北師大版高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)類型二第1講續(xù)寫門話題個人成長課件

第三部分寫作專題突破類型二讀后續(xù)寫第1講續(xù)寫熱門話題個人成長閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)WhenIwasinmiddleschool，mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest．Isaidnowithoutthinking．Ididnotlovewriting．MyfamilycamefromBrazil，soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage．WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay，whereIplayedalltheparts．Noonelaughedharderthanhedid．So，whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply：“BecauseIloveyourstories．Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourself，Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis．”Encouragedbyhiswords，Iagreedtogiveitatry．IchosePaulRevere'shorseasmysubject．PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18，1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming．Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse'smouth．Notabrilliantidea，butfunny；andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice．Whatdidthehorsethink，ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately．Igottired．Ihaddoubts．Iwantedtoquit．But，likeRevere'shorse，Ikeptgoing．Iworkedhard．Icheckedmyspelling．Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar．Icheckedoutahalf-dozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary．Ievenreadafewofthem．WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher，hereadit，laughedoutloud，andsaid，“Great．Now，writeitagain．”Iwroteitagain，andagainandagain．WhenIfinallyfinishedit，thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting．IfIdidn'twin，Iwouldn'tcare．注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式作答。Afewweekslater，whenIalmostforgotthecontest，therecamethenews．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作指導(dǎo)：Ⅰ．梳理原文細節(jié)，理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ．依據(jù)首句提示，構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，第一段可寫我得知獲獎后的激動心情，家人(尤其是我姐姐)也為我感到高興，并回顧參賽的心路歷程。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，第二段可寫我表達對老師的感謝，老師會再次給予認可和鼓勵。最后，可適當(dāng)進行升華，不要輕易說不可能。范文佳作：A

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presentation．Gigglinginstantlywithabroadsmilespreadingonhisface，hetoldmethathewasproudofmywonderfulperformance．Itwasatthatmomentthatawarmsurgeofstreamswashedthroughmybody，andtheimageofthehorseemergedinmymind，encouragingmetocontinuewriting．Indeed，Igotatasteofvictoryandlearnedtopursuemydreamwithperseverance，whateverdifficultiesmightarise．話題佳句：1．Hardthoughitis，thereisnothingmorevaluablethanthesenseofachievementyougetfromchallengingyourself．雖然很困難，但沒有什么比挑戰(zhàn)自己獲得的成就感更有價值的了。2．Takingadeepbreathtocollectmyself，IdecidedtorisefromwhereIfell．深吸一口氣讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來，我決定從我跌倒的地方站起來。3．Agreatweightoffhismind，Tonyhadneverfeltsorelieved．卸下了沉重的負擔(dān)，托尼從沒有像現(xiàn)在這樣如釋重負。4．Lifeisfullofsmilesandtears．Onlybyacceptingthembothcanweenjoyourlife．生活充滿了微笑和淚水。只有接受它們兩者，我們才能享受我們的生活。5．Atthemoment，Ilearnedwhatmydadmeantandbecamewillingtocontributemoretothehousehold．Ididn'tfeelconfusedanymoreaboutwhyIshouldhandinmyearnings，asitwasindeedmyresponsibilitytosupportthewholefamily．那一刻，我明白了父親的意思，并愿意為家庭做更多的貢獻。我不再對為什么我應(yīng)該上交我的收入感到困惑，因為養(yǎng)活整個家庭確實是我的責(zé)任。6．Thismadememoved，andIwouldtrymybesttohelpmorepeopleinthefutureandbringwarmthtomorepeople．這讓我很感動，以后我會盡我最大的努力去幫助更多的人，給更多的人帶來溫暖。7．Thisexperiencemademerealizethatthepersonswhoyouaregratefultoarealwaysthereanddon'tignorethem!這次經(jīng)歷使我意識到，你所要感激的人一直都在那里，不要忽視他們。8．Throughtheaccident，Icametorealizethevalueoflifeandtheimportanceofobeyingtrafficrules．Afterall，nothingismorepreciousthanlife．通過這次事故，我開始認識到生命的價值和遵守交通規(guī)則的重要性。畢竟，沒有什么比生命更珍貴。9．Atthirteen，IrealizedthatI'dalwaysbecomethewinnerifIwantedsomethingbadlyandworkedforit．Icanbethemasterofmyowndestiny．十三歲的時候，我意識到如果我非常想要某樣?xùn)|西并為之努力，我總是會成為勝利者。我可以是自己命運的主宰。10．Ineverforgotthefeelingofpowerlessnesswhenfacedwiththeinjuredintheaccident．Itwasthataccid