的條件狀語從句）④Inaword,onlythepersonwhoovercomesdifficultieswillbesuccessful.（who引導的定語從句）4．（23-24八年級上·上海普陀·期末）微笑是人類最美的語言。某英文報以“Smiles”為題，舉辦征文活動，請根據(jù)下面的圖表信息（需包含圖表所示內容），寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文SmilesAsmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.Asmileshowsyouarekindandfriendly.Ithelpsyougetonwellwithothers.Italsobringsgoodluckandmakesothersfeelwarm.WhenIwasinGrade8,anewstudentcametoourclass.Hedidbadlyinschoolwork.Noonetalkedwithhim.Hefeltverylonely.WhenIlearntthis,eachtimeImethim,Igavehimabigsmile.Afterwards,heoftenaskedmequestionsaboutstudy.Webecamegoodfriendsandhedidbetterandbetterinhisstudy.Hesaidthatitwasmysmilethatmadehimmoreconfidentandoutgoing.Smilesaresoimportantinourlife,solet’strytosmilemore.Ifwesmileatlife,lifewillsmileback.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時態(tài)：本文應使用“一般過去時”為主。③提示：寫作要點應注意題干給出的“微笑的好處”；“關于自己微笑的經歷”；以及“從這個經歷中學到了什么”等要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹微笑的好處和微笑的力量。第二步，講述自己關于微笑的某個經歷。第三步，從經歷中學到了什么，收尾并號召大家微笑。[亮點詞匯]①getonwellwithsb和某人相處融洽②goodluck好運③trytodo努力做[高分句型]①WhenIlearntthis,eachtimeImethim,Igavehimabigsmile.（when引導的時間狀語從句）②Hesaidthatitwasmysmilethatmadehimmoreconfidentandoutgoing.（itwas…that強調句）5．（23-24八年級上·上海浦東新·期末）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“My________momentin2023”.

（請以“2023年我________的時刻”為題,寫一篇不少于60字的短文。）在過去的2023年中一定有許多時刻成為了你珍貴的回憶。它們或甜蜜,或苦澀,或異乎尋常,或意義非凡……請結合一件具體事例,談談給你留下特別印象的原因及感悟。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關信息,否則不予評分。）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Myunforgettablemomentin2023Lifeislikeajourneywithmanyfantasticstops.Therearesomanyinterestingthingsandwonderfulpeopleinmylife.Ihadaveryunforgettablemoment.Lastsummerholiday,Iwantedtolearntoswim.Iwenttotheswimmingpoolwithmyfather.Hetaughtmehowtoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofdivinginthewater.AndIfeltuncomfortableinthewater.Butmyfatheralwaysencouragedme.Hesaidhewouldprotectme.ThenIbegantoswim,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall.Itmademeupset.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs.Slowly,Icouldmovealittle.Ittookmetwohourstolearntoswim.Ifeltsoproudatthatmoment.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己有一個非常難忘的時刻，引出文章的主題；第二步，具體介紹這件難忘的事情的具體經過以及自己的感悟；[亮點詞匯]①learntodosth學會做某事②swimmingpool游泳池③beafraidof害怕[高分句型]①Hetaughtmehowtoswim.（疑問詞+不定式）②Hesaidhewouldprotectme.（省略that的賓語從句）6．（22-23八年級上·上海奉賢·期末）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“A/An________moment”（請以“一個……的瞬間”為題，寫至少60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格，請在答題紙上先把作文標題補充完整。）提示：在你的學習生活中，一定曾有過某個瞬間讓你記憶猶新，或是快樂雀躍的，或是難以忘懷的，亦或是傷心失望的，請結合自己的經歷分享這一個時刻吧?。ㄗ⒁猓憾涛闹胁坏贸霈F(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnunforgettablemomentThereisabigplaygroundinourschool,whichislargeandbeautifulagainstthegrass.I’mfondofit.Therefore,Ialwaysgothereforawalkwhendisappointed.Lastweek,Ifailedthemid-exam,soIwasverysad.Inordertorelaxmyself,thismorningIwenttothegroundalone.There,Isawaboytakeexerciserunningfasterandfaster.Withabadmood,Icoulddonothingbutlookathim.Suddenly,hefelldown.Tomygreatsurprise,hegotonhisfeetquicklyandwentonrunning.Afewminuteslater,whenhegotclosetome,seeingthesweatonhisface,Iwasstruckbyhimdeeply.Justatthatmoment,theskybecamebrightandIfeltmoreconfident.Iwenttoclassandstillworkedhardformydreams.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時態(tài)：主要是一般過去時；③提示：考生應注意文章應主要采用一般過去時態(tài)，結合自身經歷來描寫某個瞬間。[寫作步驟]第一步，描寫這個瞬間發(fā)生的地點；第二步，具體闡述這個瞬間發(fā)生的過程。從“起因，人物，結果”等方面闡述這個瞬間發(fā)生的過程；第三步，說明這個瞬間對自己的影響。[亮點詞匯]①disappointed失望的②inorderto為了③suddenly突然④toone’sgreatsurprise令人驚訝的是⑤goondoingsth.繼續(xù)做某事⑥bright明亮的⑦confident自信的[高分句型]①Inordertorelaxmyself,thismorningIwenttothegroundalone.（inorderto引導的目的狀語從句）②There,Isawaboytakeexerciserunningfasterandfaster.（比較級+and+比較級）③Afewminuteslater,whenhegotclosetome,seeingthesweatonhisface,Iwasstruckbyhimdeeply.（when引導的時間狀語從句）7．（23-24八年級上·上海徐匯·期末）Afterreadingthearticle“SurvivalHolidays”,canyouthinkofanymeaningful/unforgettable/interesting...activitiesinyourlife?Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“A/An_________Activity”.Suggestedquestions:●Whendidyoutakepartinthisactivity?Withwhom?●Whatdidyoudointhisactivity?●Whywasitmeaningful/unforgettable/interesting...?A/An_________Activity________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableActivityHowtimeflies!Twoyearspassedintheblinkofaneye.Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfreshinmymind.Alltheteachersandstudentscelebratedthecomingnewyearinourclassroomonthefinalday.Myclassmatesshowedtheirtalentsinartandmusic.Someplayedtheguitarwhilesinging,andothersdancedtothemusic.Asforme,Iplayedapieceofmusicontheviolin.Allofthemcheeredmeup.Weplayedveryhappilyandthatimpressedmealot.Attheendoftheparty,wereadapoemwrittenbyourclassmatestoourteachers.Thispartyismeaningfulnotonlybecausewehadahappytimetogetherbutalsoitwasachancetoexpressourthankstoourteachers.Itwasthemostunforgettableactivityinmyschoollife.Ithasleftmesoftandsweetmemoriesinmyheart.【詳解】[總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般過去時”；③提示：文章應該包括三個要點，要適當補充，使文章內容充實；行文時多用第一人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。［寫作步驟］第一步，介紹有一次活動讓我記憶猶新，從而引出話題；第二步，詳細陳述讓你難忘的活動，包括人員、地點、時間以及你參與的事項等；第三步，表達感想和這個活動讓你難忘的原因。［亮點詞匯］①asforme

對于我來說②cheersb.up

使某人高興起來［高分句型］①Weplayedveryhappilyandthatimpressedmealot.(and連接并列句)②Thereisoneactivitywhichkeepsfreshinmymind.

(定語從句)8．（22-23八年級上·上?！て谀┮浴癐havedonebetterin_________”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格。居家線上學習也許使同學們在時間管理、與父母溝通、做家務勞動等很多方面有一定的進步，請結合你居家在線學習的經歷，談談你某一方面的進步。Thefollowingexpressionsareforreferenceonly:(以下短語僅供參考）1.finditefficient/usefulto2.beproudof3.makeprogressin________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文IhavedonebetterincommunicatingwithmyparentsEarlythisyear,becauseofthevirus,wehadtostayathomeforafewmonths.Duringthetime,Ilearnedhowtosharemyfeelingandthoughtswithmyparents.Oneday,IwassoanxiousthatIcouldnotconcentrateonanyofmystudy.ItoldmyparentsthetroubleanddifficultyImet.Theycomfortedmewithkindwordsandalsotriedtosolvetheproblemwithmetogether.Afterchat,Ifeltmuchbetterandmypressurewasjustrelieved.Fromthenon,Irealizedtheimportanceoftalkingwithparents.Theyarethepersonwhosharemysadnessandhappiness.【詳解】[總體分析]：①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：結合居家在線學習的經歷，談談某一方面的進步。[寫作步驟]第一步：介紹與父母的溝通更好的契機。第二步：闡述與父母的溝通更好的事件經過。[亮點詞匯]①concentrateon專注于②comforted安慰③theimportanceof……的重要性[高分句型]①IwassoanxiousthatIcouldnotconcentrateonanyofmystudy.（結果狀語從句）②Theyarethepersonwhosharemysadnessandhappiness.（定語從句）9．（22-23八年級上·上?！て谀￤riteatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“A(n)______schoolactivity”.（請以“一次______的校園活動”為題，寫一篇不少于60字的短文。）校園生活中，我們開展了各種各樣活動，例如運動會、文藝匯演、班會活動、節(jié)日活動、學科活動等。于你而言，這些活動或許是有趣的、特殊的、難忘的，亦或是遺憾的……請描述你以往的一次校園活動，并談談你的感悟。（注意：1.請先補充完整題目；2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分）A(n)______schoolactivity_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnunforgettableschoolactivityWesometimesfeelstressedoutbecausewehavesomuchschoolworktodo.However,ourschooloftenorganizesactivitiesthatallowustotakeabreak.LastSaturday,ourStudentUnionorganizedavolunteerserviceactivityatXingfuSocialWelfareHome.Manyofusparticipatedinit.Wemetat8:00a.m.attheschoolgate.Allthemembersweredividedintogroups.Whenwegotthere,somedidsomecleaningfortheelderly.Someplayedgameswiththem.Somehadagoodtalkwiththem.Whatwedidmadethemhappyandwarm.Itwasanunforgettableschoolactivity.Itookthechancetolearnandtogrow.Asteenagersinthenewera,weshouldhavecertainresponsibilitiesofservingsociety.Byparticipatinginvolunteeringactivities,wecanlearnhowtoworkwellinateamandhowtoimproveourorganizationalability.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求介紹以往的一次校園活動，并談談自己的感悟，注意首先要補全題目，再進行寫作，可適當發(fā)揮，注意邏輯連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出主題；第二步，具體介紹這次的校園活動，包括時間、地點，做的事情等；第三步，表達自己通過這次活動所得到的感悟。[亮點詞匯]①participatein參加②takeabreak休息一下③bedividedinto被分成[高分句型]①Whenwegotthere,somedidsomecleaningfortheelderly.(when引導時間狀語從句)②Whatwedidmadethemhappyandwarm.(what引導主語從句)10．（23-24八年級上·上海閔行·期末）WritingWriteapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Thatday,Isolvedatrouble”(請以“那天，我解決了一件麻煩事”，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)生活中時時會遇見一些麻煩事，請描述一次你解決麻煩的經歷并談談你的感想。以下問題供參考。?Whattroubledidyoumeetwith??Howdidyousolvethetrouble??Whatdidyoulearnfromthisexperience?【答案】例文Thatday,IsolvedatroubleSinceIbecameaGrade9student,Ihavehadacolourfulschoollife.However,Istillmeetwithsometroubles.Oneday,itwasmygrandma’seightiethbirthday.Itwasreallyameaningfuldayformyfamily.Sincemyparentswereoccupiedwiththedecorationofthehouse,theyaskedmetoorderacake.However,IwassocarelessthatIleftthematterbehindmymindwhenmyfriendsinvitedmetoplaybasketballthatday.Ifeltsorryforthat,butIdidn’tlosemyselfinself-blame.Imadeahandmadecakewithcookiesandcolourfulcandies.Grandmawasveryhappywhenshesawthespecialcake.Whenterriblethingshappen,whatweshoulddoisnottofindfaultwithothers,buttouseourintelligentbraintosolvethem.Inourdailylife,thereareoccasionswhenwearefacedwithsomethingunpleasant.Andself-blame,whichisalwaysthefirstchoiceofsomepeople,isreallyoflittleuseinsolvingtheproblems.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇提綱作文；②時態(tài)：一般過去時；③提示：參考問題已給出，敘述麻煩的經歷和如何解決時需要適當增加細節(jié)描寫，注意邏輯清晰，不要遺漏表達自己的感受。[寫作步驟]第一步，敘述麻煩是什么以及如何解決的；第二步，談談自己的感想。[亮點詞匯]①beoccupiedwith忙于②feelsorryfor感到抱歉[高分句型]①SinceIbecameaGrade9student,Ihavehadacolourfulschoollife.（時間狀語從句）②Andself-blame,whichisalwaysthefirstchoiceofsomepeople,isreallyoflittleuseinsolvingtheproblems.（定語從句）11．（22-23八年級上·上海徐匯·期末）Besidesworkingtogetherwithteammatesinafootballteam,itisnecessaryforustocooperatewithotherssuchasyourclassmatesandparentstofinishatoughtaskinyourlife.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Anexperienceofworkingwith__________”(在我們的生活中，除了橄欖球比賽中需要團隊合作，我們和同學或父母等都會有一起合作完成一項任務的經歷，請結合你的自身經歷，以《和______的一次合作經歷》為題，說說你們的合作過程，以及你的收獲，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnexperienceofworkingwithteammatesNowadays,teamworkisveryimportantforustodoathingwell.Itisquiteoftenthatonepersonisunabletocarryoutajobbyhimselforherself.Heorsheneedsmorepeopletodoittogether.Ihavetosaythatsomeworkcan’tbefinishedwithoutteamwork.Lastweek,ourclassheldabasketballmatchwithanotherclass.Atfirst,wewerejustthinkingaboutourownscores.Later,wetalkedtoeachotherabouthowtowinthegame.Werealizedtheimportanceofworkingtogether.Finally,myteammatesandIworkedtogethertowinthegame.Allinall,teamworkisveryimportantnotonlynowbutalsointhefuture.Ifwedoagoodjobtogether,wecanwinintheend.Ifwedon’tdoittogether,wemaybedefeatedbyourcompetingteam.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應圍繞主題敘述，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，把題目補完整；第二步，介紹團隊合作的重要性；第三步，結合自身經歷具體談一談。[亮點詞匯]①carryout實行②theimportanceof……的重要性③allinall總而言之[高分句型]①Ihavetosaythatsomeworkcan’tbefinishedwithoutteamwork.（that引導賓語從句）②Ifwedon’tdoittogether,wemaybedefeatedbyourcompetingteam.（if引導條件狀語從句）12．（22-23八年級上·上海寶山·期末）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Animportantdecision”，請以“一個重要的決定”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。成長的過程中，我們需要做出各種各樣的決定。有些決定甚至會對你的人生產生深遠的影響。請簡述你曾經做過的一個重要的決定并談談這個決定對你的影響。注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇內容不得分。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.

(以下表達僅供參考)decideto…trymybestto…Ihopethat…_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文Animportantdecision

Inlifepeoplemakemanyimportantdecisions.Rightdecisionsaresoimportantthattheyaffectusgreatly.MylatestdecisionwasmadewhenIenteredJunior3inMissZhang’sEnglishclass.SinceIwasnotgoodatEnglish,MissZhangaskedmetolistenattentivelyinclassandwritedownsomeimportantnotes.ButIwasneveragoodlistener.IwentonmyownwayignoringhersuggestioncompletelyuntilMissZhanghadatalkwithme.Shemademerealizetheimportanceofnottakingnotes.ThenIdecidedtofollowhertotakenotesinherclass.Sincethen,myEnglishhasimprovedgreatly.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：簡述曾經做過的一個重要的決定并談談這個決定對自己的影響；注意條理清晰，邏輯連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，總述人生充滿各種重要的決定，而正確的決定對我們影響巨大；第二步，講述自己曾做過的一個重要決定，以及這個決定對自己的影響。[亮點詞匯]①begoodat擅長②writedown寫下③onone’sownway以某人自己的方式[高分句型]①Rightdecisionsaresoimportantthattheyaffectusgreatly.（結果狀語從句）②SinceIwasnotgoodatEnglish,MissZhangaskedmetolistenattentivelyinclassandwritedownsomeimportantnotes.（since引導的原因狀語從句）13．（21-22八年級上·上海奉賢·期末）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myfavorite________”（以“我最喜歡________”為題，可以是人，電影、書籍或是食物等，把你喜歡的美好事物分享給身邊的人并說說你喜歡的理由，寫不少于60個字的作文。）注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyfavoritepersonMyfavoritepersonismyteacher,Ms.Wang.Sheisa36-year-oldwoman.Butsheistallandthinwithlongstraighthair.Andsheoftenwearsblackpantsandawhiteshirt.SheteachesusEnglish.Wealllikelisteningtoher.Herclassesareveryinterestingandcreative.Becauseshehasdifferentwaysoft