高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)+夏日營(yíng)地：從期待到高空挑戰(zhàn)恐懼+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)夏日營(yíng)地：從期待到高空挑戰(zhàn)恐懼1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Itwasahotsummerdaywhenmyworldturnedupsidedown.Thesunshonebrightlyandtheskyseemedtobepaintedinanendlessshadeofblue.LittledidIknowthatthisparticulardaywouldbecomerootedinmymemoryforever.Iwokeupwithasenseofexcitement;itwasthefirstdayofthesummercamp.Ihadbeenlookingforwardtothisdayforweeks,imaginingtheadventures,newfriends,andendlessfunthatawaitedme.IquicklydressedinmyfavoritecampT-shirtandshorts,mybackpackfilledwithsnacksandawaterbottle,eagerlyanticipatingthedayahead.AsIarrivedatthecamp,theenergywascontagious(有感染力的).Theairwasfilledwithlaughter,chatter,andthepromiseofanunforgettablesummer.IquicklymadefriendswithSarah,agirlwithacontagioussmile,andwebecamereallycloseoveroursharedloveforadventure.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Thecampwasawonderland,withactivitiesrangingfromsportstoartsandcrafts.IfeltlikeIwasreadytoabsorbeverybitofknowledgeandexperiencethatcamemyway.Thedaywentbyquicklyaswelaughedthroughgames,amazedatnaturehikes,andcheeredeachotheronduringvarioussportsactivities.Thesunseemedtorunagainsttheclock,remindingustoenjoyeverymomentbeforeitwastoolate.However,thedaytookanunexpectedturnwhenateacherannouncedanunexpectedactivity-ateam-buildingexerciseinvolvingahighropescourse.Ihadalwaysbeenafraidofheights,buttheexcitementofthechallengemixedwiththeencouragementfrommynewfoundfriendspushedmetogiveitatry.Standingatthebaseofthetoweringstructure,myheartracedlikearunawaytrain.Eachstepuptheladderfeltheavier.Asenseofpanicgraduallybegantocatchme.5段首句Paragraph1：AsIreachedthetopandlookeddown,Ifroze.Paragraph2：Littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8文章講述了在一個(gè)炎熱的夏日，主人公滿懷期待地迎來(lái)了夏令營(yíng)的第一天，穿著喜愛(ài)的營(yíng)服、背著裝滿零食的背包前往營(yíng)地。營(yíng)地里充滿歡聲笑語(yǔ)，主人公很快和笑容極具感染力的莎拉成為好友，一同參與各類精彩活動(dòng)，如游戲、自然徒步和體育項(xiàng)目等，盡情享受著夏日時(shí)光。然而，當(dāng)天老師宣布了一項(xiàng)意外活動(dòng)——高空繩索團(tuán)隊(duì)建設(shè)練習(xí)。盡管主人公一直恐高，但在新朋友的鼓勵(lì)和挑戰(zhàn)的刺激下，還是決定嘗試。站在高聳結(jié)構(gòu)下，主人公內(nèi)心極度緊張，每一步攀登都無(wú)比艱難，故事在此留下懸念，引人期待主人公后續(xù)的表現(xiàn)以及他將如何面對(duì)內(nèi)心的恐懼，在這次挑戰(zhàn)中實(shí)現(xiàn)自我成長(zhǎng)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：AsIreachedthetopandlookeddown,Ifroze.當(dāng)我到達(dá)頂端向下望去時(shí)，我僵住了。雙腿發(fā)軟，仿佛被釘在了原地，無(wú)法挪動(dòng)分毫。底下的一切看起來(lái)是那么遙遠(yuǎn)而又可怕，我的心提到了嗓子眼，呼吸也變得急促起來(lái)。我緊緊地抓住繩索，手心全是汗，眼睛死死地盯著眼前的一小片區(qū)域，不敢再往遠(yuǎn)處看。風(fēng)在耳邊呼呼作響，似乎在嘲笑我的膽小。我開(kāi)始后悔自己為什么要逞強(qiáng)來(lái)參加這個(gè)活動(dòng)，腦海中不斷浮現(xiàn)出如果掉下去會(huì)怎樣的可怕畫(huà)面。此刻，我陷入了極度的恐懼之中，進(jìn)退兩難。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地，我挪到了另一邊。我深深地吸了一口氣，試圖讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來(lái)。我想起了朋友們鼓勵(lì)的眼神和話語(yǔ)，心中涌起一股勇氣。我小心翼翼地邁出了第一步，盡管身體還在顫抖，但我緊緊咬著牙，堅(jiān)持著。每移動(dòng)一點(diǎn)，我都感覺(jué)像是用盡了全身的力氣。我專注地看著前方的目標(biāo)，不再去想腳下的高度。慢慢地，我找到了節(jié)奏，一步一步地向前挪動(dòng)。隨著距離終點(diǎn)越來(lái)越近，我的信心也逐漸增強(qiáng)。終于，我成功地到達(dá)了另一邊，一種巨大的成就感涌上心頭，我戰(zhàn)勝了自己內(nèi)心的恐懼。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)AsIreachedthetopandlookeddown,Ifroze.Mywholebodywentrigidandmylegsfeltliketheywereturnedtojelly.Thegroundseemedmilesawayandthesightofitmademystomachchurn.PanicsurgedthroughmeandIcouldhearmyheartpoundingviolentlyinmyears.Iclutchedtheropesotightlythatmyknucklesturnedwhite.Thewindwhippedaroundme,heighteningmysenseofdread.Iwasacutelyawareofhowprecariousmypositionwasandregrettedmydecisiontotakeonthischallenge.AllIcouldthinkaboutwerethepotentialconsequencesofafall.Iwascompletelyimmobilizedbyfear,unabletotakeanotherstepforwardorevenconsidergoingbackdown.13范文呈現(xiàn)Littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.GatheringeveryounceofcourageIhadleft,Itookadeep,shakybreath.Ithoughtofmyfriends'encouragingsmilesandkindwords,andthatgavemethestrengthtostartmoving.Veryslowlyanddeliberately,Iliftedmyfootandplaceditonthenextstep.Mybodywasstilltrembling,butIrefusedtogiveintothefear.Ifocusedmygazefirmlyontheplatformahead,blockingoutthedizzyingdropbeneathme.Witheachsmallmovement,Igrewmoredetermined.AsIgotcloserandclosertotheotherside,aglimmerofconfidencebegantoreplacetheterror.Finally,afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,Ifeltthesolidgroundbeneathmyfeet.IhadconqueredmyfearandachievedsomethingIneverthoughtpossible.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Itwasonthatfatefuldayofthesummercamp,whenstandingatthetopofthehighropescourseandlookingdown,Ifroze.Theseeminglybottomlessvoidbeneathmewaslikeayawningchasm,mylegsturningtojellyandeverynerveinmybodyscreaminginterror.Itwasatthatmomentthatthefollyofmybravadohitmefullforce.Thewind,howlingaroundmelikeabanshee,onlyaddedtomysenseofdread.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)However,withtheimageofmyfriends'encouragingfacesfirmlyinmymind,littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.TremblingasIwas,notasinglestepdidIfalter.NeverhadIthoughtIcouldmustersuchcourage.Itwasnotjustaphysicaljourneybut

atriumphovermyinnerdemons.Thisexperien