高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+少年沖浪手湯姆的逐夢與重生之路 課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)少年沖浪手湯姆的逐夢與重生之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Tomwasaskilledteenagesurfer.Hehadalwaysbeenattractedbytheoceanandthechallengeofridingitswaves.Hehadtrainedtirelesslyforyears,sharpeninghisskillsandperfectinghistechnique.Hehadparticipatedinmanycompetitionsandwonseveraltitles.Butoneday,hisworldwasturnedupsidedown.Itwasaroutinetrainingday.WhileTomwasconcentratingonhistraininginthesea,asharkcameinthroughthebrokenshark-proofnetandapproachedhim.TheanimalknockedoverTom’ssurfboardandbithisrightleg,tearingthroughhisflesh(肉體)andcausingmassivedamage.Despitetheseriousnessofhisinjuries,Tomwasluckytosurvivetheattack.Hewasrushedtothehospital,wherehereceivedanemergencyoperation.Withtheeffortsofdoctors,hislegwassaved.4續(xù)寫原文Tom’srecoverywaslongandpainful,butherefusedtogiveuponhisdreamofsurfing.Atfirst,hisprogresswasslow.Hehadtolearntowalkagain,andthentorun,andthentojump.Everymovementwasastruggle.Butwiththehelpofhisfamilyandfriends,aswellashisownfiercedetermination,Tomgraduallybegantomakeprogress.Hespenthourseverydayinthegym,doingstrengthandbalanceexercisestorebuildhisbody.5續(xù)寫原文Finally,aftermonthsofhardwork,Tomwasreadytogetbackintothewater.Hisfirsttrainingwasincrediblydifficult,ashestruggledtoovercomehisfearoftheoceanandthememoryofthesharkattack.Butgradually,hebegantoregainhisconfidenceandhisloveforsurfing.Ashisstrengthandskillsreturned,Tomsethissightsoncompetingonceagain.Hetrainedtirelessly,workingwithacoachtoperfecthistechniqueandimprovehisperformance.Andfinally,thedayofthecompetitionarrived.6段首句Paragraph1:Standinginfrontofthestartinglineagain,Tomfeltnervous.Paragraph2:Tomfellintothesea.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文中講述了Tom曾是一名技藝嫻熟的青少年沖浪者，在沖浪領(lǐng)域?qū)耀@佳績。然而一次日常訓(xùn)練中，鯊魚沖破防鯊網(wǎng)咬了他的右腿，傷勢嚴(yán)重但他幸運(yùn)存活并保住了腿。漫長痛苦的恢復(fù)過程中，Tom未放棄沖浪夢，在家人、朋友的支持與自身堅(jiān)定決心下，努力做康復(fù)訓(xùn)練。數(shù)月后他重返大海，首次訓(xùn)練艱難，不過他逐漸克服了對海洋和鯊魚攻擊的恐懼，重拾信心與熱愛。最終，他再次踏上沖浪賽場，向著新的目標(biāo)奮進(jìn)，展現(xiàn)了頑強(qiáng)不屈、追逐夢想的精神。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Standinginfrontofthestartinglineagain,Tomfeltnervous.再次站在起跑線前，湯姆感到緊張。他的手心沁出了汗水，心臟在胸腔里劇烈跳動(dòng)。眼前的海面波光粼粼，卻讓他不禁回想起那次可怕的鯊魚襲擊。觀眾們的歡呼聲在耳邊回響，他深吸一口氣，努力讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來。他緊緊握住沖浪板，目光堅(jiān)定地望向遠(yuǎn)方涌起的海浪，試圖將恐懼轉(zhuǎn)化為前進(jìn)的動(dòng)力，心里默默告訴自己，這是他重新證明自己的機(jī)會(huì)，無論如何都要勇敢地沖出去。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Tomfellintothesea.湯姆沖進(jìn)了浪中，可就在他試圖完成一個(gè)高難度動(dòng)作時(shí)，突然一陣強(qiáng)烈的水流沖擊過來，打亂了他的節(jié)奏，使他瞬間失去了平衡。他的身體不由自主地向一側(cè)傾斜，沖浪板也從腳下飛了出去。緊接著，他整個(gè)人便直直地墜入了海中。冰冷的海水瞬間將他包圍，他拼命地掙扎著，試圖重新浮出水面。耳邊是海水的轟鳴聲和自己劇烈的心跳聲，眼前是一片模糊的藍(lán)色，他努力揮動(dòng)著雙臂，朝著水面游去，心中只有一個(gè)信念，那就是一定要回到?jīng)_浪板上，繼續(xù)完成這次比賽。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Standinginfrontofthestartinglineagain,Tomfeltnervous.Hispalmsweresweatyandhisheartwaspoundingviolentlyinhischest.Theglisteningseainfrontofhiminvoluntarilyremindedhimofthatdreadfulsharkattack.Thecheersoftheaudienceranginhisears.Hetookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmhimselfdown.Grippinghissurfboardtightly,helookedfirmlyatthewavessurginginthedistance,attemptingtoturnhisfearintothedrivingforceformovingforward.Hetoldhimselfsilentlythatthiswashischancetoprovehimselfagainandhemustbravelyridethewavesnomatterwhat.14范文呈現(xiàn)Tompaddledhardandcaughtawave.Ashestartedtostandupontheboard,asuddenstrongundercurrenthithim,throwingoffhisbalance.Hisbodytiltedtoonesideuncontrollablyandthesurfboardflewoutfromunderhisfeet.Intheblinkofaneye,heplungedintothesea.Theicywaterengulfedhimimmediately.Hethrashedaboutdesperately,strugglingtoresurface.Theroarofthewaterandthesoundofhisownfranticheartbeatfilledhisears.Withablurryblueallaroundhim,heflailedhisarmsvigorously,swimmingtowardsthesurface,withonlyonethoughtinhismind-hehadtogetbackonthesurfboardandfinishthiscompetition.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Standinginfrontofthestartinglineagain,Tomfeltasifathousandbutterflieswereflutteringinhisstomach.Hispalms,dampwithnervoussweat,andhisheart,poundinglikeajackhammer,betrayedhisunease.Theglisteningseathatstretchedoutbeforehim,whichhadoncebeenthestageforhistriumphs,nowominouslyremindedhimoftheterrifyingsharkattack.Amidthedeafeningcheersoftheaudiencethatechoedaroundhim,hetookadeepbreath,attemptingtosoothehisfrayednerves.Withhisfingerstightlygrippingthesurfboard,hefixedhisgazefirmlyontheapproachingwaves,determinedtotransformhisfearintoapropellingforce.Itwaspreciselythismomentthathesilentlyvowedtohimselfwashisopportunitytoreclaimhisgloryandthathewould,withoutadoubt,bravelyridethewaves,nomattertheodds.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Tompaddledwithallhismightandmanagedtolatchontoawave.Butjustashewasabouttostandupontheboard,asudden,powerfulundercurrent,likeaninvisiblehand,yankedathisfeetandsenthimtumbling.Hisbody,tiltinguncontrollablytooneside,causedthesurfboardtobewrenchedfrombeneathhim.Intheblinkofaneye,hewasplungedintotheicydepths.Thefrigidwater,likeahungrybeast,immediatelyswallowedhimwhole.Thrashingaboutdesperately,hefoughttoresurface.Thethunderousroarofthewaterandthefranticdrummingofhisownheartfilledhisears.Surroundedbyahazyblueblur,heflailedhisarmswithallhisstrength,hismindfirm