2020中考英語復(fù)習(xí)方案第一篇教材考點梳理話題寫作04安全問題課件

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安全問題第一篇教材考點梳理假定你是王偉,你的英國筆友David來信問及你們學(xué)校在暑假期間對學(xué)生的要求。請你根據(jù)以下要點給他回一封電子郵件?！ぜ彝グ踩?小心用火用電,外出時關(guān)好門窗;·游泳安全:不獨自去游泳,不去河、湖里游泳;·交通安全:過馬路時要當(dāng)心,不在馬路上玩耍。[提示詞]electricityn.電典例分析[注意](1)詞數(shù):80—100;(2)請不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(3)郵件中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名;(4)郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmadesafetyrulesforustofollow._________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________Ithinktheserulesarenecessaryassafetycomesfirst.Haveagoodsummerholiday!Yours,WangWei【思路點撥】1.要點提煉:主題是暑期安全的注意事項,有以下兩點:(1)暑期學(xué)生易發(fā)生的事故;(2)怎樣避免事故的發(fā)生。2.時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時3.人稱:第一人稱【寫作架構(gòu)】【基礎(chǔ)寫作】根據(jù)所給提示寫句子。1.基礎(chǔ)句學(xué)生被要求要小心。(beaskedtodo)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改寫為含有when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句的復(fù)合句)___________________________________________________________________________2.基礎(chǔ)句我們應(yīng)該確保燈關(guān)上了。(makesure)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改寫為含有before的復(fù)合句)___________________________________________________________________________Studentsareaskedtobecareful.Studentsareaskedtobecarefulwhencrossingtheroad.Weshouldmakesurelightsareturnedoff.Weshouldmakesurelightsareturnedoffbeforeweleave.3.基礎(chǔ)句我們不被允許獨自去河里游泳。(beallowedtodo)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(用especially拓展此句)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.基礎(chǔ)句我們必須遵守交通規(guī)則。(trafficrules)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改寫為含有Itis+adj.(+forsb.)+todosth.的句子)___________________________________________________________________________Wearenotallowedtoswimaloneintheriver.Wearenotallowedtoswimalone,especiallyindeepriversorlakes.Wemustfollowthetrafficrules.Itisimportantforustofollowthetrafficrules.【連句成文】DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmadesafetyrulesforustofollow.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.Weareaskedtobecarefulwithelectricitywhenweareusingit.Itisdangeroustoplaywithfire,foritmaycauseterribleaccidents.Weshouldmakesuredoorsandwindowsareshutbeforeweleave.Besides,wearenotallowedtoswimalone,especiallyindeepriversorlakes.Ifwereallywantto,wemustgototheswimmingpoolwithourparentsorteachers.What'smore,followingtrafficrulesisalsoveryimportant.Everyoneshouldwatchoutwhencrossingtheroad.Andourschoolwarnsusnottoplayontheroad.Ithinktheserulesarenecessaryassafetycomesfirst.Haveagoodsummerholiday!Yours,WangWei【導(dǎo)入主題】1.Schoolsafetyisimportanttoeverystudent.2.Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.3.Everyonehasonlyonelife,soweshouldtreasureourlives.4.Lifeisonlyonceforeveryone.It'simportanttocherishourlives.拓展積累【文章過渡、發(fā)展】1.First,weshouldkeepcalmandfindtheexitquickly.2.Soweshouldobeythetrafficruleswhenwegoout.3.Butifweareindanger,weshouldkeepcalmfirst.4.Asforfood,weshouldeatmorehealthyfoodandlessjunkfood.【文章的結(jié)尾】1.Theseareourschool'smethodsthattheteachershavetaughtus.2.Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueourlives.3.Allinall,weneedtolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.A

[2019·安順]請結(jié)合以下提示,以“HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?”為題,寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。[提示](1)謹(jǐn)慎交友;(2)不參與打架斗毆;(3)面對校園欺凌怎樣自我保護。實戰(zhàn)演練[參考詞匯](1)self-protection(自我保護)(2)bully(n./v.欺凌)(3)personalsafety(人身安全)(4)haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗毆)HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?

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Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.

Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveself-protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehavior.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.

I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.Doyouthinkso?B

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“人生沒有彩排,生命沒有重來”,你平安、健康、快樂地成長是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬學(xué)校將舉辦一場以“Keepawayfromthedanger!”為主題的英文演講比賽。假如你是李華,大家推選你參加這次比賽。請根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖提示,寫一篇英文演講稿。[寫作提示][要求](1)所有的提示詞都須用上,包含以上所有要點,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實,行文連貫;(2)演講稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名;(3)詞數(shù):80左右(演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。Keepawayfromthedanger!Hello,everyone!I'mLiHua.Thedangerisaroundus.Sowemustlearnhowtokeepawayfromthedanger.First,wemustn'tgoswimmingwithoutourparents'orteachers'permission.

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Inaword,wemusttryourbesttokeepawayfromthedanger!

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