高一上學(xué)期期末考試英語(yǔ)試題英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫-咖啡館里的溫暖時(shí)刻+講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Atonetablebythewindow,aladyjustfinishedupherlunch.Itwasn’tanythingfancy,justasandwichandsomesalad,withacupofteatowashitalldown.Sheseemedtobeinherownlittleworld,staringoutthewindoweverynowandthen,likeshewaswaitingforsomething.Afterabit,shegotup,paidforhermealatthecounterandleft.Hertablewasstillamess,withbitsofhermealleftbehind.Itwasn’tabigdeal—thishappensallthetime.Buttoday,somethingdifferentwasgoingtohappen.Ayoungboy,wholookedlikehe’dhadaprettyroughtime,hadbeenwatchingherfromthetablearoundthecorner.Thisboywasinroughshape.Hisclothesweretoobigandlookedlikethey’dseenbetterdays.Hishairwasallovertheplace,andhisfacehadstreaks(條痕)ofdirtonit.Hehadthatlookofsomeonewhohadn’thadagoodmealtoolong.Whentheladyleft,theboysawhischance,Hequicklysatdownandstartedwolfingdowntheleftovers(吃剩的食物)likeitwasthebestmealhe’deverhad.Butthen,thewaiterwalkedover.Hewasanolderguywho’dprobablyseeneverything.Hedidn’tsayanythingatfirst,justwatchedtheboyforasecond.Theboygotscared,stoppedeating,andtearsstartedtofillhiseyes.Hethoughtthewaiterwouldkickhimoutforsure.Instead,thewaitertookawaythehalf-eatenplate,andtheboy’sheartsank.Theboygotuptoleave,butbeforehecouldgetfar,thewaitercamebackandaskedtheboytowaitforamoment.Thewaitergavehimafullandfreshmeal.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thewholecafewentquietwhentheysawwhatwashappening._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theboy,withafullstomachandahappyheart,lookedasifhecouldn’tthankthewaiterenough._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意在一家咖啡館里，靠窗的一位女士吃完簡(jiǎn)單午餐后離去，桌面有些凌亂。一個(gè)衣衫襤褸、滿臉污垢、饑腸轆轆的小男孩瞅準(zhǔn)機(jī)會(huì)，狼吞虎咽吃起女士的剩飯，卻被走來(lái)的老侍者撞見。小男孩嚇得停食落淚，以為會(huì)被趕走，果不其然，侍者拿走餐盤，他的心沉入谷底。可沒想到，侍者很快返回，還給他送上一份全新完整的餐食，故事戛然而止，留下懸念，引發(fā)讀者對(duì)后續(xù)發(fā)展的好奇，整體展現(xiàn)了一個(gè)平凡場(chǎng)景下不尋常的溫情瞬間。二、伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：女士“時(shí)不時(shí)望向窗外，像在等什么”，暗示她或許有心事，后續(xù)可能與男孩有某種關(guān)聯(lián)，比如她目睹男孩的遭遇后折返?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫中女士重回咖啡館，看到男孩得到侍者幫助，心生感動(dòng)，默默為男孩留下一些錢或生活用品。伏筆：男孩“衣衫破舊、頭發(fā)凌亂、滿臉污垢”，預(yù)示他生活艱難，后續(xù)可能面臨更多生存困境，如居無(wú)定所?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫描述男孩雖飽餐一頓，但晚上無(wú)處可睡，侍者知曉后，聯(lián)系救助站幫他解決住宿難題。伏筆：“男孩嚇得停食落淚，以為侍者會(huì)趕他走”，為男孩后續(xù)對(duì)侍者態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變以及內(nèi)心的感恩鋪墊?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫中男孩常來(lái)咖啡館，主動(dòng)幫侍者干活，以報(bào)答恩情，兩人建立深厚情誼。伏筆：咖啡館里“顧客們?cè)緹狒[交談，瞬間安靜”，表明眾人關(guān)注此事，后續(xù)可能集體展現(xiàn)愛心。回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫展現(xiàn)其他顧客受侍者感染，紛紛給男孩捐贈(zèng)衣物、書本，助力他改善生活、學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)。伏筆：侍者“見過世面”卻做出暖心之舉，暗示他善良且經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富，后續(xù)可能持續(xù)幫助男孩成長(zhǎng)?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫中侍者像長(zhǎng)輩一樣教導(dǎo)男孩做人道理，引導(dǎo)他找正經(jīng)工作，開啟新生活。三、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)情感線：男孩起始的驚恐、絕望，到接受侍者幫助后的驚喜、感恩，再到后續(xù)受眾人關(guān)懷，內(nèi)心滿溢溫暖，重燃對(duì)生活的希望；其他顧客從旁觀好奇到主動(dòng)付出愛心；侍者始終懷著善意，給予男孩力量。故事線：第一段，續(xù)寫男孩用餐后的當(dāng)晚困境，如寒冷街頭無(wú)處棲身，侍者發(fā)現(xiàn)后伸出援手，聯(lián)系各方幫他解決難題，顧客們也開始自發(fā)幫忙；第二段，寫一段時(shí)間后，男孩在眾人關(guān)懷下煥然一新，有了住所、衣物，還學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)，常回咖啡館幫忙，與大家親如一家，他徹底走出陰霾，開啟新人生。四、主旨升華句（5句英文）Inaworldwhereyoucanbeanything,bekind.Forkindnessisthelightthatcanilluminatethedarkestcorners.（在這個(gè)你可以成為任何人的世界里，選擇善良。因?yàn)樯屏际悄苷樟磷詈诎到锹涞墓狻＃〢singleactofkindnessthrowsoutrootsinalldirections,andtherootsspringupandmakenewtrees.Yourkindnesstodayshapesabettertomorrow.（一次小小的善舉向四面八方扎根，根又長(zhǎng)出新芽，長(zhǎng)成新樹。你今天的善良塑造更美好的明天。）Kindnessisnotalwaysabigthing.Sometimes,it'sjustawarmmealwhenyou'rehungry,ahelpinghandwhenyou'relost.Itchangeslives.（善良不總是驚天動(dòng)地的大事。有時(shí)，它只是饑餓時(shí)的一頓熱飯，迷路時(shí)的一只援手。它能改變?nèi)松?。）Noactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,iseverwasted.Everybitofloveyougiveoutcomesbacktoyouinthemostunexpectedways.（任何善舉，無(wú)論多小，都不會(huì)白費(fèi)。你付出的每一點(diǎn)愛都會(huì)以最意想不到的方式回饋給你。）Thebestwaytofindyourselfistoloseyourselfintheserviceofothers.Bybeingkind,youdiscoverthetruebeautyoflife.（找到自我的最佳方式是在服務(wù)他人中忘卻自我。通過行善，你發(fā)現(xiàn)生活的真正美好。）五、寫作示范兩篇第一篇Thewholecafewentquietwhentheysawwhatwashappening.Patronswatchedwithbatedbreathasthewaiterplacedthemealinfrontoftheboy.Atthatmoment,thelady,whohadbeenoutsideandwitnessedthescenethroughthewindow,walkedbackin.Withasoftsmile,shehandedthewaitersomemoney,whispering,“Fortheboy'sfuturemeals.”Theboy,eyeswide,couldn'tbelievehisluck.Thatnight,ashehuddledonthestreetcorner,shiveringfromthecold,thewaiterhappenedby.Withoutaword,heledtheboytoanearbyshelterandmadesurehewassafe.Theboy,withafullstomachandahappyheart,lookedasifhecouldn'tthankthewaiterenough.Inthedaysthatfollowed,theboybecamearegularatthecafe.He'dhelpthewaitercleartables,sweepthefloor,anythingtoshowhisgratitude.Thecustomers,touchedbyhisstory,startedbringinginclothesandbooks.Underthewarmgazeofeveryone,theboygrewstrongerandmoreconfident.Helearnedtoreadandwrite,andoneday,hehopedtoworkinaplacejustlikethiscafe,spreadingthekindnesshehadreceived.第二篇Thewholecafewentquietwhentheysawwhatwashappening.Alleyeswereonthewaiterandtheboy.Ayoungcoupleatthebackimmediatelystoodupandapproachedthem.“We'dliketopayforhismealtoo,”theysaid.Thewaiternoddedgratefully.Meanwhile,theboy,stillinshock,startedtoeatslowly,savoringeachbite.Afterward,whenhesteppedoutintothecoldnight,hewasataloss.Butthewaiterhadanticipatedthis.He'dalreadycalledalocalcharity,whichprovidedtheboywithawarmbedforthenight.Theboy,withafullstomachandahappyheart,lookedasifhecouldn'tthankthewaiterenough.Weekspassed,andtheboytransformed.Hewasclean,neatlydressed,thankstothecontinuousdonationsfromthecafe'scustomers.Healsostartedattendingacommunityschool,wherehelearnedbasicskills.Wheneverhehadfreetime,he'drushtothecafe.There,he'dsharehisprogresswiththewaiterandthecustomers,whohadbecomehisnewfamily.Theoncelostboynowknewthatkindnesscouldtrulychangealife,andhewasdeterminedtopassiton.【答案】參考范文：Thewholecafewentquietwhentheysawwhatwashappening.Then,outofnowhere,peoplestartedclapping.Itwaslikesomethingfromamovie.Everyonewassmilingandlookingattheboyenjoyinghissurprisemeal.Astheboyate,thepeopleinthecafestartedwalkinguptothewaiterandgivinghimsomemoney.Theywe