高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專項(xiàng)突破：親情故事

高中英語讀后續(xù)寫專項(xiàng)突破一一親情故事

親情是世界上珍貴的情感之一，因?yàn)槊總€(gè)人表達(dá)方式不一樣，所以親情的外在表現(xiàn)

形式也不一樣，但是愛是一樣的.?????

01

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Itshardtotalktodadssometimes.Therolesweoftenexpectourfathersto

play—protector,provider—canmakethemseemimpenetrable（不可理角星的］.That'showit

waswithmydad.HecametoCanadaattheageoftenandsettledinanimmigrant

community.Hewasnevermuchofatalker.Herarelydrank,sowedidn'tgettoseehim

loosenupafterafewbeers.Hedidn'ttellstoriesabouthimselfatthedinnertableorwhen

wewentforwalksinthepark.Hewasaprivatepersonandseemedtowanttostaythat

way.

BringingupthemanyquestionsIhadaboutlifebeforeIwasborn-hisearlyhopesand

dreams,lovesandheartbreaks-letalonesharingmyownfeelings,feltliketoomuchforus

tohandle.Ididn'twanttothreatentheintegrity（完整）ofhishardshell.Ihadgottenusedto

it,anditmademefeelsecure.

Butwhenmyrelationshipandcareertookahitayearagoatthesametime,thingshadto

change.Iwasfacingseriousquestionsaboutmyownnature,andIwantedtoknowthathe

hadfacedthem,too.Ineededtoknowhowhehadfoundhisway,becauseIfeltlikeIhad

lostmine.

Inaseveremomentofdesperation,itoccurredtomethatsendinganemailmightbethe

key.Anemailcanbecrafted（精心制作）slowlyandcarefully.Icouldspeakatacomfortable

distanceandgivehimroomtoadjust.He'dbeupinhisoffice—acomfortableplacefilled

withbookshelves,dustyCD-ROMsandpilesofoldnewspapers.Fdbeatmydeskinan

apartment20minutesaway.

SoIwrotetohim.Itoldhimaboutmyregretsandfears,andIaskedhimtoanswer,ifhe

feltlikeit,andtosharesomethingabouthimseltsomethingthatwouldgiveme

much-neededperspectiveonmylife,especiallyonrelationshipandcareer.

Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.

Para2:1closedtheemailandstartedtocry.

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的父親是一個(gè)少言少語的人，

作者習(xí)慣這樣的父親，也覺得這樣很安全。但當(dāng)作者的婚姻和職業(yè)受到打擊時(shí)，他/她感到

迷失了自我，想到父親也可能曾經(jīng)面臨這樣的問題，于是決定通過寫郵件向他求助。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫

①根據(jù)第一段首句內(nèi)容“兩周后，他的回信出現(xiàn)在我的郵箱里”可知，下文可描寫父親

在信里真誠地分享了自己的經(jīng)歷，以及作者的感受。

②根據(jù)第二段首句內(nèi)容“我關(guān)了郵件開始哭起來”可知，下文可描寫作者哭的原因，以

及慶幸找到了和父親進(jìn)行交流的方式。

2.續(xù)寫線索：受到回信一一父親分享自己的經(jīng)歷一一對(duì)父親有了更多了解一一哭起來

為什么哭慶幸能和父親交流

3.詞類激活

行為類

①思考：consider/think

②提供：offer/supply/give/provide

③解決：solve/settle

情緒類

①艱難的：hard/tough/difficult

②感激的：grateful/thankful

③高興的：glad/delighted/pleased

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型l]Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmusthavebeenreallytoughformy

dadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.（運(yùn)用了狀語從句的省略）

[高分句型2]IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedupearlierbutwasgratefulitwasn't

toolate.（運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，和虛擬語氣）

【答案】

Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.Itwasascanned

threedocument.Apparently,mydadhadcarefullyconsideredmymessage,reached

backintohismemoryandcraftedaresponse.Intheletter,hesharedhishistoryoflove,

longing,self-doubtfearsandstrugglesinlife.Healsoofferedmesomepracticalsuggestions

onhowtohandlemyrelationshipandcareer.Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmust

havebeenreallytoughformydadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.Iwasalso

impressedbythegreatperseveranceheshowedinthefaceofdifficulty.

Para2:Iclosedtheemailandstartedtocry.IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedup

earlierbutwasgratefulitwasn'ttoolate.Icriedbecauseinthemidstofmyownstruggles,

hisletterinstantlyputmeatease.AndIcriedbecauseintheend,itwassosimple:Ijusthad

tohit"Send".We'vesincehadmanyexchanges.Myproblemshaven'tbeenmagicallysolved,

butgettingtoknowmydadbetter-andlearningtolovehimmore-hasmadethetoughstuff

moremanageableandlifesweeter.Itshardtotalktodadssometimes,butI'mgladthatI

foundawaytotalktomine.

02

“HasPriyanotcomehomeasyet?〃Suryaasked.Hehadjustreturnedfromwork.Hewas

acashierintheStateBankofHyderabad,whilehiswife,SharadaalabassistantinReddy

CollegeforWomen.Theirdaughter,Priya,wasaClassXstudentinSaintAnne'sSchool

aroundsixkilometersaway.TherewasadirectbusfromPriya'sschool.

“Sheshouldhavebeenhereby4.30.Itis5:30nowandshestillhasnotcome/'Sharada

replied.HYesterdaytooshewaslate.Infact,sincethelastfewweeksshehasbeencoming

homelate."

"Didyouaskher?"

"Yes,Idid,lastweek."

"Whatdidshesay?"

“Shenumbedsomethingaboutspendingtimewithherbestfriend,thenshekeptquiet.

Youknowsheisnotveryforthcoming.Onedayshewouldbebecomeanengineeror

doctor,"PriyawastoappearfortheClassXexaminationinAprilthenextyear.Thiswasthe

monthofJulyandherstudieshadstartedinrealearnest.Morningsixtoeightshewentfor

MathsandPhysicstuition,andintheeveningseventoeightforChemistry.

Thenextday,SuryahappenedtodiscussPriya'sstrangebehaviorwithhiscolleague,

Durga,whotoohadateenageddaughter.

“Surya,youshouldnottakeitsolightly.Ihaveanidea.Mybrother,Ajay,worksina

DetectiveAgency.Iwilltellhim.Iamsurehewillagreetofollowher.SincePriyadoesnot

knowhim,shewillnotgetsuspicious//

Suryakeptsilentforawhile,finallyagreed.

OnWednesday,Suryagotacallintheoffice.

"Hello!Surya?ThisisAjay?"

"Yes,Ajay.Anynews?”

“Plenty.CanyoucometoArtsCollegeat4.30intheevening?0

“Why?”

“Iwillexplainwhenwemeet.”

Sharpat4.30,SuryaparkedhisscooterinfrontoftheArtsCollegeBuilding.Ajaywas

waitingforhim.nComewithme,“hesaid.Theywentbehindthebuildingandtookapath

whichledtoasmallHanumanTemple.SuryahadbeentherewithPriyaacoupleoftimes

andtheybothquitelikedtheserenityoftheplace.Whentheyreachedtheplace,Ajayasked

himtoquietlylookfrombehindaboulder.

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2,請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。

AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised

“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter/1Priyaansweredonthe

sofa.

【答案】

AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised.HesawPriyasittinginthesmallcourtyardinfront

ofthetemple.Therewasacanvasinfrontofherandshewasbusypainting.Afewpaint

bottles,brushesanddrawingsheetswerelyingaround.Besideherwereseveralcanvases,

Suryawasstruckbythebeauty,therawenergy,ofhisdaughter'sart.Thenheleft,

determinednottodisturbher.Butwhydidshespendsomuchtimepaintingatthe

approachoftheClassXexamination?SuryakeptwonderinguntilPriyacamehomethat

evening.nWhyareyoulateagain?Spendingtimepainting?Whereareyourpaintings?'1he

askeddirectly.

“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter.Priyaansweredonthe

sofa."Idonotmindstruggling,evenstarvingtorealizemydream.Isitreallythatwrongto

chaseone'sdream?”Struckbythechild'sdetermination,Suryawaslostinthought.They

alwayswantedtheirdaughtertostudyPhysics,Chemistry,Maths,Biology,andbecomean

engineeroradoctor.Theybelievedpaintingcouldn'tguaranteeherbreadandbutterbut

engineeringormedicinecould.Maybeitwastimetochange.

【解析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Surya發(fā)現(xiàn)女兒Priya一直回家很晚，為了弄清

楚女兒的這些奇怪行為，他的同事建議讓自己的兄弟A