高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+阿多大象國家公園的暖心救援+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)阿多大象國家公園的暖心救援1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文AddoElephantNationalPark,asanctuary(庇護(hù)所)fornumerousAfricanelephants,ishometobothforestelephants,whichcanweighupto4tons,andthelargerbushelephants,weighingbetween6and8metrictons.Onesummerday,ababybushelephantfounditselftrappedinamuddypit(坑),unabletoescape.Thesightwasheartbreakingforanyonewhowitnessedit.Theelephantherd,knownfortheirtight-knitbonds,didtheirbesttoassistthestrugglingbabyelephant.Theyattemptedtohelpbysprayingwateraroundtheedgesofthepit,hopingitwouldmakeiteasierforthebabyelephanttoclimbout.Despitetheirefforts,thesituationremainedterrible.4續(xù)寫原文Thepark,lackingfencesorborders,madeanyhumanrescueattemptrisky,asitmeantgettingclosetothemassive,protectiveadults.Undiscouraged,thededicatedparkstaff,knownfortheirexpertiseandcommitment,tookimmediateactions.Theyquicklyarrivedatthesceneandbegandiggingaroundthepittocreateasafeescaperouteforthedistressedbabyelephant.Unfortunately,thiswell-intentionedplandidnotgoashoped.Insteadofhelping,thesituationworsened.Theanxiousherdhuddled(擠成一團(tuán))closeraroundthebaby,pushingthebabyfurtherintothewater-filledpit.Withtimerunningoutandthetensionrising,therescuershadtothinkofanewstrategyquicklyandcreatively.Inanimpressivedisplayofquickthinkingandcourage,therangersdecidedonanadventurousplan.5續(xù)寫原文Theyusedtheirparkvehiclestogentlydrivetheadultelephantsaway.Theseadults,weighingseveraltonseach,presentedasignificantrisk.Buttherangers’determinationwasfirm.Miraculously,theadultelephants,sensingtheurgencyandunderstandingthehumans’intentions,movedaway,providingtherescuerswiththecriticalopportunitytheyneeded.Withtheadultsnowatasafedistance,therangersswiftlymovedintorescuethebabyelephant,whichweighedover200pounds.6段首句Paragraph1：Astherescuesucceeded,therewasatouchingturnfromthebabyelephant.Paragraph2：Butthestorydidn’tendthere.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了“我”獨(dú)自在家的經(jīng)歷。家人去外地參加婚禮，“我”拒絕去鄰居詹金斯先生家，因?yàn)樗１缓⒆觽兂靶ψh論，看起來像壞人。“我”按母親指示鎖門、做作業(yè)后看電視，卻遭遇停電，屋內(nèi)一片漆黑。正摸索找蠟燭時(shí)，聽到有人朝家走來，“我”以為是小偷，心提到嗓子眼，還緊張地拿起菜刀準(zhǔn)備自衛(wèi)。結(jié)果是詹金斯先生敲門詢問情況，這讓“我”十分意外，也打破了對(duì)他的固有偏見，后續(xù)可能會(huì)改變對(duì)他的看法，故事在此留下懸念，引發(fā)讀者對(duì)鄰里關(guān)系的思考。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Astherescuesucceeded,therewasatouchingturnfromthebabyelephant.當(dāng)救援成功后，出現(xiàn)了令人感動(dòng)的一幕。小象并沒有立刻跑回象群，而是轉(zhuǎn)身面向救它的人們。它的眼睛里似乎閃爍著淚光，小小的身軀微微顫抖著。它慢慢地走向那位最靠近它的護(hù)林員，用鼻子輕輕地卷起護(hù)林員的衣角，仿佛在說“謝謝”。周圍的人們都靜靜地看著這一幕，心中滿是溫暖。隨后，小象才歡快地跑回象群，象群發(fā)出喜悅的叫聲，用鼻子撫摸著小象，歡迎它的歸來。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Butthestorydidn’tendthere.但這個(gè)故事并沒有就此結(jié)束。在之后的日子里，公園的工作人員發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些奇妙的變化。每當(dāng)他們的車輛在園區(qū)巡邏時(shí)，象群不再像以前那樣驚慌地逃竄。有時(shí)，甚至還會(huì)有大象主動(dòng)靠近車輛，友好地扇動(dòng)著耳朵，像是在和工作人員打招呼。這種信任的建立，讓公園的工作人員更加堅(jiān)定了守護(hù)這些大象的決心，也讓阿多大象國家公園充滿了更多的溫暖與和諧，成為了人類與動(dòng)物友好共處的美好典范。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Astherescuesucceeded,therewasatouchingturnfromthebabyelephant.Insteadofscamperingbacktoitsherdimmediately,thelittleoneturnedaroundtofaceitsrescuers.Withwhatseemedlikeglisteningtearsinitseyesanditstinybodytremblingslightly,itwalkedslowlytowardstherangerclosesttoit.Gentlycurlingtheranger'sclothingwithitstrunk,asiftoconvey"thankyou",itlefteveryonearounddeeplytouched.Then,withajoyfulrun,itreturnedtotheherd,whichgreeteditwithjubilantcallsandaffectionatetrunkstrokes.14范文呈現(xiàn)Butthestorydidn'tendthere.Inthedaysthatfollowed,theparkstaffnoticedsomeremarkablechanges.Whenevertheirvehiclespatrolledthepark,theelephantherdnolongerfledinpanicasbefore.Sometimes,anelephantwouldevenapproachthevehicleamicably,flappingitsearsinafriendlymanner,asifgreetingthestaff.Thisnewfoundtruststrengthenedthestaff'sresolvetoprotecttheseelephantsandtransformedAddoElephantNationalParkintoaheartwarmingsymbolofharmoniouscoexistencebetweenhumansandanimals.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Astherescuesucceeded,thereemergedaheartwarmingscene.Thebabyelephant,insteadofhastilyrejoiningitsherd,pivotedtofacethosewhohadsavedit.Itseyes,glisteningwithwhatcouldonlybedescribedasgratitude,lockedontotherescuers.Withatremorrunningthroughitsdiminutiveframe,itadvancedwithmeasuredstepstowardsthenearestranger.Delicately,itcoiledtheranger'ssleevewithinitstrunk,anunspokenyetprofoundexpressionofthanks,renderingtheonlookersspeechlesswithemotion.Onlythendidittrotbacktotheherd,whichgreeteditwithexuberanttrumpetingandtendercaresses.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Butthestoryhadfurtherchapterstounfold.Intheensuingdays,theparkstaffbeheldatransformation.Astheirvehiclescruisedthroughthepark,theelephantherd,onceskittishandpronetoflight,nowexhibitedanewfoundcomposure.Onoccasion,anelephantwouldevenambletowardsthevehicle,itsearsswayinginagestureofamity,asiftoacknowledgethehumans'presence.Thisnewbondnotonlyfortifiedthestaff'scommitmenttosafeguardingthesemajesticcreature