（高考英語作文煉句）第65篇譯文老師筆記

PAGEPAGE11.我們每個人的技能和專長都是有限的.要想取得成功,我們需要謀求其他人的智慧,并將這些智慧應(yīng)用起來以創(chuàng)造集體優(yōu)勢.Eachofuspossessesalimitedsetofskillsandexpertise.Tosucceed,itisnecessaryto

enlist

(1.爭取,謀求)eachother'swisdomand

useittoourcollectiveadvantage(2.將這些智慧應(yīng)用起來以創(chuàng)造集體優(yōu)勢).

1-爭取,謀求enlist

詞典釋義：enlist[?n'l?st]

verb

ASKFORHELP

請求幫助

transitive

slightly

formal

■toaskforandgethelporsupportfromsomeone

爭取,謀取(幫助或支援)

?We'vegotto

enlist

somepeopletohelppreparethefood.我們得請些人來幫忙做飯.?Theorganizationhas

enlisted

thesupportofmanyfamouspeopleinraisingmoneytohelphomelesschildren.這個組織募款幫助無家可歸的兒童的活動已經(jīng)得到了很多名人的支持.

外刊例句：SaudiArabiaistryingto

enlist

otheroil-producingcountriestosupportaprovocativeidea：ifwealthycountriesreducetheiroilconsumptiontocombatglobalwarming,theyshouldpaycompensationtooilproducers.

()沙特阿拉伯正謀求其他產(chǎn)油國支持其富有爭議的想法：若發(fā)達國家為了對抗全球變暖而減少使用石油,那么他們該給產(chǎn)油國提供相應(yīng)補助.

2-將這些智慧應(yīng)用起來以創(chuàng)造集體優(yōu)勢useittoourcollectiveadvantage

詞典釋義：collective[k?'lek.t?v]

adjective

[beforenoun]

■oforsharedbyeverymemberofagroupofpeople

集體的;共同的

?a

collective

decision/effort共同的決定／努力?collective

responsibility/leadership共同責(zé)任／集體領(lǐng)導(dǎo)

tosb'sadvantage

withresultswhichareprofitableorhelpfultosb其結(jié)果對某人有利或有幫助：

Theagreementis/workstoouradvantage.

協(xié)議對我們有利.

turnsthtoone's(own)ad`vantage

cause(asituationoranevent)toleadtopersonalprofit;makethemostofsth使(情況或事情)導(dǎo)致個人獲利;充分利用某事物.

外刊例句：BushandhisWhiteHousewereengaginginacarefullyorchestratedcampaigntoshapeandmanipulatesourcesofpublicapproval

toouradvantage.

()布什及其政府各人員正精心策劃著一場政治運動,致力于贏得公眾支持,并且為了集體利益,操縱其來源.

2.在我們的日常生活中,我們難免會遇到一些情形,在這些情形中,我們無法得到外界的幫助,只能依靠我們自身的知識和問題解決技巧來應(yīng)對.在這種情況下,那些習(xí)慣性地依賴別人的人會變得茫然不知所措.Inoureverydaylives,therewillalwaysbeoccasionswhenweareunabletoobtainoutsideassistanceandhavetodependonourownknowledgeand

problem-solvingskills(1.問題解決技巧).Inthesesituations,peoplewho

habitually

(2.習(xí)慣性的)relyonotherswillfindthemselves

ataloss(3.茫然不知所措).

1-問題解決技巧problem-solvingskills注意不可以把problem-solving寫成solvingproblem.名詞和非謂語構(gòu)成合成詞時,一般都是"n-doing”/"n-done”/"n-todo”的形式.如果要用solvingproblems或者tosolveproblems,也需要放在n后面作定語,而不能像合成詞(合成詞相當(dāng)于只有1個單詞)那樣放在n前面作定語.

詞典釋義：problem-solving

'problem-?solvingnounU

1.whenyoufindwaysofdoingthings,oranswerstoproblems解決問題：

tasksthatinvolveproblem-solving包括解決問題的工作任務(wù)?employeeswithgoodproblem-solvingskills具備良好解決問題能力的雇員

外刊例句：Similarly,employerscomplainthatlessthanhalfoftheyoungwhomtheyhirehaveadequate

problem-solvingskills,yetnearlytwo-thirdsoftheyoungbelievethattheydohavesuchskills.()同樣,雇主也抱怨道,他們雇傭的年輕員工有充足解決問題技能的連一半都不到,但三分之二左右的年輕員工認為自己具備這些技能.

2-習(xí)慣性地habitually

詞典釋義：habitually

\-lē,-li\

adverb

1.

：

byhabit

：

customarily,

unthinkingly

2.

：

consistently,

persistently,

repeatedly,

usually

外刊例句：Hewastoldhewasnot,underthenewbenefitsrules,considered

habitually

residentintheUKandwouldhavetowaitthreemonthsbeforeclaimingJSA.

()他得知,根據(jù)新的福利條例,自己不算是英國的常住居民,得再等三個月才能拿失業(yè)救濟.

學(xué)生錯誤表達：chronically點評：用詞不準(zhǔn)確,chronically是指"慢性的”,例如：patientswhoarechronicallyill患慢性病的病人

3-茫然不知所措ataloss

詞典釋義：

UK

[l?s]

US

[lɑ：s]

noun

beataloss

■tonotknowwhattodoorsay

不知所措;不知說甚么

?I'mata

loss

toknowhowIcanhelpyou.我不知道該怎么幫你.

外刊例句：TheAmericansare

ataloss

todecidehowtotakeonSomalia’sjihadists.()美國尚無統(tǒng)一方案對付索馬里的恐怖分子.

3.很多奧運會選手天生擁有優(yōu)秀的體格條件.但如果沒有經(jīng)過多年的嚴(yán)格訓(xùn)練,他們就不能像現(xiàn)在一樣發(fā)揮他們的潛力,或者得到參加奧運會的機會.ManyOlympiansarebornwith

superiorphysiques(1.優(yōu)秀的體格條件).Withoutyearsof

rigoroustraining(2.嚴(yán)格的訓(xùn)練),however,noneofthemwouldhaverealizedtheirpotentialorhavehadtheopportunitytoparticipateintheOlympicGames.

1-優(yōu)秀的體格條件superiorphysiquesphysicalcondition一般指的是身體健康狀況,不適用于這里.

詞典釋義：

physique[f?'zi：k]

noun

countable

■theshapeandsizeofahumanbody

體格,體形

?Hehasaverypowerful,muscular

physique.他體格強壯,肌肉發(fā)達.

外刊例句：AnthropologicaltheoryhasitthatNeanderthalssportedhuge,

powerfulphysiques

adaptedtoiceageEuropebutneverthelessexhibitedstay-at-home,unadventurousbehaviouruntilthearrivalofearlymodernhumansintheUpperPalaeolithic30,000yearsago.

()根據(jù)人類學(xué)理論,尼安德特人身強力壯,體格優(yōu)越,能適應(yīng)冰河時期歐洲地區(qū)的生活,不過他們喜歡留在居住地,不愛探索四周,這一直等到舊石器時期晚期,現(xiàn)代人類出現(xiàn)時才有所轉(zhuǎn)變.

替換表達：athletic

physiques

學(xué)生錯誤表達：(1)

greatphysicalrequirements點評：中式表達,requirement是指"要求”,不能用來指"體格條件”.(2)

excellentfigure點評：figure是指"(女性的)身材”,例如：Shehasagoodfigure.她有很好的身材.

2-嚴(yán)格的訓(xùn)練rigoroustraining

詞典釋義：rigorousUK

['r?g.?r.?s]

US

[-?-]

adjective

STRICT

嚴(yán)格的

■severeorstrict

嚴(yán)格的,嚴(yán)厲的

?the

rigorous

controlsgoverningthesaleofshares管制股權(quán)出售的嚴(yán)格約束

外刊例句：More

rigoroustraining

isaboontoapprentices.

()學(xué)徒能從更為嚴(yán)格的訓(xùn)練中獲益更多.

替換表達：hard/serious/strict/tough

training

Withoutyearsofrigoroustraining,however,noneofthemwouldhaverealizedtheirpotentialorhavehadtheopportunitytoparticipateintheOlympicGames.

[分析]本句是虛擬語氣,條件句是介詞短語Withoutyearsofrigoroustraining,表示與現(xiàn)在事實相反,介詞短語作虛擬條件句是一種特殊情況,它相當(dāng)于iftherewerenoyearsofrigoroustraining.主句是however之后的部分,其中,主語是noneofthem,謂語是wouldhaverealized…orhavehad,兩個謂語動詞之后的賓語分別為theirpotential和theopportunitytoparticipateintheOlympicGames,在第二個賓語中,不定式結(jié)構(gòu)toparticipateintheOlympicGames作定語,修飾theopportunity.

4.做準(zhǔn)備對于想成功的人會帶來很大的影響.第一,做準(zhǔn)備可以幫助我們從眾多可能的方法中找出最有效果的一個.其次,當(dāng)機會來臨時,我們對知識和技能的不懈準(zhǔn)備也會讓我們超過他人.這樣,我們就能夠抓住機會,向成功邁進一步.Preparationcan

makeagreatdifference

(1.帶來很大影響)tothosewhowanttoachievesuccess.Foronething,preparationhelpsusfindthemosteffectivewayfromvariouspossibleones.Foranother,whenopportunitycomes,our

constantpreparationsforskillsandknowledge

(2.對知識和技能的不懈準(zhǔn)備)willhelpus

outperformothers(3.超過他人).Therefore,wecanseizetheopportunityandgetclosertosuccess.

1-帶來很大影響makeagreatdifference

詞典釋義：makea(big)difference

ADVANCED

(also

makeallthedifference)

■toimproveasituation(alot)

(極大地)改善

?Exercisecanmakeabig

difference

to

yourstateofhealth.運動會極大地改善你的健康狀況.?Puttingupsomenewwallpaperhasmadeallthe

difference

to

theplace.貼上一些新壁紙后這個地方變得煥然一新了.

外刊例句：AswiththeWHO,itwouldnotbepossibletokilloffallinfection,butthepoolingofresourcescould

makeagreatdifference.

()正如世界衛(wèi)生組織所言,要讓全部感染現(xiàn)象消失并不現(xiàn)實,但集中資源可以對此造成巨大影響.

2-對知識和技能的不懈準(zhǔn)備constantpreparationsforskillsandknowledge

詞典釋義：constantUK

['k?nt.st?nt]

US

['kɑ：nt-]

adjective

FREQUENT

頻繁的

IMPROVER

■happeningalotorallthetime

經(jīng)常發(fā)生的;連續(xù)發(fā)生的;連續(xù)不斷的

?He'sin

constant

troublewiththepolice.他與警方麻煩不斷.?machinesthatarein

constant

use經(jīng)常使用的機器

外刊例句：Asthedaysdiminish,Mabelseems,withherwashing,cooking,sewingandthelightingofoillamps,toenacta

constantpreparationfo