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高中英語讀后續(xù)寫專項突破一一親情故事
親情是世界上珍貴的情感之一,因為每個人表達方式不一樣,所以親情的外在表現(xiàn)
形式也不一樣,但是愛是一樣的.?????
01
閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Itshardtotalktodadssometimes.Therolesweoftenexpectourfathersto
play—protector,provider—canmakethemseemimpenetrable(不可理角星的].That'showit
waswithmydad.HecametoCanadaattheageoftenandsettledinanimmigrant
community.Hewasnevermuchofatalker.Herarelydrank,sowedidn'tgettoseehim
loosenupafterafewbeers.Hedidn'ttellstoriesabouthimselfatthedinnertableorwhen
wewentforwalksinthepark.Hewasaprivatepersonandseemedtowanttostaythat
way.
BringingupthemanyquestionsIhadaboutlifebeforeIwasborn-hisearlyhopesand
dreams,lovesandheartbreaks-letalonesharingmyownfeelings,feltliketoomuchforus
tohandle.Ididn'twanttothreatentheintegrity(完整)ofhishardshell.Ihadgottenusedto
it,anditmademefeelsecure.
Butwhenmyrelationshipandcareertookahitayearagoatthesametime,thingshadto
change.Iwasfacingseriousquestionsaboutmyownnature,andIwantedtoknowthathe
hadfacedthem,too.Ineededtoknowhowhehadfoundhisway,becauseIfeltlikeIhad
lostmine.
Inaseveremomentofdesperation,itoccurredtomethatsendinganemailmightbethe
key.Anemailcanbecrafted(精心制作)slowlyandcarefully.Icouldspeakatacomfortable
distanceandgivehimroomtoadjust.He'dbeupinhisoffice—acomfortableplacefilled
withbookshelves,dustyCD-ROMsandpilesofoldnewspapers.Fdbeatmydeskinan
apartment20minutesaway.
SoIwrotetohim.Itoldhimaboutmyregretsandfears,andIaskedhimtoanswer,ifhe
feltlikeit,andtosharesomethingabouthimseltsomethingthatwouldgiveme
much-neededperspectiveonmylife,especiallyonrelationshipandcareer.
Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.
Para2:1closedtheemailandstartedtocry.
【解析】
這是一篇記敘文。文章以人物為線索展開,講述了作者的父親是一個少言少語的人,
作者習慣這樣的父親,也覺得這樣很安全。但當作者的婚姻和職業(yè)受到打擊時,他/她感到
迷失了自我,想到父親也可能曾經(jīng)面臨這樣的問題,于是決定通過寫郵件向他求助。
【詳解】
1.段落續(xù)寫
①根據(jù)第一段首句內(nèi)容“兩周后,他的回信出現(xiàn)在我的郵箱里”可知,下文可描寫父親
在信里真誠地分享了自己的經(jīng)歷,以及作者的感受。
②根據(jù)第二段首句內(nèi)容“我關(guān)了郵件開始哭起來”可知,下文可描寫作者哭的原因,以
及慶幸找到了和父親進行交流的方式。
2.續(xù)寫線索:受到回信一一父親分享自己的經(jīng)歷一一對父親有了更多了解一一哭起來
為什么哭慶幸能和父親交流
3.詞類激活
行為類
①思考:consider/think
②提供:offer/supply/give/provide
③解決:solve/settle
情緒類
①艱難的:hard/tough/difficult
②感激的:grateful/thankful
③高興的:glad/delighted/pleased
【點睛】
[高分句型l]Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmusthavebeenreallytoughformy
dadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.(運用了狀語從句的省略)
[高分句型2]IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedupearlierbutwasgratefulitwasn't
toolate.(運用了because引導的原因狀語從句,和虛擬語氣)
【答案】
Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.Itwasascanned
threedocument.Apparently,mydadhadcarefullyconsideredmymessage,reached
backintohismemoryandcraftedaresponse.Intheletter,hesharedhishistoryoflove,
longing,self-doubtfearsandstrugglesinlife.Healsoofferedmesomepracticalsuggestions
onhowtohandlemyrelationshipandcareer.Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmust
havebeenreallytoughformydadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.Iwasalso
impressedbythegreatperseveranceheshowedinthefaceofdifficulty.
Para2:Iclosedtheemailandstartedtocry.IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedup
earlierbutwasgratefulitwasn'ttoolate.Icriedbecauseinthemidstofmyownstruggles,
hisletterinstantlyputmeatease.AndIcriedbecauseintheend,itwassosimple:Ijusthad
tohit"Send".We'vesincehadmanyexchanges.Myproblemshaven'tbeenmagicallysolved,
butgettingtoknowmydadbetter-andlearningtolovehimmore-hasmadethetoughstuff
moremanageableandlifesweeter.Itshardtotalktodadssometimes,butI'mgladthatI
foundawaytotalktomine.
02
“HasPriyanotcomehomeasyet?〃Suryaasked.Hehadjustreturnedfromwork.Hewas
acashierintheStateBankofHyderabad,whilehiswife,SharadaalabassistantinReddy
CollegeforWomen.Theirdaughter,Priya,wasaClassXstudentinSaintAnne'sSchool
aroundsixkilometersaway.TherewasadirectbusfromPriya'sschool.
“Sheshouldhavebeenhereby4.30.Itis5:30nowandshestillhasnotcome/'Sharada
replied.HYesterdaytooshewaslate.Infact,sincethelastfewweeksshehasbeencoming
homelate."
"Didyouaskher?"
"Yes,Idid,lastweek."
"Whatdidshesay?"
“Shenumbedsomethingaboutspendingtimewithherbestfriend,thenshekeptquiet.
Youknowsheisnotveryforthcoming.Onedayshewouldbebecomeanengineeror
doctor,"PriyawastoappearfortheClassXexaminationinAprilthenextyear.Thiswasthe
monthofJulyandherstudieshadstartedinrealearnest.Morningsixtoeightshewentfor
MathsandPhysicstuition,andintheeveningseventoeightforChemistry.
Thenextday,SuryahappenedtodiscussPriya'sstrangebehaviorwithhiscolleague,
Durga,whotoohadateenageddaughter.
“Surya,youshouldnottakeitsolightly.Ihaveanidea.Mybrother,Ajay,worksina
DetectiveAgency.Iwilltellhim.Iamsurehewillagreetofollowher.SincePriyadoesnot
knowhim,shewillnotgetsuspicious//
Suryakeptsilentforawhile,finallyagreed.
OnWednesday,Suryagotacallintheoffice.
"Hello!Surya?ThisisAjay?"
"Yes,Ajay.Anynews?”
“Plenty.CanyoucometoArtsCollegeat4.30intheevening?0
“Why?”
“Iwillexplainwhenwemeet.”
Sharpat4.30,SuryaparkedhisscooterinfrontoftheArtsCollegeBuilding.Ajaywas
waitingforhim.nComewithme,“hesaid.Theywentbehindthebuildingandtookapath
whichledtoasmallHanumanTemple.SuryahadbeentherewithPriyaacoupleoftimes
andtheybothquitelikedtheserenityoftheplace.Whentheyreachedtheplace,Ajayasked
himtoquietlylookfrombehindaboulder.
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2,請按如下格式作答。
AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised
“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter/1Priyaansweredonthe
sofa.
【答案】
AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised.HesawPriyasittinginthesmallcourtyardinfront
ofthetemple.Therewasacanvasinfrontofherandshewasbusypainting.Afewpaint
bottles,brushesanddrawingsheetswerelyingaround.Besideherwereseveralcanvases,
Suryawasstruckbythebeauty,therawenergy,ofhisdaughter'sart.Thenheleft,
determinednottodisturbher.Butwhydidshespendsomuchtimepaintingatthe
approachoftheClassXexamination?SuryakeptwonderinguntilPriyacamehomethat
evening.nWhyareyoulateagain?Spendingtimepainting?Whereareyourpaintings?'1he
askeddirectly.
“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter.Priyaansweredonthe
sofa."Idonotmindstruggling,evenstarvingtorealizemydream.Isitreallythatwrongto
chaseone'sdream?”Struckbythechild'sdetermination,Suryawaslostinthought.They
alwayswantedtheirdaughtertostudyPhysics,Chemistry,Maths,Biology,andbecomean
engineeroradoctor.Theybelievedpaintingcouldn'tguaranteeherbreadandbutterbut
engineeringormedicinecould.Maybeitwastimetochange.
【解析】本文以人物為線索展開,講述了Surya發(fā)現(xiàn)女兒Priya一直回家很晚,為了弄清
楚女兒的這些奇怪行為,他的同事建議讓自己的兄弟A
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