熱點(diǎn) 06 手機(jī) 2020-2021學(xué)年中考英語(yǔ)最具熱度話(huà)題作文（教師版）

熱點(diǎn)06手機(jī)手機(jī)無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)話(huà)題是：手機(jī)。【預(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）日常生活中隨處可見(jiàn)人們用手機(jī)，許多初中生、高中生都在使用手機(jī)，手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)主要是方便通信，甚至上網(wǎng)，還體現(xiàn)在突發(fā)事件疾病、交通事故的求助上；手機(jī)的缺點(diǎn)主要是影響學(xué)習(xí)和干擾他人，因此建議盡量少用，特別是在學(xué)校里。AdvantagesandDisadvantagesofmobilePhones手機(jī)的利弊手機(jī)使用的普遍性；手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；3．手機(jī)的危害及我的建議。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AdvantagesandDisadvantagesofmobilePhonesWhereveryouare,youcanseemanypeopleequippedwithmobilephones.Itseemsthattheworldbecomessmallernowadays.Youcouldbefoundwhereveryouaresolongasyoutakethemobilephonewithyou.Somepeopleconsiderthemobilephonenecessaryandusefultothem,whileothersmaydislikeit.Peoplewholikethemobilephonearemuchmoreconcernedaboutitsadvantages.Itisconvenient,foryoucanconnectotherseasilyandquickly.Youdon’thavetowaitforanimportantcallathomealldaylong.Theyouthoftodaysendmessages,surfonthenet,listentomusicandeventakephotosbyusingthemobilephone.Peoplefinditadvancedforitsattractivefunctions.Insomecountries,itevenstandsforaperson’sstatus.However,somepeopledon’tlikeit.Imaginethatyougotospendyourholidaywithyourfamilyafterdaysofbusyandtiresomework.Whenyoulayonthebeachcomfortably,yourphonerings.Thenyouhavetogobacktoyourofficeonlytofindanunimportantcustomerwaitingforyou.Atthatmoment,youmayevenwanttothrowyourphoneaway,foryoujustwanttorelaxandgetridofyourwork.【解析】試題分析：題中給出了寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)信息，在作文中要盡力體現(xiàn)出這些要點(diǎn)。注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)和邏輯性。文中可使用一些承接性的句子和短語(yǔ)來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的流暢性。行文時(shí)要注意人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，文章思路清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，使用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，這為文章增色不少。（二）隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，人們的生活似乎離不開(kāi)手機(jī)，但是手機(jī)占據(jù)人們的生活帶來(lái)一個(gè)重要的問(wèn)題，人與人之間交流少了，親情、友情應(yīng)該如何維系？請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh。要點(diǎn)所示：1.在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中，手機(jī)的發(fā)明改變著社會(huì)，手機(jī)起著重要的作用。2.手機(jī)讓人們的聯(lián)系更加容易，讓地球變小了。3.但過(guò)去人們常常交談，而現(xiàn)在卻是交流少了，玩手機(jī)的多了。4.有些學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲，浪費(fèi)許多時(shí)間，嚴(yán)重影響學(xué)習(xí)。5.你的建議。（至少兩條）可用詞匯：手機(jī)：cellphone智能手機(jī)：smartphone要求：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Withthedevelopmentofsociety,people’slifeseemsnottobeseparatedfromthephones.Inmodernsociety,theinventionofthemobilephonechangesthesociety.Themobilephoneplaysanimportantrole.Mobilephonesmaketheworldsmaller.Mobilephonesmakeiteasierforpeopletocommunicatewiththem.Peopleusedtotalkinthepast,butnowpeoplelesscommunicateandpeopleplaymobilephonemore.Somestudentsusesmartphonestoplaygames.Itiswastealotoftime.Itseriouslyinfluenceslearning.Studentshadbetternotbringsmartphonestoschool.Peopleshouldwalkoutandtalkwithfriendsandtalk.Youwillfindlifemoremeaningful.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。主要以“使用手機(jī)的利弊”為主題展開(kāi)描寫(xiě)。本文要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容要求題目中已經(jīng)給出。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)把內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。

2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)展開(kāi)詳細(xì)介紹。文章可分三段描寫(xiě)。第一段總體指出人們的生活似乎離不開(kāi)手機(jī)；第二段分別介紹手機(jī)的利弊；第三段給出自己的建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意文章描寫(xiě)要具體，思路清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，用詞恰當(dāng)，意思通俗易懂。（一）隨著手機(jī)功能日益增多，越來(lái)越多的年輕人沉迷于手機(jī)娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)，成為＂手機(jī)控＂一族。假定你是某校學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，向某英文報(bào)社投稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法和建議。＂手機(jī)控＂的表現(xiàn)沉迷于手機(jī)娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)(聊天、看電影等)，與朋友和家人的交流減少，離開(kāi)手機(jī)會(huì)有焦慮癥等異常情緒表現(xiàn)……＂手機(jī)控＂的危害對(duì)健康不利，影響學(xué)習(xí)……你的建議……參考詞匯：手機(jī)控aphonefreak；焦慮anxious(adj.)；沉迷于beaddictedto注意：1.內(nèi)容須包括所提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；3.80詞左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today，manypeople，especiallyyoungpeople，arephonefreaks.Theyareaddictedtoplayingmobilephones.Theyoftenusephonestochatwithothers,watchmovies,playgames,listentomusicortakephotosandsoon.Infact,theywillbeanxiouswithoutphones.However,itdoesharmtotheirstudy.Becausetheyspendtoomuchtimeplayingwithphones.Theycan’thaveagoodrest.Theydon’thavetimetodotheirhomework.Theycan’tgetgoodgrades.Inmyopinion,wemustuseitinarightway.Ifwetakeittoschool,wemustn’tuseitduringtheclass.Andrememberthatstudyisourfirstwork.【解析】1.本題是一篇話(huà)題作文，話(huà)題作為書(shū)面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線(xiàn)索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫(xiě)作時(shí)也容易表達(dá)。2.本題在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯。3.要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂。4.短文用第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。5.注意詞數(shù)的要求，不要太多或太少。（二）手機(jī)在生活中扮演著越來(lái)越重要的角色，許多中學(xué)生沉迷于手機(jī)無(wú)法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文：1.去年，Miller對(duì)手機(jī)游戲非常入迷，而且花大量時(shí)間用手機(jī)聊天看電影；2.Miller與家人和朋友交流甚少，離開(kāi)手機(jī)會(huì)很焦慮；3.昨天還因?yàn)樽呗房词謾C(jī)被自行車(chē)撞了，膝蓋受傷；4.你的建議……參考詞匯：mobilegames手機(jī)游戲anxious焦慮becrazyabout對(duì)……入迷要求：字?jǐn)?shù)80-100個(gè)開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)3要點(diǎn)齊全，行為連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Todaymoreandmorepeopleareaddictedto(沉迷）playingthemobilephones.Lastyear,MyfriendMillerwas_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Todaymoreandmorepeopleareaddictedto(沉迷）playingthemobilephones.Lastyear，MyfriendMillerwascrazyaboutmobilegamesaswell.Hespenttoomuchtimeinchattingandwatchingfilmsonthephone.Millerhardlytalkedwithhisfamilyandfriends.Helivedinhisownworld.Hefeltveryanxiouswithoutmobilephones.Yesterdayhewashitbyabike,becausehewaswatchinghisphoneatthatmoment.Asaresult,hehurthiskneesbadly.Inmyopinion,Ithinkwecan’tusethemobilephonesforalongtime,Imean,nomorethanhalfanhouraday.Don’ttakemobilephonestoschool.Amobilephoneisjustakindoftool,notourwholelife.【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；再緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。（三）現(xiàn)如今，手機(jī)成為了人們生活中不可或缺的一部分。中學(xué)生在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)已經(jīng)非常普遍。手機(jī)給學(xué)生的生活帶來(lái)方便的同時(shí)，也給他們帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題。他們把大量的時(shí)間花在玩手機(jī)上，不僅影響了學(xué)習(xí)，而且視力急劇下降。有一位家長(zhǎng)建議學(xué)校禁止學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)，你是否同意其違議，請(qǐng)列出至少三條理由。要求包括以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.學(xué)生使用手機(jī)現(xiàn)象。2.你是否支持學(xué)校禁止使用智能機(jī)，列出理由。3.呼吁大家合理使用智能機(jī)。要求：80詞左右。參考詞匯：smartphone智能手機(jī)；beaddictedto上癮；rebellious逆反的Shouldstudentsbeallowedtousesmartphones?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shouldstudentsbeallowedtousesmartphones?Nowsmartphonesaresocommonamongmiddleschoolstudents.Theyaresousefulandinterestingthatmanystudentsareaddictedtothem.Althoughsmartphonesmayhaveabadinfluenceonstudents,Idon'tthinkparentsshouldstoptheirchildrenfromusingthem.Ifstudentsareforcedtostopusingthem,theymaybecomerebelliousandsecretlyusethemmore.Instead,parentscanfindsomewiserwaystohelptheirchildrenusesmartphonesproperly.Forexample,studentscanusesmartphonestosharelearningexperiencewiththeirclassmates.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以建議學(xué)校禁止學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)，你是否同意其違議，請(qǐng)列出至少三條理由。要求包括以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.學(xué)生使用手機(jī)現(xiàn)象。2.你是否支持學(xué)校禁止使用智能機(jī)，列出理由。3.呼吁大家合理使用智能機(jī)。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章在陳述客觀(guān)事實(shí)時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)主要為第一和第三人稱(chēng)。本文緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容完整，表述準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言的表述符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：sousefulandinteresting；haveabadinfluence；stop…fromdoingsth.；sharelearningexperiencewith等。句型：Theyaresousefulandinterestingthatmanystudentsareaddictedtothem.2.Ifstudentsareforcedtostopusingthem,theymaybecomerebelliousandsecretlyusethemmore.3.Althoughsmartphonesmayhaveabadinfluenceonstudents,Idon'tthinkparentsshouldstoptheirchildrenfromusingthem.【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，并且內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，表達(dá)清楚、明了。作者從三個(gè)方面講述了自己的看法，這幾個(gè)方面都非常符合實(shí)際，所提建議很合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、第一人稱(chēng)為主，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章里還使用了一些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型。（四）手機(jī)正改變著人們的聯(lián)系、娛樂(lè)和出行等方式。你知道手機(jī)的起源和發(fā)展嗎？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息，結(jié)合手機(jī)的發(fā)展情況、外形、用途等方面，談?wù)勊淖兓c發(fā)展。要求：（1）80詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。第一部手機(jī)由美國(guó)人MartinCooper發(fā)明于1973年。外形特點(diǎn)；以前的手機(jī)屏幕較小并且多為黑白屏幕；現(xiàn)在的手機(jī)屏幕多為彩色，并且屏幕越來(lái)越大，有的還擁有全屏(fullscreens)等。功能用途：以前一般用于打電話(huà)和發(fā)短信(textmessages)等；現(xiàn)在手機(jī)擁有各種軟件(apps)，被應(yīng)用于生活的各個(gè)方面，如：聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、支付、購(gòu)票、上網(wǎng)等。Mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmoreimportantinpeople’sdailylife.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmoreimportantinpeople’sdailylife.Doyouknowtheoriginanddevelopmentofmobilephones?ThefirstcellphonewasinventedbyAmericanMartinCooperin1973.Previousphoneshadsmallerscreensandweremostlyblackandwhite.Nowthemobilephonescreenismostlycolorful,andthescreenisgettingbiggerandbigger.Somealsohavefullscreens.Peopleusedtouseittomakephonecallsandsendtextmessages.Butnowmobilephoneshaveallkindsofsoftware.Theyareusedinallaspectsoflife,suchaslisteningtomusic,payingbills,buyingtickets,surfingtheInternetandsoon.Inaword,cellphonesmakeourlifemoreandmoreconvenient.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要求介紹手機(jī)的歷史和發(fā)展變化，屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作。作者開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山Doyouknowtheoriginanddevelopmentofmobilephones，接著介紹手機(jī)的歷史并從外形和功能兩個(gè)方面介紹它的發(fā)展變化，最后表達(dá)感受Mobilephonesmakeourlifemoreandmoreconvenient。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是“總分總”結(jié)構(gòu)，以第三人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主展開(kāi)陳述；結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，描述細(xì)致，表達(dá)流暢，條理清晰，是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：高分短語(yǔ)：moreandmore,dailylife,blackandwhite,getbiggerandbigger,usedto,sendtextmessages,suchas,andsoon,inaword。高分句型：1)Previousphoneshadsmallerscreensandweremostlyblackandwhite.（并列結(jié)構(gòu)）2)andthescreenisgettingbiggerandbigger.（比較級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)）3)Theyareusedinallaspectsoflife,suchaslisteningtomusic,payingbills,buyingtickets,surfingtheInternetandsoon.（復(fù)雜被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)結(jié)構(gòu)）【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。例文中Mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmoreimportantinpeople’sdailylife./Nowthemobilephonescreenismostlycolorful,andthescreenisgettingbiggerandbigger./Inaword,cellphonesmakeourlifemoreandmoreconvenient.三處比較級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，很好地寫(xiě)出了手機(jī)的重要性和用途變化。（一）隨著智能手機(jī)的逐漸普及,人們可以用手機(jī)做的事情越來(lái)越多。很多人喜歡玩手機(jī),尤其喜歡用免費(fèi)WiFi上網(wǎng)。用手機(jī)上網(wǎng)的確能做很多事情,比如聊天、查詢(xún)信息、購(gòu)物等。但是手機(jī)上網(wǎng)也存在一定的弊端和風(fēng)險(xiǎn),比如個(gè)人信息泄露,遭遇網(wǎng)絡(luò)攻擊或者網(wǎng)絡(luò)詐騙。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)用免費(fèi)WiFi上網(wǎng)的看法。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’struethatmanypeoplelikegettingonlinebyusingfreeWiFi.It’sveryconvenient.However,therearemanydangerslyinginusingthefreeWiFi.IusedtousefreeWiFiwhenIwasout.Butlater,manyuselessmessagescametomyphone.Andoneday,IwastoldthatIwonaprizethatwasworth5,000yuanandtheyneededmybankaccount.OfcourseIdidn’tbelieveit.Butitwasclearthatsomeofmypersonalinformationhadbeenexposedtosomeone.Soweshouldlearntokeepussafeonline.First,we’dbetternotusefreeWiFiinpublic,especiallyinstrangeplaces.Second,weshouldn’tputtoomuchpersonalinformationontheInternet.Finally,weshouldbecarefulwhenwelendourmobilephonestoothers.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，在介紹免費(fèi)WiFi上網(wǎng)給人們帶來(lái)便利的同時(shí)，也存在一定的弊端和風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表對(duì)免費(fèi)WiFi上網(wǎng)的看法。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，作文主要包括三部分的內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱(chēng)。注意多種時(shí)態(tài)的交替使用；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。（二）現(xiàn)在電話(huà)運(yùn)用越來(lái)越普及，有大約57%中學(xué)生在使用手機(jī)，有的學(xué)生用手機(jī)來(lái)輔助學(xué)習(xí)，而有的學(xué)生則是用手機(jī)來(lái)上網(wǎng)，聊天，看小說(shuō)等。你就學(xué)生使用手機(jī)現(xiàn)象以及利弊說(shuō)一下個(gè)人看法。并建議學(xué)生正確使用手機(jī)。（部少于80詞）Advantages(利)

Disadvantages(弊)

查詢(xún)新單詞，獲取國(guó)內(nèi)外新信息和新知識(shí)

過(guò)度地玩游戲，上網(wǎng)，影響睡眠和學(xué)習(xí)

打電話(huà)，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)

和陌生人聊天，學(xué)壞習(xí)慣

拍有意義的圖片

看不健康的小說(shuō)

在危險(xiǎn)中，向老師，家長(zhǎng)和警察求助

晚上熄燈后，使用手機(jī)發(fā)信息

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提示詞：search,askfor,information,knowledge,influencetheirstudy,chatwith,habits,novels,correctly____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Atpresent,mobilephonesarebecomemoreandmorepopular.Accordingtothereport,about57%studentshavemobilephones.Somestudentsusethemtosearchnewwordsandaskfornewinformationandknowledge.Someusephonestolistentomusicandtakesomeinterestingpictures.Andtheycancallteachers,theirparentsorpolicemenwhentheyareinneed.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Therearealsosomedisadvantagesbroughtbythephones.Somestudentsusethemtoplaygames,whichisbadfortheirsleepingandstudy.Besides,somestudentschatwithstrangersandlearnbadhabits.Somereadunhealthynovels.Theyusephonestosendmessagewhenitistimetosleep.So,Ithinkeveryoneshouldusephonescorrectly.Ifyouuseitproperly,youcanbenefitfromit;otherwise,itwillwasteyourtimeandruinyourlife.【解析】試題分析：這是篇命題作文，題中給出了寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)信息，在作文中要盡力體現(xiàn)出這些要點(diǎn)。注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)和邏輯性。文中可使用一些承接性的句子和短語(yǔ)來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的流暢性?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利；文中使用了很多有用的表達(dá)方式，如：Accordingto根據(jù)；Buteverycoinhastwosides.但是每個(gè)硬幣都有兩面；listentomusic聽(tīng)音樂(lè)；Somestudentsusethemtoplaygames,whichisbadfortheirsleepingandstudy一些學(xué)生用來(lái)玩游戲，這對(duì)他們的睡眠和學(xué)習(xí)有不好的影響；which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。（三）隨著手機(jī)的普及，越來(lái)越多的人癡迷于手機(jī)，紛紛加入低頭族。請(qǐng)你參考下圖反映的現(xiàn)象及內(nèi)容提示，圍繞“拒為低頭族”（stopphubbing），用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右短文。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容提示：1.我身邊也有很多低頭族，非常喜歡玩手機(jī)。2.他們不停用手機(jī)發(fā)信息、上網(wǎng)、玩游戲或拍照。3.影響學(xué)習(xí)和生活。上課或工作時(shí)間玩手機(jī)極大浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。4.引發(fā)健康問(wèn)題，長(zhǎng)時(shí)間玩手機(jī)引發(fā)眼、背、頸痛。Nowadays,lotsofpeoplehavetheirownmobilephones,butmoreandmorepeoplearecrazyabouttheirmobilephones.Itiscommontoseepeoplestaringattheirmobilephoneeverywhereallthetime,takingnonoticeofthepeoplearoundthem.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,lotsofpeoplehavetheirownmobilephones,butmoreandmorepeoplearecrazyabouttheirmobilephones.Itiscommontoseepeoplestaringattheirmobilephoneeverywhereallthetime,takingnonoticeofthepeoplearoundthem.Thereisalotofphubbingaroundme.Theylikeplayingwithmobilephonesverymuch.Theycan’tstopsendingtextmessages,surfingtheInternet,playingmobilegamesandeventakingphotoswithmobilephones.However,phubbinginfluences/affectsnotonlyourstudies,butalsoourlife.Phubbing,whetherplayingphonegamesorsendingtextmessage,especiallyinclassoratwork,isabigwasteoftime.What’smore,itcanleadtohealthproblems.Forexample,usingamobilephonetoomuchcancauseeyesorbackandneckpain.Inmyopinion,itistimeforustothrowawayourphonesandraiseourheads.Weshoulddomoreexerciseandtakepartinreal-lifeactiv