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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheClassPoet(詩人)WhenThanksgivingDaywasapproaching(臨近),myprimaryschooldecidedtocelebrate(慶祝)bypresentingshowswithdancingandsingingthatallstudentscouldjoinin.Parentswouldalsobeinvitedtowatch.Oneafternoon,myteachercalledmeintohisoffice.Hesaidwithasmile,“Nancy,couldyouwriteapoem(詩)andreaditduringthecomingevent?”“Ofcourse,”Iansweredexcitedly.Ihadlovedpoetrysincefifthgrade.Whenmyfirstpoemwaspublished,myfriendsandteachersstartedtodescribemeastheclasspoet.Ilefttheschoolmaster’sofficethatafternoonfeelingquitehappy.Then,forweeks,Iworkedonmypoem,carefullydesigningthecontent,structureandsound.Ipracticedreciting(朗誦)italoudeveryday.Whentheeveningfortheeventfinallycame,Iwasready.Well,IwasreadyuntilIlookedaroundandrealizedhowmanypeopletherewereintheschoolhall.HowcouldIpresentmypoeminfrontofmorethan400people?Iwasjustaseventh-grader.Noonewouldtakemyworkseriously.Whatwasworse,Ihadneverspokeninfrontofahugecrowdbefore.Isatinmychair,wantingtobury(隱藏)myself.MaybetheywouldforgetIwassupposedtoread.“Hey,Nancie,Isawyournameintheprogram.Goodluck,”mylittlebrothershouted.Hisvoiceroseashetookhisseatafewrows(排)downwithhisclass.Inodded(點頭),strugglingtokeepcalm.Iknewmyparentsweresomewhereinthehall.Beforelong,thelightsfaded(暗下來),thecrowdwentquiet,andtheschoolmastergotonstagetointroducethelistofperformers.Mynamewasattheendofthelist,soIhadtositthroughanhourofabsoluteanxiety.Itwasn’tuntilthestudentsfromthefourthgradeweresingingthatmyteacherledmedownstairstotheareanexttothestage.Mymindwasblank(空白的).Thensuddenly,Iwasonstagewiththebrightwhitelightsblinding(使眼花)myviewoftheaudience.WhenIwalkedtothemicrophoneinthecenterofthestage,Isomehowtripped(絆倒)oversomethingandstupidlyfelldown.Allofthekidsburstintolaughter.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iwasabouttorunawaywhenmyteachercameuptome____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenIfinishedmyreading,thehallwassilentatfirst.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作提綱:第一段:承接上文老師的鼓勵,描述自己在老師的激勵下重新站定,深吸一口氣,開始克服內(nèi)心的恐懼準(zhǔn)備朗誦詩歌,盡管仍有些緊張,但努力集中精力回憶詩歌的內(nèi)容與情感表達(dá)。第二段:詳細(xì)敘述朗誦過程中自己的表現(xiàn),如聲音逐漸變得平穩(wěn)有力,用富有情感的語調(diào)將詩歌中的意象與情感傳遞出來,同時可以描寫臺下觀眾的反應(yīng),比如原本嘲笑的孩子們逐漸安靜下來,被詩歌所吸引,父母和老師們也投來專注的目光等。第三段:講述朗誦結(jié)束后,先是短暫的寂靜,隨后爆發(fā)出熱烈的掌聲。描述自己聽到掌聲后的內(nèi)心感受,如如釋重負(fù)、充滿自豪與喜悅,意識到自己戰(zhàn)勝了內(nèi)心的恐懼,這次經(jīng)歷成為了自己成長路上的寶貴財富,也更加堅定了自己在詩歌創(chuàng)作與朗誦道路上繼續(xù)前行的決心等。語言積累:“Takeadeepbreathandcalmdown.”(深呼吸并冷靜下來。)“Summonupone'scourage”(鼓起勇氣)“Withatremblingvoice”(帶著顫抖的聲音)“Theaudiencewasspellboundby...”(觀眾被……迷住了)“Thewordsflowedsmoothlyfrommylips.”(話語從我口中流暢地說出。)“Asenseofreliefwashedoverme.”(一種解脫感涌上心頭。)“Toone'sastonishment”(令某人驚訝的是)“Conveytheemotionvividly”(生動地傳達(dá)情感)“Inthefaceofdifficulties”(面對困難)“Overcomeone'sinnerfear”(克服內(nèi)心的恐懼)寫作示范一:Iwasabouttorunawaywhenmyteachercameuptome.Hegavemeareassuringpatontheshoulderandsaid,"Nancy,don'tbeafraid.Thisisyourmoment.Letthepoemshinethrough."Itookadeepbreathandtriedtosummonupmycourage.Standingstraight,Ibegantorecite.Atfirst,myvoicewasabitshaky,butasIdelveddeeperintothepoem,thewordsflowedmoresmoothly.IfocusedonthemeaningandthefeelingsIhadpouredintoeachline,tryingtoconveythemvividly.WhenIfinishedmyreading,thehallwassilentatfirst.Tomyastonishment,itwasasilenceofraptattentionratherthanindifference.Then,athunderousapplauseerupted.Isawmyparentsbeamingwithprideandmyclassmatesgivingmethumbsup.Asenseofreliefwashedoverme.IrealizedthatIhadovercomemyinnerfearandmanagedtosharemyloveforpoetrywithsomanypeople.Thisexperiencebecameapreciousmilestoneinmylife,makingmemoredeterminedtopursuemypassionforpoetryandpublicspeaking.寫作示范二:Iwasabouttorunawaywhenmyteachercameuptome.Hewhispered,"Youarebetterthanthis.Ignorethestumbleandshowthemyourtalent."Inodded,tookadeepbreathandsteadiedmyself.Istartedreciting,withatremblingvoiceatfirst.Butgradually,Igotintotherhythmofthepoem,picturingthebeautifulscenesIhaddescribed.TheaudiencewasspellboundbythevividimagesandemotionsIwaspresenting.WhenIfinishedmyreading,thehallwassilentatfirst.Itfeltlikeaneternity.Then,allofasudden,thecrowdburstintowildapplause.Icouldseetearsinmymother'seyesandabigsmileonmyteacher'sface.Ifeltanoverwhelmingsenseofprideandjoy.Iknewthatinthefaceofdifficulties,Ihadnotbackeddown.Thiseventhadnotonlymademeabetterpoetbutalsoamoreconfidentperson,readytoembraceanychallengesthatlayaheadinmyjourneyofself-expression.寫作示范三:Iwasabouttorunawaywhenmyteachercameuptome.Heheldmyarmgentlyandsaid,"Nancy,thisisjustasmallsetback.Yourpoemiswonderful.Letitbeheard."Encouragedbyhiswords,Istoodfirmandstartedtorecite.Iputallmyheartintoit,usingdifferentintonationstoexpressthevariousemotionsinthepoem.Thekidswhohadlaughedbeforewerenowlisteningintently.WhenIfinishedmyreading,thehallwassilentatfirst.Iheldmybreath,fearingtheworst.Butthen,thesilencewasbrokenbyadeafeningroundofapplause.Iwasoverjoyed.Isawmylittlebrotherjumpingupanddownwithexcitement.IknewthatIhadconqueredmystagefrightandmadeamark.Thisexperiencewouldalwaysstaywithme,remindingmeofthepowerofperseveranceandthebeautyofsharingone'screativitywiththeworld.參考范文:Iwasabouttorunawaywhenmyteachercameuptome.Hesmiledencouraginglyandsaid,“Nancy,it'sokay.Mistakeshappen.Now,pickyourselfupandshowthemyourpoem.”Hiswordswerelikeawarmbreeze,calmin
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