專題13 讀后續(xù)寫-五年(2020-2024)高考英語真題分類匯編(新高考專用)(原卷版)

2020-2024年五年高考真題分類匯編PAGEPAGE1專題13讀后續(xù)寫五年(2020-2024)高考英語真題分類匯編(新高考專用)考點(diǎn)五年考情(2020-2024)考點(diǎn)1人與自我2024浙江1月卷—腦圖定位找目標(biāo)；2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷--寫作比賽逆襲獲獎(jiǎng)；2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷—?dú)埣材泻⒓釉揭芭??？键c(diǎn)2人與社會(huì)2024新課標(biāo)I&II卷—誠信回報(bào)陌生司機(jī)相助；2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷—母親節(jié)驚喜早餐；2020新課標(biāo)卷—愛心爆米花?？键c(diǎn)3人與自然2023浙江1月卷—蜂鳥奇遇記一、命題趨向讀后續(xù)寫多是故事性很強(qiáng)的記敘文，文章的難度不大，但是取材非常廣泛，它不僅涉及學(xué)生的日常生活，還會(huì)涉及廣泛的其它領(lǐng)域。出題人的設(shè)題大同小異，通過完整故事的敘述，考查學(xué)生用英語敘事和描寫的能力，尤其是對動(dòng)作、情感和環(huán)境的細(xì)節(jié)描寫。每篇文章都遵循一定的時(shí)空線、情節(jié)線和情感線，因此我們的續(xù)寫內(nèi)容必須沿著原文已給的“三線”進(jìn)行合情合理地想象，并通過對人物動(dòng)作、外在表情、內(nèi)在心理和環(huán)境等細(xì)節(jié)描寫使之“有血有肉、生動(dòng)形象?！倍⒓记牲c(diǎn)撥1.厘清已知信息精讀文章，關(guān)注細(xì)節(jié)和脈絡(luò)。閱讀是讀后續(xù)寫的起點(diǎn)，起點(diǎn)的高低直接影響著續(xù)寫能達(dá)到的高度，因此考生要通過閱讀梳理文中主要人物之間的關(guān)系、主要人物的性格特點(diǎn)、故事發(fā)展線索，以便把握故事的走向，構(gòu)建情節(jié)。厘清主要信息不僅可以幫助考生理解故事情節(jié)，推斷故事發(fā)展方向，同時(shí)對續(xù)寫時(shí)的人物描寫有指導(dǎo)作用。2.研判續(xù)寫方向(1)定文章基調(diào)在讀完文章后，考生要根據(jù)各段落的主旨，明確文章的整體構(gòu)架和中心思想。此外，考生需要通過文中的細(xì)節(jié)描述來確定續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的基調(diào)，如分析描寫人物的形容詞和人物發(fā)出的動(dòng)作、文中的對話、所給的兩個(gè)續(xù)寫段首句來確定續(xù)寫的基調(diào)，尋找續(xù)寫的切入口，從而展開合理的情節(jié)想象。(2)定文章走向所給續(xù)寫段落開頭語對故事發(fā)展有提示、銜接、引導(dǎo)和限制作用。續(xù)寫時(shí)，考生要站在作者的角度，繼承原文寫作思路，需要注意續(xù)寫內(nèi)容應(yīng)積極向上，設(shè)計(jì)的結(jié)局應(yīng)是正向的，如意外事件類的續(xù)寫結(jié)局應(yīng)是事情得以解決。此外，續(xù)寫第二段的開頭往往暗示著第一段的故事走向。(3)定續(xù)寫框架在讀后續(xù)寫中，細(xì)讀是起點(diǎn)，寫作則是重點(diǎn)，而建構(gòu)是難點(diǎn)?？忌蓪⑹崂沓龅男畔⒑屯卣沟募?xì)節(jié)結(jié)合形成故事發(fā)展的要點(diǎn)，從而構(gòu)建簡單的續(xù)寫故事框架。另外，在寫作時(shí)，考生應(yīng)注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性、詞匯的豐富性，利用儲(chǔ)備的語言知識(shí)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容慎重選擇詞匯、詞塊和句式，且有意識(shí)地使用高級(jí)句式，使表達(dá)富有感染力。此外，考生還應(yīng)該注意續(xù)寫內(nèi)容與所給段落首句的銜接程度?？键c(diǎn)一：人與自我1.2024浙江1月卷—腦圖定位找目標(biāo)Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthemajorheadachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.Itwasasix-storybuilding.Oneachfloor,hallwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachers’offices.Somewhereinthebuilding,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.Allthedifferenthallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.Shedecidedthatshewouldmemorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn’texist.InherfirstPEclass,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunonemilearoundthetrackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewasnothingshefearedmorethanhavingtorunawholemile.ToEva,“amile”wasusedtodescribelongdistances.Itwastenmilesfromherhometohergrandfather’s,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,eveninacar!WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(哨子),Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,whilesomeofherclassmatesedgedahead,othersactuallyfellbehind.”It’sjustthebeginning,“shethought.“I’llcomeinlastforsure.”SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Evastartedusingamindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword”mile.“Instead,shefocusedonreachingtheshadowcastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrackcurved(拐彎).Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷--寫作比賽逆襲獲獎(jiǎng)；WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷—?dú)埣材泻⒓釉揭芭躀twasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考點(diǎn)二：人與社會(huì)1.2024新課標(biāo)I&II卷—誠信回報(bào)陌生司機(jī)相助ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊(duì)列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."注意：(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；(2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷—母親節(jié)驚喜早餐AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.2020新課標(biāo)卷—愛心爆米花。TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy-hisnamewasBernard-hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考點(diǎn)三：人與自然2023浙江1月卷—蜂鳥奇遇記Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________專題13讀后續(xù)寫五年(2020-2024)高考英語真題分類匯編(新高考專用)考點(diǎn)五年考情(2020-2024)考點(diǎn)1人與自我2024浙江1月卷—腦圖定位找目標(biāo)；2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷--寫作比賽逆襲獲獎(jiǎng)；2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷—?dú)埣材泻⒓釉揭芭??？键c(diǎn)2人與社會(huì)2024新課標(biāo)I&II卷—誠信回報(bào)陌生司機(jī)相助；2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷—母親節(jié)驚喜早餐；2020新課標(biāo)卷—愛心爆米花。考點(diǎn)3人與自然2023浙江1月卷—蜂鳥奇遇記一、命題趨向讀后續(xù)寫多是故事性很強(qiáng)的記敘文，文章的難度不大，但是取材非常廣泛，它不僅涉及學(xué)生的日常生活，還會(huì)涉及廣泛的其它領(lǐng)域。出題人的設(shè)題大同小異，通過完整故事的敘述，考查學(xué)生用英語敘事和描寫的能力，尤其是對動(dòng)作、情感和環(huán)境的細(xì)節(jié)描寫。每篇文章都遵循一定的時(shí)空線、情節(jié)線和情感線，因此我們的續(xù)寫內(nèi)容必須沿著原文已給的“三線”進(jìn)行合情合理地想象，并通過對人物動(dòng)作、外在表情、內(nèi)在心理和環(huán)境等細(xì)節(jié)描寫使之“有血有肉、生動(dòng)形象?！倍?、技巧點(diǎn)撥1.厘清已知信息精讀文章，關(guān)注細(xì)節(jié)和脈絡(luò)。閱讀是讀后續(xù)寫的起點(diǎn)，起點(diǎn)的高低直接影響著續(xù)寫能達(dá)到的高度，因此考生要通過閱讀梳理文中主要人物之間的關(guān)系、主要人物的性格特點(diǎn)、故事發(fā)展線索，以便把握故事的走向，構(gòu)建情節(jié)。厘清主要信息不僅可以幫助考生理解故事情節(jié)，推斷故事發(fā)展方向，同時(shí)對續(xù)寫時(shí)的人物描寫有指導(dǎo)作用。2.研判續(xù)寫方向(1)定文章基調(diào)在讀完文章后，考生要根據(jù)各段落的主旨，明確文章的整體構(gòu)架和中心思想。此外，考生需要通過文中的細(xì)節(jié)描述來確定續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的基調(diào)，如分析描寫人物的形容詞和人物發(fā)出的動(dòng)作、文中的對話、所給的兩個(gè)續(xù)寫段首句來確定續(xù)寫的基調(diào)，尋找續(xù)寫的切入口，從而展開合理的情節(jié)想象。(2)定文章走向所給續(xù)寫段落開頭語對故事發(fā)展有提示、銜接、引導(dǎo)和限制作用。續(xù)寫時(shí)，考生要站在作者的角度，繼承原文寫作思路，需要注意續(xù)寫內(nèi)容應(yīng)積極向上，設(shè)計(jì)的結(jié)局應(yīng)是正向的，如意外事件類的續(xù)寫結(jié)局應(yīng)是事情得以解決。此外，續(xù)寫第二段的開頭往往暗示著第一段的故事走向。(3)定續(xù)寫框架在讀后續(xù)寫中，細(xì)讀是起點(diǎn)，寫作則是重點(diǎn)，而建構(gòu)是難點(diǎn)?？忌蓪⑹崂沓龅男畔⒑屯卣沟募?xì)節(jié)結(jié)合形成故事發(fā)展的要點(diǎn)，從而構(gòu)建簡單的續(xù)寫故事框架。另外，在寫作時(shí)，考生應(yīng)注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性、詞匯的豐富性，利用儲(chǔ)備的語言知識(shí)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容慎重選擇詞匯、詞塊和句式，且有意識(shí)地使用高級(jí)句式，使表達(dá)富有感染力。此外，考生還應(yīng)該注意續(xù)寫內(nèi)容與所給段落首句的銜接程度?？键c(diǎn)一：人與自我1.2024浙江1月卷—腦圖定位找目標(biāo)Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthemajorheadachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.Itwasasix-storybuilding.Oneachfloor,hallwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachers’offices.Somewhereinthebuilding,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.Allthedifferenthallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.Shedecidedthatshewouldmemorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn’texist.InherfirstPEclass,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunonemilearoundthetrackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewasnothingshefearedmorethanhavingtorunawholemile.ToEva,“amile”wasusedtodescribelongdistances.Itwastenmilesfromherhometohergrandfather’s,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,eveninacar!WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(哨子),Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,whilesomeofherclassmatesedgedahead,othersactuallyfellbehind.”It’sjustthebeginning,“shethought.“I’llcomeinlastforsure.”SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Evastartedusingamindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword”mile.“Instead,shefocusedonreachingtheshadowcastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrackcurved(拐彎).Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷--寫作比賽逆襲獲獎(jiǎng)；WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷—?dú)埣材泻⒓釉揭芭躀twasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreven