專題09：書(shū)面表達(dá)-2023年廣東省廣州市11區(qū)中考英語(yǔ)一模及名校模擬試題分類匯編（解析版）

專題09：書(shū)面表達(dá)2023年廣東省廣州市11區(qū)中考英語(yǔ)一模及名校模擬試題分類匯編（解析版）一、書(shū)信作文1．（2023·廣東廣州·海珠區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）在“共建美麗多彩校園”活動(dòng)中，校長(zhǎng)鼓勵(lì)全校學(xué)生為此活動(dòng)提建議。假設(shè)你是九年級(jí)學(xué)生王華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一封信給校長(zhǎng)，跟他談?wù)剬W(xué)校存在的問(wèn)題和你的建議。注意：1.可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息；2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（信件的基本格式和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。DearHeadmaster,IamastudentofGrade9.Iamexcitedtoparticipateinthe“BuildingaBeautifulandColourfulCampusTogether”activity.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Respectfully,WangHua【答案】例文DearHeadmaster,IamastudentofGrade9.Iamexcitedtoparticipateinthe“BuildingaBeautifulandColourfulCampusTogether”activity.First,Iwouldliketotalkabouttheproblemsofourcampus.Theschoolroadsarenotveryclean,andtherearenotenoughtreeswhichcanprovideshadeinsummerandmaketheschoolmorebeautiful.Inaddition,therearefewafter-schoolactivitiesforustotakepartin,whichcanhelpusoutofthestressofhardstudy.What’smore,somefacilitiesandequipmentatschoolareold,suchascomputersandprojectors.Herearemysuggestions.Firstofall,Ihopethatwecandosomethingtomaketheenvironmentmorepleasantandbeautiful,suchasplantingmoretrees,repairingschoolbuildingsandimprovingschoolroads.Secondly,organizemoreafter-schoolactivities,suchaslecturesandcompetitionssothatwecanhavemoreopportunitiestoshowourtalentsandabilities.Itcanalsohelpusrelaxourselves.Lastbutnotleast,updatetheteachingandclassroomequipmentinordertoimprovetheeffectofteachingandlearning.Iwillfeelveryhappyifmyadviceistaken.Ihopeourcampuswillbemorebeautifulandcolourful.Respectfully,WangHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封書(shū)信。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。③提示：文章為第一人稱，介紹學(xué)校的問(wèn)題，然后提出改進(jìn)意見(jiàn)。思維導(dǎo)圖描述完整，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，提出學(xué)校存在的問(wèn)題；第二步，提出改進(jìn)意見(jiàn)；第三步，總結(jié)并表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takepartin參加②Inaddition除此之外③What’smore另外④Lastbutnotleast最后但是也是最重要的⑤Firstofall首先⑥inorderto為了[高分句型]①therearenotenoughtreeswhichcanprovideshadeinsummerandmaketheschoolmorebeautiful.（限制性定語(yǔ)從句）②Inaddition,therearefewafter-schoolactivitiesforustotakepartin,whichcanhelpusoutofthestressofhardstudy.（非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）③Iwillfeelveryhappyifmyadviceistaken.（條件狀語(yǔ)從句）④Firstofall,Ihopethatwecandosomethingtomaketheenvironmentmorepleasantandbeautiful,suchasplantingmoretrees,repairingschoolbuildingsandimprovingschoolroads.（賓語(yǔ)從句）⑤Secondly,organizemoreafter-schoolactivities,suchaslecturesandcompetitionssothatwecanhavemoreopportunitiestoshowourtalentsandabilities.（目的狀語(yǔ)從句）2．（2023·廣東廣州·荔灣區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，你想向外國(guó)筆友Tom介紹一位對(duì)你影響深遠(yuǎn)的老師。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信。注意：1.請(qǐng)圍繞所給的提示合理發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；3.不得透露學(xué)校、真實(shí)姓名及任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。DearTom,Throughmylifeinjuniorhighschool,oneofmyteachersplaysaveryimportantrole.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofmyteacher?Howaboutyours?LiHua【答案】例文：DearTom,Throughmylifeinjuniorhighschool,oneofmyteachersplaysaveryimportantrole.SheismyEnglishteacherMissZhao.MissZhaoisawarm-heartedladywithacharmingsmileonherface.ItisherwhohelpedmemakeprogressinmyEnglish.IrememberthatmyEnglishwasverypoorwhenIenteredmiddleschool.IwassoworriedandupsetbecauseofmypoorEnglish.Luckily,sheknewmysituationanddecidedtohelpmelearnEnglish.Withherhelp,myEnglishimprovedalot.ThisisMissZhao,anexcellentteacherwhomadeadeepimpressiononme.Imadeupmymindtobeapersonlikehertocontributetooursociety.Whatdoyouthinkofmyteacher?Howaboutyours?LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書(shū)信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)從“難忘經(jīng)歷”和“成長(zhǎng)啟示”兩方面來(lái)介紹對(duì)自己影響深遠(yuǎn)的老師。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹這位老師是誰(shuí)；第二步，介紹成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷；第三步，給出成長(zhǎng)啟示；第四步，收尾（已給出）。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①helpsb.dosth.幫助某人做某事②becauseof因?yàn)棰踡akeupone'smindtodosth.下定決心做某事[高分句型]①ItisherwhohelpedmemakeprogressinmyEnglish.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）②IrememberthatmyEnglishwasverypoorwhenIenteredmiddleschool.（that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句；when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）二、電子郵件3．（2023·廣東廣州·南沙區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是初中生李華，為了讓更多人了解中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化，學(xué)校將舉辦中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化展，請(qǐng)你給外教Mr.Smith寫(xiě)一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加。郵件內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2、活動(dòng)目的；3、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)各地語(yǔ)言、欣賞文學(xué)藝術(shù)、了解傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日、體驗(yàn)傳統(tǒng)技術(shù)、品嘗傳統(tǒng)美食（請(qǐng)選擇其中2項(xiàng)活動(dòng)）；4、希望Mr.Smith參加。要求：1、80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2、涵蓋要求的內(nèi)容并適當(dāng)拓展。DearMr.Smith,IamLiHua.IamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheTraditionalChineseCultureFairinourschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMr.Smith,IamLiHua.IamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheTraditionalChineseCultureFairinourschool.ItwillbeheldattheArtCenterthisFridayafternoon,from2p.m.to5p.m.SincethiseventaimstohelpmorepeoplelearnaboutthetraditionalChineseculture,thestaff,allthestudentsandtheirparentsaswellasanyoneinterestedinitarewelcome.Atthefair,theChinesepaintingwillbeexhibited.Whatismore,youwillbeabletoexperiencehowtomaketheChinesepapercuttinganddoughtoyduringthefair,whichIamsureyouwillbeimpressedsomuch.IthinkthesetraditionalskillscannotonlyhelpyouunderstandourtraditionalChineseculturemuchbetterbutdefinitelyfeeltheuniquebeautyofit.Ifyou’reinterested,pleasecomeandenjoyit.AndI’dbegladtoofferanyhelp.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：以“一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)”為主；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意把活動(dòng)的目的、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)及外教能有哪方面的收獲表達(dá)清楚。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，介紹自己并發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)；第二步，闡述具體的活動(dòng)安排，例如活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、目的、地點(diǎn)及活動(dòng)安排；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，期待回復(fù)并接受邀請(qǐng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①aimtodo目的在于某做某事②aswellas和；也③offeranyhelp提供任何幫助[高分句型]①SincethiseventaimstohelpmorepeoplelearnaboutthetraditionalChineseculture,thestaff,allthestudentsandtheirparentsaswellasanyoneinterestedinitarewelcome.（since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②IthinkthesetraditionalskillscannotonlyhelpyouunderstandourtraditionalChineseculturemuchbetterbutdefinitelyfeeltheuniquebeautyofit.（“notonly…butalso…”句型）4．（2023·廣東廣州·從化區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是李華，你在國(guó)外的筆友Tom對(duì)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣，他來(lái)信詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，給他回一封電子郵件，介紹一個(gè)你最喜歡的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。內(nèi)容包括：1.節(jié)日的名稱和時(shí)間；2.節(jié)日的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗（請(qǐng)至少補(bǔ)充2點(diǎn)）；3.節(jié)日的感受和意義。注意：1.80詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；3.信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。DearTom,Iamgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.LetmeintroducemyfavouriteChinesetraditionalfestivaltoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofthisfestival?I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文:DearTom,Iamgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.LetmeintroducemyfavoriteChinesetraditionalfestivaltoyou.ItistheDragonBoatFestival,whichhasalonghistory.ItisinmemoryofagreatancientpoetQuYuan.ItisscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChinesecalendar.Onthatday,peoplealwayseattastyricedumplingsandwatchexcitingdragonboatracestocelebrateit.Insomeplaces,peoplealsodrinkrealgarwinetoprotectthemselvesfromillness.Inmyopinion,theDragonBoatFestivalisahistoricandmeaningfultraditionalfestival.Whatdoyouthinkofthisfestival?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：這是一篇電子郵件，為說(shuō)明文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：介紹最喜歡的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，包括：時(shí)間、習(xí)俗、感受、意義等。注意主題必須是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，描寫(xiě)端午節(jié)的時(shí)間和意義；第二步，描寫(xiě)端午節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗；第三步，描寫(xiě)端午節(jié)的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inmemoryof為了紀(jì)念②accordingtotheChinesecalendar按照農(nóng)歷③protectthemselvesfromillness保護(hù)自己不生?、躠historicandmeaningfultraditionalfestival一個(gè)具有歷史意義的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日[高分句型]ItistheDragonBoatFestival,whichhasalonghistory.（定語(yǔ)從句）5．（2023·廣東廣州·天河區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，學(xué)校將接待一批國(guó)際交換生，請(qǐng)你為學(xué)校擬一封郵件，向交換生們推薦兩項(xiàng)有關(guān)中國(guó)文化的交流活動(dòng)，給出理由，并提供一些建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80—120個(gè)左右(文章開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Dearexchangestudents,Welcometoourschool!Tomakeyourvisitmorepleasantandmeaningful,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wearelookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearexchangestudents,Welcometoourschool!Tomakeyourvisitmorepleasantandmeaningful,herearesomeamazingactivitiesforyou.TolearnaboutChinesetraditionalculture,takingourancientpoetryclassisthetopchoice.Whilereadingthepoems,youmayfeelthatyouaremeetingpeoplefromthepastandexperiencingtheirlife.Itisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikehanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.TomeetmodernGuangzhou,IstronglyrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.Asoneof“thefourgreatinventions”inmodernChina,sharedbikesareconvenientenoughtotakeyouanywhere,anytime.Touringwithabike,youcanenjoynotonlythenaturalbeautyalongtheriver,butalsosomefamouslandmarksaroundZhujiangNewTown.Bytheway,remembertotakeyourmobilephone,asusingsharedbicyclesneedsscanningwithamobilephone.Wearelookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。②時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]①第一步，補(bǔ)全開(kāi)頭，交代出寫(xiě)作目的，介紹幾個(gè)活動(dòng)給對(duì)方；②第二步，分別從校內(nèi)和校外兩個(gè)方面來(lái)介紹活動(dòng)；③第三步，總結(jié)全文，表示對(duì)于對(duì)方到來(lái)的期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①learnabout學(xué)習(xí)關(guān)于……②trytodo嘗試做某事③recommendsbtodosth推薦某人做某事④notonly…,butalso…不但……，而且……⑤bytheway順便說(shuō)一下[高分句型]①Whilereadingthepoems,youmayfeelthatyouaremeetingpeoplefromthepastandexperiencingtheirlife.(while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)②Itisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikehanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句)三、講稿6．（2023·廣東廣州·越秀區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校開(kāi)展了“陽(yáng)光互助小組（TheSunshineMutualAidTeam）”活動(dòng)。下周，你們將迎來(lái)英國(guó)的教育交換學(xué)生參觀學(xué)習(xí)。你將作為代表發(fā)言，向他們介紹這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，并邀請(qǐng)他們參加。你的發(fā)言稿需要包括以下要點(diǎn)：注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右（短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Dearall,Welcometoourschool!IamheretodaytointroducetheSunshineMutualAidTeam._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouallforlistening!【答案】例文1：Dearall,Welcometoourschool!IamheretodaytointroducetheSunshineMutualAidTeam.TheSunshineMutualAidTeamiswarmlywelcomedinourschool,solotsofstudentsareinterestedinit.Inthisteam,wecanchooseourgroupmembersfreelyandtakepartintheactivitieswithfourstudentsinagroup.Atthebeginningofeachmonth,weusuallymakeplansforstudying.Besides,wediscussingroupsonceaweeksothatwecanhelpourgroupmemberstosolvetheirdifficultproblems.Asagroupmember,Ifinditmeaningfultojoinintheseactivities.Infact,Ibenefitalotfromthem.Atfirst,it’shelpfulformetoimprovemyefficiencyofstudying.What’smore,Igetmorechancestomakefriendswithdifferentstudents.Comeandjoinus!Iamsurethatyouwillbenefitalot.Thankyouallforlistening!例文2：Dearall,Welcometoourschool!IamheretodaytointroducetheSunshineMutualAidTeam.ItissohelpfulforusthatIcan’twaittotellyouallthedetails.Fourstudentschoosetobeinagroupaccordingtoourownwill.Atthebeginningofeachmonth,wegatheraroundtomakeasuitablestudyplanforourgroup.Eachweek,agroupdiscussionisorganizedtohelpallthememberssolvetheproblemswemeetduringthestudy.Inmyopinion,thisactivityisagreatsuccess.Itnotonlyhelpsusstudyinamoreefficientway,butalsogivesusachancetocommunicatebetterwithourfriends.Itisalsoawonderfulwaytolearnfromeachother.Wereallyhopethatyoucanjoinusandshareyourlearningmethodwithus.Istronglybelievethatwillbenefitallofus.Thankyouallforlistening!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏講述自己的收獲，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，簡(jiǎn)單進(jìn)行介紹，“陽(yáng)光互助小組很受歡迎，可以自由選擇組員”。第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，主要描述“活動(dòng)內(nèi)容”中的“月初制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃”、“每周一次小組討論解決問(wèn)題”，并對(duì)“自己的收獲”進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，可以“提高學(xué)習(xí)效率”、“有更多的機(jī)會(huì)和不同的學(xué)生交朋友”。第三步，邀請(qǐng)參加陽(yáng)光互助小組，強(qiáng)調(diào)“可以從中受益匪淺”。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①iswarmlywelcomed受到熱烈歡迎②areinterestedinit對(duì)它感興趣③Atthebeginningofeachmonth在每個(gè)月初④finditmeaningfultojoinintheseactivities發(fā)現(xiàn)參加這些活動(dòng)有意義[高分句型]①TheSunshineMutualAidTeamiswarmlywelcomedinourschool,solotsofstudentsareinterestedinit.（so連接兩個(gè)并列句，第一個(gè)并列句中應(yīng)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)）②Besides,wediscussingroupsonceaweeksothatwecanhelpourgroupmemberstosolvetheirdifficultproblems.（sothat引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）7．（2023·廣東廣州·黃埔區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）為迎接疫情后來(lái)校交流的外國(guó)學(xué)生，你?，F(xiàn)準(zhǔn)備舉辦一場(chǎng)“最美文化交流使者”選拔活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，你準(zhǔn)備參加。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一份英語(yǔ)競(jìng)選演講稿。內(nèi)容包括：備注：參考詞匯：1.election

競(jìng)選2.theBestAmbassadorofCulturalExchange最美文化交流使者要求：1.80詞左右；可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.演講稿內(nèi)容合理、完整；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、連貫；3.不得透露真實(shí)學(xué)校、姓名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Goodmorning,dearladiesandgentleman.I’mLiHua._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PleasesupportmeandIwillneverletyoudown.【答案】例文Goodmorning,dearladiesandgentleman.I’mLiHua.NowIamspeakingfortheelectionoftheBestAmbassadorofCulturalExchangeinourschool.First,Iamgoingtointroducemyselfbriefly.Myclassmatesandteachersalwaysseemeasacheerfulfriendorresponsiblehelper.Ifyourunintomeatschool,youwillbeimpressedbymywarmsmileandkindnesstoothers.Afterclass,IenjoywatchingEnglishmoviesandreadingbooks,soIknowalotaboutforeignculture.Iamanoutgoingstudent.AndIcanspeakfluentEnglishsoIamnotafraidofchattingwithforeigners.IfIamelected,IplantoinvitetheexchangestudentstoexperienceChineseculturebyteachingthemtomakepaper-cutting,drawingChinesepaintings,etc.Moreover,IhopetoinvitethemtomyhomesothattheywillbeabletoknowbetteraboutChinesefamilylife.PleasesupportmeandIwillneverletyoudown!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)題干中的提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一份英語(yǔ)競(jìng)選演講稿，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出話題，表示自己要競(jìng)聘最美文化交流使者；第二步，介紹自己的基本信息；第三步，介紹自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)第四步，介紹自己作為最美文化交流使者要做什么。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①seesb.as...把……當(dāng)作……②runinto偶然遇到③beafraidof害怕[高分句型]①Ifyourunintomeatschool,youwillbeimpressedbymywarmsmileandkindnesstoothers.(if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)②IenjoywatchingEnglishmoviesandreadingbooks,soIknowalotaboutforeignculture.(so連接的并列句)③IhopetoinvitethemtomyhomesothattheywillbeabletoknowbetteraboutChinesefamilylife.(sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句)四、材料作文8．（2023·廣東廣州·番禺區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）你校將舉辦讀書(shū)分享會(huì)，學(xué)校英文報(bào)以“MyFavouriteBook”為題向?qū)W生征稿。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，介紹你最喜歡的書(shū)。MyFavouriteBookWhatbook?—nameofthebook—writerWhatisitabout?—mainidea—maincharactersWhydoyoulikeit?…（atleasttworeasons）注意：1.可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息；2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。MyFavouriteBookIhavereadsomefantasticbooks._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文

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Ihavereadsomefantasticbooks.OfallthebooksIhaveread,IloveADreamoftheRedMansionsmost.ItismyfavoritenotbecauseitwaswrittenbyCaoXueqin,afamousnovelistinQingDynasty.Rather,Ideeplyvaluethebookandhavereaditover10times.Firstly,forthemovinglovestorybetweenJiaBaoyuandLinDaiyu.Besides,ifgivenenoughpatienceanddevotion,thenovelwillalsorevealtheriseanddeclineofafamousroyalfamilytoitsreaders.WhatIalsoenjoyaboutthebookisitslanguageandwritingstyleofCaoXueqin,whichhadaprofoundeffectonthewritersofhistimesandlatergenerations.

Allinall,ADreamoftheRedMansionshaswonmyheartandIamconvincedthatitdeservesyourstoo.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，不能遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹你最喜歡書(shū)的名字；第二步，介紹書(shū)中的基本故事；第三步，最后說(shuō)明你為什么喜歡它。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①besides而且②allinall總而言之③winone’sheart贏得某人的心[高分句型]①OfallthebooksIhaveread（省略that的定語(yǔ)從句）②ifgivenenoughpatienceanddevotion,thenovelwillalsorevealtheriseanddeclineofafamousroyalfamilytoitsreaders.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）9．（2023·廣東廣州·增城區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）勞動(dòng)(labor)是日常生活不可或缺的部分，每位同學(xué)都積極參與勞動(dòng)鍛煉。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你們小組四人的勞動(dòng)情況，需包括以下要點(diǎn)。成員LucyMikeAliceYou勞動(dòng)項(xiàng)目做家務(wù)照顧寵物狗種蔬菜(請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充)時(shí)間每周末每天暑假(請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充)地點(diǎn)家里公園農(nóng)場(chǎng)(請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充)好處鍛煉身體提高責(zé)任感表達(dá)愛(ài)意(請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充)注意：1.不少于80詞(短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù))；2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。It’swell-knownthat“Laboristhemostglorious(光榮的)”.Everyoneinourgrouplikeslaboring.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文It’swell-knownthat“Laboristhemostglorious(光榮的)”.Everyoneinourgrouplikeslaboring.Atourclassmeting,wesharedourlaborexperiencewithourgroupmembers.InLucy’ssparetime,shecleansthefloorsathomeeveryweekend.Cleaningthefloorislikedoingexercise.Shethinksitcanhelpherbuildastrongerbodyandmakeherhealthier.Mikelikeshispetdogverymuch.Henotonlyfeedsthedogeverydaybutalsowalksitintheparkafterdinner.Inthisway,hebuildsuphisresponsibility.InAlice’sopinion,shewouldliketogrowvegetablesduringsummervacationinthefarm.Sheregardsitasagoodwaytoshowlovetoothers.Asforme,IcookmealsformyparentswhenIamfreebecauseIaminterestedincooking.Cookingcanbringmesatisfaction.Laborisagoodwayforteenagerstodevelopindependence.Let’stakeactiontotakepartinlabor.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，不能遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹Lucy、Mike和Alice的勞動(dòng)情況；第二步，介紹你自己的勞動(dòng)情況；第三步，最后做總結(jié)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①notonly...butalso不但……而且②inone’sopinion在某人看來(lái)③asfor至于[高分句型]①Cleaningthefloorislikedoingexercise.（動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)）②IcookmealsformyparentswhenIamfreebecauseIaminterestedincooking.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀狀語(yǔ)從句和because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）10．（2023·廣東廣州·花都統(tǒng)考一模）上個(gè)月，你校舉辦了“我的成長(zhǎng)”的英語(yǔ)主題分享。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，匯報(bào)你們小組四人的分享內(nèi)容，需包括以下要點(diǎn)。注意：1字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右(短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。2不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon“Myprogress”lastmonth.Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon“Myprogress”lastmonth.Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.FangFangsharedherexperienceaboutstudy.Shehasgoodlearninghabitsnowandshegetsgoodgradesnow.SunLeisharedhisexperienceaboutvoluntarywork.Hehelpsothersinneedandhegoestotheoldpeople’shouseeveryweekend.ZhaoYunsharedhisexperienceaboutenvironmentalprotection.Herecyclesoldthingsandusesthemoneytohelpchildreninpoorareas.Asforme,Isharedmyexperienceaboutexercise.ItakeexercisethreetofourtimesaweekandIamhealthierthanbefore.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)綜合使用“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“我的成長(zhǎng)”為主題進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出下文對(duì)小組分享內(nèi)容的匯報(bào)；第二步，具體介紹四個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①getsgoodgrades取得好成績(jī)②helpsothersinneed幫助有需要的人③usesthtodosth用……做④thanbefore比以前[高分句型]Hehelpsothersinneedandhegoestotheoldpeople’shouseeveryweekend.（and連接并列句）11．（2023·廣東廣州·白云區(qū)統(tǒng)考一模）?(至少一個(gè)活動(dòng))?(至少一個(gè)活動(dòng))......?(至少一個(gè)活動(dòng))......1.詞數(shù)80詞左右(信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))I'mgladtohearthatwearegoingtodosomesocialpracticeinsummerholiday.Here'swhatIsuggest.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DeartheStudents’Union,I’mgladtohearthatwearegoingtodosomesocialpracticeinsummerholiday.Here’swhatIsuggest.StudentsinGrade7arestillyoungandlessexperienced,theycanvisittheoldpeople’shome.Theycanhelptheolddosomecleaningandtalkwiththemsothattheywon’tfeellonely.Inthesummerholiday,manypeoplewillgotothelibrarytoreadandborrowbooks.ThestudentsofGrade8cangotheretohelpsortoutthebooksandguidereaderstofindthebookstheywant.AsforstudentsinGrade9,it’stheirlastsummerholidayinjuniorhighschool,sotheycandosomethingmoremeaningful.Theycangotoacountrysideprimaryschool,wheretheycanplaywiththestudentsandgivethemsomelessons.Whatmeaningfulactivitiestheseare!I’msurewe’llenjoythem.LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫(xiě)作提示已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)提示——各年級(jí)所對(duì)應(yīng)的活動(dòng)及其理由，注意正確拼寫(xiě)單詞，避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，直接表明建議信的主旨大意；第二步，詳述七、八和九年級(jí)各自可參加的活動(dòng)及其理由；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，統(tǒng)一評(píng)價(jià)以上所建議的活動(dòng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①sortout分類②guidesb.todosth.引導(dǎo)某人做某事③asfor至于[高分句型]①Theycanhelptheolddosomecleaningandtalkwiththemsothattheywon’tfeellonely.（sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句）②Theycangotoacountrysideprimaryschool,wheretheycanplaywiththestudentsandgivethemsomelessons.（where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）③Whatmeaningfulactivitiestheseare!（what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句）12．（2023·廣東廣州·中大附中一模）.現(xiàn)在的學(xué)校都越來(lái)越重視勞動(dòng)對(duì)個(gè)人健康成長(zhǎng)的影響。本周，中大附中將舉辦主題為“巧手升華智慧，共享成就卓越”的勞動(dòng)周。假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席John，你將在校園廣播EnglishToday中號(hào)召全校同學(xué)們參加勞動(dòng)周活動(dòng)以及加入到日常的勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐中來(lái)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所給的思維導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。注意：1.短文應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫。2.詞數(shù)80左右。3.不得透露班級(jí)、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Dearschoolmates,doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ChairmanoftheStudentUnionJohn【答案】例文：Dearschoolmates,doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?Wecanfindthattheonlythingweneedtodoathomeisstudying.Weevendon’tneedtodoanyhousework.Thisisbecauseofourlackofthissense.Weareusedtobeinglazyinourfreetime.Infact,doingsomehouseworkorotherlaborpracticeisreallygoodforus.Itcanhelpusbuildstrongerbodiesandmakeushealthier.What’smore,wewillalsobeindependentthroughlaborpractice.So,wecanbenefitalotfromit.Whynotdoit?Atlast,whatIwanttosayisweshouldofferhelptoourparentsactively.Maybetheyaretiredfromwork,buttheystillhavetolookafterus.Wecanhelpthemdothehousework.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldtakepartinsomecourseslikethis.Wearesupposedtoknowhowhardourparentswork.Besides,whenwearefree,wecanjoininsportsactivities.Let’stakepartinlaboreducationtogether!ChairmanoftheStudentUnionJohn【解析】詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為講稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：提示已給出，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意表述清晰，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，承接開(kāi)頭，點(diǎn)明主題，表明大部分學(xué)生缺乏勞動(dòng)意識(shí)、懶惰；第二步，表達(dá)勞動(dòng)好處；第三步，提出勞動(dòng)建議，比如幫家人分擔(dān)家務(wù)、參加體育活動(dòng)；第四步，呼吁大家一起勞動(dòng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①necessary有必要的②lackof缺乏③beusedtodoing習(xí)慣于④infact事實(shí)上⑤what’smore更重要的是⑥lookafter照顧⑦Lastbutnotleast最后但同樣重要的是⑧besupposedtodo應(yīng)該做某事⑨t(yī)akepartin參加⑩Besides另外?joinin參加[高分句型]①Wecanfindthattheonlythingweneedtodoathomeisstudying.（賓語(yǔ)從句：由that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句；定語(yǔ)從句：由that引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞theonlything，其中that已省略）②Atlast,whatIwanttosayisweshouldofferhelptoourparentsactively.（主語(yǔ)從句：由what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句；表語(yǔ)從句：由that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句跟在is后，其中that已省略）③Maybetheyaretiredfromwork,buttheystillhavetolookafterus.（狀語(yǔ)