專題07 書面表達-學(xué)易金卷：5年（2019-2023）中考1年模擬英語真題分項匯編（安徽專用）（解析版）

專題07書面表達（2023年中考真題）61.假定你是李輝，你制作的關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)變化的海報在某英文網(wǎng)站展示并獲得好評。請結(jié)合下面圖示信息，用英語寫一篇短文向該網(wǎng)站瀏覽者簡述你的制作經(jīng)歷。注意：1．短文須包含上圖所有信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和地名；3．詞數(shù)80～100（短文題目與首句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：poster（n.海報）；design（v.&n.設(shè)計）MyExperienceofMakingaPosterLastweek,Imadeaposterofthegreatchangesinmyhometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyExperienceofMakingaPosterLastweek,Imadeaposterofthegreatchangesinmyhometown.Thepurposeofmakingitistoshowtherapiddevelopmentofmyhometowninrecentyears.Firstly,Iaskedmygrandparentsabouttheirpastlivingconditions.Then,Ifoundsomeoldphotosonlinetocomparethepastandpresentofmyhometown.Finally,IsortedtheinformationthatIhadlearnedanddesignedaposterwithrelevantpicturesattached.Thisexperiencehelpsmeknowbetteraboutmyhometown.Withitsdevelopment,peoplehaveledbetterlivesandtheenvironmenthasbeenimproved.Iamveryhappytoseethesechanges.Asamemberofthistown,Iwillcontributemyowneffortstoitsdevelopment.【解析】【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”為主；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏“圖示信息”中的各個要點，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接所給開頭，介紹制作海報的目的；第二步，具體闡述制作海報的過程；第三步，表達從這次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到的東西以及自己的感悟。[亮點詞匯]①rapiddevelopment快速發(fā)展②livingconditions生活條件③sortedtheinformation把信息分類④leadabetterlife過上更好的生活[高分句型]①Finally,IsortedtheinformationthatIhadlearnedanddesignedaposterwithrelevantpicturesattached.（that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②Withitsdevelopment,peoplehaveledbetterlivesandtheenvironmenthasbeenimproved.（現(xiàn)在完成時的被動語態(tài)）（2022年中考真題）61．假定你是李輝。你的英國朋友Mike想閱讀中國經(jīng)典名著。請你寫封郵件，向他推薦《西游記》。要點如下：1.風(fēng)趣幽默，深受喜愛；2.團隊合作，歷險克難；3.追逐夢想，永不言棄。注意：1.詞數(shù)80～100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）DearMike,SinceyouwanttoreadChineseclassicworks,I’dliketorecommendJourneytotheWesttoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHui【答案】例文DearMike,SinceyouwanttoreadChineseclassicworks,I’dliketorecommendJourneytotheWesttoyou.ThebookJourneytotheWestwaswrittenbyWuCheng’enduringtheMingdynasty.IttellsastoryabouttheTangmonkXuanzangandhisthreedisciples.Thebookishumorousandwellreceived.Inthebook,thefourmaincharactersshowteamworkastheyovercamenumerousdifficulties.Finally,theyattainedthetrueBuddhistscriptures.Thisstorytellsustochaseourdreamsandnevergiveup.Youareboundtoenjoyyourselfwhilereadingthenovelandyoucansharewithmeyouropinionswheneveryoulike.Yours,LiHui【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇郵件作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，向Mike介紹《西游記》這本書。注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第三人稱來介紹，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)介紹這本書的內(nèi)容以及想表達的哲理；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。（2021·安徽中考真題）假定你是李華，曾用攢下來的零花錢做了一件有意義的事并受到家人表揚。請你用英語寫一篇短文向校英文報投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.事情經(jīng)過；2.個人感悟。注意：1.詞數(shù)80~100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.短文題目已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：pocketmoney(n.零花錢);meaningful(adj.有意義的)OnceIWasPraised____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnepossibleversionOnceIWasPraisedOnceIwaspraisedbecauseIdidsomethingmeaningfulwithmypocketmoney.Oneday,Ihappenedtoknowsomestudentsinaschoolwerehungryforknowledgebuttheydidn’thaveenoughbooks.Idecidedtooffermyhelp.WithallthepocketmoneyIsaved,Iboughtsomebooksonline,andgavethemawaytotheschool.Myparentswereveryhappyandpraisedmewhentheyheardaboutit.TheysaidIdidameaningfulthing.Ibelievethateverylittlebithelps.IwillcontinuetodowhatIcantohelpothers.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“OnceIWasPraised”為題，結(jié)合提示進行寫作，注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一人稱來行文，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹事情經(jīng)過；第三段描述個人感悟。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。（2020·安徽中考真題）假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike最近因視力減退而感到不安，請你用英文給他寫封電子郵件，談?wù)勀阍诒Ｗo視力方面的一些做法。要點如下：1.經(jīng)常做戶外活動；2.很少用電子產(chǎn)品；3.堅持做眼保健操；4.......注意:1.詞數(shù)80-100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearMikeI'msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua例文：I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesightinmydailylife.Atschool,Ioftengooutoftheclassroomtoplaywithmyclassmatesordophysicalexerciseduringthebreaks.Inmyfreetime,Ialsotryhardtoavoidusingthemobilephoneorcomputer.Youknow,thelighttheygiveoffisharmfultooureyes.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingmytiredeyes.Lastly,Iusuallyhavemyeyesexaminedeverytermtomakesuremyeyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份，給自己的英國筆友Mike寫信，給他介紹一下你在保護視力方面的做法。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱來敘述，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：首先講述題目中Mike的視力減退問題，并引出文章的主題；然后具體介紹自己在保護視力方面的做法，這一部分是文章的主體，可以按照題目中所列的內(nèi)容進行介紹，并對第四條進行補充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。寫作時應(yīng)注意：短文按內(nèi)容表達的需要，分成三段，每一段一個主題；內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括題目中的所有要點，不能遺漏；課根據(jù)表達需要，增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實、豐富。其次應(yīng)注意文章的表達，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，句式應(yīng)符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞郑剐形倪B貫，表達流暢。（2019·安徽中考真題）假定你是李華。某英文報“MyHometown”專欄面向中學(xué)生招募小記者，請你用英文給報社寫封自薦信。要點如下：1.熟悉家鄉(xiāng)；2.樂于交流；3.擅長英語。注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：journalist(n.記者)；column(n.專欄)DearSir/Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua例文：DearSir/Madam,IhearyournewspaperneedsjournalistsforthecolumnMyHometown.Ihopetobeamemberoftheteam.First,Iknowalotaboutmyhometown,suchasitshistoryandculture.Besides,IusedtoworkasajournalistformyschoolnewspaperandIdidaverygoodjob.I'measy-goingandalwaysreadytocommunicatewithothers.Moreover,IhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish,andI'mskillfulatexpressingmyselfclearlyinEnglish.I'msuretobetherightpersonyouarelookingfor.I'dbethankfulifIcouldgetthischance.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題屬于書信作文，信件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。要求根據(jù)提示要點寫一封自薦信介紹自己并申請成為小記者。寫作時要緊扣材料內(nèi)容并進行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點。寫好時，再閱讀一遍，減少語法錯誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯誤。

2.例文點評：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，先表達寫信目的，然后根據(jù)要點提示介紹自己，最后再次點明確信自己是最合適的人。例文簡明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言表達到位。

3.高分亮點：

單詞和短語：hopetodosth.；amemberof；suchas；besides；usedtodosth.；workas；doaverygoodjob；bereadytodosth.；communicatewith；moreover；haveagoodknowledgeof；beskillfulat；inEnglish；lookfor。

句型：and連接并列句；省略that的定語從句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。1．（2023·安徽合肥·合肥市第四十二中學(xué)?？家荒＃W(xué)校英語校報正在征集關(guān)于學(xué)生個人成長經(jīng)歷的優(yōu)秀文章。請你根據(jù)自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀愕谝淮螄L試做某件事的經(jīng)歷和感受，按照下面的要點和要求寫一篇英語短文。要點：1.你嘗試的是什么事；2.這件事給你的感想或留下的寶貴經(jīng)驗。要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.詞數(shù)80~100，首句已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。Everyonehassomespecialexperiencesthatcan’tbeforgotten.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Everyonehassomespecialexperiencesthatcan’tbeforgotten.Forme,IstillrememberthefirsttimeItriedcooking.ItwasasunnySundaylastyear.Anditwasalsomymother’sbirthday.Idecidedtogiveheraspecialpresent.Soearlyinthemorning,Igotupandbegantocook.Itriedtomakeabirthdaycake.SinceIneverdidthatbefore,IsurfedtheInternetandfollowedtheinstructions.Finally,Ididit.Whenmymomwokeup,Ibroughtthecaketoher,saying“Happybirthday,Mom”.Shegotveryexcitedandmoved.Itwasmyfirsttimetryingtocook,andalsomyfirsttimedoingsomethingformymother.Thesweetmemorywillbewithmeforever.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步：先承接短文開頭。第二步：直入主題，介紹自己嘗試的是什么事。第三步：具體談?wù)撨@件事給自己的感想或留下的寶貴經(jīng)驗。[亮點詞匯]①decidedtodosth.決定做某事②wakeup醒來③gotup起床[高分句型]①SinceIneverdidthatbefore,IsurfedtheInternetandfollowedtheinstructions.（since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）②Whenmymomwokeup,Ibroughtthecaketoher,saying“Happybirthday,Mom”.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）2．（2023·安徽六安·統(tǒng)考一模）假定你是李華。你的外國筆友Alice發(fā)來電子郵件，詢問你最喜歡的運動。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給她回一封電子郵件，介紹你最喜歡的運動。內(nèi)容包括：1.你是怎么喜歡上這項運動的；2.你開展這項運動的情況；3.你從事這項運動的體會。注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAlice,Iamsodelightedtoreceiveyoure-mail._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearAlice,Iamsodelightedtoreceiveyoure-mail.I’dliketosharewithyoumyfavoritesporttabletennis,oneofthemostpopularsportsinChina.Attheageoffive,Ibegantolearnhowtoplaytabletennisfrommyparents,whohaveahabitofplayingitintheirsparetime.Sincethen,I’vebeenfondofitandalwaysplayitwithmyfriendsatweekends.Undertheguidanceofmycoach,Iimprovemyskillsgradually.Iwonfirstplaceinmyschoollastyear,whichpromotedmyconfidencegreatly.Yousee,playingtabletennisnotonlybuildsupmybodybutalsohelpsmemakealotoffriends.Therefore,itmakesmylifemoreenjoyable.Whataboutyourfavoritesports?Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：本文時態(tài)有一般過去時，一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：注意描述怎樣喜歡這項運動時，用一般過去時。要注意給出的要點內(nèi)容應(yīng)具體闡述。[寫作步驟]第一步，向筆友介紹自己最愛的運動是乒乓球；第二步，具體闡述怎樣愛上這項運動，現(xiàn)在怎樣訓(xùn)練這項運動；第三步，介紹乒乓球帶給自己的感受，并詢問筆友最愛的運動。[亮點詞匯]①intheirsparetime在他們的空閑時間②Sincethen自那時起③Undertheguidanceof在……的指導(dǎo)下④Therefore因此[高分句型]①Yousee,playingtabletennisnotonlybuildsupmybodybutalsohelpsmemakealotoffriends.（動名詞作主語）②Attheageoffive,Ibegantolearnhowtoplaytabletennisfrommyparents,whohaveahabitofplayingitintheirsparetime.（定語從句）3．（2023·安徽合肥·統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，你的外國朋友Jack聽說“美麗中國”建設(shè)給你的周邊環(huán)境帶來了巨大的變化，請用英文給他回一封郵件介紹你和家人參與“美麗中國”建設(shè)的情況。要點：1.學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)保知識；2.實現(xiàn)綠色生活；3.參與志愿服務(wù)；4.……注意:1.詞數(shù)80~100（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息。DearJack,I’mhappytohearthatyou’reinterestedinthe“BeautifulChina”projectanditsinfluenceontheenvironment._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards,LiHua【答案】例文：DearJack,I’mhappytohearthatyou’reinterestedinthe“BeautifulChina”projectanditsinfluenceontheenvironment.MyfamilyandIhavealsotakenpartinthiseffort.First,we’velearnedaboutprotectingtheenvironmentthroughreadingorvideos.We’vealsotakenstepsinourdailylives.Werecycle,reduceplasticuse,andtrytosavewaterandelectricity.Also,wehavevolunteeredtocleanuppublicareas,planttrees,andteachothershowtoprotecttheenvironment.Thereareotherwaystojoininthe“BeautifulChina”project,suchasbuyinggreenproductsandsharinginformationaboutlivingagreenlife.It’sourdutytoprotecttheplanet,andwe’rehappytobepartofthisimportantproject.Bestregards,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容介紹參與“美麗中國”建設(shè)的情況。注意不要遺漏要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，說明自己和家人參與了“美麗中國”建設(shè)。第二步，介紹自己和家人都做了哪些工作。第三步，呼吁大家都參加到這個項目中去。[亮點詞匯]①throughreadingorvideos通過閱讀或視頻②trytodosth.盡力做某事③joinin參加活動[高分句型]①It’sourdutytoprotecttheplanet(it作形式主語)②teachothershowtoprotecttheenvironment(疑問詞+todo)4．（2023·安徽·校聯(lián)考一模）2023年安徽省中考體育考試取消了男子1000米、女子800米長跑必選項目，同學(xué)們可以在給定選項中選擇自己擅長的2項。那么要想在即將到來的體育考試中取得理想的成績，如何進行科學(xué)有效訓(xùn)練呢?請以“Howtodosportstraining”為題寫一篇作文，在下一周的班會上與大家分享。要求：1.語句通順流暢，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.不少于80詞。提示：可以從考試項目選擇、訓(xùn)練方法、安全防護、刻苦訓(xùn)練和測試等方面進行敘述。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,choosetherightproject,payattentiontopropermethods,trainhard.Thenwecanachieveidealresultsinthephysicaleducationexamination.【答案】例文：HowtodosportstrainingThePEexamiscomingandweallwanttogetthebestgrades.Sohowcanwedosportstrainingtomakeit?Firstofall,weshouldchoosethesportswe’regoodatcarefully.Ifwearen’tinterestedinacertainsportordon’tdowellinit,weshouldchooseanother.It’sthemostimportanttogetthehighestscore.Secondly,weshouldpayattentiontoourtrainingmethods.WeneedscientificandreasonabletrainingundertheguidanceofourPEteachers.Atthesametime,weshouldalsoprotectourselvesfrominjury.Thirdly,weshouldtraingraduallyandincreasethedifficultyslowly.Besides,it’snecessarytotestthetraininginordertoimprovethetrainingeffectassoonaspossible.Inaword,choosetherightproject,payattentiontopropermethods,trainhard.Thenwecanachieveidealresultsinthephysicaleducationexamination.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：這是一篇話題作文，為說明文；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作主題已經(jīng)給出，結(jié)合寫作提示和已給出的作文最后一段可知，從“選擇正確的項目”、“注意正確的方法”和“努力訓(xùn)練”三方面展開寫作。[寫作步驟]第一步，簡單描寫中考體育考試即將到來，引出話題；第二步，建議選擇正確的項目；第三步，建議注意正確的方法；第四步，建議努力訓(xùn)練。[亮點詞匯]①payattentionto重視②scientificandreasonabletraining科學(xué)合理的訓(xùn)練③undertheguidanceof在……的指導(dǎo)下④assoonaspossible盡快[高分句型]①It’sthemostimportanttogetthehighestscore.（it的特殊句型）②Besides,it’snecessarytotestthetraininginordertoimprovethetrainingeffectassoonaspossible.（inorderto引導(dǎo)目的狀語）5．（2023·安徽合肥·九年級統(tǒng)考一模）