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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onceuponatime,therewasaveryoldmanandaveryoldwoman.Theylivedinanicecleanhouse.Buttheycouldn’tbehappybecausetheyweresoverylonely.“Ifonlywehadacat!”sighedtheveryoldwoman.“Acat?”askedtheveryoldman.“Yes,asweetlittlefluffycat,”saidtheveryoldwoman.“Iwillgetyouacat,mydear,”saidtheveryoldman.Andhesetoutoverthehillstolookforone.Heclimbedoverthesunnyhills.Hetrudgedthroughthecoolvalleys.Hewalkedalong,longtimeandatlasthecametoahillwhichwasquitecoveredwithcats.Catshere,catsthere,Catsandkittens,everywhere.Hundredsofcats,thousandsofcats,millionsandbillionsandtrillionsofcats.“Itwouldbeashametoleavethatone,”saidtheveryoldman.Sohetookit.Andnow,overthere,hesawacat,whichhadbrownandyellowstripeslikeababytiger.“Isimplymusttakeit!”criedtheveryoldman,andhedid.Hechosethemall.Andsohewentbacktoshowallhisprettykittenstotheveryoldwoman.Itwasveryfunnytoseethosehundredsandthousandsandmillionsandbillionsandtrillionsofcatsfollowinghim.注意:1.
續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.
請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Prettysoontheveryoldwomansawthemcoming.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theveryoldwomanthoughtforawhileandthenshesaid,“Iknow!Wewillletthecatsdecidewhichoneweshouldkeep.”__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:一對(duì)老夫婦因孤獨(dú)渴望有一只貓,老人外出尋找,結(jié)果在一座山上發(fā)現(xiàn)了無(wú)數(shù)只貓,他不忍舍棄,便把看到的貓都帶了回去,眾多貓咪跟在他身后踏上返程之路。伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng):伏筆:老人發(fā)現(xiàn)漫山遍野都是貓且難以抉擇。
回應(yīng):帶了所有貓回去,引發(fā)后續(xù)如何挑選一只留下的難題。伏筆:老人為滿足老婦人愿望去尋貓。
回應(yīng):老婦人提出讓貓自己決定去留的辦法,以解決貓?zhí)嗟睦_。伏筆:老人帶回眾多貓。
回應(yīng):眾多貓的出現(xiàn)讓老夫婦面臨新的困境,也促使他們尋找解決辦法,推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展。伏筆:老夫婦因孤獨(dú)想要貓陪伴。
回應(yīng):通過(guò)貓的抉擇過(guò)程,他們最終得到一只合適的貓,結(jié)束孤獨(dú)。伏筆:老人不忍舍棄看到的貓。
回應(yīng):眾多貓的到來(lái)雖造成困擾,但也因貓的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)最終留下最特別的貓。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn):第一段:描述老婦人看到無(wú)數(shù)貓時(shí)的驚訝反應(yīng),如瞪大了眼睛、捂住了嘴等,以及老人解釋帶這么多貓回來(lái)的原因是不忍舍棄。第二段:講述老婦人想出讓貓競(jìng)爭(zhēng)決定去留的辦法,如比賽捉老鼠、展示才藝等,最終一只聰明伶俐且與老夫婦最親近的貓脫穎而出,老夫婦開(kāi)心地留下它,從此不再孤獨(dú)。情感線:老夫婦開(kāi)始是孤獨(dú)寂寞,老人尋貓時(shí)滿懷期待,帶貓回來(lái)后有欣喜也有面對(duì)眾多貓的無(wú)奈,最終解決問(wèn)題后是滿足與幸福。貓們?cè)诟?jìng)爭(zhēng)過(guò)程中有緊張與活躍,被選中的貓則給老夫婦帶來(lái)溫馨與陪伴。故事線:老婦人看到眾多貓?bào)@訝不已,老人解釋后,老婦人提議讓貓競(jìng)爭(zhēng)決定留下哪只,經(jīng)過(guò)一番比試,一只優(yōu)秀的貓被選中,老夫婦的生活因它而不再孤獨(dú)。主旨升華句:“Truecompanionship,whetherhumanorfeline,isapreciousgiftthateasestheacheofloneliness.”(真正的陪伴,無(wú)論是來(lái)自人類還是貓咪,都是緩解孤獨(dú)之痛的珍貴禮物。)“Inthechaosofabundance,asinglechoicecanbringharmonyandfillthevoidofsolitude.”(在豐富的混亂中,一個(gè)選擇可以帶來(lái)和諧并填補(bǔ)孤獨(dú)的空虛。)“Eveninaseaofoptions,destinyhasawayofleadingustotheperfectmatchthatwarmsourhearts.”(即使在眾多選擇中,命運(yùn)總有辦法引領(lǐng)我們找到溫暖心靈的完美匹配。)“Thejourneytofindatruefriend,beitapersonorapet,isoftenfilledwithsurprisesbutendswithapreciousbond.”(尋找真正朋友的旅程,無(wú)論是人還是寵物,往往充滿驚喜,但最終會(huì)形成珍貴的紐帶。)“Whenlonelinessbeckons,thesolutionmaycomeinthemostunexpectedforms,likeacatchosenfromamultitude.”(當(dāng)孤獨(dú)召喚時(shí),解決方案可能以最意想不到的形式出現(xiàn),比如從眾多貓中選出的一只。)寫(xiě)作示范一:Prettysoontheveryoldwomansawthemcoming.Shestaredinastonishment,hereyeswideningandherhandcoveringhermouth.“Goodheavens!Whathaveyoudone?”sheexclaimed.Theveryoldmanexplained,“Icouldn'tbeartoleaveanyofthembehind.Theywereallsolovely.”Theoldwomanshookherheadindisbeliefbutcouldn'thelpsmilingatthesightofsomanycutecats.Theveryoldwomanthoughtforawhileandthenshesaid,“Iknow!Wewillletthecatsdecidewhichoneweshouldkeep.”Sotheysetupaseriesoftests.First,theyletthecatschaseatoymouse.Onesmallgraycatwasespeciallyquickandcaughtitinnotime.Thentheyaskedthecatstoshowtheiraffection.Afluffywhitecatcuddleduptotheoldcoupleimmediately.Afterseveralrounds,alittletabbycatprovedtobethemostintelligentandaffectionate.Theoldcouplehappilydecidedtokeepthisspecialcat.Fromthatdayon,thecatbroughtmuchjoyandendedtheirloneliness.寫(xiě)作示范二:Prettysoontheveryoldwomansawthemcoming.Shewascompletelytakenaback,herjawdroppingatthesightofthecountlesscats.“Howonearthdidyoumanagetobringsomany?”sheasked.Theveryoldmantoldheraboutthehillfilledwithcatsandhisinabilitytochoose.Theoldwomansighedbutwasalsotouchedbyhiskindness.Theveryoldwomanthoughtforawhileandthenshesaid,“Iknow!Wewillletthecatsdecidewhichoneweshouldkeep.”Theydecidedtohaveacontest.Thecatshadtojumpoversmallhurdles.Asleekblackcatleapedwithgreatagility.Thentheyhadabeautycontest.Agingercatwithbrighteyescaughttheirattention.Butintheend,acalicocatshowednotonlyphysicalskillsbutalsoaspecialconnectionwiththeoldcouple.Itrubbedagainsttheirlegsandpurred.Theoldcoupleknewthiswastheone.Theirhousewasfilledwithlaughterandloveasthecatbecametheirbelovedcompanion.參考答案Prettysoontheveryoldwomansawthemcoming.Catshere,catsthere,catsandkittenseverywhere.Millionsandbillionsandtrillionsofcats.“Mydear!”shecried,“Iaskedforonelittlecat.Andwecanneverfeedthemall.Theywilleatusoutofhouseandhome.”“Ineverthoughtofthat,”saidtheveryoldman,“Whatshallwedo?”Theveryoldwomanthoughtforawhileandthenshesaid,“Iknow!Wewillle
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