九年級(jí)上冊(cè) 牛津滬教版 英語(yǔ) 第六單元《Unit 6 Writing》課件

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九年級(jí)上冊(cè)—牛津滬教版—英語(yǔ)—第六單元1.

Learnsomerelevantwordsandphrasesofrestaurantreviews.

學(xué)習(xí)關(guān)于餐廳評(píng)論相關(guān)的詞匯短語(yǔ)。2.Understandthestructureandmainpointsoftherestaurantreviews.

了解餐館點(diǎn)評(píng)的結(jié)構(gòu)和要點(diǎn)。3.Graspandusethesentencepatternsofrestaurantreviews.

掌握并運(yùn)用餐評(píng)的通用句式。4.Learnhowtoexpressthediningexperienceinwrittenlanguageinanobjectiveway.

學(xué)習(xí)如何用書(shū)面語(yǔ)客觀地對(duì)餐廳用餐經(jīng)歷進(jìn)行表達(dá)。LearningAims學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)Leading-inBrainstormingFoodPriceServiceEnvironment...What

canattractyoutohavemealsinthesamerestaurantagain?TheresultisbasedonClass2,Grade9intheHills’School.Whatwillyoudoifyou

don’t

likethefoodandtheservicethere?Writesomereviewsfortherestaurant

Whatwillyoudoifyoulikethefoodandtheserviceintherestaurant?Arestaurantreviewisaboutyourexperienceofeatingatarestaurant.YoucanfindthiskindofreviewontheInterneteasily.Pre-writingHowtowritearestaurantreview?Dorishas

writtenarestaurantreview.Readthereviewbelow.Titletitlen.標(biāo)題OpeningIntroductionReviewofthe

foodReviewofthe

serviceservicen.服務(wù)Recommendationrecommendn.推薦v.推薦recommendationStructureTitleamazing...excellentdeliciouswonderfulfantasticunforgettable+nameoftherestaurantadjectivesTitle:

Title+nameoftherestaurantadjectivesLet’stry在一家廣州餐廳的粵式美食DeliciousCantonesefoodat

aGuangzhouRestaurant在一家重慶餐館非常難忘的火鍋大餐AnunforgettablehotpotataChongqingRestaurantOtherpossibletitles...,amust-gorestaurantLovelyfood,lovely...Wonderfulmealat...Agreatdiningplace...OpeningOpening:

______+_______ate/hadmeal/dinner...+_________.

whenwhowhereIntroduction:

foodprice_______serves_____food.

restauranttypeWhopaid/spent_____toeat/eatingthere.

priceamount+currency貨幣單位

200yuanIntroduction+FoodreviewsTopicsentenceThefoodwas_______.adjectivegoodwonderfuldeliciousexcellentsosonotsogoodbadterrible...Specificdetails____________________.detailsofyourexperienceServicereviewsReviewoftheserviceThewaiters/service/...was_______.adjective

________________.beseatedv.就坐receivefoodv.收到食物specificexperienceRecommendationIwouldcertainlyrecommend_______...restaurantYoushould______________.givesuggestionsarrivaltimewaitingtimeparkinglotavailableotherthingsneedtoknowAnalyze(分析)thelinkingwordsusefullinkingwords并列連詞：also

and

inaddition

besides

aswell

notonly,butaslo

...

轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比連詞：but

however,

...

though/although

時(shí)間連詞：(not)...until/until

when/while

...

因果連詞：because/so/asaresult,/therefore,...

Whattense?theSimplePastTensetheSimplePresentTenseAnalyze(分析)thetense時(shí)態(tài)past

experiencepresentsituation/recommendationAnalyze(分析)thePerson人稱(chēng)thefirstperson第一人稱(chēng)I、me、myWe、us、our

thesecond

person第二人稱(chēng)You、your、you

Whatperson?whathappenedinthepastgiveadviceAnswerthequestionsbelowtohelpyouwriteyourownrestaurantreviews.回答以下問(wèn)題并結(jié)合自己的用餐經(jīng)歷寫(xiě)餐評(píng)。Arestaurantreview3.Tense:SimplePresentTenseSimplePastTense4.Person:thefirstpersonthesecondperson假設(shè)昨晚你與父母到綠茵閣(TheGreeneryCafe)吃晚飯，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容為該餐廳寫(xiě)一則評(píng)價(jià)。Practice項(xiàng)目評(píng)價(jià)和意見(jiàn)價(jià)格280元，小貴食物牛排(steak)和沙拉很美味，但湯太咸(salty)服務(wù)友善，但上菜有點(diǎn)慢環(huán)境餐廳干凈、安靜，輕柔的音樂(lè)，讓人放松總體建議推薦就餐123456ArestaurantreviewSamplewriting

ExcellentEnglishfoodattheGreeneryCafeLastnight,myparentsandIateattheGreeneryCafe.Thecafeserveswesternfood.Wepaidabout280yuantoeatthere.Itwasalittleexpensive.Thefoodwaswonderful.Thesteakandthesaladtasteddeliciousthoughthesoupwastoosalty.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butalittleslow.Weorderedourfoodat7p.m.,butwedidn’treceiveourfooduntil8p.m.Theenvironmentwasnice.Itwascleanandquiet.Inaddition,thesoftmusicmadeusrelaxed.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittomyfriends.IfeelgreatwiththeGreeneryCafeandIwillgotheretohavemealsagain.Finishtheevaluationchart.自評(píng)與他評(píng)?！獭獭獭獭獭蘌ost-writingAssessmentStandard評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Opening

TitleIntroductionReviews

WhenWhoWhereContent（內(nèi)容性）

Accuracy（準(zhǔn)確性）

Coherence（連貫性）

TenseGrammaticalmistakesLinkingwordsorphrases

FoodPriceFoodServiceOthers...PresentTensePastTenseRecommendation

spelling，capitalize，punctuation...PersonSummary:writingfor

arestaurantreviewInthislesson,wehavelearnt

whatarestaurantreviewis.somenewwordsandphrasesofthistopic.thestructureofarestaurantreview.howtoorganizeeachpartwiththehelpofsomeusefulpatternsandlinkingwords.howtowrite

areviewofoureatingexperienceinarestaurantinanobjectiveway.howtoevaluateourwritingandimproveitinabetterway.

Ihopeyoucanenjoytheclass!??????Writeanotherreviewofyourfavouriterestaurantandrecommendittoyourfriends.HomeworkThemoreyoushare,thehappieryouwillfeel.Thankyou!HealthydietUnit6Writing

九年級(jí)上冊(cè)—牛津滬教版—英語(yǔ)—第六單元（答疑）Let’sgivecommentsforoneofmystudents’restaurantreviewsandcorrecthermistakestogether.YummyCantoneseDimsumatTaoTaoJuYesterdaymorning,mymotherandIhavemorningteaaTaoTaoJuinPanyu.TherestaurantserveCantoneselocalfood,wepaidabout200yuantoeatthere.Thedimsumtherewasverydelicious.Thesteamedbeefballs,shrimpdumplingsandsteamedcrabdumplingswasmyfavourit.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butthefoodwassendtoustooslowly.Afterorderourfood,wewaitedaboutfortyminutes.Theenvironmentwasalittlenoise.Andthereweretoomanypeopleandalittleofcrowded.Buttheenvironmentwasprettynice.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittoyou.Thedimsumhereisverydelicious.Youmusthaveatry.IlikethislocalrestaurantsomuchthatIwillgototheretohavemorningteaagain.AssessmentStandard評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)adj.+thenameoftherestaurant3W:when,who,wherefood+pricetopicsentence+detailedexperiencerecommend+givesuggestionstense/person/grammarpointslogicalconjunctionsYummyCantoneseDimsumatTaoTaoJuYesterdaymorning,mymotherandIhavemorningteaaTaoTaoJuinPanyu.TherestaurantserveCantoneselocalfood,wepaidabout200yuantoeatthere.Thedimsumtherewasverydelicious.Thesteamedbeefballs,shrimpdumplingsandsteamedcrabdumplingswasmyfavourit.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butthefoodwassendtoustooslowly.Afterorderourfood,wewaitedaboutfortyminutes.Theenvironmentwasalittlenoise.Andthereweretoomanypeopleandalittleofcrowded.Buttheenvironmentwasprettynice.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittoyou.Thedimsumhereisverydelicious.Youmusthaveatry.IlikethislocalrestaurantsomuchthatIwillgototheretohavemorningteaagain.adj.nameoftherestaurantwhenwhowherefoodpricetopicsentencedetailedexperiencetopicsentence+detailedsentencesrecommendContent:+suggestion+personalopinionsYummyCantoneseDimsumatTaoTaoJuYesterdaymorning,mymotherandIhavemorningteaaTaoTaoJuinPanyu.TherestaurantserveCantoneselocalfood,wepaidabout200yuantoeatthere.Thedimsumtherewasverydelicious.Thesteamedbeefballs,shrimpdumplingsandsteamedcrabdumplingswasmyfavourit.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butthefoodwassendtoustooslowly.Afterorderourfood,wewaitedaboutfortyminutes.Theenvironmentwasalittlenoise.Andthereweretoomanypeopleandalittleofcrowded.Buttheenvironmentwasprettynice.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittoyou.Thedimsumhereisverydelicious.Youmusthaveatry.IlikethislocalrestaurantsomuchthatIwillgototheretohavemorningteaagai