Unit3寫作能力提升練

Unit3FamilytiesUnit3寫作能力提升練當(dāng)我們談?wù)摷彝r(shí)，總是充滿了溫馨和回憶。家庭是我

們成長(zhǎng)的港灣，承載著無(wú)數(shù)美好的瞬間。根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖

提示用英文描述一下你的家庭吧。詞數(shù)：不少于60。［審題指導(dǎo)］1.體裁：

說(shuō)明文

2.人稱：

第一人稱為主3.時(shí)態(tài)：

一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)［思路構(gòu)建］［精彩范文］MyFamilyIhaveahappyfamily.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily—

myfather，mother，youngerbrotherandme.Myfatherisanengineer，andheworksveryhard.Every

night，hereadsbookswithme.Ilearnedalotfromhim.My

motherisateacherofanelementaryschool.Shealwaysanswers

myquestionspatientlyandhelpsmewithmystudies.Mycute

littlebrotherisabitnaughty，butIstilllovehim.Weoftenplay

togetherandshareourhappiness.Ourfamilylifeiswarmandcozy.Everyweekend，wecook

deliciousdinnerstogether，gototheparkorwatchmovies

together.Myhomeisalwaysfullofloveandlaughter.Ilovemy

family.高分點(diǎn)評(píng)：

1.本文采用“總—分—總”結(jié)構(gòu)，思路清晰。開

篇以“Ihaveahappyfamily.”點(diǎn)明主旨，引出下文對(duì)作者一家幸福家庭生活的描述；中間通過(guò)對(duì)爸爸、媽媽不同形式的愛和陪伴以及我對(duì)淘氣小弟弟的喜愛的描述，給我們展現(xiàn)了一幅幅家庭溫馨畫面。最后通過(guò)一些家庭活動(dòng)再次證明我家是一個(gè)幸福的家庭。2.通過(guò)一連串動(dòng)作描寫，readsbookswithme，answersmy

questionspatiently，cookdeliciousdinnerstogether，goto

theparkorwatchmoviestogether，使描述更加生動(dòng)。假如你是Tommy，你父親的生日快要到了，這是你向爸

爸表達(dá)感激的好機(jī)會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下問(wèn)題提示，用英文給你父

親寫一封信。1.Whatdoyouthinkofyourfather？2.Whatdoesheoftendotomakeyougrowuphealthily？

(reading；travelling；exercising；helpingothers；going

green；beingpolite…)3.Whatwillyoudotoshowthankstoyourfather？注意：

詞數(shù)不少于60；文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不

計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearfather，Youraisemeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youarean

importantpersonintheprocessofmygrowth.

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?Youtakegood

careofmeallthetimeandteachmegoodmanners.That

makesmeapoliteperson.

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?Youarealwayspatientenoughtoreadwithmeandgive

melotsofadviceonbooks.Iliketravelling，soyouoften

takemetodifferentplacesofinterestallovertheworld.I

enjoythejourneyverymuchandfeelrelaxed.Youareready

tohelppeopleinneed.Youteachmetobeakindperson.In

thepast，Ineversaid“Iloveyou”toyou.Todayisyour

birthday.Iwanttosayittoyouloudly.

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