高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)應(yīng)用文寫作課件

Exploration&Transfer

—Applywhatyouhavelearnedtodosomepracticalwriting.

Learningobjectives:1.Formabasicwritingframeforeachdifferentwritingtypebyanalyzingthelanguagefeatures,contentsandstructures.2.Applywhatyouhavelearnedtodosomepracticalwriting.3.Polishyourwritingwiththehelpofeachchecklistandremarks.

DearSirorMadam,I'maChineseexchangestudentstudyinginLondonnow.①Icanhardlywaittoapplytotakepartintheperformanceoftraditionaldancesoftheworldinourcommunity（我迫不及待地想申請(qǐng)參加我們社區(qū)的世界傳統(tǒng)舞蹈表演）.IhavebeenpracticingtraditionalChinesedancesinceIwassix,②whichhashelpedmewinseveralprizesindancecompetitions（這幫我在數(shù)次舞蹈比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）atthenationallevel.③Moreover,beforecominghere,Ibelongedtomyschooldanceclubandwasresponsibleforteachingnewcomers.IfI'mgiventhepreciousopportunity④Ifgiventhepreciousopportunity（用狀語(yǔ)從句的省略句升級(jí)），I’llsparenoefforttoshowtheuniquebeautyoftraditionalChinesedance.Yours,LiHua1.申請(qǐng)信1-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，正在倫敦交流學(xué)習(xí)。你所在社區(qū)將舉辦各國(guó)傳統(tǒng)舞蹈表演活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給活動(dòng)組委會(huì)寫一封郵件，申請(qǐng)參加此活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1．寫信目的；2．相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；3．希望獲準(zhǔn)。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右好詞beresponsiblefor對(duì)……負(fù)責(zé)DearSirorMadam,

（說(shuō)明工作信息，提出申請(qǐng)）I’mastudenttakingsummercoursesin

Londonnow.Learningvolunteersareneeded

forthecomingChinesepainting

exhibitioninyourlocalartgallery,Ican'twaittoapplyfortheposition.（先用“現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)十被動(dòng)句”，說(shuō)明信息內(nèi)容，再用固定句式，表明自己迫切的心情）

（詳述個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事情）Firstly，myfluentEnglishenablesme

tocommunicatesmoothlywithBritishpaintinglovers.Moreover,withawideknowledgeofChinesepainting,Icanintroducetheartformbetter.（利用介詞短語(yǔ)說(shuō)明自己的第二個(gè)優(yōu)勢(shì)）Betteryet,I'veparticipatedinseveralsimilaractivities,whichequippedmewithrelevantexperience.

（非限制性定語(yǔ)從句十高級(jí)表達(dá)，說(shuō)明相關(guān)工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)）

（表達(dá)決心，期待回復(fù)）Ifaccepted，Iwillsparenoefforttointroduce

thosepaintingsondisplayand

（省略句式簡(jiǎn)潔明了，再次為文章添彩）answerquestionspatiently.I'dappreciate

itifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.Yours,LiHu1.申請(qǐng)信1-2實(shí)踐演練（全國(guó)卷I改編）假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國(guó)畫展覽。請(qǐng)寫一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1．寫信目的；2．個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；3．能做的事情。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞①enablesb.todosth.使某人能夠做某事

②sparenoeffort不遺余力

③ondisplay展出DearSteven,

Ican'twaittoinformyouaropeskippingcompetitionwillbeheldonourschoolplaygroundnextFriday.①I'dliketoinviteyoutoparticipate（我想邀請(qǐng)你參加）.

Toencourageusstudentstostayhealthyandenergetic,thecompetitionwillbeheldintheformofsingleskippingropeandteamskippingrope.Thestudentortheteamwhoskipsmostwillwinfirstprize.Furthermore,manyprizeswillbegiventotheplayerswhorankintop10.

②Surely,itwillbeafantasticactivity,and③I'dappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience（如盡早確認(rèn)你的參與，我將不勝感激）.Yours,LiHua2.邀請(qǐng)信2-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你校將于下周五舉辦跳繩比賽，請(qǐng)給你校交換生Steven寫封信邀請(qǐng)他參加，內(nèi)容包括：1．時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2．目的和形式；3．設(shè)置的獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞intheformof以……的形式；single/teamskippingrope單人/團(tuán)體跳繩DearCaroline,

（自我介紹，發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)）I

amLiHua，astudentinchargeofourCampus

BroadcastingStation.

（利用“同位語(yǔ)十介詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)”介紹自己身份，簡(jiǎn)潔明了）I'mwritingtosincerelyinviteyoutoaninterviewinourprogram.

（節(jié)目介紹，說(shuō)明訪談的時(shí)間和話題）Mainlyfocusingonourvariedand

colorfulcampuslife,

高級(jí)詞匯十現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)，介紹節(jié)目，簡(jiǎn)明扼要“TalkandTalk”enjoysgreatpopularityamongus.Actually,

fullyawareofyourabundantexperienceinteachingandrichknowledgeofliterature,wedesireatalkconcerninghowtoimprovewritingability.（高級(jí)詞匯＋形容詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)，說(shuō)明訪談話題）Would3:00pmthisSaturdaybeconvenientforyou?

（再次邀請(qǐng)，期待回復(fù)）Yourpresencewilldefinitelyimpressandbenefit

usconsiderably.（用兩個(gè)副詞強(qiáng)調(diào)程度，說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)的誠(chéng)摯，得體自然）I'dappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourcomingatyourearliestconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua2.邀請(qǐng)信2-2實(shí)踐演練（2022·新高考I卷）假定你是校廣播站英語(yǔ)節(jié)目“Talk

andTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)你給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1．節(jié)目介紹；2．訪談的時(shí)間和話題。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞

①inchargeof負(fù)責(zé)

②focuson主要講述；專注于

③befullyawareof充分認(rèn)識(shí)到DearMrHenry,

Howiseverythinggoingthesedays?①I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.（我寫信向你求助）.

WhilepreparingtoattendMUNnextweek,Ihavesomedifficultywithconceptsandexpressionsofthecurrentaffairsandspeechskills.I'mwonderingifIcouldborrowyourDictionaryofEnglishMedia.②Furthernore,I'matalosshowtomakemyspeechconvincingandpersuasive.Couldyoubesokindastooffermesomeadvice?

③I’dappreciateitifyoucouldsparesometimetogivemeface-to-faceinstructions（如果你能抽時(shí)間面對(duì)面指導(dǎo)我，我將不勝感激）.Yours,LiHua3.求助信3-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，下周將參加英語(yǔ)模聯(lián)（MUN）活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給外教Henry寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．借用《英語(yǔ)媒體詞典》(DictionaryofEnglishMedia);2．請(qǐng)教英文演講技巧；3．請(qǐng)求當(dāng)面指導(dǎo)。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞persuasiveadj.有說(shuō)服力的DearMissEvans,

（說(shuō)明寫信目的）Howiseverythinggoing？I’mwritingtoask

youforadviceregardingaplaywehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.(利用高級(jí)詞匯regarding和定語(yǔ)從句，說(shuō)明求助事項(xiàng))

（說(shuō)明具體困難）Theplayisabouthowmoneyinfluencestheattitudeofpeopletreatingothers.

However,whatwe'reuncertain(however話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，引入下文，what引導(dǎo)的iswhethertheplotiscomplete.Besides,weareeagertoknowhowtocorrectourtoneandpronunciationinordertoperformthe主語(yǔ)從句＋whether引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，表述第一個(gè)困難.)play

perfectly.Therefore,

I'mwonderingifitisconvenientforyoutoguide

usattenamtomorrowintheschoolhall.(利用I’mwondering和賓語(yǔ)從句，禮貌得體地商定時(shí)間、地點(diǎn))

（希望得到幫助，期待早日回復(fù)）I’dappreciateitifyoucoulddousafavor.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua3求助信3-2實(shí)踐演練（2020·全國(guó)卷II改編）假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。請(qǐng)你給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：1．劇情簡(jiǎn)介；2．指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3．商定時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞①adapt...from...改編自······②dosb.afavor幫某人一個(gè)忙③beeagertodosth.渴望做某事DearJack,

Asforhowtouseyourfreetimemoreeffectively,①I'dliketoofferyousomepracticalsuggestions（我想給你一些實(shí)用的建議）.

②Firstofall,

reduceyourscreentimeandstopusinganybeforeschoolandatmealtimes.③Furthermore,increasereal-timecommunicationwithyourfriendsandfamilyandbe“present”andconnected.④What'smore,itmakessensetoleadanactivelife,so⑤makethemostofyourfreetimetogetactivelyinvolvedinsomeafter-schoolactivities（充分利用業(yè)余時(shí)間積極參加一些課外活動(dòng)）.

⑥Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyou（我希望我的建議能對(duì)你有所幫助）.Yours,LiHua4.建議信4-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Jack來(lái)信說(shuō)他的課余生活十分單調(diào)，他每天花大量的課余時(shí)間在電子設(shè)備上，請(qǐng)你給他回信，就如何安排課余時(shí)間提出建議。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞①makesense有意義②leadanactivelife過(guò)積極的生活DearJim,

（寫信意圖）Asforyourletteraskingabouthowtoavoidbeinginfectedatthisparticulartime,I'dliketoofferyousomepracticalsuggestions.

（具體的建議及理由）Firstofall，mysuggestionisthatyoustayathomeandavoidgoingoutunlessnecessary,whichisbeneficialtoyourselfandothers.

（表語(yǔ)從句中的虛擬語(yǔ)氣十省略句十非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，句式豐富，說(shuō)明第一個(gè)建議及理由。）Furthermore,dowearaprotectivemaskoutdoorsandwashhandsfrequentlyandproperly.（“助動(dòng)詞十動(dòng)詞原形”，強(qiáng)調(diào)戴口罩的重要性）What'smore,strengthenyourimmune

systemandexerciseregularly,thusenablingyoutostayawayfrom

anyinfections.

現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)，使得該建議更有說(shuō)服性

（表達(dá)祝愿）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyou.Yours,LiHua4.建議信4-2實(shí)踐演練假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞的朋友Jim所居住的地區(qū)最近出現(xiàn)了新冠病毒患者，他感到很害怕，向你征求建議。請(qǐng)你給他提出建議，內(nèi)容包括：1．你的建議和理由；2．表達(dá)祝愿。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞①atthisparticulartime在這個(gè)特殊時(shí)期②strengthenimmune

system

增強(qiáng)免疫力

③stayawayfrom遠(yuǎn)離

5.告知信5-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，是2022年北京冬奧會(huì)的志愿者，元宵節(jié)在奧運(yùn)村度過(guò)。請(qǐng)你寫信告訴你的英國(guó)朋友Peter這個(gè)難忘的元宵節(jié)的情況，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你的經(jīng)歷；

2.你的感受；

3.你表達(dá)期待。注意寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右DearPeter，Howiseverythinggoing?

①I’dliketosharewithyoumymemorableLanternFestivalspentintheOlympicVillage.（我想告訴你我在奧運(yùn)村度過(guò)的難忘的元宵節(jié)情況）Withredlanternslookinggoodagainstthesnow,theVillagesawmyjoyfulLanternFestivalwithothervolunteers.②Additionally,therewerevariousactivities,includingdoingpaper-cuts,guessinglanternriddles,andmakinglanterns.Weenjoyeddelicioustangyuan,andIhadfunguessingriddles.ThememorableLanternFestivalnotonlygotmeimmersedinatraditionalfestivalatmospherebutdeepenedmyunderstandingofthenewmottooftheOlympics-Together.③Eagerlylookingforwardtoyourcomingtoskiwithme（熱切地期待著你來(lái)和我一起滑雪）.

Yours,LiHua好詞：①

memorableadj.難忘的②

getsb.immersedin使某人沉浸于.....

5.告知信5-2實(shí)踐演練（全國(guó)卷II改編）假定你是校排球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)李華，請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知你的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.比賽信息；

2.賽前準(zhǔn)備；

3.表達(dá)期待。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearChris,

（告知比賽信息）

I’mexcitedtoinformyouourteamistocompeteinanimportantvolleyballmatchnextweek.

（介紹比賽具體信息和賽前的訓(xùn)練安排）Asscheduled,theeventwillbeheldinourschoolgymat9am

nextSunday.Tomakefullpreparationsforit,Ihavemadeaspecifictrainingplan.

Alltheteammembersaresupposedtotakethe

非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)+高級(jí)詞匯，是增分點(diǎn)trainingpunctually.Additionally,weareexpectedtopracticealotinanefforttoimproveourskillsandcooperatebetterwitheachother.

(被動(dòng)句十高級(jí)詞匯，說(shuō)明訓(xùn)練目的)Idohopewecandoagoodjobthroughjointefforts.

（表達(dá)期待）Eagerlylookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours

LiHu好詞：1.asscheduled如期2.inanefforttodosth6.咨詢信6-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友

Terry一行人要來(lái)你市體驗(yàn)元宵節(jié)，他請(qǐng)你幫他們預(yù)定酒店。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2．詢問(wèn)到達(dá)時(shí)間；

3．詢問(wèn)具體要求（價(jià)位、房間數(shù)等）。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。DearTerry，Delightedtolearnyou’

recomingtohaveatasteoftheLanternFestivalinourcity,I’dliketoreserve

a

hotel

foryou

inadvance.ButIneedsomedetailsofyourtravel.①Firstly,I'dliketoknowwhattime

your

flightwillarriveattheairportsoIcanpickyouup.②Besides/Additionally,pricesofahotelroomrangefrom￥399to￥999,sowhichkindofroomsdoyouprefer?

③Finally,howmanyroomsdoyouexactlyneed?OnlyifIfigureoutallofthequestionscanImakereservationsforyou.④Anyearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.（如能盡早回復(fù)，我將非常感激）

Yours,LiHua

好詞：

①haveatasteof領(lǐng)略；體驗(yàn)

②rangefrom...to..．從......到．....．不等③figureout弄清．.....

④makereservationsfor為．....．預(yù)訂6.咨詢信6-2實(shí)踐演練（全國(guó)卷I）假定你是李華。計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請(qǐng)給該校寫封信，詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。DearSirorMadam.

（說(shuō)明身份和目的）I’mLiHua,planningtogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.

使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞讓閱卷老師眼前一亮I’mwonderingifyoucanoffermeinformationconcerningyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.

用concerning比about更高級(jí)

（詢問(wèn)情況）Firstly,

I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtellmewhenthecoursewillstartandhowmanyclasshoursthereareperweek.

Besides,whatabouttheclasssize?Additionally,I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.Finally,whatdeservesmyspecialattentioniswhethertherewillbeanyhostfamiliesoruniversitydormitories.

what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句更能引起關(guān)注

（表達(dá)感激）Anyearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.

被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)比主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)更吸睛

Yours,Lihua好詞：1.concerningprep.關(guān)于2.deservespecialattention值得特別關(guān)注7.回復(fù)信7-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)好友

Jim在你們學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上看到了學(xué)生參加學(xué)農(nóng)活動(dòng)的照片，很感興趣，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)，內(nèi)容包括：

1．學(xué)農(nóng)活動(dòng)的相關(guān)信息（時(shí)間、內(nèi)容．.....);2．你參加學(xué)農(nóng)活動(dòng)的感受。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。DearJim,①I’mdelightedyouarefascinatedaboutthe“Learningfromfarmers”activityorganizedbyourschoollastSaturday,I’dliketosharewithyousomedetails.（我很高興你對(duì)我們學(xué)校上周六組織的學(xué)農(nóng)活動(dòng)很感興趣，我想告訴你一些細(xì)節(jié)）.At9ammyclassmatesandItookabustoafarminnorthernBeijing②Itwasat9ammyclassmatesandItookabustoafarminnorthernBeijing（用強(qiáng)調(diào)句升級(jí)）,wherewehelpedthefarmerspickapplesthewholeday.I’mdelightedthatIcoulddomybittohelpthefarmersthroughmywork.③Additionally,Ilearnedforthefirsttimeofthedifficultygettingfruitsontothekitchentable.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyouagain.

Yours,LiHua好詞:1.doone’sbittodosth盡力做某事2.forthefirsttime首次；第一次7.回復(fù)信7-2實(shí)踐演練（全國(guó)卷I改編）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國(guó)朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

1.到達(dá)時(shí)間；2．合適的禮物；3．餐桌禮儀。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。DearTerry,

（說(shuō)明回信的目的）

It’sgreattolearnyouareinvitedtoaChinesefriend’shome.

AsforsomeChinesetablemanners,

利用固定句式，簡(jiǎn)潔地說(shuō)明Terry應(yīng)邀去中國(guó)朋友家做客I’dliketosharewithyousomerelevantdetails.

（介紹到達(dá)時(shí)間、合適的禮物和餐桌禮儀）

Firstly,arriveontimeoralittleearlierbecausebeingpunctualis

利用"because引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句十被動(dòng)句式"，說(shuō)明到達(dá)的時(shí)間，consideredpoliteinChina.Additionally,ifyou’dliketobringagif,abunchofflowersorsomefreshfruitwillbeagood

表達(dá)地道高級(jí)choice.

Mostimportantly,attable,it’stheelderlywhoareusuallythefirsttoeatsincetheyarewell

respectedinChina

利用"強(qiáng)調(diào)句式十狀語(yǔ)從句十被動(dòng)句式"，說(shuō)明餐桌禮儀，句式豐富多變，吸引閱卷老師Iftheyinsistyoueatfirst,justgoahead.

（希望對(duì)方做客愉快）Justrelaxandenjoyyourvisit.

Yours,

LiHua好句：1.relevantadj.相關(guān)的2.punctaladj.準(zhǔn)時(shí)的3.abunchof一束8.推薦信

8-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友

Peter寫信告訴你他對(duì)中國(guó)古詩(shī)很感興趣，請(qǐng)你給他推薦一本學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)古詩(shī)的書。請(qǐng)你回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.推薦的書及原因；

2．如何購(gòu)買。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右DearPeter,

①KnowingyourkeeninterestinclassicalChinesepoetry,I’dliketorecommendLearnChinesethroughTangPoetrytoyou

(得知你對(duì)中國(guó)經(jīng)典詩(shī)歌很感興趣趣,我向你推薦《用唐詩(shī)學(xué)漢語(yǔ)》).It’sacollectionoffamousChinesepoetrywrittenduringtheTang

Dynasty

,②thegoldenagetoChinesepoetry(中國(guó)詩(shī)歌的黃金時(shí)代,名詞短語(yǔ)作同位語(yǔ)).

Intendedfor

beginners,thebookmainlyfocusesonpoemsthatareeasytounderstand.③Additionally,thebookoffersEnglishtranslationsofallthepoems,whichwillbeofbenefittoyou.Thebookisavailableonline.

④Hopemyrecommendationcanbehelpful.(希望我的建議能有所幫助).⑤Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,doletmeknow.(如果你還有其他問(wèn)題,請(qǐng)告訴我).

Yours

,

LiHua好詞：①beintendedforsb

為某人準(zhǔn)備的

②focuson關(guān)注；集中于.......8.推薦信

8-2實(shí)踐演練（北京高考改編）假定你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣，計(jì)劃明年來(lái)北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示歡迎；2．推薦他上哪所大學(xué)；3．建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。DearJim,

（說(shuō)明寫信目的及要推薦的學(xué)校）DelightedatyourfutureeducationplaninBeijing,I’mwritingtoconveymywarmestwelcome.KnowingyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IrecommendyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.

利用"虛擬語(yǔ)氣和同位語(yǔ)",使推薦更加合情合理

（說(shuō)明推薦的理由）ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChinese

高級(jí)詞匯十定語(yǔ)從句，說(shuō)明推薦理由，生動(dòng)簡(jiǎn)潔profoundhistoryandrichculture.

Additionally,

it’sagoodideatotakesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesesothatyou

固定句式十狀語(yǔ)從句，說(shuō)明需要做的準(zhǔn)備，委婉得體canadapttotheChineselanguageenvironment.

（表示期待）Hopemyrecommendationcanbehelpful.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,doletmeknow.

Yours,

LiHua好詞：1.besoakedin沉浸在........2.profoundadj.深厚的DearTim,

①I’mwritingtoapologizeformybadmanners（因我的沒(méi)禮貌我寫信道歉）whenreceivingyourgiftatmybirthdayparty.ThoughInevermeanttohurtyou,youmighthavefeltuneasy.

Thefactis②thatIforgotthedifferencesbetweenChineseandAmericancultures（我忘記了中美文化的差異，表語(yǔ)從句）whengivingandreceivinggifts.AChineseusuallydoesnotopenagiftinthepresenceofthegiver,whileanAmericantendstoopenitimmediatelywhengettingit.③Actually,

Ilikeyourgiftverymuch.

④Pleaseforgivemythoughtlessnessandacceptmyapology（請(qǐng)?jiān)徫业拇中牟⒔邮芪业牡狼福?IwilllearnmoreaboutAmericancultureandpreventsuchthingshappeningagain.Yours,LiHua9.道歉信9-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tim在你的生日晚會(huì)上送給你一件禮物，當(dāng)時(shí)你只說(shuō)了謝謝，但沒(méi)有打開。現(xiàn)在你意識(shí)到自己的做法會(huì)讓美國(guó)人覺(jué)得不禮貌。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封道歉信。內(nèi)容包括：1．表達(dá)歉意；2．做出解釋；3．做出承諾（多學(xué)習(xí)等）。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞①in

thepresence ofsb.在某人面前②immediately

adv.立即；直接地 conj.一……就DearBob,

（表達(dá)歉意）I＇mwritingtoapologizetoyouforbeingunabletoaccompanyyoutothebookstoretomorrowasplanned.

（解釋失約原因）ThereasonisthatIwillattendafamilyget-together

tomorrowwhenmycousinPeterwillreturnhomefromBeijing.（利用表語(yǔ)從句，說(shuō)明失約的原因）Actually,PeterandIgrewuptogetherwhenwewerekidsandlaterhewenttostudyinBeijing.Therefore,it'sexcitingformetoseehimagainafterhalfayear.

（請(qǐng)求對(duì)方接受道歉并另約時(shí)間）Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology. WouldyoumindifIsuggestedwegotothebookstorenextweekend?

（利用疑問(wèn)句和虛擬語(yǔ)氣委婉地另約時(shí)間）Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua9.道歉信9-2實(shí)踐演練全國(guó)卷II假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約，請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示歉意；2．說(shuō)明原因；3．另約時(shí)間。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞①accompany陪伴②asplanned

按計(jì)劃DearJim,

IamLiHua.①I’dliketoconveymysinceregratitudetoyouforyourpickingupmycellphoneandreturningittome.（我想誠(chéng)摯地感謝你拾到我的手機(jī)并歸還給我）.

Actually,wheneverIlookatmycellphone,Iwillthinkofyou,akindandhonestyoungAmerican.IbecamenearlymadthemomentIfoundmynewcellphonemissing,sinceIboughtitwithmyownhard-earnedmoneyafterworkingparttimeformonthsatweekends.②Allinall,③wordsfailtoconveymygratitude（我無(wú)法用語(yǔ)言表達(dá)我的感激）.Hopefully,youwillcomesomedayandthen④IwillshowyouaroundBeijingtorepayyourkindness（為回報(bào)你的好意，我會(huì)帶你游玩北京）.Yours,LiHua10.感謝信10-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你不慎丟失的手機(jī)被來(lái)中國(guó)旅游的美國(guó)青年Jim撿到并歸還，現(xiàn)Jim已經(jīng)回國(guó)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，寫封郵件表示感謝。1．寫信目的；2．感謝的理由；3．你的愿望。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞themoment一……就DearAlex,

（表達(dá)感謝）It＇sreallyhardtosaygoodbyetoyou！Butmeanwhile,I'meagerlywritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourhelp.

（回顧Alex的幫助）Istillrememberwhatyouhavedevotedto

improvingmyoralEnglishandwrittenEnglish.

高級(jí)句式＋賓語(yǔ)從句，說(shuō)明自己誠(chéng)摯的謝意Additionally,youalsofranklysharedyourlearningexperiencewithme.Mostimportantly,withoutyouradviceandassistance,Iwouldnothavemadesuch

unbelievableprogressinEnglishandwouldnothaveevenrankedfirstintherecentEnglishspeechcontest.（利用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，說(shuō)明對(duì)方的建議對(duì)自己的幫助）Allinall,wordsfailtoconveyhowgratefulIam.

（再次致謝并臨別祝愿）Thanksagainandwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.Yours,LiHua10.感謝信10-2實(shí)踐演練（浙江高考）假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示感謝；2．回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；3．臨別祝愿。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞①bedevotedtodoingsth致力于做某事②frankly

坦率地DearMr.Henry,

I'mLiHua,oneofyourcustomers.①I’mwritingtocomplainaboutthedisappointingserviceofyouronlinestore.（我寫信投訴貴網(wǎng)店令人不滿的服務(wù)）.

Iorderedfivepacksofadultmasksfromyouronlinestorethreeweeksago,butIdidn'treceivethemuntilyesterday.Besides,whenopeningthepackage,Ifounditwasthetypeforchildren.②Worsestill,

Ihavetriedtocontactyourcustomerservice,buttherehasbeennoreply.Pleasereturnmymoneyorexchangethetypeforadultforme.

③Ihopeyoucansolvetheproblemassoonaspossible.（我希望您能盡快處理此事）.Yours,LiHua11.投訴信11-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)，某天你在網(wǎng)站訂購(gòu)了五包成人口罩。但收到口罩后發(fā)現(xiàn)了幾個(gè)問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給網(wǎng)店老板Mr.Henry寫一封投訴信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1．陳述投訴原因：收到的是兒童口罩；客服不回應(yīng)；2．提出解決辦法。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞exchange更換；customerservice客服DearSirorMadam,

（自我介紹，提出投訴）I＇mLiHua，oneofyourcustomers，writingtomakeacomplaintaboutthepoorserviceofyourwaiters.利用現(xiàn)在分詞呈現(xiàn)不一樣的開頭

（說(shuō)明投訴的問(wèn)題，提出要求）ItwasyesterdaythatIwenttoyourrestauranttohavelunchbutIhadanawfulexperience.IwashavingbeefnoodleswhensuddenlyIfoundtwofliesinthem,whichmademedisgusted.

（固定句式bedoingsth.when...＋which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，說(shuō)明投訴的事由之一）

What'sworse,Iaskedthewaitertochange

foranotherdish,onlytobecompletelyignoredbyhim.

利用onlytodo作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)，說(shuō)明服務(wù)員惡劣的服務(wù)態(tài)度，投訴的事由之二

Therefore,I'dlikeyoutoinvestigatethematterseriouslyandmakeaformalapologytome.

（表示期望）I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivedueattentiontothematter.Yours,LiHua11.投訴信11-2實(shí)踐演練假定你是李華，你在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)，昨天你有一次不愉快的就餐經(jīng)歷，你對(duì)餐廳服務(wù)員的態(tài)度非常不滿意，于是請(qǐng)你給該餐廳老板寫信投訴。內(nèi)容包括：1．問(wèn)題：牛肉面（beefnoodles）里有蒼蠅（fly），服務(wù)員態(tài)度惡劣；2．要求：餐廳賠禮道歉；3．希望能改進(jìn)服務(wù)。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞makeaformalapologytosb.正式向某人道歉TheMostInfluentialBooktoMe

AmongthebooksI'veread,theLittlePrinceinfluencesmemost①itistheLittlePrincethatinfluencesmemost（用強(qiáng)調(diào)句升級(jí)加黑體部分）.

It'saboutapilotwhocrasheshisplaneandisstuckinthedesertuntilhemeetsthelittleprincefromanotherplanet.Thelittleprincetellsthepilotstoriesofhismagicaljourneyfromhislittleplanetandofhisencounterswithdifferentgrown-ups.

Simpleasthestoryis,itinspiresmeinmanyways.②Besides,

I'venotonlyrealizedtheimportanceofcompanybutalsolearnedtoopenmyheartandlovethepeoplearoundme.③notonlyhaveIrealizedtheimportanceofcompanybutalsolearnedtoopenmyheartandlovethepeoplearoundme.

（用倒裝句升級(jí)加黑體部分）.12.參賽短文&教育12-1仿寫再借鑒你校正在組織英語(yǔ)作文比賽。請(qǐng)你以“對(duì)我影響最大的一本書”為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1．書籍簡(jiǎn)介；2．對(duì)你的影響。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。好詞①in

thepresence ofsb.在某人面前②immediately

adv.立即；直接地 conj.一……就YouthandMe

（簡(jiǎn)要介紹讀報(bào)經(jīng)歷）Ithasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded．Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.用強(qiáng)調(diào)句強(qiáng)調(diào)報(bào)紙對(duì)自己的重要性，開篇就表達(dá)不俗

（談?wù)撟约合矏?ài)的欄目）Whenfeelingdepressed，Ioftenchoosetoenjoy

thenovelpartwhichincludesnumbersofimaginativestories.狀語(yǔ)從句省略句十定語(yǔ)從句，說(shuō)明自己喜愛(ài)的欄目之一Notonlycan

thesestoriesrelievemystress,buttheycanalsobroadenmyhorizons.用notonly倒裝句說(shuō)明欄目對(duì)自己的益處，滿分吸睛句Besides,thecolumnthatbenefitsmyEnglishstudyalotistheonethatcarriesarticlesaboutforeignculturesandthemostefficientwaysoflearningEnglish.

（期望和祝福）It’smysincerehopethatYouthwillbemorepopularamong用主語(yǔ)從句表達(dá)期望和祝福，滿分結(jié)尾句12.參賽短文&教育12-2實(shí)踐演練（2021·新高考I卷）你校英文報(bào)Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷；2．喜愛(ài)的欄目；3．期望和祝福。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．短文題目已給出。好詞①relievestress減壓②broadenone’s

horizons拓寬視野13.倡議書13-1仿寫再借鑒假設(shè)你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)你圍繞"低碳生活，保護(hù)環(huán)境"的主題，根據(jù)下面所給提示，用英語(yǔ)給你校學(xué)生寫一封倡議書。內(nèi)容包括：1．保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性；2．如何低碳生活；

3．發(fā)出倡議。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。Dearfellowstudents,Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,theenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.①It’shightimethatwetook/shouldtakeimmediateaction（是我們立即采取行動(dòng)的時(shí)候了）orwewouldhavenowheretolive.②Withoutdoubt,westudentscanprotectourenvironmentbylivingalow-carbonlife.Firstly,doturnofflightsandotherswitcheswhennotusingthemtosaveelectricity.③Moreover,ifwegoout,weshouldwalk,rideortakepublictransportinsteadofdriving.Finally,reusingpaperandbottlesinourdailylifeisalsohighlyrecommended.④Let’sstartwithsmallthingsnowtomakeourenvironmentbetterandbetter.（讓我們現(xiàn)在從小事做起，使我們的環(huán)境越來(lái)越好).好詞:①withthedevelopmentof隨著....．的發(fā)展②insteadof代替13.倡議書13-2實(shí)踐演練假定你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華，你校正在開展"創(chuàng)建美麗校園"的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給全校學(xué)生寫一封倡議書。

內(nèi)容包括：

1．創(chuàng)建美麗校園的重要性；2．校園內(nèi)存在的不文明現(xiàn)象；3．你的態(tài)度。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。

Dearfellowstudents，

（說(shuō)明倡議的背景）

I’mwritingtocalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinbuildingabeautifulcampus.

Anattractivecampuscanmakeourlearningpleasantandthusimproveourgrades.

（說(shuō)明倡議的內(nèi)容）

However,somestudentscanbeseenrunningonthelawn,pickingflowersorthrowing

利用被動(dòng)句說(shuō)明不文明現(xiàn)象，利用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句rubbisheverywhere,whichharmsourschoolenvironment.

Withoutdoubt,it’shightimethatimmediate

其對(duì)校園的危害measuresshouldbetakentochangethepresentsituation.

Inmyview,

everyoneisresponsibleforthebeautyofourcampus.Moreover,

ifweallavoiddoinganythingimproper,ourcampuswillbecomemuch