【公開課課件】讀后續(xù)寫-How can we describe actions vividly

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Howcanwedescribeactionsvividly?讀后續(xù)寫高考真題

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2)applythe

adverbsandprepositionalphrasestomodify(修飾)theverbs.3)choosesuitablegrammar(非謂語(yǔ)、with結(jié)構(gòu)

獨(dú)立主格...)toenrichthescene.Look,compareandobserveThegirl

hugged

theboy.Thegirl

dashedforward,jumpedupandhugged

theboytightly.Mr.Beanattemptedtocheatintheexam.憨豆先生試圖在考試中作弊。Pleasedescribethefollowingpictureandvideo.ThestepsMr.BeanattempedtocheatintheexamStep1:Step2:Step3:lookaroundmovetohisdeskmateattempttoglanceat...環(huán)顧四周靠近他同桌試圖瞥一眼（他的答案)6Duringtheexam,Mr.Beanlookedaround,

movedtowards

hisdeskmateand

attempted

toglanceathisanswers.

Achainofactions（動(dòng)作鏈）：按照時(shí)間軸，把動(dòng)作拆解成飽滿的動(dòng)作鏈(描述一系列動(dòng)作)可用:主+謂1,謂2and

(then)謂3

1)Thegirl

dashedforward,jumpedupandhugged

theboytightly.2)Mr.Beanlookedaround,

movedtowards

hisdeskmateand

attempted

toglanceathisanswers.

Tip1:動(dòng)作三連結(jié)構(gòu)（A,BandC結(jié)構(gòu)）Practice1.她登上(board)飛機(jī)，坐在座位上，尋找她的書。_______________________________________________________2.Mike跳下自行車，沖進(jìn)(dashin)他的小車，并關(guān)上車門。_______________________________________________________Sheboarded

theplane,saton

herseat

andthenlookedfor

herbook.Mike

jumpedoff

thebicycle,

dashedin

hiscar

andclosed

thedoor.S+V1,V2and(then)V3practice哪吒跳了下來(lái).Nezhajumpedoffthewall動(dòng)作鏈：1.Nezha_________mom’swords,________and_________offthewall.heardsmiledjumped2._________mom’swords,Nezhasmiledandjumpedoffthewall.Hearing1)Thevillagerscaughtsightoftheman’sreaction.2)Thevillagersraninalldirections._____________________theman’sreaction,thevillagersraninalldirections.Catchingsightof

Tip2Non-finiteverbs(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)

Hestoodmotionlesslyintheyard，______(watch)

thebeautifulsunrise.

watching

Tip2Non-finiteverbs(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)

Hestoodmotionlessly(不動(dòng)地）intheyard.Hewatchedthebeautifulsunrise.

Tip2Non-finiteverbs(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)當(dāng)出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)動(dòng)作，而前后兩個(gè)動(dòng)作邏輯主語(yǔ)一致時(shí)，可用:非謂語(yǔ),主+謂主+謂,非謂語(yǔ)

Thegirl

dashedforward_______,jumpedup_______andhuggedtheboy_______.

女孩飛快地沖上前，高興地跳起來(lái)，緊緊地抱住男孩。quicklyhappilyTip3:AddAdverbstightlygladly,____________________________...EmotionMovement

Tip3:AddAdverbs（添加副詞）angrily,___________________...sadly,___________________...surprisedly,_________________...swiftly,__________________________....cheerfullyjoyfullydelightedlyfearfullyanxiouslytearfullyheart-brokenlyamazedlyastonishedlyhurriedlystronglybravely

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiled___________andjumpedoffthewall_______________.

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledandjumpedoffthewall.

cheerfully添加副詞：quicklyin

surprise/amazementNezhalookedathismom________________________ingrief/sorrow/lowspiritsTip4:Addprepositionalphrases（介詞短語(yǔ)）in

anger/annoyance

withexcitement/delight/joy

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallswiftly.

添加介詞短語(yǔ)：

Hearing

mom'swords,Nezhasmiled

cheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallswiftly____________________________________.withexcitement/withdelight/withjoy①Thebellwasringing.②Thestudentsenteredtheclassroom._____________,allthestudentsenteredtheclassroom.Tip5:獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)/with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，S+V（表示動(dòng)作的邏輯主語(yǔ)不一致時(shí)用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)/with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu):（with）邏輯主語(yǔ)+非謂語(yǔ)/形容詞/副詞/介詞短語(yǔ)）③Sheopenedtheparcelslowly.④Herhandsweretrembling.Notes:

獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)在句中充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)，with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)在句中充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)，兩者有時(shí)可互換。Sheopenedtheparcel,__________________________獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)Thebellringingwithherhandstrembling.

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallswiftlywithexcitement.

添加with結(jié)構(gòu)：

Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfully____________________andjumpedoffthewallswiftlywithexcitement.withhiseyeswideopenTip5:Addwith復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)1.聽到這個(gè)消息,她的母親微笑著,輕輕地拍著_______thenews,hermother______and______hergently.2.被老師的話所鼓舞，Lucy舉起了手，小聲說(shuō)，“我來(lái)。”_______________bytheteacher’swords,Lucy_______herhand,_______________,“I’lldoit.”3.天真的女孩心跳加速，毫不猶豫地打開了精致的禮盒。Withherheart_________wildly,theinnocentgirl___________herdelicategiftboxwithoutanyhesitation.raisedPracticeEncouragedwhisperingbeatingopenedHearingsmiledpatted1.Nezhajumpedoffthewall.3.Hearing

mom'swords,Nezhasmiledandjumpedoffthewall.6.Hearing

mom'swords,Nezhasmiled

cheerfullywithhiseyeswideopen

andjumpedoffthewallswiftlywithexcitement.

5.Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiledcheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallswiftlywithexcitement.2.Nezhaheard

mom'swords,smiledandjumpedoffthewall.(UseA,BandC)(Usenon-finiteverbs)(Addadverbs)(Addprepsitionalphrases)4.Hearingmom'swords,Nezhasmiled

cheerfullyandjumpedoffthewallswiftly.(Addwithstructure)Henry跳水救人

Henryjumpedintotheriverandsaved

Robert.（要求：1.寫30-50個(gè)詞；2.至少用我們今天所學(xué)的技巧3個(gè)

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