2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+花園里與母鹿的奇妙心靈對(duì)話+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)花園里與母鹿的奇妙心靈對(duì)話1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onespring,IwashiredasgroundskeeperataCountryInn,afamousbed-and-breakfastlocatedinWashingtonstate.Thegrandhouseisinabeautifulplace.Manyfamouspeoplehavevisitedandevenhadtheirownroomsthere.Theowners,PhilipandCecelia,havedoneaperfectjobforthehouse.However,thegardenswereveryovergrown.Worseyet,therewasanotherproblem:averypersistentdoe(母鹿).EverydaywhenIcametowork,therewasnewevidenceofthedeer’sbigappetite.Itriedmanypreventives:spray,humanhair,soap,younameit-butnoneofthosethingshadeffect.OftenwhenIwasweeding,I’dlookoverandthereshe’dbe,munchingsometastypieces.Worstofall,shefeastedontheroses,inwhichCeceliatookgreatpride.IbecamesofrustratedthatInamedher“Dinner”—andwantedtoserveheronplates.4續(xù)寫原文Onemorning,IwasonmyhandsandkneespullingoutvinesandbusheswhenIcaughtamovementoutofthecornerofmyeye.TherewasDinner,notfivefeetaway,munchingalargeleafandstaringatme.Ifeltaconnectionwiththisanimal.Wedidhavesomethingincommon-wewerebothmothers.Igotthecrazyideaofcommunicatingwithheranditseemedshewantedthesamething.What’sup?Iaskedinmyhead.I’mherebecauseIfeelsafe,wasthegentlereplyIfeltIheard.Ihavemyfawns(幼鹿)beddeddownnearby,andthereisplentytoeat.Whenthetwinsareolderaftersummer,Iwillmovethemdeeperintotheforest.5續(xù)寫原文Iunderstandthat,Iassuredher.Peoplecomeheretoo,fromfaraway.Iguessthey’llbeinterestedtoseeyou.Ipromisethatnobodywillharmyouoryourchildren.Idon’tmindsharingthevegetationbutCecelialovesroses,too.Sheisveryupsetwhentheyarealleaten.Aloudcrashbrokethemagic.Oureyesmetagainbrieflybeforesheleapedoffacrossthedriveway,disappearingintotheforest.HasIreallycommunicatedwiththedeer?6段首句Paragraph1：IwentintothekitchenwhereCeceliawaspreparingtheeveningmeal.Paragraph2：Everyday,IenjoyedwatchingDinnerwiththetwinsandmypresenceneverbotheredthem.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了作者受雇于一家鄉(xiāng)村旅館做園丁，旅館花園雖美卻雜草叢生，還有一只貪吃的母鹿“Dinner”常來(lái)破壞，尤其是吃掉了塞西莉亞心愛(ài)的玫瑰，讓作者頭疼不已。一次除草時(shí)作者與母鹿“對(duì)視”，竟仿佛與它有了心靈交流，了解到它來(lái)此是為了幼鹿安全和食物。作者將此事告知塞西莉亞，她不僅未生氣，還提議劃出一塊區(qū)域供母鹿進(jìn)食。此后作者每天看著母鹿和幼鹿，相處和諧，這段奇妙經(jīng)歷也成為了作者難忘的回憶。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：IwentintothekitchenwhereCeceliawaspreparingtheeveningmeal.我走進(jìn)廚房，塞西莉亞正在準(zhǔn)備晚餐。我鼓起勇氣向她講述了與母鹿“Dinner”的奇妙交流，心中忐忑不安，擔(dān)心她會(huì)覺(jué)得我荒謬。然而，塞西莉亞卻沒(méi)有絲毫責(zé)怪之意，反而陷入了沉思。片刻后，她提出一個(gè)想法，我們可以在花園的角落開(kāi)辟一小塊區(qū)域，專門種植一些母鹿愛(ài)吃的植物，同時(shí)用柵欄將玫瑰叢圍起來(lái)，避免再次被破壞。我對(duì)她的寬容和智慧深感欽佩，我們立刻著手準(zhǔn)備。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Everyday,IenjoyedwatchingDinnerwiththetwinsandmypresenceneverbotheredthem.每天，我都愉快地看著“Dinner”和它的雙胞胎幼鹿在我們?yōu)樗鼈儨?zhǔn)備的區(qū)域里進(jìn)食、玩耍，我的存在似乎絲毫沒(méi)有打擾到它們。隨著時(shí)間的推移，母鹿和幼鹿變得越來(lái)越大膽，有時(shí)甚至?xí)谖夜ぷ鲿r(shí)走到我身邊。而我也會(huì)輕輕地和它們說(shuō)話，仿佛我們是親密的朋友。旅館的客人們偶然看到這一幕，都驚嘆不已，這也成為了旅館一道獨(dú)特的風(fēng)景，讓這個(gè)地方更加充滿生機(jī)和溫暖。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)IwalkedintothekitchenwhereCeceliawaspreparingtheeveningmeal.Musteringupmycourage,Itoldherabouttheamazingencounterwiththedoe,"Dinner",myheartpoundingwithapprehension,fearingshemightthinkIwasbeingridiculous.However,tomyastonishment,Ceceliashowednosignofreproach.Instead,shefellintodeepthought.Afterawhile,shecameupwithanidea.Wecouldsetasideasmallcornerofthegardentoplantsomeofthedoe'sfavoriteplantsandfenceofftherosebushestopreventfurtherdamage.Iwasdeeplyimpressedbyhertoleranceandwisdom,andweimmediatelysetaboutmakingpreparations.14范文呈現(xiàn)Everyday,Itookgreatpleasureinwatching"Dinner"andhertwinfawnsgrazingandplayingintheareawehadpreparedforthem,andmypresenceseeminglydidn'tdisturbthematall.Astimewentby,thedoeandthefawnsgrewbolder.SometimestheywouldevencomeuptomewhileIwasworking.AndIwouldgentlytalktothemasifwewereclosefriends.Theguestsattheinn,whohappenedtowitnessthisscene,wereallamazed.Ithadbecomeauniquesightoftheinn,addingmorevitalityandwarmthtothisplace.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Withahintoftrepidation,IsteppedintothekitchenwhereCeceliawasengrossedinthepreparationoftheeveningrepast.Summoningeveryounceofcouragewithinme,Irecountedtheextraordinaryencounterwiththedoe,“Dinner”,half-expectingaskepticalresponse.Tomyutteramazement,Cecelia‘scountenancebetrayednosignofreproachordisbelief.Instead,herbrowsknittedin.Asmallsectionofthegardencontemplation.Afteramoment'sdeliberation,sheproposedabrilliantsolution.couldbededicatedtocultivatingtheplantsfavoredbythedoe,whiletherosebusheswouldbesafeguardedbyasturdyfence.Deeplymovedbyhermagnanimityandsagacity,wepromptlyembarkedontheimplementationofthisplan.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Daily,Ireveledinthesightof"Dinner"andhertwinfawnsfrolickingandgrazinginthedesignatedarea,seeminglyoblivioustomypresence.Asthedaysslippedby,thedoeandheroffspringgrewincreasinglyintrepid.TherewereoccasionswhentheywouldapproachmeunhesitatinglyasItoiledaway.Inthosemoments,Iwouldengagethemingentleconversation,asifwewerekindredspirits.Theguestswhochanceduponthisidyllicscenewereinvariablyspellbound.Thisunique