中考英語解題技巧模板專題08 應(yīng)用文之安慰信祝賀信開放性作文（寫作答題模板）（解析版）

專題08應(yīng)用文之安慰信，祝賀信，開放性作文題型概述｜模板構(gòu)建｜真題試煉本節(jié)導(dǎo)航本節(jié)導(dǎo)航模板01安慰信模板02祝賀信模板03開放性作文識識中考·題型解讀書面表達(dá)是中考的必考題型,它應(yīng)符合以下要求。1.中心明確2.連續(xù)流暢3.語言得體(1)寫作時應(yīng)盡量避免使用冗長、復(fù)雜、易犯錯誤的句子,用簡潔、精練的語句表達(dá),做到言簡意賅。(2)寫作前把要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容整理歸納,理清思路,做到條理分明,要點齊全,切忌逐詞逐句按漢語方式翻譯,生編硬造。(3)能清楚表達(dá)文章內(nèi)容的前提下,盡量措辭,不時出現(xiàn)“閃光點”,這將為你的文章增光添彩。高分要求1.寫出全部內(nèi)容要點；2.語句流暢；基本無語法和詞匯方面的錯誤，少數(shù)錯誤主要是由于較高級詞匯或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)所致；

3.詞數(shù)達(dá)到要求；基本無單詞拼寫及標(biāo)點錯誤。善善總結(jié)·模板構(gòu)建答｜題｜步｜驟第一步：審題，列提綱第二步：1.根據(jù)提綱撰寫文章2.檢查文章，改正錯誤第三步：全文抄寫于答題卡，不出現(xiàn)涂改。模｜板｜構(gòu)｜建模板模板01安慰信Dear收信人，Ilearnedthat(寫明來信原因)(對此事看法).Firstly,(安慰理由一).Secondly,(安慰理由二).Youalsoneed(提出建議).Youshould,and(具體做法)Ihopeyou(祝愿與期待).Yours,寫信人參考詞句單詞upset沮喪的；view觀點，看法；shame令人惋惜的事；shot射門；understanding;practise練習(xí)短語becauseof因為；wouldliketodosth.想做某事；sharewithsb.和某人分享；blameoneself責(zé)備自己；such….that…如此..….以至于.….；bebeatenby被..打??；tryone'sbest盡某人最大努力；feelsorryfordoing為做...感到抱歉；keepdoingsth.繼續(xù)做某事；invite.to..邀請..去...；getwellpreparedfor為...作好準(zhǔn)備句型There'snopointdoing.…做...是沒有意義的。Firstly,.,secondly,.首先...，其次...『典型例題』假如你是李華，你們班輸了上周的籃球賽。Henry認(rèn)為是他未能投進(jìn)最后一球所造成的，有的隊友也因此而責(zé)怪他。請你寫一封英文郵件安慰他，談?wù)勀銓Υ耸碌目捶?，并就如何取得隊友的理解提出建議。要求：1.80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.信中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.LiHua【高分范文】DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.HereI'dliketosharewithyoumyviewsonthisgame.There'snopointblamingyourself.Firstly,ClassTwoissuchatopteamthatit'snotashametobebeatenbythem.Secondly,yougotthirtypointsthoughyoumissedthelastshot.Youtriedyourbest.Youalsoneedtheunderstandingofyourteammates.Youshouldtellyourteammatesyoufeelsorryforlosingthelastshot,andthatyouwillkeeppractisinghard.Ifpossible,invitethemtodinner.Ihopeyouwillsmileagain,andgetwellpreparedforthenextgame.Yours,LiHua參考譯文親愛的亨利:我知道你因為籃球比賽輸了而感到難過和沮喪。在這里,我想和你分享一下我對這場比賽的看法。沒有必要責(zé)怪你自己。首先,二班是如此頂級的隊伍,被他們打敗并不是一件令人惋惜的事。其次,雖然你最后一投沒中,但你還是得到了30分。你已經(jīng)盡力了。你還需要隊友的理解。你應(yīng)該告訴你的隊友,你為失去最后一投而感到抱歉，并且你會繼續(xù)努力練習(xí)。如果可能的話，邀請他們共進(jìn)晚餐。我希望你能再次微笑，為下一場比賽作好準(zhǔn)備。你的，李華解解真題·思維剖析一2019?湖南長沙假如你是李華，你們班輸了上周的籃球賽。Henry認(rèn)為是他未能投進(jìn)最后一球所造成的，有的隊友也因此而責(zé)怪他。請你寫一封英文郵件安慰他，談?wù)勀銓Υ耸碌目捶?，并就如何取得隊友的理解提出建議。要求：（1）80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名。DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【高分范文】DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.It'snoteasybeinginyoursituation,andit'snormaltohavethesefeelings.Anyway,don'tbetoohardonyourself.Youknow,basketballisaboutteameffort.It'sneverjustoneperson'sfault.Whatmattersisthatyoushouldlearnfromthegamesaswellasyourmistakes.Besides,youneedtothinkabouthowyoucandobetternexttime.Asawhole,teammatesshouldsupportandbelieveineachother.Whydon'tyousitdownandcommunicatewiththem?Andyoucouldpromisethatyouwillsparenoeffortstobetteryourskills.Ifallofyoupulltogether,you'resuretowinthenextone.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua二（2023·浙江溫州·三模）假如你是李華，近日你收到英國筆友Joe的來信，他和你一樣，也是一名九年級的學(xué)生，面對升學(xué)感到壓力很大。請你給他寫封回信，安慰他，參考所給信息，為他提出至少2條減壓的建議。Howdoyourelievepressure?①talktoothers②dosomeexercise③askthepsychologyteacherforhelp……要求：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、學(xué)校等信息；（2）詞數(shù)：110詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJoe,Happytoreceiveyourletter,butI’msorrytohearthatyouhavetofacealotofpressure.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【高分范文】DearJoe,Happytoreceiveyourletter,butI’msorrytohearthatyouhavetofacealotofpressure.Don’tworrytoomuchaboutit,andjusttakeiteasy.Asyourfriend,I’dliketoofferyousomesuggestionstohelpyourelieveyourpressure.First,youshouldlearntorelax.Ifyouarefeelingstressedout,youcantalktoothersfacetofaceorbychattingonQQorWeChat.Doingsomeexerciseregularlycanhelpyourelaxyourselfandbuildupyourbodyaswell.Secondly,it’sagoodideatoaskthepsychologyteacherforhelpwhenyouareunderpressure.Theteacherwillgiveyouhelpfuladvicesothatyoucaneasilyfindawayout.Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionshelpful.Yours,LiHua三（2022·遼寧沈陽·二模）假定你是李華，通過對話了解到你的好朋友Paul面對過去長時間的網(wǎng)課及將要到來的考試等問題，心理壓力很大，請你給他寫一封安慰信。內(nèi)容包括：1、表示安慰問候；2、提供減輕壓力的建議或辦法；3、美好祝愿。要點：1、詞數(shù)80—100：開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3、作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生的真實校名和姓名。DearPaul,Iknowyourproblemsandrecentsituationthroughthelastconversation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【高分范文】DearPaul,Iknowyourproblemsandrecentsituationthroughthelastconversation.Facedwiththelongonlinecoursesinthepastandthecomingexams,youfeltalotofpressure.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.First,youshouldlearntorelaxyourself.Youcanlistentosomemusicordosomethingyoufeelcomfortable.Next,youshoulddosomesportseveryday.Sportscanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.Atlast,smileatyourselfeveryday.Ithelpsyoukeephappy.It’sverycommonthateveryonecanmeetdifficultiesinthelife.Ihopemysuggestionscangiveyousomehelp.Yours,LiHua四（2022·重慶·三模）中考在即，同學(xué)們都投入到緊張的初三復(fù)習(xí)備考中，但也有部分同學(xué)心浮氣躁，焦慮不安。Lisa正有這樣的煩惱，假設(shè)你是她的好朋友李華，請寫一封信給她，安慰她并給出一些緩解焦慮和壓力的建議。要點如下：1.正確看待考試和緊張的學(xué)習(xí)；2.規(guī)律作息、健康飲食、積極鍛煉有助于保持良好學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)；3.制定合理的復(fù)習(xí)計劃；4.必要時可尋求他人幫助……要求：1.包含以上要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，語意連貫；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名、班名和人名；4.80—120詞。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）DearLisa,I’msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingalittlenervousaboutyourstudyandexams.Don’tbesoworried.I’mwritingtotellyousomegoodideastodealwithit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【高分范文】DearLisa,I’msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingalittlenervousaboutyourstudyandexams.Don’tbesoworried.I’mwritingtotellyousomegoodideastodealwithit.Firstofall,youshouldtreattheexaminationandnervousstudyproperly.Then,youhadbetterworkandrestregularly,haveahealthydietandexerciseactively,whichcanhelpyoukeepagoodstateofstudy.Besides,youcanmakeareasonablereviewplan.Ifnecessary,youcanaskothersforhelp.Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyou.Youcangetgoodgradesinthenextexamination.

YoursFriend模板模板02祝賀信Dear收信人，Congratulations!HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!(開篇祝語，表示祝賀)Ithinkand(表達(dá)對此事的總體看法).Plus,Iamdyingto(表明自己的想法).Yousee,(支持想法的理由)Hopingyouwill(表達(dá)期望)Yours,寫信人參考詞句單詞share分享；helpful有用的；progress進(jìn)步短語inthefuture在將來；playimportantrolesin..在...當(dāng)中扮演重要角色；bedyingtodosth.渴望做某事；suchas例如句型HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!我很高興能分享你的好消息！『典型例題』假定你是李華，收到英國筆友Harry的郵件，獲悉他在機(jī)器人制作比賽中獲獎。請根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)。詞數(shù)80左右。To:Lihua2019@163.comFrom:Harry@hotmail.comDearLiHua,I'mgladtotellyouthatI'vejustwonthefirstplaceinarobot-makingcompetition.Iloverobots!Theybringmegreatfun.Whatdoyouthinkofrobots?Doyouwanttohaveyourownrobot?Why?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,Harry參考詞匯：congratulation祝賀注意事項：1.回復(fù)郵件時可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及地名。DearHarry,【高分范文】DearHarry,Congratulations!HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!Ithinkrobotsarehelpfulinmanyways,andinthefuture,theywillplaymoreimportantrolesinourdailylife.Plus,Iamdyingtohavearobotofmyown.Icanhaveittotakecareofmygrandparentswhenwearenotathome.Yousee,mygrandparentsareoldandcan'tmoveeasily.Itcanhelpthemdosomehouseworksuchascooking,cleaningthehouseandsoon.Hopingyouwillmakegreaterprogress.Yours,LiHua參考譯文親愛的哈利：恭喜！我很高興能分享你的好消息！我認(rèn)為機(jī)器人在很多方面都有幫助，在未來，它們將在我們的日常生活中扮演更重要的角色。另外，我很想擁有一個自己的機(jī)器人。當(dāng)我們不在家時，可以用它來照顧我的祖父母。你看，我的祖父母年紀(jì)大了,行動不便。它可以幫助他們做一些家務(wù),比如做飯、打掃房子等等。希望你能取得更大的進(jìn)步。你的，李華解解真題·思維剖析一（2020·北京·三模）假如你是李華，在你的幫助和陪伴下交換生Peter即將完成為期一年的交換學(xué)習(xí)生活。請你給他寫一封祝賀信，表達(dá)你真誠的祝賀，回憶你們共度的一年美好時光以及他的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀銖乃砩蠈W(xué)到了什么。提示詞語：GreatWall,museum,culture,pronounce,practice提示問題：●WhydoyoucongratulatePeter?●Howdidyouspendthetimetogetherandhisstudyexperience?●Whathaveyoulearntfromhim?DearPeter,I’mveryhappythatyouwillfinishyourone-yearexchangestudylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishestoyou!Yours,LiHua【高分范文】DearPeter,I’mveryhappythatyouwillfinishyourone-yearexchangestudylife.Firstofall,IcongratulateyoubecauseyouhavemadebigprogressinstudyingChineseaswellinunderstandingourChinesehistoryandculture.Whenyoufirstcamehere,youweresoshyandafraidtomakemistakesintalkingwithothers.Luckily,wewereinthesamegroup.IhelpedyouwithyourChineseandyouhelpedmewithmyEnglish.InordertoimproveyourChinese,weclimbedtheGreatWallandvisitedmanymuseumstogether.Whatagreattimewehad!Withthehelpoftheteachersandyourself,youaremuchbraverandoutgoingnow.Meanwhile,youwonthefirstprizeintheChinesespeakingcompetition.Istillrememberhowhappyyouwereatthatmoment!Atthesametime,Ilearnhowtokeepfightingtoachievethedreamsfromyou.Bestwishestoyou!

Yours,LiHua二（2018·北京海淀·一模）假如你是李華，在你的幫助下，交換生Tom在中文演講比賽中獲得了一等獎。請你給他寫一封祝賀信，表達(dá)你的真誠祝賀，回憶他比賽時的表現(xiàn)，以及你從他身上學(xué)到了什么。提示詞語：win，prize，speechcompetition，pronounce，practice提示問題：WhydoyoucongratulateTom?Whatmadehimsuccessfulinthecompetition?Whatcanyoulearnfromhim?【高分范文】DearTom,IamveryhappytoknowthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChinesespeechcompetition,soI’mwritingtocongratulateyouonyourwonderfulperformance.YoudidagoodjobintheChinesespeechcompetition.Youpronouncedreallywellduringyourspeechandyourvoicewasbeautiful.Youspokesofluentlythatweallfeltproudofyou.What’smore,weweresurprisedatyourrichandmeaningfulcontents.Asyourbestfriend,Iknowyoutriedyourbestforthecompetition.Youkeptpracticingyourspeecheverydayinordertomakeitbetter.Iknowitisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup.IhopeIcanbesuccessfullikeyouonedayinthefuture.Yours,LiHua模板模板03開放性作文Dear收信人，I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Beingyourclosefriend,Iamextremelywillingtosharesomeideasabout(溝通事項)withyou.Firstandforemost,(做法一).Inthesecondplace,(做法二).Lastbutbynomeansleast,ifIwereyou,Iwould(做法三).Inaddition,(再次補(bǔ)充做法).IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,寫信人參考詞句單詞require要求；extremely非常；crucial重要的；significance重要性；awareness意識短語begladtodosth.樂于做某事；besupposedtodosth.應(yīng)該做某事；handin上交；bewillingtodosth.愿意做某事；remindsb.ofsth.提醒某人某事；inaddition另外句型Lastbutbynomeansleast.…最后但并非最不重要的是.…….『典型例題』假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在開展“安全月”宣傳活動，倡議大家制作關(guān)于安全教育的主題海報，你們班交換生Peter給你發(fā)郵件詢問相關(guān)事情。請用英語回復(fù)一封郵件，告訴他海報上交的時間，并分享你設(shè)計海報的一些想法。提示詞語：design;safetyrule;careful;protect;picture提示問題：·Whenshouldyouhandintheposter?WhatwouldyouliketosharewithPeteraboutdesigningtheposter?【高分范文】DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Asitisrequired,youaresupposedtohandintheposterbeforenextFriday.Beingyourclosefriend,Iamextremelywillingtosharesomeideasaboutdesigningtheposterwithyou.Firstandforemost,thebasicsafetyrulesareofgreatimportance,whichshouldbeincludedinyourposter.Inthesecondplace,followingthesafetyrulesissomeaningfulandcrucialthatyouhadbetterremindyourreadersofitssignificanceandadvisethemtobecarefulbothinandoutofschool.Lastbutbynomeansleast,ifIwereyou,Iwouldaddafewsuggestionsaboutsafetyawareness,consideringthatbettersafethansorry.Inaddition,itisagoodideaforyoutodrawafewpicturesonyourpostersoastomakeitmorelivelyandacceptable.IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua參考譯文親愛的彼得:很高興收到你的郵件。按照要求，你應(yīng)該在下周五之前上交海報。作為你的好朋友,我非常愿意和你分享一些設(shè)計海報的想法。首先,基本的安全規(guī)則是非常重要的,應(yīng)該包含在你的海報里。第二,遵循安全規(guī)則很有意義也很重要，你最好提醒你的讀者它的重要性，并建議他們在學(xué)校內(nèi)外都要小心。最后但絕不是最不重要的，如果我是你，我會補(bǔ)充一些關(guān)于安全意識的建議，考慮到安全總比遺憾好。另外，在你的海報上畫一些圖片是一個好主意，這樣可以使它更生動也更容易被接受。如果還有什么我能幫忙的,請告訴我。你的，李華解解真題·思維剖析一（九年級上·湖南永州·期末）開放性作文根據(jù)要求，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。將發(fā)言稿寫在答題卡開放性作文空白處。班會課上，我們討論了習(xí)近平主席的話：“有夢想，有機(jī)會，有奮斗，一切美好的東西都能夠創(chuàng)造出來。”先閱讀下面的范文，然后模仿范文，請你以“MyDream”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語發(fā)言稿。注意：1.演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.完全照抄范文不給分。提示如下:1.我的夢想：有意義的事情或職業(yè)（自由確定）2.夢想產(chǎn)生的原因3.如何實現(xiàn)夢想MyDreamDearteachersandfriendsI’mhappytobeheretosharemydreamwithyou.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyouforlistening.【高分范文】DearteachersandfriendsI’mhappytobeheretosharemydreamwithyou.Lifeisofgreatvaluetoallofus.Wecanonlyliveonce.It’snecessaryforourlivestohaveadream.MydreamistobeawriterwhenIgrowup.MyfavoritewriterisJaneAusten,whowritesPrideandPrejudice.HerbooksaresoperfectthatIreadthemagainandagainandnevergettired.HowIwanttobeagreatwriterlikeJaneAusten!Ihopetomakemylifemoremeaningfulinthisway.Inordertomakemydreamcometrue,Ishouldspendmylimitedlifecarefully.It’simportanttoreadalargenumberofgreatbooksandpracticewritingfromtimetotime.IbelieveIcanmakemydreamcometrueoneday.I’mlookingforwardtothecomingofthatday!That’sallform