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試題呈現(xiàn)：閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。ItwastheseconddayinthenewofficeandMayawasstillonherown.Exceptthemanwhohadtakenherinduction(入職),therewasnooneelsewhohadsaida“hi”totheyoungwoman.Notonlywasitanewoffice,itwasalsoanewcity.Whileshehadsuccessfullyclimbedthecorporateladder(階梯)forabettersalary,shehadn'treallymadeanyfriendsinthenewcityorofficeyet.Lookingatthewholeworkplacefromherseatattheendofthehall,Mayafeltanurgetocry.Butshewasagrownwomanandthatwassimplynotanoption.Shedecidedtoeatherlunch,aslonelyasitmightfeel.Herlunchboxrevealedfriedricewithvegetablesandan

oldmemoryhitherfromthedepthofhermind.Itwasfifteenyearsagoandtheirsportsperiodhadjustbeencanceled.Thechildrenhadbroughtsomesnackfromtheschoolcanteentotheclassroomandwerechewingnoisily,Theclassteachercameinwithayounggirl.“ThisisTina,newtoDelhiandyourschool.Makeherfeelwelcome,youall,”shesaid.Whilethestudentssaidabig,“hi”toherinachorus,thatwasalltheydid.TinawasseatedrightnexttoMaya,somethingthelatter(后者)didn'tlike.So,sheturnedtoTinaandsaid,“Mybestfriendsitsnexttome.Youhavebeengiventhisseatbecausesheisabsenttoday.Oncesheisback,youhavetofindyourselfanewseat,OK?”Tinasadlynoddedherhead,butMayadidn'tcare.Asthepopulargirlinclass,Mayahadalotgoingforher-shehadmanyfriends,theteacherslovedherandshewasthequeenofdebating.So,shehardlyspoketothenewgirlwhosatnexttoherforawholeweek.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Finally,Maya'sbestfriendreturnedtoschoolafterafeverattack.Paragraph2:SolostinthoughtwasMayathatshedidn'tnoticeawomanstandingbesideher.文章大意：Maya到新辦公室兩天，沒人和她打招呼，在新城市和新辦公室都還沒交到朋友，她感到孤獨。吃午餐時回憶起十五年前在學校，新同學Tina坐在她旁邊，她因好友的座位被占而對Tina不友好，一周都沒怎么和Tina說話。故事山分析：開場：Maya在新辦公室的孤獨現(xiàn)狀，引出對學生時代的回憶。上升：回憶中Maya對新同學Tina的不友好態(tài)度持續(xù)一周。高潮：未確定，續(xù)寫需展現(xiàn)后續(xù)情節(jié)發(fā)展與沖突解決。下降：無結局：未完成，待續(xù)寫補充。五處伏筆及回應：伏筆：Maya在新辦公室無人交流?；貞豪m(xù)寫中可能因回憶反思自己當年對Tina的態(tài)度，從而改變在辦公室與人相處的方式。伏筆：Maya回憶里對Tina不友好。回應：后文可能有對當年行為的愧疚與彌補情節(jié)，或者從這件事汲取教訓改善現(xiàn)狀。伏筆：Maya是班級里受歡迎的學生，有很多朋友?；貞嚎蓪懰髞硪蚺笥训囊恍┦禄蜃约旱慕洑v改變了對友誼的看法，在辦公室嘗試主動交友。伏筆：老師讓大家歡迎Tina?；貞豪m(xù)寫中Maya可能意識到當年沒有遵循老師教導的錯誤，進而在新環(huán)境中踐行友善待人。伏筆：Maya因好友座位被占而排斥Tina。回應：可能會有關于座位相關的情節(jié)反轉或象征意義的情節(jié)，如在辦公室找到自己的“新座位”（新定位或新友誼）。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：Maya的好友病愈回校，好友卻和Tina相處融洽并成了好朋友，Maya因此心生嫉妒，對Tina做出更過分的事，如故意在課堂活動中孤立她，但Tina默默忍受。第二段：Maya沉浸在回憶中時沒注意到旁邊站著一位女士，這位女士是Tina，Tina已不記得當年的不愉快，還友好地和Maya打招呼，Maya既驚訝又愧疚，Tina的友善讓Maya反思自己的行為，決定改變在新辦公室的社交態(tài)度，主動去和同事交流。情感線：Maya最初在新辦公室的孤獨、失落，回憶中對Tina的排斥、冷漠，看到好友與Tina交好時的嫉妒，見到Tina后的驚訝與愧疚，最后因Tina的友善而產生的反思與決心改變的積極情感。故事線：Maya好友回校后與Tina成好友，Maya嫉妒。Maya課堂上孤立Tina，Tina忍受。Maya回憶往事時未察覺Tina到來。Tina友好打招呼，Maya驚訝愧疚。Maya反思自己行為。Maya決定改變在新辦公室的社交態(tài)度。主旨升華句：Truefriendshipisnotaboutpopularitybutaboutacceptanceandkindness.（真正的友誼不在于受歡迎程度，而在于接納與友善。）Thepastmistakescanbethesteppingstonestoabetterfutureifwelearnfromthem.（如果我們能從中吸取教訓，過去的錯誤可以成為通向更美好未來的墊腳石。）Kindness,likeaboomerang,alwaysreturnstothosewhogiveit.（友善就像回旋鏢，總會回到施與者身邊。）Lettinggoofjealousyandembracingothersisthekeytounlockingthedooroffriendship.（放下嫉妒并接納他人是開啟友誼之門的關鍵。）Asingleactofkindnesscanmelttheiceofyearsofcoldnessandbuildabridgeoffriendship.（一個友善的舉動可以融化多年冷漠的堅冰，搭建起友誼的橋梁。）寫作示范一：Finally,Maya'sbestfriendreturnedtoschoolafterafeverattack.ButtoMaya'sastonishment,herfriendseemedtohavehititoffwithTinainstantly.Theychattedandlaughed,leavingMayafeelingleftoutandjealous.Inafitofpique,MayastartedtoisolateTinaduringclassactivities.Tina,however,remainedsilentandenduredtheunfairtreatment.SolostinthoughtwasMayathatshedidn'tnoticeawomanstandingbesideher.ItwasTina.YearshadpassedandTinahadclearlyforgottentheunpleasantness.ShegreetedMayawithawarmsmile.Mayawastakenaback,herfaceflushingwithguilt.Tina'skindnessmadeMayarealizehowpettyshehadbeen.Shevowedtochangeherattitudeinthenewoffice.Shewouldnolongerletjealousyandpridestandinthewayofmakingfriends.寫作示范二：Finally,Maya'sbestfriendreturnedtoschoolafterafeverattack.MuchtoMaya'sdismay,herbestfriendandTinaquicklybecameinseparable.Maya'sjealousygotthebetterofher,andshebegantoexcludeTinafromgroupdiscussionsandgames.Tinaboreitallwithgrace.SolostinthoughtwasMayathatshedidn'tnoticeawomanstandingbesideher.ThewomanwasTina.ShelookedatMayawithafriendlyexpressionandsaidhello.Mayawasshockedandfilledwithremorse.Sherememberedherunkindbehaviorasachild.Tina'sforgivingnaturemadeMayaunderstandthatitwastimetoletgoofthepast.Shemadeuphermindtobemoreopenandfriendlyinthenewoffice,hopingtomakeupforherpastmistakesandbuildnewrelationships.寫作示范三Paragraph1:Finally,Maya’sbestfriendreturnedtoschoolafterafeverattack.Asexpected,Tinaquietlypickedupherbelongingsandmovedtoanemptyseatatthebackoftheclassroom.Mayacaughtaglimpseofherhesitatingglance,aflickerofsadnesscrossingherface.Atfirst,Mayadismissedit.Butoverthenextfewdays,shefoundherselfnoticingmore—howTinasatsilentlyduringbreaks,hersmallframehunchedoverhernotebookasshedrewabsentmindedly,orhowhereyesdartedtothelaughinggroups,thenquicklybacktoherdesk.TheimagelingeredinMaya’smind,intertwiningwithherownisolationinthenewoffice.Memoriesofbeingsurroundedbyfriendsnowfelthollow,andapangofguiltcreptin.WasshenowexperiencingwhatTinahadfeltbackthen?Therealizationwaslikeaknottighteninginherchest,urginghertoreconsiderherownactions.Paragraph2:SolostinthoughtwasMayathatshedidn’tnoticeawomanstandingbesideher.“Hi,I’mPriya,”thewomansaidwarmly,holdingasteamingcupofcoffee.Startled,Mayalookedupandmanagedasmallsmile.“Oh,hi...I’mMaya,”shereplied,hervoicefalteringbutgenuine.SeeingPriya’sfriendlyexpression,astrangecouragebegantosurfacewithinher.Gatheringherself,sheaskedhesitantly,“Wouldyouliketojoinmeforlunch?”Priya’sfacebrightened.“I’dloveto!”shesaidenthusiastically.Astheysharedtheirstoriesoverlunch,Mayafoundherselflaughingforthefirsttimeindays.Thewalloflonelinessshehadbuiltbegantocrumble.Inthatmoment,sherealizedthatasimplegesture—beita“hi”oraninvitation—hadthepowertobridgeeventhedeepestvoidsofisolation.Maybe,justmaybe,itwasnevertoolatetochoosekindness.參考范文：Finally,Maya'sbestfriendreturnedtoschoolafterafeverattack.Mayawasquicktoreclaimherseat,andTinamovedtothebackoftheclassroomwithoutaword.Mayawasrelieved,feelingthatherworldhadreturnedtonormal.Butasthedayspassed,somethingunnamedstirredinMaya’sheart.SeeingTina,thenewgirl,sittingthere,lonelyandexcluded,Mayafeltthatshewasreallytooharshonher,asurgeofguiltcreepingallthewayintohermind.Shewantedtoapologize,butshewasshortofthecouragetotakethestep.Thenextmoment,memoriesmadetheirwaybackintheofficeandMayarealizedthathersituationintheofficewasexactlythatofTinaintheclassroom.Thinkingback,MayacouldwellrelatetohowdesperateandhurtTinamusthave